Poems About Heroin Seeking Honest Critique
#heroin
Poems about heroin seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
10th Apr 2018 2:56pm
10th Apr 2018 2:56pm
Cause of Something inst by Mors
Please let me be
Never break me down to knees
Never clean, I pick the beat up
Lift your feet up like a theatre
Keep it near
Reaching
Peaking
Passed a pioneer
Feasting
Fucking
Commandeer
Beast amongst us
Keep it crystal clear
Karma coming
Comma causing
Caught in nothing
Fuck the drama shit
Cause of something
Start her on it
Now she wanna
watch it hit
What's the cost of killer shit
Spent my soul never quit
Sorry i am
Not a...
Never break me down to knees
Never clean, I pick the beat up
Lift your feet up like a theatre
Keep it near
Reaching
Peaking
Passed a pioneer
Feasting
Fucking
Commandeer
Beast amongst us
Keep it crystal clear
Karma coming
Comma causing
Caught in nothing
Fuck the drama shit
Cause of something
Start her on it
Now she wanna
watch it hit
What's the cost of killer shit
Spent my soul never quit
Sorry i am
Not a...
#heroin
#addiction
890 reads
0 Comments
A1T2J3
Poem Published
27th Mar 2018 2:38pm
27th Mar 2018 2:38pm
Remorse prey
Reaping what I'm sewing
catching the stones that I'm throwing bull shit spews fast out my mouth breath smelling like shit
I'm selling my recovery but nobody's buying it
what the f*** gone for 2 weeks my dog's the only one missing me
now I sit here contemplating my path
9 out of 10 it's going to be a relapse
why can't they cure me if it's a disease where the fucks the vaccine
medicated assistance is not for me
going to die accepting the Vivitrol challenge
challenge the opiate antibodies
no dead cells running through my body not going home...
catching the stones that I'm throwing bull shit spews fast out my mouth breath smelling like shit
I'm selling my recovery but nobody's buying it
what the f*** gone for 2 weeks my dog's the only one missing me
now I sit here contemplating my path
9 out of 10 it's going to be a relapse
why can't they cure me if it's a disease where the fucks the vaccine
medicated assistance is not for me
going to die accepting the Vivitrol challenge
challenge the opiate antibodies
no dead cells running through my body not going home...
#heroin
#addiction
555 reads
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A1T2J3
Poem Published
27th Mar 2018 1:00pm
27th Mar 2018 1:00pm
Just for today
Just for today I'll say no way I'll get high tomorrow
Tomorrow Comes way too soon
now I'm looking for that spoon
no! I'll wait! say no today, tomorrow is another day
I'll get high tomorrow
now it's been a month still no fun
no Narcan threats it's a safe bet I'm slowly changing for self engaging thoughts about tomorrow
But if I do that's okay too cuz I can stop at 1, it will be so much fun no! wait!
I'll save it for tomorrow
Tomorrow Comes way too soon
now I'm looking for that spoon
no! I'll wait! say no today, tomorrow is another day
I'll get high tomorrow
now it's been a month still no fun
no Narcan threats it's a safe bet I'm slowly changing for self engaging thoughts about tomorrow
But if I do that's okay too cuz I can stop at 1, it will be so much fun no! wait!
I'll save it for tomorrow
#heroin
#addiction
778 reads
4 Comments
A1T2J3
Poem Published
26th Mar 2018 3:53pm
26th Mar 2018 3:53pm
Angels or demons
I just want to be sweetly napping
all I hear is constant chatting
"your stomach is sick it's not going to get better"
my demons are winning they're overpowering my steering
Please stop with the bad times that's why I'm using
where's my Angels? my clouds can't hold them
I'm slipping I'm falling I'm barely crawling fuck my free will
it's not God that's calling
all I hear is constant chatting
"your stomach is sick it's not going to get better"
my demons are winning they're overpowering my steering
Please stop with the bad times that's why I'm using
where's my Angels? my clouds can't hold them
I'm slipping I'm falling I'm barely crawling fuck my free will
it's not God that's calling
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction #MentalHealth
#addiction #MentalHealth
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lonelove
Poem Published
4th Mar 2018 4:29am
4th Mar 2018 4:29am
A small list of thoughts 1 month sober
At least when I was high I didn't see the need to cut myself
At least when I was high I could blame dope for my art blocks
At least when I was high I was in good company
At least when I was high I didn't feel so hollow
Contaminated smoke could fill all the voids in cracks in my so called soul
At least when I was high this skin that wraps around this shell of a human I hate, seemed a little more like velvet
Rather then barbed wire
At least when I was high I could blame dope for my art blocks
At least when I was high I was in good company
At least when I was high I didn't feel so hollow
Contaminated smoke could fill all the voids in cracks in my so called soul
At least when I was high this skin that wraps around this shell of a human I hate, seemed a little more like velvet
Rather then barbed wire
#anxiety
#depression
#drugs #heroin
#drugs #heroin
792 reads
6 Comments
VinnieP
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2018 2:43am
3rd Mar 2018 2:43am
Beware of the Unsaddled Horse
Beware of the unsaddled Horse
Said a man to three sons
For, his ride is fierce
Thrilling, though it may be
Few have ever returned
His rider is cold and blank
An empty shell, once a man
Saddled is the rider
Whoever he may be
His Horse holds the reigns
Oh, how he was warned
Careful son, that horse will buck
If you must ride, stick with the pony
Though not much of a thrill
He'll get you where you're going
Two rode the pony, the middle a taste
His ride was slow and dull
No...
