Heroic Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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heroic seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 3:52am
22nd Dec 2024 3:52am
Autistic Genius
Autistic Genius
He’s A Genius not against you and me
He’s a Genius I can’t touch with a thought
He’s a Genius solving human problems
He’s a Genius no one saw
He’s the Genius that lives in all of us
He’s the Genius being bullied upon
He’s a Genius different autistic superhero
Guess somewhere late at night think about
Before we lay down to bed and dream asleep
He’s the genius of you and me
Autistic and proud as shit
Sensitive brain wired a little different ...
He’s A Genius not against you and me
He’s a Genius I can’t touch with a thought
He’s a Genius solving human problems
He’s a Genius no one saw
He’s the Genius that lives in all of us
He’s the Genius being bullied upon
He’s a Genius different autistic superhero
Guess somewhere late at night think about
Before we lay down to bed and dream asleep
He’s the genius of you and me
Autistic and proud as shit
Sensitive brain wired a little different ...
#Autism
#heroic
#power
43 reads
0 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 11:08am
11th Dec 2024 11:08am
~Cinkam
viz cinkam
#courage
#heroic
#inspirational
#lion
#love
112 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 5:06am
11th Dec 2024 5:06am
Bobbi Wilson
Bobbi Wilson
9 yr old environmentalist
Tryin to control and spray the lantern flys
Doing her part with help from Tik tok
Made up a mix to get rid of them
Dish soap n apple vinegar
Sprayed on the trees and sidewalk
Now this is where the bigotry seeps in
Man calls 911 said some little black woman
Was causing a stir
Said he doesn’t know what hell she’s doing
Scares him though
Mom went to a council hearing
Said she doesn’t want to label
But she’s black and a mom
Wants to share point of view
Man...
9 yr old environmentalist
Tryin to control and spray the lantern flys
Doing her part with help from Tik tok
Made up a mix to get rid of them
Dish soap n apple vinegar
Sprayed on the trees and sidewalk
Now this is where the bigotry seeps in
Man calls 911 said some little black woman
Was causing a stir
Said he doesn’t know what hell she’s doing
Scares him though
Mom went to a council hearing
Said she doesn’t want to label
But she’s black and a mom
Wants to share point of view
Man...
#childhood
#environment
#heroic #racism
#heroic #racism
51 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 7:49pm
30th Nov 2024 7:49pm
Acidic Flash
Inside all war there lies conspiracy
There's nothing to believe but lies
Raging fires on the innocent
While the dead watch from the skies
They take the blind man to the killing field
To play in someone else's game
Let the lesser lands be torn apart
And bring them here to bear the shame
Acidic Flash
Burns my eyes
Acidic Flash
Buried Alive
Severed spirits hanging in the wind
Tear the truth apart from lies
A sordid effigy of past mistakes
Their heroism lost in time
They send...
There's nothing to believe but lies
Raging fires on the innocent
While the dead watch from the skies
They take the blind man to the killing field
To play in someone else's game
Let the lesser lands be torn apart
And bring them here to bear the shame
Acidic Flash
Burns my eyes
Acidic Flash
Buried Alive
Severed spirits hanging in the wind
Tear the truth apart from lies
A sordid effigy of past mistakes
Their heroism lost in time
They send...
#heroic
#lies
#satirical
#soldiers
#war
76 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 8:04am
26th Nov 2024 8:04am
Navalny
You kill me I get stronger
I defy your lies that you sell
You kill me ten more will come
Red and white roses are appropriate
For a HERO we don’t forget
Navalny against the Assassins
I’ll see you in my sleep Putin Cretin
Putin will die a worse death nuclear
Little man trying to stand up against
Navalny HERO in us
Putin’s chef in a plane blasted
Being silent against him
Roses are rising against Putin
Navalny death be the death of us
...
I defy your lies that you sell
You kill me ten more will come
Red and white roses are appropriate
For a HERO we don’t forget
Navalny against the Assassins
I’ll see you in my sleep Putin Cretin
Putin will die a worse death nuclear
Little man trying to stand up against
Navalny HERO in us
Putin’s chef in a plane blasted
Being silent against him
Roses are rising against Putin
Navalny death be the death of us
...
#admiration
#corruption
#greed
#heroic
#oppression
61 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 3:14am
18th Nov 2024 3:14am
Ron (The Hero)
Ron (The Hero)
Ron Nessman is not
Les Nessman (or less than human)
Sittin on a bench waiting for sis
To get the car sparkly and shiny
Just put down his best impression
Trying to get a job at Applebees
Not really paying attention
Sittin and waiting for her
See out of the corner of his eye a
Stroller strolling to the boulevard
There’s no phone booth
What are they anyway
His costume says save the child
Spring into saving the lad
By the curb grab the handle ...
Ron Nessman is not
Les Nessman (or less than human)
Sittin on a bench waiting for sis
To get the car sparkly and shiny
Just put down his best impression
Trying to get a job at Applebees
Not really paying attention
Sittin and waiting for her
See out of the corner of his eye a
Stroller strolling to the boulevard
There’s no phone booth
What are they anyway
His costume says save the child
Spring into saving the lad
By the curb grab the handle ...
#admiration
#gratitude
#heroic
#inspirational
#redemption
56 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 2:06pm
8th Nov 2024 2:06pm
Portuguese man-o-war
Who are we, lost in the vastness?
Sailing on seas without a compass.
From the first moment, the first breath.
In a labyrinth of doubts and shadows.
Wandering souls in search of meaning.
We cling to the intangible.
Desperate for answers,
in an indifferent and silent world.
Days drag on and nights collapse
in a relentless cycle of uncertainty.
We scream into the void, crying out for direction
but the echo is all that returns to us.
