Poems About Frustration Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about frustration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 10:56am
7th Nov 2024 10:56am
The Pressure
Follow me into the room of hatred
Don't turn away don't close your eyes
Walk with me hand in hand to the end
Don't hide your face I see through your lies
The pressure
Pushing on me
Mistakes
Never give in never break
The hatred
Burning in me
The pain
Never give in, never break
Drown yourself in the name of a fake god
You think you're free you think you're right
Drown yourself in the name of nothing
You'll save yourself but through self sacrifice
Don't turn away don't close your eyes
Walk with me hand in hand to the end
Don't hide your face I see through your lies
The pressure
Pushing on me
Mistakes
Never give in never break
The hatred
Burning in me
The pain
Never give in, never break
Drown yourself in the name of a fake god
You think you're free you think you're right
Drown yourself in the name of nothing
You'll save yourself but through self sacrifice
#anger
#anxiety
#CallToAction
#frustration
#hate
164 reads
6 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 12:25pm
6th Nov 2024 12:25pm
NOT ALL VAMPIRES SUCK BLOOD
Your gaze wanders through corridors of dead and living poets, devouring, slipping in like thieves at midnight—not for communion with the spirit’s insight, but to feast, to draw stolen breath and reshape it as your own, a mimicry born without debt to the muse, a hollow construct grasping for self acclaim, void of responsibility to its sources.
Poetic Vampires, the charlatans of thought, these pale shadows drift through other minds, cloaked in filched passion and counterfeit phrases—a theater of echoes lacking the marrow of originality. They linger, barren of fresh vision, bereft of...
Poetic Vampires, the charlatans of thought, these pale shadows drift through other minds, cloaked in filched passion and counterfeit phrases—a theater of echoes lacking the marrow of originality. They linger, barren of fresh vision, bereft of...
#anger
#art
#disappointment
#frustration
#morality
84 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 10:55am
2nd Nov 2024 10:55am
Mirror in the bathroom. Please Talk Free
The best personal
Trainer
Life coach
Therapist
You could
Ever have
Is not hard to find
And it's free
But the problem is
Most people
Don't wonna listen
They just ignore them
They just
Wonna Look
For how does one
Change ones self
By changing the way
Other people
See you
By changing one's thinking
Its simple to do
And it will be
The hardest thing
YOU Will Ever Do
Trainer
Life coach
Therapist
You could
Ever have
Is not hard to find
And it's free
But the problem is
Most people
Don't wonna listen
They just ignore them
They just
Wonna Look
For how does one
Change ones self
By changing the way
Other people
See you
By changing one's thinking
Its simple to do
And it will be
The hardest thing
YOU Will Ever Do
#anxiety
#courage
#despair
#frustration
#strength
82 reads
0 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 1:39pm
1st Nov 2024 1:39pm
Yearning to be a grandparent and angered because your kids refuse your wish?
By Stanley Collymore
Another spin on this story of the
mother angered because her
two daughters are clearly
resolutely determined that they don't want
any children, therefore basically depriving
her of the grandchildren, she obsessively
wants is obviously this! It's actually, their
lives, not your own, that you simply lived
as you wanted to. So sensibly accord to
them the same right of choice! Besides,
the reality generally is, that people, who
theoretically, would actually undeniably
make discernibly superb...
Another spin on this story of the
mother angered because her
two daughters are clearly
resolutely determined that they don't want
any children, therefore basically depriving
her of the grandchildren, she obsessively
wants is obviously this! It's actually, their
lives, not your own, that you simply lived
as you wanted to. So sensibly accord to
them the same right of choice! Besides,
the reality generally is, that people, who
theoretically, would actually undeniably
make discernibly superb...
#anger
#disappointment
#frustration
#heartbroken
#sadness
67 reads
0 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 11:31am
1st Nov 2024 11:31am
The Negative side of Ai.
In google, i typed : AI generated poetry, and here what came.
uncountable websites of AI generated poetry with so many options,
and so i chose the first one that came on top of my search.
https://deepai.org/chat/what-is-ai
--I typed A Life of Rhyme, and all the world poetry fell down on me. the following are just example....
