Poems for and About Girlfriends by Top Critiquers
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Poems for and about girlfriends by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Come on Girl
You just live the simple life
well you don't do nothing good
you wonder where the good times are
well there right in front of you
Stop being a grump
or you'll get dumped
come on girl, get in on life
You've been told that there's only one way,
and that's why the rules you follow each day
if you keep on living like that,
you're gonna die like the rest of the pack
Let free, let go,
let everyone know
you're not gonna be another victim of society
You're free from your daddy's hand,
go out and find...
well you don't do nothing good
you wonder where the good times are
well there right in front of you
Stop being a grump
or you'll get dumped
come on girl, get in on life
You've been told that there's only one way,
and that's why the rules you follow each day
if you keep on living like that,
you're gonna die like the rest of the pack
Let free, let go,
let everyone know
you're not gonna be another victim of society
You're free from your daddy's hand,
go out and find...
#emptiness
#freedom
#girlfriend
#LifeStruggles
#rebellion
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HONESTLY, YOU REALLY DON'T MIND?
I hadn't seen her in
several years; then out
of the blue there was her
sensual voice on the phone.
After small talk and updating
the past, I told her I wanted to
see her as soon as it was convenient.
"Really?" she replied. "I'm not the
same "perfect doll" you once
circled the world in bed with."
"YES! A thousand times yes."
"Are you sure?" she asked.
She began her list:
"Do you want my fat body, I mean fat?"
"Oh, yes, I can feel and taste it now.,.
more...
several years; then out
of the blue there was her
sensual voice on the phone.
After small talk and updating
the past, I told her I wanted to
see her as soon as it was convenient.
"Really?" she replied. "I'm not the
same "perfect doll" you once
circled the world in bed with."
"YES! A thousand times yes."
"Are you sure?" she asked.
She began her list:
"Do you want my fat body, I mean fat?"
"Oh, yes, I can feel and taste it now.,.
more...
#girlfriend
#relationships
#honesty
#support
#admiration
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BRIDGES TO CROSS
From moments of time with each other as one, there will be situations that will test our love bond and patiences along, with our strength and compassion with unconditional support of understanding of honor and respect. That will bring us struggles and maybe destroy the very fabric of the love, that we built from our own blood sweat and tears with the process of the hurt and pain. That we will have to face head on with life's trials and tribulations, that will become sometimes to heavy upon our souls and hearts and minds, penetrating through the very systematic factions of our true existences...
#wife
#husband
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#relationships
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Without coffee or remorse
I like cops and married women for
the same reasons:
They’re pissed at the world,
they fuck fast
and they
keep their
mouths shut.
So I texted a cop
I’d once done a ride-along with,
because while
I read porn,
my husband
and our girlfriend
talked about
baby names.
It punched a hole
in me.
Something gaping
and ugly.
And I wanted to fill it.
With you.
With you.
I wanted to feel all that
tension,
that heat
that...
the same reasons:
They’re pissed at the world,
they fuck fast
and they
keep their
mouths shut.
So I texted a cop
I’d once done a ride-along with,
because while
I read porn,
my husband
and our girlfriend
talked about
baby names.
It punched a hole
in me.
Something gaping
and ugly.
And I wanted to fill it.
With you.
With you.
I wanted to feel all that
tension,
that heat
that...
#husband
#girlfriend
#sex
#lover
#emptiness
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10 Comments
Breathing Room
most of the women I've dated
never wore panties...unless they had to
and I've always seconded that motion
cuz um a...heh heh...firm advocate for Women's rights
...and filthy late nights drives..
as i flashback to my fingers
being gripped tight while fingerfucking
my Lady Luck along the Southern State parkway
doin a smooth 95 mph....her foot up on the dashboard
her sundress flowing under the moonlight
her head cocked back...soaking it all in
a dark sky freckled with hints of familiar stars
the...
never wore panties...unless they had to
and I've always seconded that motion
cuz um a...heh heh...firm advocate for Women's rights
...and filthy late nights drives..
as i flashback to my fingers
being gripped tight while fingerfucking
my Lady Luck along the Southern State parkway
doin a smooth 95 mph....her foot up on the dashboard
her sundress flowing under the moonlight
her head cocked back...soaking it all in
a dark sky freckled with hints of familiar stars
the...
#erotic
#girlfriend
#sensual
#women
#memories
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Nice and slow
Nice and slow
I stick my tongue between your lips,
As I hold you firm by the hips,
On your back, feet in the air,
My mouth is buried in your hair,
I take my time as I lick your mound,
My tongue going slowly up and down,
I suck your button as your juices flow,
As I slowly make your arousal grow,
I can hear your moans and sighs,
As I work my magic between your thighs,
Your hips bucking as you squirm about,
You start to call my name; you shout,
I drive you wild as you call my name,
Cause I’m the reason that...
