Poems About Frustration Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about frustration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Cyndi_Moone
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 10:19pm
9th Oct 2024 10:19pm
ALARM
Sweet and dreamy ringing of the xylophone
Fills the empty silence with its resounding tone.
Bouncing off the dark room walls,
Charms the night fall
As I sleepwalk by day and stand on paved bricks
Blinded by the folds of the midnight mix.
Never knowing where I’m going or where I’m headed
Oh, my! I know I’m starting to regret it!
But, the hypnotizing soft-tone strikes of the xylophone
Gently creating its soft melodic tone
Seductively entices me to sleepwalk some more
With my eyes wide shut but with feet on floor.
Clock...
Fills the empty silence with its resounding tone.
Bouncing off the dark room walls,
Charms the night fall
As I sleepwalk by day and stand on paved bricks
Blinded by the folds of the midnight mix.
Never knowing where I’m going or where I’m headed
Oh, my! I know I’m starting to regret it!
But, the hypnotizing soft-tone strikes of the xylophone
Gently creating its soft melodic tone
Seductively entices me to sleepwalk some more
With my eyes wide shut but with feet on floor.
Clock...
#dark
#despair
#emptiness
#fear
#frustration
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drone
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 12:34pm
8th Oct 2024 12:34pm
Exploit
One speaks about evil
The Darkness
Yet
One doesn't understand
The light of knowledge
That's Needed
To Understand the war
That those of us
Fight
Within our minds
Trying to Live our life's
While the Shadows flicker
From the corner
Of our minds eye
Continuesly probing
For a crack
That they can
Exploit
The Darkness
Yet
One doesn't understand
The light of knowledge
That's Needed
To Understand the war
That those of us
Fight
Within our minds
Trying to Live our life's
While the Shadows flicker
From the corner
Of our minds eye
Continuesly probing
For a crack
That they can
Exploit
#dark
#fear
#frustration #loneliness
#frustration #loneliness
113 reads
5 Comments
drone
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 9:13am
6th Oct 2024 9:13am
Can't Keep. Silent
It is a Simple thing
That we do
Creating thoughts
From our feelings
Where our Imotions
Are never spared
The pain
Of speaking
What our feelings
Are Thinking
That we do
Creating thoughts
From our feelings
Where our Imotions
Are never spared
The pain
Of speaking
What our feelings
Are Thinking
#bittersweet
#frustration
#sadness
94 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 8:56pm
3rd Oct 2024 8:56pm
Generic Existence
He goes to the same job everyday.
He comes home to his wife every night.
They rarely touch each other.
Only on special occasions, like birthday's and Columbus Day.
There not attracted to each other anymore.
They don't make a fuss about it.
A few years back, they were fighting and swearing that they were going to leave one another.
When the fighting subsided, they both realized they were both a bunch of cowards.
Neither one had the courage to go out and meet someone else.
They don't despise one another.
They are friendly roommates waiting for...
He comes home to his wife every night.
They rarely touch each other.
Only on special occasions, like birthday's and Columbus Day.
There not attracted to each other anymore.
They don't make a fuss about it.
A few years back, they were fighting and swearing that they were going to leave one another.
When the fighting subsided, they both realized they were both a bunch of cowards.
Neither one had the courage to go out and meet someone else.
They don't despise one another.
They are friendly roommates waiting for...
#emptiness
#frustration
#marriage #separation
#marriage #separation
96 reads
6 Comments
drone
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 10:20am
3rd Oct 2024 10:20am
This Arena
Man
This Arena
Pisses me off sometimes
What are you talking about
You dick
The world is not an arena
Your crazy
You don't get it
Do you
Everything
You see
Touch feel
Hear taste smell
Is in this realm
The only time you leave
Is when you sleep
Where freedom comes
In many forms
Depending
On how You Think
This Arena
Pisses me off sometimes
What are you talking about
You dick
The world is not an arena
Your crazy
You don't get it
Do you
Everything
You see
Touch feel
Hear taste smell
Is in this realm
The only time you leave
Is when you sleep
Where freedom comes
In many forms
Depending
On how You Think
#courage
#frustration
61 reads
0 Comments
LionEki
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 6:32pm
2nd Oct 2024 6:32pm
Untitled
With no respect for what has already occurred,
Healing, rehearsals replace all experience,
Fear of naivety drowns the senses,
Courage drowns in the womb before birth,
Quantum passion cloaks the body,
Shame covers shame,
Weakness hides deceit,
A skinned pigeon writhes in the mire,
To relive unwarranted sorrow in the next life.
毫无尊重，对于已经发生的事情，
...
Healing, rehearsals replace all experience,
Fear of naivety drowns the senses,
Courage drowns in the womb before birth,
Quantum passion cloaks the body,
Shame covers shame,
Weakness hides deceit,
A skinned pigeon writhes in the mire,
To relive unwarranted sorrow in the next life.
