Poems About Heroin Seeking Honest Critique
#heroin
Poems about heroin seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
dntlokatmeimbroken
Poem Published
18th Nov 2018 2:59am
18th Nov 2018 2:59am
the fix
#depression
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction
#emptiness
1131 reads
5 Comments
xXPaRADoXx
Poem Published
7th Nov 2018 12:47pm
7th Nov 2018 12:47pm
THE BEAST.
This hunter knows you, from birth to the end,
Your body it rules, your mind it will bend,
The brown, white horse,
Rides through your vein,
Gets you so high,
You don't know your name,
You're the flyer divine,
As you ride the beast,
But you cry as you fall,
On your soul it will feast,
The hunter knows you, clutching your soul,
This killing desire is all you'll know,
(C) Tony B. 2015.
For Krystal, who died riding.
Your body it rules, your mind it will bend,
The brown, white horse,
Rides through your vein,
Gets you so high,
You don't know your name,
You're the flyer divine,
As you ride the beast,
But you cry as you fall,
On your soul it will feast,
The hunter knows you, clutching your soul,
This killing desire is all you'll know,
(C) Tony B. 2015.
For Krystal, who died riding.
#death
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction
#healing
846 reads
2 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
7th Oct 2018 00:27am
7th Oct 2018 00:27am
Carbon (instrumental by Mors)
Hardest of starts - crack out the cranium
Fog in my garden land of the aliens
Haunted I'm cursed call it a bargain
Bet who is better the rawest of carbon
Come with cannons came as a man and
Minutes to midnight I may put hands on it
Battle myself homie no sleep
Lonely this road - too fucking deep
Do what I don't
Say what you won't
Prove it I quote
Move like a ghost
Move it or lose it
I'm glued to the movement
Like many improvements
But i am still human, 'ock ...
Fog in my garden land of the aliens
Haunted I'm cursed call it a bargain
Bet who is better the rawest of carbon
Come with cannons came as a man and
Minutes to midnight I may put hands on it
Battle myself homie no sleep
Lonely this road - too fucking deep
Do what I don't
Say what you won't
Prove it I quote
Move like a ghost
Move it or lose it
I'm glued to the movement
Like many improvements
But i am still human, 'ock ...
#identity
#heroin
#LifeChangingMoment #healing
#LifeChangingMoment #healing
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1 Comment
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
7th Sep 2018 11:29pm
7th Sep 2018 11:29pm
Changing inst. by Blunted Beatz
Times are a changin'
I'm changing with em
Thought about a lot things
Homie i don't miss em'
Skipping in to life right sized
Might try
something different
Did I mention I feel paralyzed
A pair of eyes staring up the paradigm
Where was I and
Why can't I fly
Up and outta here
Boutta smear my name across the hemisphere
Hear me clear
Hear me on my man of the year flow
Banging through your ear hole
-
Times are a changin'
I'm changing with em'
Pick it when I stick it in ...
I'm changing with em
Thought about a lot things
Homie i don't miss em'
Skipping in to life right sized
Might try
something different
Did I mention I feel paralyzed
A pair of eyes staring up the paradigm
Where was I and
Why can't I fly
Up and outta here
Boutta smear my name across the hemisphere
Hear me clear
Hear me on my man of the year flow
Banging through your ear hole
-
Times are a changin'
I'm changing with em'
Pick it when I stick it in ...
#identity
#LifeStruggles
#heroin
#addiction
#SelfDiscovery
852 reads
2 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
30th Jul 2018 1:36am
30th Jul 2018 1:36am
Relapse
58 days clean
Then came self sabotage
The wave I road
As 5 pills went down my throat
Justifications, yeah I had plenty
But let's be real, I'm just an addict
Fuck boys gonna fuck
Hit a meeting in the pm to share
I don't need to tell you i didn't want to go
I can't give up, now or ever.. I want this so bad
But old habits die hard
hopefully they don't take me with them
I want sleep, but even that won't change the past
Tomorrow is a new day
I am grateful for that.
Then came self sabotage
The wave I road
As 5 pills went down my throat
Justifications, yeah I had plenty
But let's be real, I'm just an addict
Fuck boys gonna fuck
Hit a meeting in the pm to share
I don't need to tell you i didn't want to go
I can't give up, now or ever.. I want this so bad
But old habits die hard
hopefully they don't take me with them
I want sleep, but even that won't change the past
Tomorrow is a new day
I am grateful for that.
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction #temptation
#addiction #temptation
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12 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
8th Jul 2018 3:30pm
8th Jul 2018 3:30pm
Let_Me_Go - instrumental by Mors
Let me go
I know this road's not easy
It's not made to please me
I leave the rest behind
Watch the smile fade from her eyes
I'm alone
Many tries now my life is on the line
And i got no phone
Questioning who am I- lost to time I'm off the throne
Just another rolling stone
Flowing far from home
This i know- Till i go
I want to be free
Locked in with disease
Put me on my knees
Looking for the key
Feel so empty on the inside
Take me then divide
Struggle then I die ...
