Poems for and About Girlfriends by Top Critiquers
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Poems for and about girlfriends by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
The love he had for them was real
It wasn't as bad as all that
I mean he helped her have the kid
It wasn't as if he just left her in the street to have the damn thing by herself
I mean, what the fuck, he was into that bitch
It's not his fault she died while dropping the frog
When she started screaming, he didn't tell the bitch to shut the fuck up
I mean, you guys are trying to make it look like he was the bad guy here
I think he was alright
I would have to her to go fuck herself, but you know me,
I'm different then most people
I hate everyone, man
He didn't want to scare...
I mean he helped her have the kid
It wasn't as if he just left her in the street to have the damn thing by herself
I mean, what the fuck, he was into that bitch
It's not his fault she died while dropping the frog
When she started screaming, he didn't tell the bitch to shut the fuck up
I mean, you guys are trying to make it look like he was the bad guy here
I think he was alright
I would have to her to go fuck herself, but you know me,
I'm different then most people
I hate everyone, man
He didn't want to scare...
#love
#dark
#girlfriend
#fiction
#pregnancy
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HONESTLY, YOU REALLY DON'T MIND?
I hadn't seen her in
several years; then out
of the blue there was her
sensual voice on the phone.
After small talk and updating
the past, I told her I wanted to
see her as soon as it was convenient.
"Really?" she replied. "I'm not the
same "perfect doll" you once
circled the world in bed with."
"YES! A thousand times yes."
"Are you sure?" she asked.
She began her list:
"Do you want my fat body, I mean fat?"
"Oh, yes, I can feel and taste it now.,.
more...
several years; then out
of the blue there was her
sensual voice on the phone.
After small talk and updating
the past, I told her I wanted to
see her as soon as it was convenient.
"Really?" she replied. "I'm not the
same "perfect doll" you once
circled the world in bed with."
"YES! A thousand times yes."
"Are you sure?" she asked.
She began her list:
"Do you want my fat body, I mean fat?"
"Oh, yes, I can feel and taste it now.,.
more...
#girlfriend
#relationships
#honesty
#support
#admiration
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Sharing
caring
sharing
daring
baring
I'm not afraid of
baring my soul to you
sharing
daring
baring
I'm not afraid of
baring my soul to you
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#relationships
#ILoveYou
#LifeAsAWriter
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Remaining in Magic (I Vow)
You are a delicate flower
Such as the daisy I observe
Late on a slow summer’s eve
Graced by the chirping of birds
The scent of Queen Ann’s Lace
Draws atent my gaze to you
Swirling about in the meadows
That we call home; what a valiant view
We laugh and dance like little girls
Stretching our arms up to the sky
And begin to slumber under the stars
The moon smiling upon us all night
So I dream of you in fairyland
A secret garden to explore
Each petal tells a different tale
Such as you wielding a...
Such as the daisy I observe
Late on a slow summer’s eve
Graced by the chirping of birds
The scent of Queen Ann’s Lace
Draws atent my gaze to you
Swirling about in the meadows
That we call home; what a valiant view
We laugh and dance like little girls
Stretching our arms up to the sky
And begin to slumber under the stars
The moon smiling upon us all night
So I dream of you in fairyland
A secret garden to explore
Each petal tells a different tale
Such as you wielding a...
#happiness
#girlfriend
#flowers
#nature
#admiration
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single plate
there once
upon that
single plate
was a
single man,
single meal,
all kept
by himself,
eating alone,
later
if he can
find company,
find love
to stay,
now,
two plates.
upon that
single plate
was a
single man,
single meal,
all kept
by himself,
eating alone,
later
if he can
find company,
find love
to stay,
now,
two plates.
#happiness
#love
#girlfriend
#relationships
#dating
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UNLESS AND UNTIL
There I go dreaming that same dream yet again....
That one when I was not just your lover, but also friend.
Its a dream where you come back to me, like you have before....
Watching and waiting for your call or even a knock at my door.
Nothing seems the same when I
am left here all alone
I get a little depressed sometimes whenever you're gone.
I miss how we can laugh together and talk things through
You make it easy since you never judge me, nor do I, you.
We are both willing to do what it takes to satisfy and please...
That one when I was not just your lover, but also friend.
Its a dream where you come back to me, like you have before....
