Poems About Frustration Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about frustration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
LunasChild8
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 1:18pm
20th Nov 2024 1:18pm
Pet Peeve
Dontcha wanna know my pet peeve?
Use it to get back at me
Irritate me just right; ferment my blood into aged wine
Dontcha wanna know what are my dreams?
Burn them all up right at the seams
Hijacking my sight; playing dirty games in my mind.
Use it to get back at me
Irritate me just right; ferment my blood into aged wine
Dontcha wanna know what are my dreams?
Burn them all up right at the seams
Hijacking my sight; playing dirty games in my mind.
#frustration
#rhyming
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poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 12:17pm
17th Nov 2024 12:17pm
Blood And Ink
The morning comes aglow
and so the dark gently retreats
as the sun sends morning caress
the night gathers its folds
chasing away the nighted stress
thank god still am i breathing
watching this sunlight beaming
hear the birds outside chirping
and the innocent kids, are playing
the night that passed like a tomb
cold like a stone, i did not atone
despite what i might lately have done
a torment, through which i have gone
but, my sun is still the shine
that...
and so the dark gently retreats
as the sun sends morning caress
the night gathers its folds
chasing away the nighted stress
thank god still am i breathing
watching this sunlight beaming
hear the birds outside chirping
and the innocent kids, are playing
the night that passed like a tomb
cold like a stone, i did not atone
despite what i might lately have done
a torment, through which i have gone
but, my sun is still the shine
that...
#anxiety
#apathy
#frustration #grief
#frustration #grief
99 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 11:49pm
14th Nov 2024 11:49pm
We have so much to lose
We will always have a choice to choose, what we need and want to have in our lives, with a relationship between the lines of uncertainties. For sure we will never know, how things will go down the road of trails and tribulations.
THROUGH this life with the challenges, that could make us or break us up and destroy, the deepness of the truth of the foundation. Built from steel and stones, and the deepness of the love that we shall share, for we have a history together as woman to man and man to woman. For sure let's ask thyself what was the point for do we really want and need, that kind...
THROUGH this life with the challenges, that could make us or break us up and destroy, the deepness of the truth of the foundation. Built from steel and stones, and the deepness of the love that we shall share, for we have a history together as woman to man and man to woman. For sure let's ask thyself what was the point for do we really want and need, that kind...
#anger
#courage
#disappointment
#frustration
#strength
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drone
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 10:08am
13th Nov 2024 10:08am
Out There
It's sunny and warm
Outside
But within one's walls
Of flesh and bone
Surrounded
By wood brick And mortar
Trying to figger out
Sometimes
Why the fuck is it
So cloudy
With patches of cold dark rain
In Here
When one looks a little closer
There's a crack in your world
And along the Edges
Of all these cracks
Denial is Screaming
At the Cold Hearted Facts
That all these cracks
Are always written
In Your Name
NO one...
Outside
But within one's walls
Of flesh and bone
Surrounded
By wood brick And mortar
Trying to figger out
Sometimes
Why the fuck is it
So cloudy
With patches of cold dark rain
In Here
When one looks a little closer
There's a crack in your world
And along the Edges
Of all these cracks
Denial is Screaming
At the Cold Hearted Facts
That all these cracks
Are always written
In Your Name
NO one...
#anger
#confusion
#fear
#frustration
#sadness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 10:31am
11th Nov 2024 10:31am
Thank you
Thank you
For loving us
Father
We are happy about that
Thank you
For being in our lives
Thank you
For keeping us alive
Here on earth
Every single day
Thank for answering our prayers
After we pray
Thank you
For bringing the birds back home
For loving us
Father
We are happy about that
Thank you
For being in our lives
Thank you
For keeping us alive
Here on earth
Every single day
Thank for answering our prayers
After we pray
Thank you
For bringing the birds back home
#bittersweet
#boredom
#frustration
#grief
#shame
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RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 11:58pm
10th Nov 2024 11:58pm
Vestibulocochlear sympathectomy
Only point to matter is the fulcrums peak.
As pivotal, the equilibrium we seek.
Critical mass tipped to offset sum.
Heavily shifts the weight of outcome.
Impressive pressures impart fractional distresses.
Coalesces into convoluted messes.
Broken focus binding fixation to disrepair.
Unified in the disconnection that we share.
Snapping in concert to the beat of your clique.
Adversarial dependency, "it's them who's sick".
Blind fidelity illuminates obscured perception.
Signals interference scrambles any reception. ...
As pivotal, the equilibrium we seek.
Critical mass tipped to offset sum.
Heavily shifts the weight of outcome.
Impressive pressures impart fractional distresses.
Coalesces into convoluted messes.
Broken focus binding fixation to disrepair.
Unified in the disconnection that we share.
Snapping in concert to the beat of your clique.
Adversarial dependency, "it's them who's sick".
Blind fidelity illuminates obscured perception.
Signals interference scrambles any reception. ...
