Poems About Home Seeking Honest Critique
#home
Welcome To My House Warming Party
Welcome to my house warming party.
I see that one of my guests got
naked and is waiting for
one of you guys to do
the same. So, which one
of you guys wants
to strip and
get it
on?
I see that one of my guests got
naked and is waiting for
one of you guys to do
the same. So, which one
of you guys wants
to strip and
get it
on?
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sensual
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Address.
23 Henry road.
Avenue lane.
Aurobindo road.
Kolkata
731124.
Avenue lane.
Aurobindo road.
Kolkata
731124.
#home
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The Mothering Tribe
I learnt that when you don't have a Mother,
others will come to carry the load -
or so it was for me,
first my Great-Grandmother,
the wisdom of which I was gifted
until lymphoma took her at seventeen.
I'd got back from backpacking - au pairing,
exploring German and Luxembourgish bookshops,
European coffee and mussels and trains.
She went cold under my hand.
Her eyes froze on my tongue.
Secondly, with my Grandmother -
took me in after an incident with a car and a pavement, and her hands
on the wheel.
I was on foot. ...
others will come to carry the load -
or so it was for me,
first my Great-Grandmother,
the wisdom of which I was gifted
until lymphoma took her at seventeen.
I'd got back from backpacking - au pairing,
exploring German and Luxembourgish bookshops,
European coffee and mussels and trains.
She went cold under my hand.
Her eyes froze on my tongue.
Secondly, with my Grandmother -
took me in after an incident with a car and a pavement, and her hands
on the wheel.
I was on foot. ...
#gratitude
#home
#motherhood
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What Is Found Inside A Roommate's Bedroom
Phoebe was found
naked and getting
it on with Matthew.
naked and getting
it on with Matthew.
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#home
#sensual
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A Little Miscalculation On My Part
When I showed
up at her apartment
and saw her in the bedroom naked,
I had a feeling that she wanted more from me
than just a small bouquet of flowers
like the white roses I had
at that time.
up at her apartment
and saw her in the bedroom naked,
I had a feeling that she wanted more from me
than just a small bouquet of flowers
like the white roses I had
at that time.
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#rose
#sensual
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He Realized That He Married A Nymphomaniac
Spencer looked at his neighbors.
He saw them humping some brunette chick.
That chick's his wife Kelli.
He saw them humping some brunette chick.
That chick's his wife Kelli.
#addiction
#fiction
#home
#sensual
#threesome
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Got Something In Today's Mail
Got something in today's mail.
A videotape of me humping two chicks.
My parents would kill me.
A videotape of me humping two chicks.
My parents would kill me.
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sensual
#threesome
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Between home
It is the third,
and every day I have heard the call of June,
because I said I would try,
said I'd dive in an onion
left growing in the darkness of my blue.
It is Monday,
and I remember Mondays,
climbing on the kitchen counter hunting food
because food didn't come
the way it did for other kids.
Remember
wanting to plunge forks in their eyes,
for all they had and all I held
in their in betweens of education.
Would get myself thrown
from class for the sake
of the systematic, reliable quiet
of the...
and every day I have heard the call of June,
because I said I would try,
said I'd dive in an onion
left growing in the darkness of my blue.
It is Monday,
and I remember Mondays,
climbing on the kitchen counter hunting food
because food didn't come
the way it did for other kids.
Remember
wanting to plunge forks in their eyes,
for all they had and all I held
in their in betweens of education.
Would get myself thrown
from class for the sake
of the systematic, reliable quiet
of the...
#home
#illness
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If I Can't Have You, Then No-one Will!
Joanna looked in the shower.
She saw Brian with Justine and Denise.
Joanna shot all three dead.
She saw Brian with Justine and Denise.
Joanna shot all three dead.
#death
#fiction
#home
#sensual
#threesome
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May I Join You?
Xander saw Lisa
in the bathroom, stripped down and
joined his roommate in
the shower just in time for
Lisa to turn and see him.
in the bathroom, stripped down and
joined his roommate in
the shower just in time for
Lisa to turn and see him.
#fiction
#home
#lover
#sensual
#tanka
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Did I Make A Mistake By Marrying Nancy?
While the rest
of the gang were
watching
the video
of Keith and Nancy's
wedding day,
he looked
out of the
bedroom
window and
saw Janet
drop her robe and take
a nightly skinny dip
in
her own swimming pool.
of the gang were
watching
the video
of Keith and Nancy's
wedding day,
he looked
out of the
bedroom
window and
saw Janet
drop her robe and take
a nightly skinny dip
in
her own swimming pool.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#marriage
#sensual
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At The Sight Of Lisa In A Bikini
Rick's
eyes grew
wide at the
sight of Lisa
in a bikini
climbing out of the pool
before she saw Rick gawking
at her and smiled before she wrapped
her arms around the guy and gave him
a big kiss on the lips until lunchtime.
eyes grew
wide at the
sight of Lisa
in a bikini
climbing out of the pool
before she saw Rick gawking
at her and smiled before she wrapped
her arms around the guy and gave him
a big kiss on the lips until lunchtime.
#fiction
#home
#lover
#romantic
#summer
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