Watching and waiting for your call or even a knock at my door.
Nothing seems the same when I
am left here all alone
I get a little depressed sometimes whenever you're gone.
I miss how we can laugh together and talk things through
You make it easy since you never judge me, nor do I, you.
We are both willing to do what it takes to satisfy and please...
#hope
#girlfriend
#ILoveYou
#disappointment
#bittersweet
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You make me smile
You make me smile.
My smile hides so much.
But it shows even more.
And I hope it shines for you.
Caressing the soul.
Still I will always dare.
Welcoming the spirit.
And ever so quirky.
A lover's smile is best.
Every smile means so much.
But that one special smile...
It embodies them all.
It embodies you.
My smile hides so much.
But it shows even more.
And I hope it shines for you.
Caressing the soul.
Still I will always dare.
Welcoming the spirit.
And ever so quirky.
A lover's smile is best.
Every smile means so much.
But that one special smile...
It embodies them all.
It embodies you.
#happiness
#love
#girlfriend #inspirational
#girlfriend #inspirational
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the shortest love story ever written
they held
hands
watched the
sun go
down
and they were
very, very
happy
hands
watched the
sun go
down
and they were
very, very
happy
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#romantic
#honesty
#gratitude
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I Told You Not To Come Tonight
Because my ass was dragging
And the sleep deprivation
Was starting to get to me
And went to bed at one a.m.
I know, early for your old man,
With the bed toasty and welcoming
But I was hungry and couldn’t sleep
So got up, ate some hash browns
And sat there with the electric heater
Blowing hot air caresses
Which were comforting to me
But nothing like your touch
So I would just like to say
That I wish you had come over ...
And the sleep deprivation
Was starting to get to me
And went to bed at one a.m.
I know, early for your old man,
With the bed toasty and welcoming
But I was hungry and couldn’t sleep
So got up, ate some hash browns
And sat there with the electric heater
Blowing hot air caresses
Which were comforting to me
But nothing like your touch
So I would just like to say
That I wish you had come over ...
#love
#girlfriend
#lover
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Our First Time Masturbating Together Part 7 of 7
#girlfriend
#passion
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Love Bubbles – An Ongoing Blowing
Another One For The Dormouse🐭
I send these loving lines to you,
and with them goes my loving heart
that beats for you the whole day through.
I send these loving lines to you,
I've dipped each one in love so true
it surely has no counterpart.
I send these loving lines to you
and with them goes my loving heart;
and then a few more lines I write
to say quite simply you're the best;
you fill my – er – head with sheer delight;
and then a few more lines I write
to say I'll – er – hug you through the...
I send these loving lines to you,
and with them goes my loving heart
that beats for you the whole day through.
I send these loving lines to you,
I've dipped each one in love so true
it surely has no counterpart.
I send these loving lines to you
and with them goes my loving heart;
and then a few more lines I write
to say quite simply you're the best;
you fill my – er – head with sheer delight;
and then a few more lines I write
to say I'll – er – hug you through the...
#love
#girlfriend
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Friday Afternoon
Tick, tick, tick, tock,
I sit here staring at the clock.
Friday afternoon drags,
a few hours til hope.
Off to the waterhole I'll go,
the thought helps me cope.
I'll chat and tell tall stories,
buddies will laugh.
Bar maids will flirt,
while wearing tight skirts.
When I'm happy and a bit stewed,
I'll call and try not to be lewd.
With a giggle you'll say,
"You sound a bit tipsy".
"Are you coming over to fix me?"
In a flash,
dial an Uber.
Sounds of whip cracking,
buddies laughing like...
I sit here staring at the clock.
Friday afternoon drags,
a few hours til hope.
Off to the waterhole I'll go,
the thought helps me cope.
I'll chat and tell tall stories,
buddies will laugh.
Bar maids will flirt,
while wearing tight skirts.
When I'm happy and a bit stewed,
I'll call and try not to be lewd.
With a giggle you'll say,
"You sound a bit tipsy".
"Are you coming over to fix me?"
In a flash,
dial an Uber.
Sounds of whip cracking,
buddies laughing like...
#hope
#girlfriend
#dreams #passion
#dreams #passion
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DU Poetry : Poems for and About Girlfriends by Top Critiquers