Poems About Identity Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about identity seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 1:00pm
28th Apr 2025 1:00pm
In The Arms of a Lover
In the arms of a lover who’s hot,
You embrace all she is and is not.
Her past and her nows,
Her spirit’s young vows,
Just be sure that you fuck her a lot.
You embrace all she is and is not.
Her past and her nows,
Her spirit’s young vows,
Just be sure that you fuck her a lot.
#identity
#limerick
#sex
104 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2025 3:36am
23rd Apr 2025 3:36am
Preserved
To a degree I think I’ve been a low-key masochist
Maybe not so much enjoying the pain
But the torture - it’s a test to see how much I can withstand
Perhaps it’s the old self trying to punish for misgivings
But like a typical Gen-Xer, I make light of it
And laugh it off
Yes, I try to behave like a gentleman
Reserved and preserved with resignation at my side
But you know how Geminis can be
One moment we’re stoic
And the next…
62 Unique Words
85 Total
Maybe not so much enjoying the pain
But the torture - it’s a test to see how much I can withstand
Perhaps it’s the old self trying to punish for misgivings
But like a typical Gen-Xer, I make light of it
And laugh it off
Yes, I try to behave like a gentleman
Reserved and preserved with resignation at my side
But you know how Geminis can be
One moment we’re stoic
And the next…
62 Unique Words
85 Total
#BDSM
#identity
129 reads
1 Comment
wallyroo92
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2025 5:56am
22nd Apr 2025 5:56am
Back to Gemini
(Castor and Pollux 2)
Back to Gemini that space between him and I
When we see eye to eye in that dual personality
One’s a fly by and the other can be the fall guy
Like a balance act between absurdity and rationality
And perhaps this is why Gemini is my favorite constellation
As if the astrological sign is in line with that characterization
There are two temperaments but usually logic is at the helm
While the mad enthusiastic maniac wants to overwhelm
Castor and Pollux watch from their positions in the sky
It’s like their...
Back to Gemini that space between him and I
When we see eye to eye in that dual personality
One’s a fly by and the other can be the fall guy
Like a balance act between absurdity and rationality
And perhaps this is why Gemini is my favorite constellation
As if the astrological sign is in line with that characterization
There are two temperaments but usually logic is at the helm
While the mad enthusiastic maniac wants to overwhelm
Castor and Pollux watch from their positions in the sky
It’s like their...
#confessional
#identity
#myself
#stars
#universe
61 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Apr 2025 11:45pm
18th Apr 2025 11:45pm
Fragile Existence
The child inside is terrified
Misshapen intent
Quick to doubt
An injustice
Afraid to feel
A silent crime
Killing her mind
Stop wasting her time
Love and understanding
Vital to her fragile existence
Misshapen intent
Quick to doubt
An injustice
Afraid to feel
A silent crime
Killing her mind
Stop wasting her time
Love and understanding
Vital to her fragile existence
#honesty
#identity
#MentalHealth #support
#MentalHealth #support
100 reads
12 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 11:44am
15th Apr 2025 11:44am
This morning I signed onto starsrite.com before DUP ...
I wanted to see how it felt
And you know what ?
It felt good ....
And you know what ?
It felt good ....
#home
#identity
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeCycle
#TruthOfLife
189 reads
23 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Apr 2025 7:35pm
11th Apr 2025 7:35pm
Digital Madness
I'm locked in an insane reality
Like a TV or smartphone I can't turn off
Sometimes I want to rip my face off and lose my identity
Hack open a hole in my rib-cage and get the fuck out!
Like a TV or smartphone I can't turn off
Sometimes I want to rip my face off and lose my identity
Hack open a hole in my rib-cage and get the fuck out!