Said a man to three sons
For, his ride is fierce
Thrilling, though it may be
Few have ever returned
His rider is cold and blank
An empty shell, once a man
Saddled is the rider
Whoever he may be
His Horse holds the reigns
Oh, how he was warned
Careful son, that horse will buck
If you must ride, stick with the pony
Though not much of a thrill
He'll get you where you're going
Two rode the pony, the middle a taste
His ride was slow and dull
No...
#LifeStruggles
#heroin
#horses
#metaphor
#drugs
627 reads
8 Comments
Jinndoe
Poem Published
25th Feb 2018 12:06pm
25th Feb 2018 12:06pm
Self Hate
Look at me, I've fallen in to a clutch,
Look at me, I've given up,
Look at me, I'm breaking down,
Look at me, I'm snorting now.
Look at me, I'm crying now,
Look at me, I've given up,
Look at me, I've fallen down,
Look at me, I'm spiraling now,
Look at me, I'm desperate now,
Look at me, I've given up,
Look at me, I'm at wits end,
Look at me, I'm shooting up,
Look at me, I'm almost dead,
Look at me, I've given up,
Look at me, I'm in the ground,
Look at me, there is no frown...
This is how i...
Look at me, I've given up,
Look at me, I'm breaking down,
Look at me, I'm snorting now.
Look at me, I'm crying now,
Look at me, I've given up,
Look at me, I've fallen down,
Look at me, I'm spiraling now,
Look at me, I'm desperate now,
Look at me, I've given up,
Look at me, I'm at wits end,
Look at me, I'm shooting up,
Look at me, I'm almost dead,
Look at me, I've given up,
Look at me, I'm in the ground,
Look at me, there is no frown...
This is how i...
#LifeStruggles
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction
#despair
664 reads
1 Comment
anonymouslyhere
Poem Published
27th Nov 2017 8:28am
27th Nov 2017 8:28am
The Needle
Pierced by the serpent's tooth
The vile venom consumes
Motionless among the ruins
The high brought low
As light fades dark
No new adventure
On which to embark.
The vile venom consumes
Motionless among the ruins
The high brought low
As light fades dark
No new adventure
On which to embark.
#dark
#shadows
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction
930 reads
0 Comments
Zombie-Mommy1113
Poem Published
14th Aug 2017 3:00am
14th Aug 2017 3:00am
Without You
#hope
#courage
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction
1573 reads
6 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
7th Aug 2017 10:06pm
7th Aug 2017 10:06pm
Give Me No Pity
back on the ground again
withdrawing from heroin
sweat collecting in my hair
and frigid air around
shakes keep me awake
bound to a fate
of nightmare visions
like drowning myself
no rest for the wicked
I rotate positions
like a roasted pig on a stick
every digit fidgets
witness a fiend
that wants to quit
to wear that crown
I must stick around
when it all
falls
down
withdrawing from heroin
sweat collecting in my hair
and frigid air around
shakes keep me awake
bound to a fate
of nightmare visions
like drowning myself
no rest for the wicked
I rotate positions
like a roasted pig on a stick
every digit fidgets
witness a fiend
that wants to quit
to wear that crown
I must stick around
when it all
falls
down
#anxiety
#strength
#heroin
#addiction
#TimeHeals
859 reads
4 Comments
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