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Just choke me already
I stayed
trembling,
but not from fear.
That was desire
curled tight like a leash
around my throat.
I wore it so well.
Your hand remembers.
The slow drag of control,
how my whimpers
spelled yours
in a language only pain could speak.
I arched,
not for pleasure,
but to give me
more of what you own.
I thought you might be mad.
But come closer,
feel the heat
You don’t hurt me.
You shape me.
Still raw.
Still willing.
Still yours to unmake
until I surrender
the only name I know.
Yours...
trembling,
but not from fear.
That was desire
curled tight like a leash
around my throat.
I wore it so well.
Your hand remembers.
The slow drag of control,
how my whimpers
spelled yours
in a language only pain could speak.
I arched,
not for pleasure,
but to give me
more of what you own.
I thought you might be mad.
But come closer,
feel the heat
You don’t hurt me.
You shape me.
Still raw.
Still willing.
Still yours to unmake
until I surrender
the only name I know.
Yours...
Published 8th May 2025
Author's Note
You know you want to... either from hate, love, passion, or just because... so go ahead, do it!
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8th May 2025 10:04pm
8th May 2025 10:32pm
Damn… and here I was starting to think no one around here wanted to choke me 😔
But then your comment shows up
gripping me,
tightening slowly, silently…
Now I’m just sitting here, breathless,
and then you let me breathe. 😏
But then your comment shows up
gripping me,
tightening slowly, silently…
Now I’m just sitting here, breathless,
and then you let me breathe. 😏
9th May 2025 6:47pm
9th May 2025 6:47pm
9th May 2025 6:49pm
9th May 2025 6:54pm
9th May 2025 6:54pm
9th May 2025 00:49am
I want to
I need to
You want me to
A man needs property
BDSM lullaby
I'm at your service
Serve me
Smile not needed
Bare hands gripping
Edge of your seat
Come closer
Now !
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD ...one last time
I need to
You want me to
A man needs property
BDSM lullaby
I'm at your service
Serve me
Smile not needed
Bare hands gripping
Edge of your seat
Come closer
Now !
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD ...one last time
9th May 2025 1:18am
Ohhh… now that’s how you get my attention. 😈
You come in all commanding - “Come closer. Now!” and you really think I’m not going to lean in, bite, and wonder just how rough those bare hands can get?
Property, huh?
Careful what you claim, because once I’m yours, I can be such a brat because I need punishment.
But I do love the sound I make when I’m pushed past all the boundaries.
So go on. Grip harder.
I’m already on the edge… and you did say "one last time."
Just make sure you make it hurt so good.
And maybe you can leave fingerprints where I’m sore tomorrow.
You come in all commanding - “Come closer. Now!” and you really think I’m not going to lean in, bite, and wonder just how rough those bare hands can get?
Property, huh?
Careful what you claim, because once I’m yours, I can be such a brat because I need punishment.
But I do love the sound I make when I’m pushed past all the boundaries.
So go on. Grip harder.
I’m already on the edge… and you did say "one last time."
Just make sure you make it hurt so good.
And maybe you can leave fingerprints where I’m sore tomorrow.
9th May 2025 1:53am
Nothing like deconstructing a mouthy bitch like you....
Yeah, gloves are off, now get over here
STAT
Yeah, gloves are off, now get over here
STAT
9th May 2025 2:03am
Deconstruct me?
You can try
but don’t be surprised when every layer you peel back just makes me louder, wetter, and way more fun to ruin.
So go on, big talker.
Can you handle a real brat... haha
Come take me apart…
Just know I come with sharp teeth, nails, and a smile that says, “Do it harder.”
You can try
but don’t be surprised when every layer you peel back just makes me louder, wetter, and way more fun to ruin.
So go on, big talker.
Can you handle a real brat... haha
Come take me apart…
Just know I come with sharp teeth, nails, and a smile that says, “Do it harder.”
9th May 2025 2:07am
9th May 2025 2:19am
If this is a funeral, I’ll be the one moaning through the eulogy,
dragging you into the dark,
nails dug in, biting,
begging you to finish what you started. :p
dragging you into the dark,
nails dug in, biting,
begging you to finish what you started. :p
9th May 2025 2:22am
9th May 2025 1:16pm
9th May 2025 1:18pm
We will be remembered.
We had the nerve to hit a nerve and keep on shining ....
We had the nerve to hit a nerve and keep on shining ....
9th May 2025 11:43am
9th May 2025 1:01pm
Oh God! you know how much I love a good kinkfest Ron, too much! haha. I guess people are scared to choke me though. Sad face... But ho hum... I have needs damnit! so many intense needs...
9th May 2025 10:49pm
The feeling as the sternocleidomastoid muscle throbs in my hand; the raspy gasp for air to supply the low reflexive moan.
But alas, who is shaping who?? A win win for both.
Another outstanding foray into the power-exchange of lovers.
But alas, who is shaping who?? A win win for both.
Another outstanding foray into the power-exchange of lovers.
9th May 2025 10:57pm
Oh, you had me at sternocleidomastoid… such a deliciously clinical word for something so feral. haha
That gasp, that reflex - it’s not just power, it’s poetry in motion.
And as for shaping… who says we can’t mold each other, one bruised breath at a time?
Win-win? , with the right grip… we both lose control. And that’s the fun part right? ;)
That gasp, that reflex - it’s not just power, it’s poetry in motion.
And as for shaping… who says we can’t mold each other, one bruised breath at a time?
Win-win? , with the right grip… we both lose control. And that’s the fun part right? ;)
Yesterday 7:38pm
Just a little death, catching breath until the best release.
Dang, I'm going to miss this. (But I know StarsRite will have that special section for us with the naughty side).
Dang, I'm going to miss this. (But I know StarsRite will have that special section for us with the naughty side).
Yesterday 11:14pm
Ah hell yes, cumming so damn hard... haha I am so glad they do because otherwise what would I do. :) But I will definitely see you over there... because you can't leave me Wally damnit