#anxiety
#identity
#MentalHealth
#myself
#technology
121 reads
11 Comments
Northern1
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 2:47am
10th Apr 2025 2:47am
Flat Out
#dark
#deception
#emptiness
#identity
#power
44 reads
0 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 9:48pm
7th Apr 2025 9:48pm
~aromatic anomalies
does your hyperosmic eccentricities
make you an instant sniffer~ dog.. hit
by this an animalistic gifted streak…
or even so better, make you
a uniquely magnifique maverick god
a magical synesthetic
to an esoteric mystique
of whatever vagaries
of aromatic sensations
in an ease of a creative synthesise
to its brusque breakdown rapidities
anything & everything
from those high hanging
exotic ethereal perfumeries
to digging deep underground
an earthen...
make you an instant sniffer~ dog.. hit
by this an animalistic gifted streak…
or even so better, make you
a uniquely magnifique maverick god
a magical synesthetic
to an esoteric mystique
of whatever vagaries
of aromatic sensations
in an ease of a creative synthesise
to its brusque breakdown rapidities
anything & everything
from those high hanging
exotic ethereal perfumeries
to digging deep underground
an earthen...
#conflict
#evolution
#identity
#science
#spiritual
96 reads
2 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
6th Apr 2025 2:16pm
6th Apr 2025 2:16pm
Birds Fly In The Rain
We know not the tinder of the moment
When match is struck
Suspended between spark and flame
What is right? What is wrong?
No one lives forever
Then needs come the night
Why do we keep deep diving for everything on our wishlist
Always chasing some neurotically ordained checklist
Why cant we be satisfied in the here and now
Who am I
Some random guy
A random
Unique
An outlier in your world
A shooting star outside your orbit
*
...
When match is struck
Suspended between spark and flame
What is right? What is wrong?
No one lives forever
Then needs come the night
Why do we keep deep diving for everything on our wishlist
Always chasing some neurotically ordained checklist
Why cant we be satisfied in the here and now
Who am I
Some random guy
A random
Unique
An outlier in your world
A shooting star outside your orbit
*
...
#identity
#love
#nature
156 reads
10 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 1:48pm
5th Apr 2025 1:48pm
Native Harmony
Here I am as I am a entity of strength and perseverance, still surviving just trying to take it one day at a time ⌚ For the elders say that we are the chosen ones who were chosen, because of our strength and courage and perseverance. TO lead as an example for the wolf pack through the process of our journeys and travels and walks. THROUGH the forest of life and in the world. 🌎 For sure we can be many things in different ways and forms of existence. For sure we have a real sense of survival instinct, for wanting nothing more and nothing less than what we need to survive. 🐺
#acceptance
#identity
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
73 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 2:36am
3rd Apr 2025 2:36am
Vegan to her is Ketchup
Perfection sucks
Give me ripped pantyhose
A button missing
Slutty in places of worship
My women curse a lot
Have ink on their hands
Dime store nail polish
Bad attitude
Vegan to her is ketchup
Health is codeine cough syrup
Blow jobs are her currency
Black leather jacket ripped at the elbow
Give me ripped pantyhose
A button missing
Slutty in places of worship
My women curse a lot
Have ink on their hands
Dime store nail polish
Bad attitude
Vegan to her is ketchup
Health is codeine cough syrup
Blow jobs are her currency
Black leather jacket ripped at the elbow
#CharlesBukowski
#confessional
#identity
#money
#porn
127 reads
21 Comments
Hatful-of-Hollow
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 00:31am
2nd Apr 2025 00:31am
And then, suddenly, someone said Shakespeare has died
old long since
sadness are the shore shingles
which will never drown,
we watched our school friends die together
How many women took us up the stairs
to touch to feel to caress,
our webbed fingers never made us Superman
there was always Lex Luthor, dredged in black
metaphorical chains gallow’ed upon neck
Well, not quite
Indigo in eyes of his children
north by northwest, or north by fucking anywhere
are rainbow’ed hues of the future
and I know (I know) rainbows are such a poetic cliché.
Turn my...
sadness are the shore shingles
which will never drown,
we watched our school friends die together
How many women took us up the stairs
to touch to feel to caress,
our webbed fingers never made us Superman
there was always Lex Luthor, dredged in black
metaphorical chains gallow’ed upon neck
Well, not quite
Indigo in eyes of his children
north by northwest, or north by fucking anywhere
are rainbow’ed hues of the future
and I know (I know) rainbows are such a poetic cliché.
Turn my...
#BestFriend
#identity
91 reads
3 Comments
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