Poems About Frustration Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about frustration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
19th Oct 2024 6:36am
19th Oct 2024 6:36am
F the Sun
Evil carcinogenic ball in the sky
I've a message for you: piss off and die
You promised to hide so we could have rain
yet on you blazed
bringing nothing but pain
Strut your radiant ass away and leave me alone
cool rainy days feel more like home
Your stupid solution
is to bring more pollution
well done i say
in the worst possible way
There's big trouble in the East
flooding and such
but would just one thunderstorm here
be asking too much?
In August I'm leaving
I know not where
but as long as...
I've a message for you: piss off and die
You promised to hide so we could have rain
yet on you blazed
bringing nothing but pain
Strut your radiant ass away and leave me alone
cool rainy days feel more like home
Your stupid solution
is to bring more pollution
well done i say
in the worst possible way
There's big trouble in the East
flooding and such
but would just one thunderstorm here
be asking too much?
In August I'm leaving
I know not where
but as long as...
#frustration
#rain
#sun
104 reads
8 Comments
KendalM
Poem Published
18th Oct 2024 11:36am
18th Oct 2024 11:36am
Not The Time
It's easy for some to sit and judge, especially when they are sitting comfortably in life, with no need to have accountability for themselves in the midst of their hypocritical finger pointing.
My mom is dying, and everything is broken, so the last thing I'm gonna tolerate is some asshole telling me I'm failing at life's tests.
I found your deflate button, and now your mouth is hissing. So who actually failed their test again?
It's irresponsible to poke a bear while she is actively becoming a mouse and not expect a lashing of sorts.
Shut your mouth, I'm tired of your...
My mom is dying, and everything is broken, so the last thing I'm gonna tolerate is some asshole telling me I'm failing at life's tests.
I found your deflate button, and now your mouth is hissing. So who actually failed their test again?
It's irresponsible to poke a bear while she is actively becoming a mouse and not expect a lashing of sorts.
Shut your mouth, I'm tired of your...
#anger
#frustration
#grief #heartbroken
#grief #heartbroken
84 reads
4 Comments
Aquatic-Vehicle
Lexiloo
Lexiloo
Poem Published
18th Oct 2024 9:56am
18th Oct 2024 9:56am
I’m f**king Pissed
Yeah, I’m fucking pissed!
Told a thing or two
Try to fix the thing for you
And I get bludgeoned with hate.
It’s none of my business
Until you made it my business
Wearing my name out
As if it’s those ugly sneakers
You wear after years of pleading.
Yeah, I’ll fucking call you out!
All the bullshit and pain
Caused by none other than you
Because you can’t keep to yourself.
That husband you currently have?
Your cheating will cause a rift with that too.
Yeah, blame it on me!
I’d have better luck talking to a...
Told a thing or two
Try to fix the thing for you
And I get bludgeoned with hate.
It’s none of my business
Until you made it my business
Wearing my name out
As if it’s those ugly sneakers
You wear after years of pleading.
Yeah, I’ll fucking call you out!
All the bullshit and pain
Caused by none other than you
Because you can’t keep to yourself.
That husband you currently have?
Your cheating will cause a rift with that too.
Yeah, blame it on me!
I’d have better luck talking to a...
#anger
#betrayal
#frustration
85 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
17th Oct 2024 10:50pm
17th Oct 2024 10:50pm
Court of Jesters
The court of jesters
Demand I abide by their ruling
Cowards in black robes
How dare you question
An order that no one puts their name to
Shadow docket
On the Supreme Court
As Clarence and Ginni
Hang with billionaires
Pays for momma’s house
And private schools for
The grandnephew
Sun comes up as Ginni checks the itinerary
Plots a trip on a super yacht
Alito leaks worse than my old Cutlass
Roberts wife takes in tens of millions ...
Demand I abide by their ruling
Cowards in black robes
How dare you question
An order that no one puts their name to
Shadow docket
On the Supreme Court
As Clarence and Ginni
Hang with billionaires
Pays for momma’s house
And private schools for
The grandnephew
Sun comes up as Ginni checks the itinerary
Plots a trip on a super yacht
Alito leaks worse than my old Cutlass
Roberts wife takes in tens of millions ...
#anger
#corruption
#frustration #inequality
#frustration #inequality
66 reads
0 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
17th Oct 2024 5:07pm
17th Oct 2024 5:07pm
Judgement Day
Fully loaded down by stress
focusing spectrum of cuss words to a beam
Sinister regards of carnage
kaleidoscope aimed at opposing team
Boom-Bam-Beam Tourette tics loiter in throated
close support scene
A-10 Warthog BBBRRRRRTTTT
plain in turret attack routines
Dumb luck keep it simple stupid
everybody gotta die seems
Just feed ammo stockpiles
for passovers on horrified screams
Life gave me lemons
I’m handing sour juice no aid of chaser
Only bitter sweet thoughts
aimed chase from infrared laser ...
focusing spectrum of cuss words to a beam
Sinister regards of carnage
kaleidoscope aimed at opposing team
Boom-Bam-Beam Tourette tics loiter in throated
close support scene
A-10 Warthog BBBRRRRRTTTT
plain in turret attack routines
Dumb luck keep it simple stupid
everybody gotta die seems
Just feed ammo stockpiles
for passovers on horrified screams
Life gave me lemons
I’m handing sour juice no aid of chaser
Only bitter sweet thoughts
aimed chase from infrared laser ...