I stick my tongue between your lips,
As I hold you firm by the hips,
On your back, feet in the air,
My mouth is buried in your hair,
I take my time as I lick your mound,
My tongue going slowly up and down,
I suck your button as your juices flow,
As I slowly make your arousal grow,
I can hear your moans and sighs,
As I work my magic between your thighs,
Your hips bucking as you squirm about,
You start to call my name; you shout,
I drive you wild as you call my name,
Cause I’m the reason that...
#girlfriend
#lover
#lust #passion
#lust #passion
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why she left
she said she was bored going out with me. I suggested we spent the night in ..
#girlfriend
#historical
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1 Comment
My Paramour
Reminiscing the sensual movements
Escaping the pain of reality
Seeing you with my minds eye
You’re a blessing
And a malediction
My paramour
Whom I adore
The one I’m fiendin’ for
And always leave me wanting more
You’re my sensual proclivity
My beautiful divinity
My favorite activity
Ironically my Exclusivity
But it’s insanity
To truly be
As long as I’m married
Free
To make you my eternity
Escaping the pain of reality
Seeing you with my minds eye
You’re a blessing
And a malediction
My paramour
Whom I adore
The one I’m fiendin’ for
And always leave me wanting more
You’re my sensual proclivity
My beautiful divinity
My favorite activity
Ironically my Exclusivity
But it’s insanity
To truly be
As long as I’m married
Free
To make you my eternity
#girlfriend
#romantic
#beauty #admiration
#beauty #admiration
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7 Comments
Loose Ends
Loose ends tie up knots inside.
I'm not seeing past the loophole.
Weaving through is seamless fabrication.
Tightened design, anxiety.
Tug of war balances, both sides pulling.
Opposites repel.
Collapsing attraction.
The rope ends as I enter.
Combative hang up.
The fight to push ahead.
Clashing dendrites become waves.
Osmosis waters neurological branches.
Electric quarks.
Emotional, covalent bond.
Cataclysmic dimension.
The currents rapidly transpire.
Anchor drops in...
I'm not seeing past the loophole.
Weaving through is seamless fabrication.
Tightened design, anxiety.
Tug of war balances, both sides pulling.
Opposites repel.
Collapsing attraction.
The rope ends as I enter.
Combative hang up.
The fight to push ahead.
Clashing dendrites become waves.
Osmosis waters neurological branches.
Electric quarks.
Emotional, covalent bond.
Cataclysmic dimension.
The currents rapidly transpire.
Anchor drops in...
#girlfriend
#love
#metaphor
#morality
#spiritual
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your hand print shouldn't be so indelible
Tell me I'm worthless
without telling me I'm worthless
I watch you eye fuck
other girls on the street
while you avoid holding my hand
though I haven't kicked the habit
of reaching for you
"fuck, she's so hot"
you smile at me
with a cruelness
that sparkles in the last light
of the afternoon
I look past the leggy blonde
to the sex shop across the street
and remember how wearing nothing
but a smile and sky high heels
used to be so empowering ...
without telling me I'm worthless
I watch you eye fuck
other girls on the street
while you avoid holding my hand
though I haven't kicked the habit
of reaching for you
"fuck, she's so hot"
you smile at me
with a cruelness
that sparkles in the last light
of the afternoon
I look past the leggy blonde
to the sex shop across the street
and remember how wearing nothing
but a smile and sky high heels
used to be so empowering ...
#DomesticViolence
#girlfriend
#memories #SelfWorth
#memories #SelfWorth
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I Understand That You Want An Open Relationship
Look, Ally.
I really hate to
do this to you but I have to let
you go. I understand that you want an open
relationship. But seeing you in
a porno with some guy
is too much.
I really hate to
do this to you but I have to let
you go. I understand that you want an open
relationship. But seeing you in
a porno with some guy
is too much.
#dialogue
#fiction
#girlfriend
#heartbroken
#sensual
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First Date
Off the vine ; very appealing.
She does not come apart.
Her wit is biting.
My wine spills.
Kisses my cheek, trying not to laugh.
That was twenty years ago.
It's only grapes.
She does not come apart.
Her wit is biting.
My wine spills.
Kisses my cheek, trying not to laugh.
That was twenty years ago.
It's only grapes.
#boyfriend
#dating
#FallingInLove
#girlfriend
#happiness
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