毫无尊重，对于已经发生的事情，
...
#dark
#denial
#frustration #grief
#frustration #grief
118 reads
9 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 10:59am
30th Sep 2024 10:59am
Mrs. Potato Head (Attempt Two)
Oh,Mrs. Potato Head,tell me now.
Is the money worth it,why and how?
They say,if you weren't born with it,you can give some cash.
They'll clean you up,patch you up.
And then throw your body in the trash.
When we are kids,we long for change.
But as adults,we accept minimum wage.
Will her beauty stay through,if her face is falling apart?
Will her body stay the same,after she does surgery on her body and heart?
The children go on their mother's ways.
And find different,new ways to change your face.
They pay a lot...
Is the money worth it,why and how?
They say,if you weren't born with it,you can give some cash.
They'll clean you up,patch you up.
And then throw your body in the trash.
When we are kids,we long for change.
But as adults,we accept minimum wage.
Will her beauty stay through,if her face is falling apart?
Will her body stay the same,after she does surgery on her body and heart?
The children go on their mother's ways.
And find different,new ways to change your face.
They pay a lot...
#dark
#frustration
#hope
#redemption
#strength
95 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Sep 2024 3:18pm
26th Sep 2024 3:18pm
THE MASK OF YOUR POSSESSION
Tell me if you can get the very point of my words that I speak to you, and do you know how the very real deepness of my own personal pain. THAT I have been going through for you just for me trying, to survive on silent whispers of my thoughts of my tears and hurt and spiritual pain. THAT stains the walls of my cheeks on my face, yet I wear a mask hiding behind the hurt and spiritual things, that haunting me that I try to make them just go away with the pain. For sure you think that I don't bleed yet that is far from the negativity of truth, cause because of you my heart bleeds over you, when...
#frustration
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#regret
#sadness
147 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 11:43am
25th Sep 2024 11:43am
Torrents of Insanity
In the broken mirror of the mind,
distorted reflections dance,
echoes of laughter and tears,
in a sea of dreams and hopes.
Colors that scream in silence,
shapes that disappear into the air.
reality dissolves
in a whirlwind of non-places.
Words that are lost in the wind.
Verses that never meet.
Logic bends and breaks
in the torrents of insanity.
And in the chaos, beauty emerges
like a flower in the desert.
The soul finds its freedom
in the depths of the uncertain.
distorted reflections dance,
echoes of laughter and tears,
in a sea of dreams and hopes.
Colors that scream in silence,
shapes that disappear into the air.
reality dissolves
in a whirlwind of non-places.
Words that are lost in the wind.
Verses that never meet.
Logic bends and breaks
in the torrents of insanity.
And in the chaos, beauty emerges
like a flower in the desert.
The soul finds its freedom
in the depths of the uncertain.
#anxiety
#confusion
#despair
#frustration
#sadness
133 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Sep 2024 11:26am
21st Sep 2024 11:26am
In Your Face
I take two steps back
You then take two steps forward
You have no respect
You then take two steps forward
You have no respect
#frustration
#senryu
88 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Sep 2024 8:36pm
20th Sep 2024 8:36pm
Braggers about nothing
The majority of people are maggots
there here to make you soft
they try & kill you with small talk
bragging about nothing
death to all one uppers
a toxic personality that makes them feel superior
not my problem you have low self-esteem and are also insecure
your irritating me as I will never get this time back again
you like when you make people feel smaller
i won't be gently telling them their personality sucks & to stay away from me
instead, I'm going to tell them that I want to hear more of their bombastic stories
easiest way...
there here to make you soft
they try & kill you with small talk
bragging about nothing
death to all one uppers
a toxic personality that makes them feel superior
not my problem you have low self-esteem and are also insecure
your irritating me as I will never get this time back again
you like when you make people feel smaller
i won't be gently telling them their personality sucks & to stay away from me
instead, I'm going to tell them that I want to hear more of their bombastic stories
easiest way...
#anger
#frustration
#hate
66 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Sep 2024 10:25pm
19th Sep 2024 10:25pm
I hate this bird
Last summer I was in my pool when a rooster arrived
Two doors down he would crow with pride
In my town, it's illegal to own
Constantly crowing, I picked up the phone
Authorities came, the owner was fined
Situation continued, nothing rectified
Endless noise throughout the year
How much more will I need to hear?
Every morning he woke me up around five
One day I paid a visit, shot him, and he died
Two doors down he would crow with pride
In my town, it's illegal to own
Constantly crowing, I picked up the phone
Authorities came, the owner was fined
Situation continued, nothing rectified
Endless noise throughout the year
How much more will I need to hear?
Every morning he woke me up around five
One day I paid a visit, shot him, and he died
#birds
#frustration
#home
#LifeChangingMoment
#summer
91 reads
7 Comments
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