#anger
#frustration
#anxiety
#PTSD
#violence
174 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 8:04pm
16th Oct 2024 8:04pm
Blues Song
He knows what he wants
He wants her
Too bad he's too fucked up to do anything about it
All he could do is hurt you
He's a wounded animal blinded by headlights
This could be the universal blues song
He wants her
Too bad he's too fucked up to do anything about it
All he could do is hurt you
He's a wounded animal blinded by headlights
This could be the universal blues song
#addiction
#frustration
#hurt
#relationships
#sadness
106 reads
6 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 3:53pm
16th Oct 2024 3:53pm
Protect This Earth
when the feelings dehydrated
and the words exhausted
when the quill turns thirsty
the mountain will be calling
when the noise is deafening
and the city overwhelming
when the smoke is smothering
then the forest will be breathing
when the kids stop the plays
lost between so many ways
and they look desperately errant
for, the grasslands are missing
because wars are widely raging
and because Earth is aging
oxygen has become carbon
stressing are the symptoms
...
and the words exhausted
when the quill turns thirsty
the mountain will be calling
when the noise is deafening
and the city overwhelming
when the smoke is smothering
then the forest will be breathing
when the kids stop the plays
lost between so many ways
and they look desperately errant
for, the grasslands are missing
because wars are widely raging
and because Earth is aging
oxygen has become carbon
stressing are the symptoms
...
#anxiety
#earth
#frustration #sadness
#frustration #sadness
98 reads
7 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 3:38am
16th Oct 2024 3:38am
the net and hordes
you are new to me no matter the length of stay
come forth from the darkness and announce who you are
there is a familiararity...a pattern I cannot name
you leave and erase and come back again
your depths reaches out to me
you think I am to judge?
simply put I was born different
struggling with terribly crippling anxiety
alone and heavily medicated
torurtuous lot I've fallen in with
isn't it enough I march?
picking myself up
when you fail to see
what me in my...
come forth from the darkness and announce who you are
there is a familiararity...a pattern I cannot name
you leave and erase and come back again
your depths reaches out to me
you think I am to judge?
simply put I was born different
struggling with terribly crippling anxiety
alone and heavily medicated
torurtuous lot I've fallen in with
isn't it enough I march?
picking myself up
when you fail to see
what me in my...
#anger
#disability
#frustration
92 reads
3 Comments
cheesa
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 3:31pm
14th Oct 2024 3:31pm
The unknown
We value the opinion of others
Whilst we forget ourselves
We shaped by the words of our mothers
Whilst being lost on shelves
We care about out possessions
Whilst forget whose home
We dream about perfect heavans
Whilst all this is unkown
Whilst we forget ourselves
We shaped by the words of our mothers
Whilst being lost on shelves
We care about out possessions
Whilst forget whose home
We dream about perfect heavans
Whilst all this is unkown
#anxiety
#disappointment
#frustration
79 reads
0 Comments
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 6:28am
14th Oct 2024 6:28am
Shadows of the Mind
Hidden and covered
New lands discovered
In the shadows of my mind
The secrets I've kept
My thoughts have wept
Struggling searching to find
Knowledge or memories
Anything familiar to me
To remind me who I am
To help me communicate
Refresh or illuminate
Failing this mental exam
My mind has slipped
My life it's stripped
Of every moment I've enjoyed
While cloudiness replaced
A flavor of distaste
I'm agitated and annoyed
My forgotten recollection ...
New lands discovered
In the shadows of my mind
The secrets I've kept
My thoughts have wept
Struggling searching to find
Knowledge or memories
Anything familiar to me
To remind me who I am
To help me communicate
Refresh or illuminate
Failing this mental exam
My mind has slipped
My life it's stripped
Of every moment I've enjoyed
While cloudiness replaced
A flavor of distaste
I'm agitated and annoyed
My forgotten recollection ...
#anxiety
#despair
#frustration
171 reads
4 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 9:55am
11th Oct 2024 9:55am
Quero viver a vida
Quero viver a vida
That my father gave
To me
I will not
Waste my life
Sleeping in
During the morning
Because if I do that
I won't sleep
At night
So I must stay wake
During the day
That my father gave
To me
I will not
Waste my life
Sleeping in
During the morning
Because if I do that
I won't sleep
At night
So I must stay wake
During the day
#boredom
#confusion
#frustration
#greed
#grief
83 reads
2 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
10th Oct 2024 8:49pm
10th Oct 2024 8:49pm
Love me Father
Love me Father
For everything I do for you
Monday's are the day
That I wash your people's feet
Every Tuesday
We do a feast for Father's people
In the morning
I go fishing for fish together with
My Father
Then we needed to clean the fish
It is a horrible job to do
But it has to be than
Then we will barbecue the fish
God's people arrive at noon
For the feast
My father offer the fish with
A dinner roll
And to drink he gives
A nice bottle of cold wine
At 2:00PM my Father's People
Finish eating...
For everything I do for you
Monday's are the day
That I wash your people's feet
Every Tuesday
We do a feast for Father's people
In the morning
I go fishing for fish together with
My Father
Then we needed to clean the fish
It is a horrible job to do
But it has to be than
Then we will barbecue the fish
God's people arrive at noon
For the feast
My father offer the fish with
A dinner roll
And to drink he gives
A nice bottle of cold wine
At 2:00PM my Father's People
Finish eating...
#fear
#frustration
#loneliness
#regret
#sadness
70 reads
0 Comments
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