I know this road's not easy
It's not made to please me
I leave the rest behind
Watch the smile fade from her eyes
I'm alone
Many tries now my life is on the line
And i got no phone
Questioning who am I- lost to time I'm off the throne
Just another rolling stone
Flowing far from home
This i know- Till i go
I want to be free
Locked in with disease
Put me on my knees
Looking for the key
Feel so empty on the inside
Take me then divide
Struggle then I die ...
#heroin
#addiction
#rhyming #rap
#rhyming #rap
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3 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
27th Jun 2018 11:38am
27th Jun 2018 11:38am
No more escapes. No more oblivion.
been on this road before
I swear it never changes
addicted to more
hit the floor, oh so painless
oxy, heroin, fentanyl
i took it all; american zero
China white synthetic hero
I should have died..
what doesn't kill you makes you stronger, right?
-
27 days clean/sober from everything
56 days clean from opiates
I swear it never changes
addicted to more
hit the floor, oh so painless
oxy, heroin, fentanyl
i took it all; american zero
China white synthetic hero
I should have died..
what doesn't kill you makes you stronger, right?
-
27 days clean/sober from everything
56 days clean from opiates
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction
822 reads
6 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
19th Jun 2018 6:49pm
19th Jun 2018 6:49pm
Rise From the Dirt inst. by Mors
Feel like I'm floating away, God
Counting down them days I
See heaven above- hell is on earth
Levels of pain I know how to hurt
Feel like living in cursed
Vivid as liquid give me rebirth
I feel so deep - I feel my worth
Feeling so grounded - I rise from dirt
Nothing stays the same, God
Show me the way through change I
Fall down a lot, fuck up I got-
Problems mostly corrupting my thought
No one can save me
Let alone make me
Break me shake me
Ever so...
Counting down them days I
See heaven above- hell is on earth
Levels of pain I know how to hurt
Feel like living in cursed
Vivid as liquid give me rebirth
I feel so deep - I feel my worth
Feeling so grounded - I rise from dirt
Nothing stays the same, God
Show me the way through change I
Fall down a lot, fuck up I got-
Problems mostly corrupting my thought
No one can save me
Let alone make me
Break me shake me
Ever so...
#heroin
#addiction
1075 reads
7 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
16th Jun 2018 00:42am
16th Jun 2018 00:42am
15 days clean
Pen to paper make the change
Lost in life I can't erase
Find my soul - trail of grace
No more time to contimplate
Oblivion is history.
Lost in life I can't erase
Find my soul - trail of grace
No more time to contimplate
Oblivion is history.
#heroin
#addiction
857 reads
5 Comments
lonelove
Poem Published
27th May 2018 3:57am
27th May 2018 3:57am
I Spent Most Of Winter High On Heroine
Your kisses taste like the fire embers of dragon's breath
We told each other as we shiver, outside on the porch
We created for ourselves, another world
I cannot get close enough to you
Our cells could bond and fuse, and the small space between atoms would be too much distance
Shut off the movie, shut off the lights
Let me fall into delirium to the sound of your sleep
Kiss me just one more time before you fall asleep
Here I'll lie awake next to you, crashing waves of comfort and inspiration with no desire to leave the embrace of your arms ...
We told each other as we shiver, outside on the porch
We created for ourselves, another world
I cannot get close enough to you
Our cells could bond and fuse, and the small space between atoms would be too much distance
Shut off the movie, shut off the lights
Let me fall into delirium to the sound of your sleep
Kiss me just one more time before you fall asleep
Here I'll lie awake next to you, crashing waves of comfort and inspiration with no desire to leave the embrace of your arms ...
#love
#drugs
#heroin
819 reads
2 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
23rd May 2018 6:59pm
23rd May 2018 6:59pm
Master Smack
#dark
#drugs
#heroin
830 reads
10 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
22nd May 2018 2:14pm
22nd May 2018 2:14pm
Colored Skies inst. by DREVM
My mind has been up the clouds
Been for a while
Making it hard to smile
Thinking things will be different this time
Reason to lie slide
Hope I can't buy, why
All in the mind
My happiness lies
Life happens till we die
Before i take that long ride
Rage against dying of the light
It will be alright, squad
Prayers every night, flawed
Layers of the fight, God
Please don't take me away
Wrapped up in energy hope i can stay
Give in to entropy...
Been for a while
Making it hard to smile
Thinking things will be different this time
Reason to lie slide
Hope I can't buy, why
All in the mind
My happiness lies
Life happens till we die
Before i take that long ride
Rage against dying of the light
It will be alright, squad
Prayers every night, flawed
Layers of the fight, God
Please don't take me away
Wrapped up in energy hope i can stay
Give in to entropy...
#heroin
#addiction
1059 reads
2 Comments
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