Poems About Frustration Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about frustration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 00:49am
24th Nov 2024 00:49am
i hate-You?
I hate that I was attracted to you.
I hate that you affect me.
I hate wanting you.
I hate it all you see.
It started off great.
It was so sweet.
A twinkle in your eye.
I shuffled my feet.
Then you asked.
I said yes.
You wore a suit.
I wore a dress.
The meal was nice.
The talk was brief.
Didn’t want to say goodbye.
Didn’t want to go to sleep.
The night was perfect.
Intense was passion.
...
I hate that you affect me.
I hate wanting you.
I hate it all you see.
It started off great.
It was so sweet.
A twinkle in your eye.
I shuffled my feet.
Then you asked.
I said yes.
You wore a suit.
I wore a dress.
The meal was nice.
The talk was brief.
Didn’t want to say goodbye.
Didn’t want to go to sleep.
The night was perfect.
Intense was passion.
...
#confusion
#frustration
#rejection
257 reads
34 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 7:01pm
23rd Nov 2024 7:01pm
The Narrow Path
I had once gone to London on vacation,
walking along the Thames, far, far away in dreams,
or maybe in fragments of a life that once was,
or could have been.
There was powder on my face,
a devil's trumpet in my hand,
and so many warnings,
but youth is deaf,
and wisdom,
a ghost cloaked in the unseen years ahead.
I was muscle-bound,
well-dressed,
a leather belt cinching a polished facade.
Yet beneath, I was already unraveling.
It was autumn, I remember,
the leaves spiraling downward,
their slow...
walking along the Thames, far, far away in dreams,
or maybe in fragments of a life that once was,
or could have been.
There was powder on my face,
a devil's trumpet in my hand,
and so many warnings,
but youth is deaf,
and wisdom,
a ghost cloaked in the unseen years ahead.
I was muscle-bound,
well-dressed,
a leather belt cinching a polished facade.
Yet beneath, I was already unraveling.
It was autumn, I remember,
the leaves spiraling downward,
their slow...
#anger
#frustration
#God
#honesty
#LifeCycle
121 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 5:05am
23rd Nov 2024 5:05am
Stop repeating the cycle of bad
When are you gonna change your way of thinking. 🤔 For don't you deserve better than what you've, been receiving from relationships with nothing, but hurt and pain. 😞 For let's take a moment to analyze, the situations that you and I have been through, over the years. For sure we can be blinded, by the fake forms of affection and false, promises of love and happiness. Still we continue to repeat the chaos and drama, with each relationship that we encounter. For don't you know what you, want and need in your life and world. 🌎 For sure when are you gonna change the...
#disappointment
#frustration
#heartbroken
#regret
#TimeHeals
113 reads
2 Comments
doriann_barrere
Dorian
Dorian
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 1:35pm
20th Nov 2024 1:35pm
Gwynplaine's Sentiment
Amidst the fog-wrapped coasts of France's sullen shore,
I was borne, a child plucked from humanity's womb—
a husk emptied, reshaped, molded by hands cruel and arcane.
O Heaven, did you witness the crime cast in your name?
Were your stars still fixed as mine fell from grace,
my face carved in grins by blades that spared no flesh nor soul,
leaving me bound forever to a smile that knew no mirth,
a grin in eternal mockery of all joy?
Look upon me, oh silent ones, whose pity wounds sharper than the steel—
for I am Gwynplaine, the jester...
I was borne, a child plucked from humanity's womb—
a husk emptied, reshaped, molded by hands cruel and arcane.
O Heaven, did you witness the crime cast in your name?
Were your stars still fixed as mine fell from grace,
my face carved in grins by blades that spared no flesh nor soul,
leaving me bound forever to a smile that knew no mirth,
a grin in eternal mockery of all joy?
Look upon me, oh silent ones, whose pity wounds sharper than the steel—
for I am Gwynplaine, the jester...
#denial
#despair
#frustration
#sadness
#shame
148 reads
0 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 1:18pm
20th Nov 2024 1:18pm
Pet Peeve
Dontcha wanna know my pet peeve?
Use it to get back at me
Irritate me just right; ferment my blood into aged wine
Dontcha wanna know what are my dreams?
Burn them all up right at the seams
Hijacking my sight; playing dirty games in my mind.
Use it to get back at me
Irritate me just right; ferment my blood into aged wine
Dontcha wanna know what are my dreams?
Burn them all up right at the seams
Hijacking my sight; playing dirty games in my mind.
#frustration
#rhyming
121 reads
4 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 12:17pm
17th Nov 2024 12:17pm
Blood And Ink
The morning comes aglow
and so the dark gently retreats
as the sun sends morning caress
the night gathers its folds
chasing away the nighted stress
thank god still am i breathing
watching this sunlight beaming
hear the birds outside chirping
and the innocent kids, are playing
the night that passed like a tomb
cold like a stone, i did not atone
despite what i might lately have done
a torment, through which i have gone
but, my sun is still the shine
that...
and so the dark gently retreats
as the sun sends morning caress
the night gathers its folds
chasing away the nighted stress
thank god still am i breathing
watching this sunlight beaming
hear the birds outside chirping
and the innocent kids, are playing
the night that passed like a tomb
cold like a stone, i did not atone
despite what i might lately have done
a torment, through which i have gone
but, my sun is still the shine
that...
