Haiku Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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haiku seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 2:14pm
9th Jul 2024 2:14pm
First Kiss
Eyes hyper-focused
Lip's part anticipating
Stop, hold, every breath
Lip's part anticipating
Stop, hold, every breath
#erotic
#haiku
#sensual
74 reads
26 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 11:12am
9th Jul 2024 11:12am
Silence
Words fail miserably
Silent treatment more abstruse
Cryptic thoughts exposed.
Silent treatment more abstruse
Cryptic thoughts exposed.
#haiku
#silence
129 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Jul 2024 11:58pm
5th Jul 2024 11:58pm
Finger or Two
Finger yourself here
I don't care who's watching you
Did you get the snot?
I don't care who's watching you
Did you get the snot?
#haiku
#scary
#TruthOfLife
123 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2024 10:29pm
3rd Jul 2024 10:29pm
Memories Of You
Old flames never die
Something will ignite the past
Thoughts of you I love
Something will ignite the past
Thoughts of you I love
#haiku
#love
#memories
145 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2024 7:21pm
2nd Jul 2024 7:21pm
Should I or Should I Not Water?
Green is turning brown
Water bill will be sky high
Summertime headaches
Water bill will be sky high
Summertime headaches
#choices
#haiku
#summer
123 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Jun 2024 9:26pm
30th Jun 2024 9:26pm
Stop the lies
Hypochondriac
Prevarications can harm
Reality check
Prevarications can harm
Reality check
#haiku
#lies
134 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Jun 2024 8:24pm
21st Jun 2024 8:24pm
The First Day of Summer
The heat is intense
The pool water is to hot
Relief in the tub
The pool water is to hot
Relief in the tub
#haiku
#summer
132 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Jun 2024 11:10am
21st Jun 2024 11:10am
One Life To Live
The weekend is here
Let's get out and have some fun
Stop waiting around
Get up and do it!
Before you know it, life's over
Let's make memories
Let's get out and have some fun
Stop waiting around
Get up and do it!
Before you know it, life's over
Let's make memories
#haiku
#inspirational
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
131 reads
8 Comments
I_was_rare_once
RareFaction
RareFaction
Poem Published
19th Jun 2024 10:40am
19th Jun 2024 10:40am
Journey
Alone on my path.
Lonely a thought of the past.
I must persist on.
Lonely a thought of the past.
I must persist on.
#haiku
#strength
#passion
130 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Jun 2024 11:33pm
17th Jun 2024 11:33pm
Together as one
My heart beats for you
I inhale as you exhale
Everlastingly
I inhale as you exhale
Everlastingly
#admiration
#haiku
#love
205 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Jun 2024 11:18am
14th Jun 2024 11:18am
My last token
Why am I still here
Danced with death so many times
Last ticket to ride
Danced with death so many times
Last ticket to ride
#death
#haiku
#TruthOfLife
159 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Jun 2024 11:11am
14th Jun 2024 11:11am
Progression?
I'm left in the dust
I'm refusing to conform
Cyber affliction
I'm refusing to conform
Cyber affliction
#haiku
#technology
131 reads
12 Comments
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