Poems About Frustration Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about frustration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Poet__2248
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 3:59pm
3rd Jan 2025 3:59pm
Block your ears
Do not look me when you cut
When you scissor and saw my flesh
When you chisel my bones
and wrap my hair
Do not swap my flesh for plastic
Do not fill my cheeks with youth you've crafted from mulch
Or sculpt my teeth with metal
Do not force me to watch
Her mock her adult body
Or hear you sneer with hatred
At her crying
Do not inject my chest with sweetener
Or my bum with fat
Block her ears so she do not hear to your whining
Your insecure complaints
About appearance and age
As I did
When you scissor and saw my flesh
When you chisel my bones
and wrap my hair
Do not swap my flesh for plastic
Do not fill my cheeks with youth you've crafted from mulch
Or sculpt my teeth with metal
Do not force me to watch
Her mock her adult body
Or hear you sneer with hatred
At her crying
Do not inject my chest with sweetener
Or my bum with fat
Block her ears so she do not hear to your whining
Your insecure complaints
About appearance and age
As I did
#anger
#apocalypse
#despair
#frustration
#greed
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schizostalker1000
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 2:39am
3rd Jan 2025 2:39am
The voice that never fades.
All the angry voices started about 5 years ago.
a whisper close to nothing or unhearable.
They started by praising my actions and reactions
Pretending they were here to make easier my interactions.
They were kind and caring at first.
After short period of time things got worse.
They told me i didn't react the way I could.
They decided to explain the way the of their sainthood.
The way they told me to talk and to handle things quickly became evil.
The way they described the details made me never to trust other people.
At the time this started i...
a whisper close to nothing or unhearable.
They started by praising my actions and reactions
Pretending they were here to make easier my interactions.
They were kind and caring at first.
After short period of time things got worse.
They told me i didn't react the way I could.
They decided to explain the way the of their sainthood.
The way they told me to talk and to handle things quickly became evil.
The way they described the details made me never to trust other people.
At the time this started i...
#confusion
#dark
#fear #frustration
#fear #frustration
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 00:52am
28th Dec 2024 00:52am
If I didn't had your love
If I didn't had your love
My father
I would not be able to live
Without your love
Please father give me
Some love
Because I know that
You have lots of love to spare
You are the one made love
With your holy hands
AIso it is love that reals
My broken heart
That is in pain
I already took lots of pain killers
And nothing worked
Yes I overdose on pain killers
That is something that is very dangerous to do
But I also was getting desperate
Yes father lots of people broke my heart again
I also don't know...
My father
I would not be able to live
Without your love
Please father give me
Some love
Because I know that
You have lots of love to spare
You are the one made love
With your holy hands
AIso it is love that reals
My broken heart
That is in pain
I already took lots of pain killers
And nothing worked
Yes I overdose on pain killers
That is something that is very dangerous to do
But I also was getting desperate
Yes father lots of people broke my heart again
I also don't know...
#emptiness
#fear
#frustration
#greed
#shame
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 00:46am
25th Dec 2024 00:46am
Fia 12 days of X-Mas
1st day you joined a gym
2nd day you learned to swim
3rd day you shaved down there
4th day you cared about hair
5th day you turned down snacks
6th day no kisses came back
7th day a mark on your neck
8th day a ticket to Quebec
9th day not sure what to do
10th day then came YOU
11th day a smile on my face
12th day here honey, I packed your suitcase!
1st day of Christmas, what could it be
Mom, what did you make to eat
2nd paper cuts
3rd can you get it
4th alarm fire
5th food...
2nd day you learned to swim
3rd day you shaved down there
4th day you cared about hair
5th day you turned down snacks
6th day no kisses came back
7th day a mark on your neck
8th day a ticket to Quebec
9th day not sure what to do
10th day then came YOU
11th day a smile on my face
12th day here honey, I packed your suitcase!
1st day of Christmas, what could it be
Mom, what did you make to eat
2nd paper cuts
3rd can you get it
4th alarm fire
5th food...
#confusion
#denial
#emotions #frustration
#emotions #frustration
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Miss_Haides
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 2:01pm
22nd Dec 2024 2:01pm
Small Scale Swindler
I see your innocent lies.
The inner struggle.
I understand the inner position.
The need for crafty lines.
Eloquent apologies
Dear Father.....
Dear friend....
Sneaky lyrics
Poems
Dm's
It's never enough
Yet you cannot stand it.
But you must hold it
Every scrap, every drop
Holds you up
Steal a smile
A kiss, an hour, a pic,
A drop, a nip.
It's needed, you need it.
To line the bottom of your cup.
To hold you up.
The inner struggle.
I understand the inner position.
The need for crafty lines.
Eloquent apologies
Dear Father.....
Dear friend....
Sneaky lyrics
Poems
Dm's
It's never enough
Yet you cannot stand it.
But you must hold it
Every scrap, every drop
Holds you up
Steal a smile
A kiss, an hour, a pic,
A drop, a nip.
It's needed, you need it.
To line the bottom of your cup.
To hold you up.
#frustration
#grief
#rejection #shame
#rejection #shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 1:39pm
22nd Dec 2024 1:39pm
Yes friends it was my God that had made you and me
Yes friends it was my God
That had made you
And me
In his image
58 years ago
Friends I am the oldest
Child of God
And he made me in
His image
And he gave me lots
Of freedom
To live my life
Which I love having
The freedom
In my life
Also every day I
Plan my life according
To the weather
If rains I sleep in
And then I wake up
At 2:00 pm
And then
I do my job for God
Writing some poems
Every poem that I write
Have different feelings
I don't write dark
Poems...