Heavy hearts and exhausted minds.
We walk among the ruins of...
Sailing on seas without a compass.
From the first moment, the first breath.
In a labyrinth of doubts and shadows.
Wandering souls in search of meaning.
We cling to the intangible.
Desperate for answers,
in an indifferent and silent world.
Days drag on and nights collapse
in a relentless cycle of uncertainty.
We scream into the void, crying out for direction
but the echo is all that returns to us.
Heavy hearts and exhausted minds.
We walk among the ruins of...
#astronomy
#heroic
#karma
#sea
#universe
88 reads
8 Comments
Lowko
Jimi Tatz
Jimi Tatz
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 2:54pm
1st Nov 2024 2:54pm
Thee Underclass
It was thee 18th century, and I was just a mere vagabondus.
I couldn't hold down a job, I think one week was my longest!
With a peaky blinders cap and my waistcoat on tight,
I would wander thee streets at night, drunk, and get into fights.
It was thee old days of Landan, full of buskers and harlots.
Staggering past thee beggers, on thee way to thee market.
I met a Dorris called Charlotte, going past on her horse and cart,
She offered me a lift and asked where I'd like to depart?!
She was talking all jargon about nobility,...
I couldn't hold down a job, I think one week was my longest!
With a peaky blinders cap and my waistcoat on tight,
I would wander thee streets at night, drunk, and get into fights.
It was thee old days of Landan, full of buskers and harlots.
Staggering past thee beggers, on thee way to thee market.
I met a Dorris called Charlotte, going past on her horse and cart,
She offered me a lift and asked where I'd like to depart?!
She was talking all jargon about nobility,...
#friendship
#heroic
#humankind #masculinity
#humankind #masculinity
89 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 8:39pm
27th Oct 2024 8:39pm
Toxie Will Help
Cleaning the gym, the easiest target
everyone's torments he must bear
Thrown into a barrel of nuclear waste
instant mutation his life changed forever
Skin turns dark head grows large
putrid complexion exterior decay
Rejected by loved ones forced to exile
roaming alone feeling confused
Bringer of justice, killing the villains
If you need help he will assist
A true vigilante saving the world
A brush for a weapon, a blind girl is his love
Living in the junkyard, a social outcast
Planning his vengeance towards them...
everyone's torments he must bear
Thrown into a barrel of nuclear waste
instant mutation his life changed forever
Skin turns dark head grows large
putrid complexion exterior decay
Rejected by loved ones forced to exile
roaming alone feeling confused
Bringer of justice, killing the villains
If you need help he will assist
A true vigilante saving the world
A brush for a weapon, a blind girl is his love
Living in the junkyard, a social outcast
Planning his vengeance towards them...
#heroic
#horror
#PopCulture #violence
#PopCulture #violence
85 reads
4 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 1:57am
22nd Oct 2024 1:57am
October Poems 2024 >> curtain call
A poem for each day of the month in which I was born
DAY 21
curtain call
are you your own damn hero?
blow your horn!
his magnitude is zero,
whose the scorn
of lesser earthbound creatures,
who from toil
erect life’s grandest features
from mere soil.
is wealth your gloomy terror?
nuisance!
it is a fiscal error
to advance
your borrowed, transient substance
in the face
of bigotted reluctance
to embrace
naught of the vacant posture
of the lean. ...
DAY 21
curtain call
are you your own damn hero?
blow your horn!
his magnitude is zero,
whose the scorn
of lesser earthbound creatures,
who from toil
erect life’s grandest features
from mere soil.
is wealth your gloomy terror?
nuisance!
it is a fiscal error
to advance
your borrowed, transient substance
in the face
of bigotted reluctance
to embrace
naught of the vacant posture
of the lean. ...
#birthday
#courage
#heroic
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeCycle
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OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 11:34pm
16th Oct 2024 11:34pm
COUNTERWEIGHT OFF THE TAIL ME BOYS (Fri., 10-11-2024; Palm Springs, California)
just counterweight
off
the tail
me boys
just counterweight
off
the tail
or in other
words
to put it
more simply
just counterweight
off
the tail
me boys
counterweight
off
the
t
a
i
l
for i m afraid
there may not be
much
left of me
afterwards
here tonight
beyond
the resonant echo s
widely spreading...
off
the tail
me boys
just counterweight
off
the tail
or in other
words
to put it
more simply
just counterweight
off
the tail
me boys
counterweight
off
the
t
a
i
l
for i m afraid
there may not be
much
left of me
afterwards
here tonight
beyond
the resonant echo s
widely spreading...
#courage
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#heroic
#WritersBlock
#WritingPoetry
74 reads
0 Comments
UbiquitousVoid
Poem Published
7th Sep 2024 2:49am
7th Sep 2024 2:49am
STAY WITH US
Lone pariah of the heart in knots
Into darkness, slipping
Faced with dismissal, dismal thoughts
For acceptance, gripping
Beyond the shadows in your soul
There is so much more to extol
Crumble apart, there is no rush
I'll be there to pick the pieces up
So you've held out through the storm for answers
And you're tired of all of life's meanders
Then would you reach out before you bleed out?
Don't you face the world with pained expression
Don't you lose your goal on first impression
Or would you bleed out...
Into darkness, slipping
Faced with dismissal, dismal thoughts
For acceptance, gripping
Beyond the shadows in your soul
There is so much more to extol
Crumble apart, there is no rush
I'll be there to pick the pieces up
So you've held out through the storm for answers
And you're tired of all of life's meanders
Then would you reach out before you bleed out?
Don't you face the world with pained expression
Don't you lose your goal on first impression
Or would you bleed out...
#courage
#forgiveness
#heroic
#soldiers
#TimeHeals
153 reads
2 Comments
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