A Life of Rhyme
In gardens where the wildflowers sway,
A whispering wind beckons each day.
With laughter like sunlight, bright and warm,
Life dances around in a joyful form.
Each morning...
uncountable websites of AI generated poetry with so many options,
and so i chose the first one that came on top of my search.
https://deepai.org/chat/what-is-ai
--I typed A Life of Rhyme, and all the world poetry fell down on me. the following are just example....
A Life of Rhyme
In gardens where the wildflowers sway,
A whispering wind beckons each day.
With laughter like sunlight, bright and warm,
Life dances around in a joyful form.
Each morning...
#disappointment
#frustration
#rejection #shame
#rejection #shame
159 reads
14 Comments
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 8:38pm
27th Oct 2024 8:38pm
Politics and reality
INSIDE ROARE
Politics and reality
How can you live with a calm face?
When everything is roaring inside, a storm is brewing.
You want to forget what you promised the children
he wanted to beg on his knees.
RF) Like a destructive current - boiling lava,
the world is burning behind me
Well, I don't choose, I take everything.
There is no compromise!
You must not allow children on earth to go hungry.
All women are beautiful, no one chooses.
Let life have one direction, or I will come.
RF) Like a destructive...
Politics and reality
How can you live with a calm face?
When everything is roaring inside, a storm is brewing.
You want to forget what you promised the children
he wanted to beg on his knees.
RF) Like a destructive current - boiling lava,
the world is burning behind me
Well, I don't choose, I take everything.
There is no compromise!
You must not allow children on earth to go hungry.
All women are beautiful, no one chooses.
Let life have one direction, or I will come.
RF) Like a destructive...
#anger
#dark
#despair
#frustration
#jealousy
133 reads
0 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 9:17pm
26th Oct 2024 9:17pm
Bloody well grow up and get yourselves productive lives!
By Stanley Collymore
To all you aficionados of the
private company Reform
posing and distinctly
masquerading as a political party, this rather
dubious entity, quite clearly, has no policies
that make any sense! And, furthermore, is
virtually simply an evident nonentity; with
really five MPs in the House of Commons
which it got for the first time just recently.
So it's a complete waste of time, actually
exaggerating or bragging about them as
you toxic, racist, xenophobic, and inbred ...
To all you aficionados of the
private company Reform
posing and distinctly
masquerading as a political party, this rather
dubious entity, quite clearly, has no policies
that make any sense! And, furthermore, is
virtually simply an evident nonentity; with
really five MPs in the House of Commons
which it got for the first time just recently.
So it's a complete waste of time, actually
exaggerating or bragging about them as
you toxic, racist, xenophobic, and inbred ...
#denial
#emptiness
#fear
#frustration
#hate
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0 Comments
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 4:01pm
26th Oct 2024 4:01pm
GOLDEN TEARS TRAILS
To understand what is" Golden Tears"
You must emerge from the past
Engage in the truth of darkness and all fears.
Starting from the first to the last
Every pain is acknowledged by its own story
Their purpose and reason
The weight and capacity make it all blurry
Clouds that abide to us by a different season
Every tear is a testament
Our souls' tormenting laments
The sadness of one's Clements
The Hell on earth that happens
The devil roams harder on earth
With scattered teams of demons to...
You must emerge from the past
Engage in the truth of darkness and all fears.
Starting from the first to the last
Every pain is acknowledged by its own story
Their purpose and reason
The weight and capacity make it all blurry
Clouds that abide to us by a different season
Every tear is a testament
Our souls' tormenting laments
The sadness of one's Clements
The Hell on earth that happens
The devil roams harder on earth
With scattered teams of demons to...
#bittersweet
#frustration
#sadness #shame
#sadness #shame
158 reads
2 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 1:08am
25th Oct 2024 1:08am
Living my life in your hands
Living my life in your hands
Because Father, you also own me
Also, I am one of your sons
I know that you have lots of other children
Besides me
Also, we are all siblings
And we have each other
We hope we are going to be here
Tomorrow
If our Father keep us alive
Also, we love our life
That our Father gave to us
Yes, my siblings love me
Are now teenager
Also, I can't believe how fast they are growing
Every year
Soon their teenager life will be over
And they will start living their youth life
Also, we pray...
