Poems About Frustration Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about frustration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Glaxian
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 2:22am
16th Jan 2025 2:22am
Final countdown
Killing field in party town nothing sacred burn it down
Loot the stores, burn the cop cars innocence lost in this town
Drug wars spill in off the street into a little girls sleep
Wars are fought and mothers weep for the sons poured out too cheap
Planes and cars and murder vests to fill the quotas of death
Theft and murder rule the streets that pay the price of our meth
Children die before they are born to parents having fun
Wealthy rapist, name over the door, caught in the long run
Broken promises, lies and deceit it's just...
Loot the stores, burn the cop cars innocence lost in this town
Drug wars spill in off the street into a little girls sleep
Wars are fought and mothers weep for the sons poured out too cheap
Planes and cars and murder vests to fill the quotas of death
Theft and murder rule the streets that pay the price of our meth
Children die before they are born to parents having fun
Wealthy rapist, name over the door, caught in the long run
Broken promises, lies and deceit it's just...
#apocalypse
#dystopian
#freedom
#frustration
#risk
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 10:42am
13th Jan 2025 10:42am
Tired of your bullshit
I'm so sick and tired of hearing you
So much that I don't know what to do
I don't think you're handsome, pretty, or smart
I could find your personality cheap at the mini-mart
You think you're clever, funny, and kind
People like you make people like me lose our minds
I hate who you are, what you believe in, and stand what for
Being forced to be around you at any time is a chore
Everything you do, and everything you say
Makes me contemplate suicide every day
You do things so backwards, I don't even know where to start
I wish...
So much that I don't know what to do
I don't think you're handsome, pretty, or smart
I could find your personality cheap at the mini-mart
You think you're clever, funny, and kind
People like you make people like me lose our minds
I hate who you are, what you believe in, and stand what for
Being forced to be around you at any time is a chore
Everything you do, and everything you say
Makes me contemplate suicide every day
You do things so backwards, I don't even know where to start
I wish...
#anger
#CallToAction
#fiction
#frustration
#hate
71 reads
12 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 2:28am
12th Jan 2025 2:28am
no truer hell
..than to be home
alone
celebrating one's
own thoughts
taking in the small
victories
and mismanagements
of life
with smokes aplenty at
hand
and out a
lighter
DAMM IT !
alone
celebrating one's
own thoughts
taking in the small
victories
and mismanagements
of life
with smokes aplenty at
hand
and out a
lighter
DAMM IT !
#frustration
#funny
57 reads
6 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 12:40pm
8th Jan 2025 12:40pm
Be at peace
Be at peace angels from heaven
Be at peace mother
Be at peace my friends
Be at peace my reverend
Be at peace my God
Be at piece my saints
Be at peace birds
Be at peace Mother Nature
Be at peace sea
Be at peace farmers
Be at peace little baby
Be at peace fisherman
Be at peace moon when you shine at night
Stars be at peace also when you shine at night
Birds be at peace when you fly in the sky during the day
Be at peace mother
Be at peace my friends
Be at peace my reverend
Be at peace my God
Be at piece my saints
Be at peace birds
Be at peace Mother Nature
Be at peace sea
Be at peace farmers
Be at peace little baby
Be at peace fisherman
Be at peace moon when you shine at night
Stars be at peace also when you shine at night
Birds be at peace when you fly in the sky during the day
#bittersweet
#boredom
#fear
#frustration
#rejection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 11:17pm
7th Jan 2025 11:17pm
No me ama mais
No me ama mais
Porque my dear friends
It leaves me sad
Knowing that you
No me ama mais
I am also feeling very sad
My dear friends
Now you had abandon me
And never came back to see me
Again
Now I am living in isolation
And I lost the touch of the outside
World
Also now I have to start all over
Making friends again
And it is not going to be easy again
Yes I wonder if the people I chose
To be my friends will accept me
The way I am
Porque my dear friends
It leaves me sad
Knowing that you
No me ama mais
I am also feeling very sad
My dear friends
Now you had abandon me
And never came back to see me
Again
Now I am living in isolation
And I lost the touch of the outside
World
Also now I have to start all over
Making friends again
And it is not going to be easy again
Yes I wonder if the people I chose
To be my friends will accept me
The way I am
#boredom
#frustration
#greed
#rejection
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 1:00pm
7th Jan 2025 1:00pm
You see no bravery in me
Friends
You see no bravery
In me
Because I am afraid
To end up poor
Like the people
That are sleeping
On the street of
Toronto
Also friend
I am always being
Very careful with my money
I never go over my budget
When I buy something
Like clothes from the
Second-hand store
I also don’t see anything wrong
In buying second-hand clothes
Yes friend the second-hand clothes
That I bought a while ago
I am wearing every single day
And I must say that it is my style
Of clothes
Friends ...
You see no bravery
In me
Because I am afraid
To end up poor
Like the people
That are sleeping
On the street of
Toronto
Also friend
I am always being
Very careful with my money
I never go over my budget
When I buy something
Like clothes from the
Second-hand store
I also don’t see anything wrong
In buying second-hand clothes
Yes friend the second-hand clothes
That I bought a while ago
I am wearing every single day
And I must say that it is my style
Of clothes
Friends ...