That had made you
And me
In his image
58 years ago
Friends I am the oldest
Child of God
And he made me in
His image
And he gave me lots
Of freedom
To live my life
Which I love having
The freedom
In my life
Also every day I
Plan my life according
To the weather
If rains I sleep in
And then I wake up
At 2:00 pm
And then
I do my job for God
Writing some poems
Every poem that I write
Have different feelings
I don't write dark
Poems...
#apathy
#bittersweet
#confusion
#emptiness
#frustration
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Miss_Haides
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 9:40am
22nd Dec 2024 9:40am
Imogen
A biased c@nt disappoints everyone forever.
Go! Harass! Idiot!!
Go! Harass! Idiot!!
#boredom
#frustration
#hate
#jealousy
#rejection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 3:31pm
20th Dec 2024 3:31pm
We miss you like crazy
Father
We miss you like crazy
That is not a lie
Please come back to us
And heal us from our sickness
That we had for many years now
Our doctors had prescribed medications
For our sickness
The medications that our doctors prescribed
To us is not helping us
It is only making us more tired
We also feel that we are a drug junkie
We hate to take medication
We want you to heal us
The natural way
Please father do that favor for us
Yes father we trust you
Also father take our worries
That we have away
Also...
We miss you like crazy
That is not a lie
Please come back to us
And heal us from our sickness
That we had for many years now
Our doctors had prescribed medications
For our sickness
The medications that our doctors prescribed
To us is not helping us
It is only making us more tired
We also feel that we are a drug junkie
We hate to take medication
We want you to heal us
The natural way
Please father do that favor for us
Yes father we trust you
Also father take our worries
That we have away
Also...
#frustration
#jealousy
#loneliness
#rejection
#sadness
52 reads
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Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 6:27pm
19th Dec 2024 6:27pm
Writing Pain
(Inspired by Adzy's "6 word story.")
Memories written...
sometimes fly away...
others burrow...
deeper into my psyche.
Meds frustrate...
rather than calm -
engrams triggered!
My screams are
tiny chirps...
Help (chirp) Me!
Memories written...
sometimes fly away...
others burrow...
deeper into my psyche.
Meds frustrate...
rather than calm -
engrams triggered!
My screams are
tiny chirps...
Help (chirp) Me!
#apathy
#confusion
#frustration
52 reads
2 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 8:56pm
18th Dec 2024 8:56pm
Loonies still complaining about the colour of obviously fictional cartoon characters!
By Stanley Collymore
It's a shame the same consideration
isn't give to the history nonsense
taught in a rather widespread
fashion within white Western organized and
obviously run schools, all of them depicting
all Black people as essentially slaves, while
pushing European features as the standard
of beauty. How do these clearly, discernibly
ingrained morons, suppose little Black kids
feel, being systematically told, that nothing beautiful or even vaguely so, does or really, ...
It's a shame the same consideration
isn't give to the history nonsense
taught in a rather widespread
fashion within white Western organized and
obviously run schools, all of them depicting
all Black people as essentially slaves, while
pushing European features as the standard
of beauty. How do these clearly, discernibly
ingrained morons, suppose little Black kids
feel, being systematically told, that nothing beautiful or even vaguely so, does or really, ...
#denial
#despair
#emptiness
#frustration
#hate
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Onyxceila
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 6:54pm
15th Dec 2024 6:54pm
Captured
Sometimes I close my eyes so I can't see
Sometimes I feel so close
So trapped I can't breathe
I just want to be by myself
Just set me free
Just let me be
Release me
You've got me in this cocoon
that I can't pry open
So I scratch and I punch and I pull at it
till my fingers bleed
You've trapped me in this box
where I can't breathe
So I yell and I fight
till the box fills with my screams
Just let me be
Just set me free
Release me
You've got me in this world
Where my head is spinning ...
Sometimes I feel so close
So trapped I can't breathe
I just want to be by myself
Just set me free
Just let me be
Release me
You've got me in this cocoon
that I can't pry open
So I scratch and I punch and I pull at it
till my fingers bleed
You've trapped me in this box
where I can't breathe
So I yell and I fight
till the box fills with my screams
Just let me be
Just set me free
Release me
You've got me in this world
Where my head is spinning ...
#anger
#anxiety
#frustration #loneliness
#frustration #loneliness
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 10:57am
14th Dec 2024 10:57am
It feels good, so who really cares
When he would get off from work he would come home to his wife and her irritable old mother
He hates his mother in law
She lives with them, after her husband died a few years back
Lucky him
She nags and complains and aggravates him every goddamn night
He gets tired of telling his wife to kick her out or have her shut her fucking mouth
He can't take the noise
All day long at work he has to listen to the noise
His boss, the assholes he works with and those fucking machines
When he gets home he wants quiet
His wife is always protecting her mother...
He hates his mother in law
She lives with them, after her husband died a few years back
Lucky him
She nags and complains and aggravates him every goddamn night
He gets tired of telling his wife to kick her out or have her shut her fucking mouth
He can't take the noise
All day long at work he has to listen to the noise
His boss, the assholes he works with and those fucking machines
When he gets home he wants quiet
His wife is always protecting her mother...
#anger
#frustration
#orgasm
#parent
#wife
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