Poems About Home Seeking Honest Critique
#home
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:09pm
Yesterday 2:09pm
Get Done With Doing It To Me Quick
Just please do me a favor and get
done with doing it to me quick.
I just heard a car pull in
the driveway and I know
my husband would be
ticked to see me
naked with
the pool
boy.
done with doing it to me quick.
I just heard a car pull in
the driveway and I know
my husband would be
ticked to see me
naked with
the pool
boy.
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:36pm
Yesterday 1:36pm
The AC Broke Down Again And I Have To Do Something To Keep Cool
Veronica was taking a shower.
That was before David walked right in.
She turned towards her roommate.
That was before David walked right in.
She turned towards her roommate.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
#summer
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Feb 2025 2:44am
11th Feb 2025 2:44am
Would You Believe Me If I Were To Say "Happy Valentines Day"?
Markie stepped into the bedroom.
She slipped off her robe and sat.
Her friend Candace snapped photos.
That was before Kirk walked right in.
Markie looked at her husband and smiled.
She slipped off her robe and sat.
Her friend Candace snapped photos.
That was before Kirk walked right in.
Markie looked at her husband and smiled.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#love
#ValentinesDay
47 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 2:39pm
8th Feb 2025 2:39pm
Trust me, Sweetie. It's Not What It Looks Like.
Alan came home from work.
He saw Jennifer getting humped by Steve.
Then, she saw Alan staring.
He saw Jennifer getting humped by Steve.
Then, she saw Alan staring.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 2:17am
8th Feb 2025 2:17am
Saw Robert Staring At Her Dress
Barbara went to the elevator.
She saw Robert staring at her dress.
Then, she nudged his belly.
That made him get the message quick.
After that, Barbara went to Valerie's party.
She saw Robert staring at her dress.
Then, she nudged his belly.
That made him get the message quick.
After that, Barbara went to Valerie's party.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#ignorance
#temptation
55 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 2:01pm
7th Feb 2025 2:01pm
Mom And Dad Would Really Go Nuts
Even though
I did agree to pose
for this photo assignment piece of
yours, I still am not going to get naked for
Mom and Dad would really go nuts
if I were to do that
here and now.
I did agree to pose
for this photo assignment piece of
yours, I still am not going to get naked for
Mom and Dad would really go nuts
if I were to do that
here and now.
#art
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 4:23am
7th Feb 2025 4:23am
As A Result Of Attending Wyatt's Bash
On one Sunday, Kim
woke up and discovered that
she was naked and
hungover as a result
of attending Wyatt's bash.
woke up and discovered that
she was naked and
hungover as a result
of attending Wyatt's bash.
#alcohol
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 11:35am
5th Feb 2025 11:35am
Nuclear Family
Have you tested your nuclear family today?
You may need to
There's been a nation wide falling out amongst this group
I wouldn't get to close
You may catch what they already have
Once contaminated,
Like so many American families
You'll never leave your home again
You may need to
There's been a nation wide falling out amongst this group
I wouldn't get to close
You may catch what they already have
Once contaminated,
Like so many American families
You'll never leave your home again
#environment
#family
#FeelingTrapped #home
#FeelingTrapped #home
64 reads
8 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 3:33am
5th Feb 2025 3:33am
Could You Come Over And Fix It?
Hi. I'm your new neighbor.
Sorry to have you see me naked.
My air conditioner broke down.
Heat in my apartment made me strip.
Could you come over and fix it?
Sorry to have you see me naked.
My air conditioner broke down.
Heat in my apartment made me strip.
Could you come over and fix it?
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
#summer
137 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 3:08pm
4th Feb 2025 3:08pm
My Problem With An Outdoor Advertising Thing
I know it's a billboard.
But I get excited by those eyes.
So, I closed the blinds.
But I get excited by those eyes.
So, I closed the blinds.
#art
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
98 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 3:33am
4th Feb 2025 3:33am
She Looked And Saw A Gun Aimed
Linda was getting herself ready.
She has been invited to Amanda's party.
Then, she heard a noise.
She Looked And saw a gun aimed.
Her dead corpse was found in Falmouth.
She has been invited to Amanda's party.
Then, she heard a noise.
She Looked And saw a gun aimed.
Her dead corpse was found in Falmouth.
#dark
#death
#fiction
#friendship
#home
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 3:53am
1st Feb 2025 3:53am
I Already Paid The Rent And Am Not Moving Out
I stepped into this apartment.
It looked like I hit the jackpot.
That's before someone came in.
She's a blonde bikini chick named Sabrina.
She told the landlord she's staying put.
It looked like I hit the jackpot.
That's before someone came in.
She's a blonde bikini chick named Sabrina.
She told the landlord she's staying put.
#confusion
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#women
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