#apathy
#disappointment
#frustration
#heartbroken
#sadness
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Poet__2248
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 3:59pm
3rd Jan 2025 3:59pm
Block your ears
Do not look me when you cut
When you scissor and saw my flesh
When you chisel my bones
and wrap my hair
Do not swap my flesh for plastic
Do not fill my cheeks with youth you've crafted from mulch
Or sculpt my teeth with metal
Do not force me to watch
Her mock her adult body
Or hear you sneer with hatred
At her crying
Do not inject my chest with sweetener
Or my bum with fat
Block her ears so she do not hear to your whining
Your insecure complaints
About appearance and age
As I did
When you scissor and saw my flesh
When you chisel my bones
and wrap my hair
Do not swap my flesh for plastic
Do not fill my cheeks with youth you've crafted from mulch
Or sculpt my teeth with metal
Do not force me to watch
Her mock her adult body
Or hear you sneer with hatred
At her crying
Do not inject my chest with sweetener
Or my bum with fat
Block her ears so she do not hear to your whining
Your insecure complaints
About appearance and age
As I did
#anger
#apocalypse
#despair
#frustration
#greed
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schizostalker1000
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 2:39am
3rd Jan 2025 2:39am
The voice that never fades.
All the angry voices started about 5 years ago.
a whisper close to nothing or unhearable.
They started by praising my actions and reactions
Pretending they were here to make easier my interactions.
They were kind and caring at first.
After short period of time things got worse.
They told me i didn't react the way I could.
They decided to explain the way the of their sainthood.
The way they told me to talk and to handle things quickly became evil.
The way they described the details made me never to trust other people.
At the time this started i...
a whisper close to nothing or unhearable.
They started by praising my actions and reactions
Pretending they were here to make easier my interactions.
They were kind and caring at first.
After short period of time things got worse.
They told me i didn't react the way I could.
They decided to explain the way the of their sainthood.
The way they told me to talk and to handle things quickly became evil.
The way they described the details made me never to trust other people.
At the time this started i...
#confusion
#dark
#fear #frustration
#fear #frustration
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 00:52am
28th Dec 2024 00:52am
If I didn't had your love
If I didn't had your love
My father
I would not be able to live
Without your love
Please father give me
Some love
Because I know that
You have lots of love to spare
You are the one made love
With your holy hands
AIso it is love that reals
My broken heart
That is in pain
I already took lots of pain killers
And nothing worked
Yes I overdose on pain killers
That is something that is very dangerous to do
But I also was getting desperate
Yes father lots of people broke my heart again
I also don't know...
My father
I would not be able to live
Without your love
Please father give me
Some love
Because I know that
You have lots of love to spare
You are the one made love
With your holy hands
AIso it is love that reals
My broken heart
That is in pain
I already took lots of pain killers
And nothing worked
Yes I overdose on pain killers
That is something that is very dangerous to do
But I also was getting desperate
Yes father lots of people broke my heart again
I also don't know...
#emptiness
#fear
#frustration
#greed
#shame
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 00:46am
25th Dec 2024 00:46am
Fia 12 days of X-Mas
1st day you joined a gym
2nd day you learned to swim
3rd day you shaved down there
4th day you cared about hair
5th day you turned down snacks
6th day no kisses came back
7th day a mark on your neck
8th day a ticket to Quebec
9th day not sure what to do
10th day then came YOU
11th day a smile on my face
12th day here honey, I packed your suitcase!
1st day of Christmas, what could it be
Mom, what did you make to eat
2nd paper cuts
3rd can you get it
4th alarm fire
5th food...
2nd day you learned to swim
3rd day you shaved down there
4th day you cared about hair
5th day you turned down snacks
6th day no kisses came back
7th day a mark on your neck
8th day a ticket to Quebec
9th day not sure what to do
10th day then came YOU
11th day a smile on my face
12th day here honey, I packed your suitcase!
1st day of Christmas, what could it be
Mom, what did you make to eat
2nd paper cuts
3rd can you get it
4th alarm fire
5th food...
#confusion
#denial
#emotions #frustration
#emotions #frustration
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13 Comments
Miss_Haides
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 2:01pm
22nd Dec 2024 2:01pm
Small Scale Swindler
I see your innocent lies.
The inner struggle.
I understand the inner position.
The need for crafty lines.
Eloquent apologies
Dear Father.....
Dear friend....
Sneaky lyrics
Poems
Dm's
It's never enough
Yet you cannot stand it.
But you must hold it
Every scrap, every drop
Holds you up
Steal a smile
A kiss, an hour, a pic,
A drop, a nip.
It's needed, you need it.
To line the bottom of your cup.
To hold you up.
The inner struggle.
I understand the inner position.
The need for crafty lines.
Eloquent apologies
Dear Father.....
Dear friend....
Sneaky lyrics
Poems
Dm's
It's never enough
Yet you cannot stand it.
But you must hold it
Every scrap, every drop
Holds you up
Steal a smile
A kiss, an hour, a pic,
A drop, a nip.
It's needed, you need it.
To line the bottom of your cup.
To hold you up.
#frustration
#grief
#rejection #shame
#rejection #shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 1:39pm
22nd Dec 2024 1:39pm
Yes friends it was my God that had made you and me
Yes friends it was my God
That had made you
And me
In his image
58 years ago
Friends I am the oldest
Child of God
And he made me in
His image
And he gave me lots
Of freedom
To live my life
Which I love having
The freedom
In my life
Also every day I
Plan my life according
To the weather
If rains I sleep in
And then I wake up
At 2:00 pm
And then
I do my job for God
Writing some poems
Every poem that I write
Have different feelings
I don't write dark
Poems...
That had made you
And me
In his image
58 years ago
Friends I am the oldest
Child of God
And he made me in
His image
And he gave me lots
Of freedom
To live my life
Which I love having
The freedom
In my life
Also every day I
Plan my life according
To the weather
If rains I sleep in
And then I wake up
At 2:00 pm
And then
I do my job for God
Writing some poems
Every poem that I write
Have different feelings
I don't write dark
Poems...
#apathy
#bittersweet
#confusion
#emptiness
#frustration
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