#frustration
#TruthOfLife
119 reads
4 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 6:56pm
10th Nov 2024 6:56pm
Sexual unfaithfulness to a regular partner cum serial adultery to a legal spouse!
By Stanley Collymore
For every man that has an affair
there's very similarly a woman
willing to eagerly participate
in the deception. So why then is it always the
man that rather invariably, when such clearly
serial cheating is effectively discovered and
disapprovingly called out, that not only gets
the blame but, additionally too, consistently
finds himself subjected to very widespread
public castigation? Maybe objectively such
critics should firmly, sensibly, and basically
rationally, not simply significantly...
For every man that has an affair
there's very similarly a woman
willing to eagerly participate
in the deception. So why then is it always the
man that rather invariably, when such clearly
serial cheating is effectively discovered and
disapprovingly called out, that not only gets
the blame but, additionally too, consistently
finds himself subjected to very widespread
public castigation? Maybe objectively such
critics should firmly, sensibly, and basically
rationally, not simply significantly...
#anxiety
#denial
#frustration
#rejection
#sadness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 1:14am
10th Nov 2024 1:14am
Destiny
Destiny where do I find you?
Destiny where can I look for you?
Destiny where are you hiding?
Why are you hiding from me?
Destiny what do you have for me?
Destiny what are my options?
Destiny which door is open for me?
Destiny do you have anything for me that I might want?
Destiny can I get any satisfaction from you?
Destiny are you my friend?
Destiny where can I look for you?
Destiny where are you hiding?
Why are you hiding from me?
Destiny what do you have for me?
Destiny what are my options?
Destiny which door is open for me?
Destiny do you have anything for me that I might want?
Destiny can I get any satisfaction from you?
Destiny are you my friend?
#confusion
#emptiness
#fear
#frustration
#greed
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 11:24pm
8th Nov 2024 11:24pm
2 am in the morning
2 am in the morning
I am still wake
Working on my computer
Writing poems for my God
Also I am up because I am
Not tired at all
And I need to work
For my God
Writing poems
Today I started working for God
All day on my computer
Also, today I never took a break from
My computer
I am still wake
Working on my computer
Writing poems for my God
Also I am up because I am
Not tired at all
And I need to work
For my God
Writing poems
Today I started working for God
All day on my computer
Also, today I never took a break from
My computer
#disappointment
#fear
#frustration
#greed
#loneliness
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REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 11:11pm
7th Nov 2024 11:11pm
Diary of an angry Blackman "
Why is it that the black people don't own the land or property on which they live!!
Working hard everyday, in everyway just to give in order to be able to live!
Working the 1st Monday, Tuesday, an Wednesday, for the landlord then Thursday Working for Con-Ed, got me upset 😡 and fed!!
Fed-up with this mess and all this bullshit ass stress, then on Friday my day I'm working for myself just to have a payday!
To try and enjoy myself, an on my off day on a Saturday, soon as I take my first drink and whined up drunk, cops...
Working hard everyday, in everyway just to give in order to be able to live!
Working the 1st Monday, Tuesday, an Wednesday, for the landlord then Thursday Working for Con-Ed, got me upset 😡 and fed!!
Fed-up with this mess and all this bullshit ass stress, then on Friday my day I'm working for myself just to have a payday!
To try and enjoy myself, an on my off day on a Saturday, soon as I take my first drink and whined up drunk, cops...
#anger
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#frustration
#regret
144 reads
4 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 1:52pm
7th Nov 2024 1:52pm
The choice is mine
The choice is mine
If I want to continue to be a
Christian
The choice is mine
If I want to keep having
The friends I have
The choice is mine
If I will continue to pray
For my Father
The choice is mine
If I going to continue to
Take care of my health
Every single day
The choice is mine
What time I am going to bed every
Night
If I want to continue to be a
Christian
The choice is mine
If I want to keep having
The friends I have
The choice is mine
If I will continue to pray
For my Father
The choice is mine
If I going to continue to
Take care of my health
Every single day
The choice is mine
What time I am going to bed every
Night
#frustration
#grief
#rejection
#sadness
#shame
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 10:56am
7th Nov 2024 10:56am
The Pressure
Follow me into the room of hatred
Don't turn away don't close your eyes
Walk with me hand in hand to the end
Don't hide your face I see through your lies
The pressure
Pushing on me
Mistakes
Never give in never break
The hatred
Burning in me
The pain
Never give in, never break
Drown yourself in the name of a fake god
You think you're free you think you're right
Drown yourself in the name of nothing
You'll save yourself but through self sacrifice
Don't turn away don't close your eyes
Walk with me hand in hand to the end
Don't hide your face I see through your lies
The pressure
Pushing on me
Mistakes
Never give in never break
The hatred
Burning in me
The pain
Never give in, never break
Drown yourself in the name of a fake god
You think you're free you think you're right
Drown yourself in the name of nothing
You'll save yourself but through self sacrifice
#anger
#anxiety
#CallToAction
#frustration
#hate
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