Poems About Hope Seeking Honest Critique
#hope
Poems about hope seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
InDreamz
Poem Published
18th Apr 2025 5:53pm
18th Apr 2025 5:53pm
beauty in chaos
the roaring sky cried in joy
pearly droplets of tears,
the parched soil quickly
soaked up
every ounce of rain;
in between heavens and earth,
the wind ran berserk.
the clatter...the commotion
caused some stir-
a zealous acceptance
of the change of weather,
inspiring leaves to dance,
and trees to sway,
in intoxicating merriment
the flowers sprang
in a bountiful spray,
while animals and birds ...
pearly droplets of tears,
the parched soil quickly
soaked up
every ounce of rain;
in between heavens and earth,
the wind ran berserk.
the clatter...the commotion
caused some stir-
a zealous acceptance
of the change of weather,
inspiring leaves to dance,
and trees to sway,
in intoxicating merriment
the flowers sprang
in a bountiful spray,
while animals and birds ...
#animals
#beauty
#birds
#hope
#nature
112 reads
8 Comments
Hatful-of-Hollow
Poem Published
17th Apr 2025 7:52pm
17th Apr 2025 7:52pm
Old Lady Forgetting Night Strangers
Wears bees in her hair
sings Sinatra to stop the
noise from under the floorboards
Decants sherry into jam jars
drinks one for her baby
and one more for the road
Play it again Satan
some say she get Devil
but fire in her eyes
are inflamed childhood riots
throw a Molotov cocktail on the bonfire
and she will tell you what it’s like to burn
She can’t see those who tried to love her
just the NO VACANCIES sign
above the room which housed her still born
Air that, all winter, had seemed empty ...
sings Sinatra to stop the
noise from under the floorboards
Decants sherry into jam jars
drinks one for her baby
and one more for the road
Play it again Satan
some say she get Devil
but fire in her eyes
are inflamed childhood riots
throw a Molotov cocktail on the bonfire
and she will tell you what it’s like to burn
She can’t see those who tried to love her
just the NO VACANCIES sign
above the room which housed her still born
Air that, all winter, had seemed empty ...
#faith
#hope
#love
71 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Apr 2025 3:11am
17th Apr 2025 3:11am
Faded Darkness
Through my life and memories of the past, still stacking up in the dark of the night. YET I've learned that my past is not my future. For my future no longer exist in the past, as it is behind me, still
trying to stop my own blessings for the betterment, of my life and love and honor and respect. Because I deserve better for myself, to be able to share my thoughts and insight and love, with someone else who is willing and able to be, with me as I want to be with them in honesty and truth and trust. 🙏 For sure I want a strong commitment, and real consistency and real deep...
trying to stop my own blessings for the betterment, of my life and love and honor and respect. Because I deserve better for myself, to be able to share my thoughts and insight and love, with someone else who is willing and able to be, with me as I want to be with them in honesty and truth and trust. 🙏 For sure I want a strong commitment, and real consistency and real deep...
#hope
#kindness
#love
#respect
#TimeHeals
77 reads
2 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
17th Apr 2025 1:46am
17th Apr 2025 1:46am
Gilded
Navigating through uncertainty
Can often be very intimidating
But once you accept responsibility
And take accountability
It becomes easier to grasp
Reparation and restoration
Forgiving as well as healing
It’s a shift in paradigm thinking
Identifying the root cause
So that we understand who we are
In order to move forward toward
That vision
The better version of ourselves
52 Unique Words
59 Total
Can often be very intimidating
But once you accept responsibility
And take accountability
It becomes easier to grasp
Reparation and restoration
Forgiving as well as healing
It’s a shift in paradigm thinking
Identifying the root cause
So that we understand who we are
In order to move forward toward
That vision
The better version of ourselves
52 Unique Words
59 Total
#hope
#PersonalGrowth
#storm
71 reads
1 Comment
Wordsmith
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 9:02am
16th Apr 2025 9:02am
QUE FIT NO SERA SERA
"Que Sera Sera;” one of the lies that’s been passed down in ages
A sweet lullaby for the lazy
a lullaby that kills the will
We’re told; “Whatever will be; will be;”
but forget that what will be needs 'Will' to be
Destiny isn’t a scripted play; it’s a field
And man was gifted a tool; the name is "will"
Yet we sit; fold arms; and call it fate
as if the Most High created us to spectate
Not every dream dies because it wasn’t meant to be
Some die because someone refused to will it into being
“Que Sera Sera”; A...
A sweet lullaby for the lazy
a lullaby that kills the will
We’re told; “Whatever will be; will be;”
but forget that what will be needs 'Will' to be
Destiny isn’t a scripted play; it’s a field
And man was gifted a tool; the name is "will"
Yet we sit; fold arms; and call it fate
as if the Most High created us to spectate
Not every dream dies because it wasn’t meant to be
Some die because someone refused to will it into being
“Que Sera Sera”; A...
#fate
#hope
#motivational
#philosophical
#strength
39 reads
1 Comment
wallyroo92
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 3:02am
16th Apr 2025 3:02am
Rigel Orion
Some paint murals on walls
Some write poetry to touch hearts
Some create music to move the soul
While many push to promote the arts
Some inspire through education
Some motivate through their fashion
Some vocations are here to help humanity
Lifting others by showing empathy and compassion
Some encourage others to be curious
Knowing the universe is always expanding
Promoting knowledge to be fun and creative
As they foster collaboration and understanding
Some spread joy with their skills
Some help heal and bring...