Because Father, you also own me
Also, I am one of your sons
I know that you have lots of other children
Besides me
Also, we are all siblings
And we have each other
We hope we are going to be here
Tomorrow
If our Father keep us alive
Also, we love our life
That our Father gave to us
Yes, my siblings love me
Are now teenager
Also, I can't believe how fast they are growing
Every year
Soon their teenager life will be over
And they will start living their youth life
Also, we pray...
#boredom
#frustration
#greed
#grief
#heartbroken
80 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2024 1:51pm
23rd Oct 2024 1:51pm
Blue Memphis
Blue Memphis
Young man Ty was going home
After taking in the sunset
Skateboarder and a father
Didn’t know what was up around the bend
Just a few blocks from home
Where Momma was waiting
Would even stop home for
Lunch with his favorite lady
Feelin real blue in the heart of Memphis
Feelin real blue in the heart of Memphis
Now a 4 year old is asking
Where’s Daddy I want him to come home
But it’s a long way to redemption for
The bastards that did this
Weren’t they...
Young man Ty was going home
After taking in the sunset
Skateboarder and a father
Didn’t know what was up around the bend
Just a few blocks from home
Where Momma was waiting
Would even stop home for
Lunch with his favorite lady
Feelin real blue in the heart of Memphis
Feelin real blue in the heart of Memphis
Now a 4 year old is asking
Where’s Daddy I want him to come home
But it’s a long way to redemption for
The bastards that did this
Weren’t they...
#corruption
#frustration
#murder
#oppression
#power
73 reads
0 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 8:55pm
22nd Oct 2024 8:55pm
Miss understood (Part 1)
I’m not for [ everybody ]
not everyone comprehends innuendo [ here ]
In hindsight I wrote intuition in [ frustration ]
let me speak to be absolutely [ clear: ]
Don’t just listen to How in my [ words ]
listen close to What intellect is in its [ meaning ]
I don’t speak circles to [ entertain ]
I speak in Braille for the [ gleaning ]
Envision binary patterns in felt [ repetition ]
rationalize bumps and breaks to [ devour ]
You heard 50 shades of [ grey ]
I discern sweet from [ sour ]
Its difficult...
not everyone comprehends innuendo [ here ]
In hindsight I wrote intuition in [ frustration ]
let me speak to be absolutely [ clear: ]
Don’t just listen to How in my [ words ]
listen close to What intellect is in its [ meaning ]
I don’t speak circles to [ entertain ]
I speak in Braille for the [ gleaning ]
Envision binary patterns in felt [ repetition ]
rationalize bumps and breaks to [ devour ]
You heard 50 shades of [ grey ]
I discern sweet from [ sour ]
Its difficult...
#confusion
#frustration
#learning
#misunderstood
#wisdom
348 reads
10 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
21st Oct 2024 1:25pm
21st Oct 2024 1:25pm
Blood Red Moon Rising
Blood Red Moon Rising
I see a blood red moon rising
I see sedition on the way
Looks like some nasty weather
Tried a coup so it’s onto the next
Tin foil hats and fur hat shamans
Crazies are on the right
Villains are on full view
Talk so crazy and unpatriotic
Lost their way on the Orange mountain of lies
Think that being true is having a big flag
And casting demons on the other shore
Lost on the orange mountain of lies
But their skeletons come back for more
They think a storm is a comin ...
I see a blood red moon rising
I see sedition on the way
Looks like some nasty weather
Tried a coup so it’s onto the next
Tin foil hats and fur hat shamans
Crazies are on the right
Villains are on full view
Talk so crazy and unpatriotic
Lost their way on the Orange mountain of lies
Think that being true is having a big flag
And casting demons on the other shore
Lost on the orange mountain of lies
But their skeletons come back for more
They think a storm is a comin ...
#anger
#apocalypse
#frustration #revenge
#frustration #revenge
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