#anxiety
#apathy
#frustration #grief
#frustration #grief
100 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 11:49pm
14th Nov 2024 11:49pm
We have so much to lose
We will always have a choice to choose, what we need and want to have in our lives, with a relationship between the lines of uncertainties. For sure we will never know, how things will go down the road of trails and tribulations.
THROUGH this life with the challenges, that could make us or break us up and destroy, the deepness of the truth of the foundation. Built from steel and stones, and the deepness of the love that we shall share, for we have a history together as woman to man and man to woman. For sure let's ask thyself what was the point for do we really want and need, that kind...
THROUGH this life with the challenges, that could make us or break us up and destroy, the deepness of the truth of the foundation. Built from steel and stones, and the deepness of the love that we shall share, for we have a history together as woman to man and man to woman. For sure let's ask thyself what was the point for do we really want and need, that kind...
#anger
#courage
#disappointment
#frustration
#strength
112 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 10:08am
13th Nov 2024 10:08am
Out There
It's sunny and warm
Outside
But within one's walls
Of flesh and bone
Surrounded
By wood brick And mortar
Trying to figger out
Sometimes
Why the fuck is it
So cloudy
With patches of cold dark rain
In Here
When one looks a little closer
There's a crack in your world
And along the Edges
Of all these cracks
Denial is Screaming
At the Cold Hearted Facts
That all these cracks
Are always written
In Your Name
NO one...
Outside
But within one's walls
Of flesh and bone
Surrounded
By wood brick And mortar
Trying to figger out
Sometimes
Why the fuck is it
So cloudy
With patches of cold dark rain
In Here
When one looks a little closer
There's a crack in your world
And along the Edges
Of all these cracks
Denial is Screaming
At the Cold Hearted Facts
That all these cracks
Are always written
In Your Name
NO one...
#anger
#confusion
#fear
#frustration
#sadness
107 reads
0 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 10:31am
11th Nov 2024 10:31am
Thank you
Thank you
For loving us
Father
We are happy about that
Thank you
For being in our lives
Thank you
For keeping us alive
Here on earth
Every single day
Thank for answering our prayers
After we pray
Thank you
For bringing the birds back home
For loving us
Father
We are happy about that
Thank you
For being in our lives
Thank you
For keeping us alive
Here on earth
Every single day
Thank for answering our prayers
After we pray
Thank you
For bringing the birds back home
#bittersweet
#boredom
#frustration
#grief
#shame
110 reads
0 Comments
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 11:58pm
10th Nov 2024 11:58pm
Vestibulocochlear sympathectomy
Only point to matter is the fulcrums peak.
As pivotal, the equilibrium we seek.
Critical mass tipped to offset sum.
Heavily shifts the weight of outcome.
Impressive pressures impart fractional distresses.
Coalesces into convoluted messes.
Broken focus binding fixation to disrepair.
Unified in the disconnection that we share.
Snapping in concert to the beat of your clique.
Adversarial dependency, "it's them who's sick".
Blind fidelity illuminates obscured perception.
Signals interference scrambles any reception. ...
As pivotal, the equilibrium we seek.
Critical mass tipped to offset sum.
Heavily shifts the weight of outcome.
Impressive pressures impart fractional distresses.
Coalesces into convoluted messes.
Broken focus binding fixation to disrepair.
Unified in the disconnection that we share.
Snapping in concert to the beat of your clique.
Adversarial dependency, "it's them who's sick".
Blind fidelity illuminates obscured perception.
Signals interference scrambles any reception. ...
#frustration
#TruthOfLife
122 reads
4 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 6:56pm
10th Nov 2024 6:56pm
Sexual unfaithfulness to a regular partner cum serial adultery to a legal spouse!
By Stanley Collymore
For every man that has an affair
there's very similarly a woman
willing to eagerly participate
in the deception. So why then is it always the
man that rather invariably, when such clearly
serial cheating is effectively discovered and
disapprovingly called out, that not only gets
the blame but, additionally too, consistently
finds himself subjected to very widespread
public castigation? Maybe objectively such
critics should firmly, sensibly, and basically
rationally, not simply significantly...
For every man that has an affair
there's very similarly a woman
willing to eagerly participate
in the deception. So why then is it always the
man that rather invariably, when such clearly
serial cheating is effectively discovered and
disapprovingly called out, that not only gets
the blame but, additionally too, consistently
finds himself subjected to very widespread
public castigation? Maybe objectively such
critics should firmly, sensibly, and basically
rationally, not simply significantly...
#anxiety
#denial
#frustration
#rejection
#sadness
88 reads
0 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 1:14am
10th Nov 2024 1:14am
Destiny
Destiny where do I find you?
Destiny where can I look for you?
Destiny where are you hiding?
Why are you hiding from me?
Destiny what do you have for me?
Destiny what are my options?
Destiny which door is open for me?
Destiny do you have anything for me that I might want?
Destiny can I get any satisfaction from you?
Destiny are you my friend?
Destiny where can I look for you?
Destiny where are you hiding?
Why are you hiding from me?
Destiny what do you have for me?
Destiny what are my options?
Destiny which door is open for me?
Destiny do you have anything for me that I might want?
Destiny can I get any satisfaction from you?
Destiny are you my friend?
#confusion
#emptiness
#fear
#frustration
#greed
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