Some write poetry to touch hearts
Some create music to move the soul
While many push to promote the arts
Some inspire through education
Some motivate through their fashion
Some vocations are here to help humanity
Lifting others by showing empathy and compassion
Some encourage others to be curious
Knowing the universe is always expanding
Promoting knowledge to be fun and creative
As they foster collaboration and understanding
Some spread joy with their skills
Some help heal and bring...
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational
#stars
#universe
69 reads
2 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 3:26am
15th Apr 2025 3:26am
Vega Lyra
I’ve crashed with exhaustion for days
I’ve been depressed lost in a haze
I’ve had a dry spell in my inkwell
When I fell and felt those years were hell
And just when I wanted to be dead
The best years of my life were still ahead
I’ve had yearning for knowledge
Burning for more degrees beyond college
A thirst like I’ve walked the Sahara
A hunger for data
I’ve wanted to expand my mind
But now feel like I’m running out of time
Education has helped me in life
A guiding light through strife
When in dark phases I...
I’ve been depressed lost in a haze
I’ve had a dry spell in my inkwell
When I fell and felt those years were hell
And just when I wanted to be dead
The best years of my life were still ahead
I’ve had yearning for knowledge
Burning for more degrees beyond college
A thirst like I’ve walked the Sahara
A hunger for data
I’ve wanted to expand my mind
But now feel like I’m running out of time
Education has helped me in life
A guiding light through strife
When in dark phases I...
#college
#hope
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
63 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 2:41am
15th Apr 2025 2:41am
Scare to step out
Where do you see thyself 🤔 in your life and world. 🌎 THAT you need and want a good woman, for a good man and good man, for a good woman. YET in these days and times 🤔 I wonder what happen, to each of us as the years silencely, pass is us by, within space and time. ⏱️ FOR SURE IT HAS GOTTEN TO THE POINT 😞 that it looks like that love does exist in the world 🌍 anymore 😔 For sure more than anything that I've been dreaming about is what I want and need 🤔 not what I don't need or want in my life and world and dreams. 💓...
#forgiveness
#hope
#kindness
#love
#redemption
56 reads
0 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 1:07am
15th Apr 2025 1:07am
puzzled
such a beautiful thing we have
why do we kill each other
beauty is everywhere
and we turn it ugly
hate is winning
love is losing
so fucking
confusing
why do we kill each other
beauty is everywhere
and we turn it ugly
hate is winning
love is losing
so fucking
confusing
#confusion
#fear
#hope #sadness
#hope #sadness
49 reads
2 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 10:59am
13th Apr 2025 10:59am
Still Aflame
I don't know what's about it.
And I don't know how to say this.
I don't know how to tell this.
Or how to explain it.
On one side is a dimlit light.
Strong,powerful firelight.
Near a strong,warm fireplace.
Yet at the same time,something feels cold.
Like a forming disease or mold.
The fire is slowly burning out.
But you can still see it well.
The fire still seems bright.
After everything I tell.
Long ago,a fire burned.
Screeches sounded and peace hurled.
At first,the fire was...
And I don't know how to say this.
I don't know how to tell this.
Or how to explain it.
On one side is a dimlit light.
Strong,powerful firelight.
Near a strong,warm fireplace.
Yet at the same time,something feels cold.
Like a forming disease or mold.
The fire is slowly burning out.
But you can still see it well.
The fire still seems bright.
After everything I tell.
Long ago,a fire burned.
Screeches sounded and peace hurled.
At first,the fire was...
#despair
#hope
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
58 reads
0 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 10:51am
13th Apr 2025 10:51am
Gifts Of Life
Not awaken while living
To the silent breath flowing
To the mystery of hearing
To the wonder of seeing
Not awaken while living
To the divine weight of giving
To the hidden Hands us holding
To the heavenly call “Live with meaning”
Not awaken while living
To how fragile life is and fleeting
To how precious God’s many a blessing
To His Grace and Mercy we are witnessing
When deeply shaken
As life suddenly taken
Aware to be mistaken
The heart, to see would be able
How we are gently held...
To the silent breath flowing
To the mystery of hearing
To the wonder of seeing
Not awaken while living
To the divine weight of giving
To the hidden Hands us holding
To the heavenly call “Live with meaning”
Not awaken while living
To how fragile life is and fleeting
To how precious God’s many a blessing
To His Grace and Mercy we are witnessing
When deeply shaken
As life suddenly taken
Aware to be mistaken
The heart, to see would be able
How we are gently held...
#gratitude
#happiness
#hope
#LifeChangingMoment
#strength
87 reads
4 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 5:35pm
10th Apr 2025 5:35pm
obsession
years after your return,
frozen memories thaw
in the warmth of your presence...
i tried to survive
many winters
on my own...all alone,
while...you were relishing
sweet fragrance of blossoming flowers;
blessings of summer showers,
with your beloved...
don't know why
i couldn't erase you
from my heart
the longing...yearning,
like snowflakes
freezing me in the cold...
even though you left me in lurch
yet...
yet i kept you locked in my soul...
and now...that she's left
leaving...
frozen memories thaw
in the warmth of your presence...
i tried to survive
many winters
on my own...all alone,
while...you were relishing
sweet fragrance of blossoming flowers;
blessings of summer showers,
with your beloved...
don't know why
i couldn't erase you
from my heart
the longing...yearning,
like snowflakes
freezing me in the cold...
even though you left me in lurch
yet...
yet i kept you locked in my soul...
and now...that she's left
leaving...
#breakup
#heartbroken
#hope
#love
#obsession
159 reads
11 Comments
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