Poems About Fear Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about fear seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 1:55am
30th Jan 2025 1:55am
Lizard King
I’m the lizard king
Don’t know anything
I creep in the crevices
Lost souls I know
I’m everything squared
Slime on a rock I was there
I’m a living thing
Can’t figure it out by myself
I’m the supreme being
Don’t know who I am
Cave dweller in a man cave
Slug on a sofa
I’m the Lizard King
Singing to the choir
Don’t know anything
I creep in the crevices
Lost souls I know
I’m everything squared
Slime on a rock I was there
I’m a living thing
Can’t figure it out by myself
I’m the supreme being
Don’t know who I am
Cave dweller in a man cave
Slug on a sofa
I’m the Lizard King
Singing to the choir
#fear
#misunderstood
54 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 5:53pm
25th Jan 2025 5:53pm
The Others
As I previously mentioned she was encountering "Them"
Figures that looked and sounded like children
Lately however, she's been witnessing these "Other" figures
These figures aren't as playful and innocent as the children
"The Others", as she calls them, are harassing and menacing her, usually in the evening
"The Others" are much taller, black shadows, resembling a person
Like the children, she can't make out their faces, but a negative, icy vibe is what she feels
Several times when "The Others" come...
Figures that looked and sounded like children
Lately however, she's been witnessing these "Other" figures
These figures aren't as playful and innocent as the children
"The Others", as she calls them, are harassing and menacing her, usually in the evening
"The Others" are much taller, black shadows, resembling a person
Like the children, she can't make out their faces, but a negative, icy vibe is what she feels
Several times when "The Others" come...
#aging
#evil
#fear
#MentalHealth
#scary
92 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 10:47am
25th Jan 2025 10:47am
Them
She moves around with caution
Never knowing when "They" may appear
Anxiety has been setting in
She knows "There" real
Everyone is telling her "There" not
She'll witness "Them" from the corner of her left eye
"They" look like little children whispering
At times "They'll" look directly at her and giggle
The faces are distorted
Kind of like a blurred photograph
Several times she caught a few words "They" were saying
On some occasions "They've" asked...
Never knowing when "They" may appear
Anxiety has been setting in
She knows "There" real
Everyone is telling her "There" not
She'll witness "Them" from the corner of her left eye
"They" look like little children whispering
At times "They'll" look directly at her and giggle
The faces are distorted
Kind of like a blurred photograph
Several times she caught a few words "They" were saying
On some occasions "They've" asked...
#aging
#confusion
#fear
#MentalHealth
#scary
84 reads
15 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 7:09pm
24th Jan 2025 7:09pm
Lost Us
Lost Us
#fear
#heartbroken
245 reads
11 Comments
mitjima
Lunarbitsh
Lunarbitsh
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 6:20am
24th Jan 2025 6:20am
w i t c h 2 0 0 9
#deception
#fear
#memories
#secrets
#witches
63 reads
1 Comment
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 00:26am
24th Jan 2025 00:26am
how about I just sit here nice and quiet
old bloke in the bar says
I can’t go home in this weather, not with
my chest and this cough
but the publican replies
sorry mate, we’re closing
up and you can’t stay here all night
aye, says the old bloke, it’s
a conundrum, right enough ..
I can’t go home in this weather, not with
my chest and this cough
but the publican replies
sorry mate, we’re closing
up and you can’t stay here all night
aye, says the old bloke, it’s
a conundrum, right enough ..
#alcohol
#fear
#rain
#storm
#wind
55 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 11:30am
23rd Jan 2025 11:30am
Listen to the silence
Living in the shadows, where there is no place to go
Living in the shadows, where there is no place to dream
Take a deep breath to fight against your fears
Live for the moment to understand your destiny
Listen to the silence to find the way
Do you remember when nothing was everything?
Lies,
Cause what sounded good to you determined your choice
Your knowledge is fading, and this battle is just the beginning
Living in the shadows, where there is no place to dream
Take a deep breath to fight against your fears
Live for the moment to understand your destiny
Listen to the silence to find the way
Do you remember when nothing was everything?
Lies,
Cause what sounded good to you determined your choice
Your knowledge is fading, and this battle is just the beginning
#fate
#fear
#LifeStruggles
#silence
#wisdom
120 reads
14 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 7:14pm
21st Jan 2025 7:14pm
The elephants
Elephants are huge
they cast giant shadows
have wide flat round feet
and lots of love for the trunk.
Elephants are annoying
with their bodies
stunning
the soft memories
of stupid children's faces.
Elephants know
many and diverse people
which if it's not a friend
must be a far relative.
Such lonely animals
take up lots of space
but they can't hide
because they don't fit
in the closets.
They mess with everything and everyone
want to be part of history
but they get lost in...
they cast giant shadows
have wide flat round feet
and lots of love for the trunk.
Elephants are annoying
with their bodies
stunning
the soft memories
of stupid children's faces.
Elephants know
many and diverse people
which if it's not a friend
must be a far relative.
Such lonely animals
take up lots of space
but they can't hide
because they don't fit
in the closets.
They mess with everything and everyone
want to be part of history
but they get lost in...
#corruption
#fear
#LifeStruggles
#politics
#storm
71 reads
4 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 11:52pm
19th Jan 2025 11:52pm
Life Is A Struggle
People Today! Oh boy!
There's something happening here...
It's all of us. What is your kink, perversion, addiction or mental illness? Do you cope with alcohol? Drugs? Sex? Are you addicted to food? Do you gamble? Are you afraid? I can go on! You may know what makes you tick or you might spend your entire life trying to figure it out!
A 17 year old shoots up a school!
The model-type young woman with flawless skin has sex on camera with over a 100 guys online on her onlyfans account.
The married female school...
There's something happening here...
It's all of us. What is your kink, perversion, addiction or mental illness? Do you cope with alcohol? Drugs? Sex? Are you addicted to food? Do you gamble? Are you afraid? I can go on! You may know what makes you tick or you might spend your entire life trying to figure it out!
A 17 year old shoots up a school!
The model-type young woman with flawless skin has sex on camera with over a 100 guys online on her onlyfans account.
The married female school...
#anxiety
#fear
#LifeStruggles
107 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 1:05pm
19th Jan 2025 1:05pm
The spirit of the soul
As a writer of spoken words ✍️ we have the ability to manifest thoughts and insight, into the deepness of the imagination of those things that are involved, in creating a different kind of perspective on life and love. For sure we can unlock 🔓 your own thoughts that were once, hidden behind the curtains of your own thoughts, and insight and spiritually awaken your own deepest thoughts, that slowly becomes more than just words. But yet thoughts and feelings of emotionally tasty, bits of consciousness of the truth of a passion fruit 🍓 THAT leaves a taste of...
#courage
#fear
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#strength
74 reads
0 Comments
TheVORTEXRETURNS
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 2:42am
19th Jan 2025 2:42am
“To BE Young Again”
To not let the parables of rhyme
undo my feeble amorist and verse.
To not let the seething weariness of
time and test. Undo the span
of an unending curse.
To not see the cryptic patterns that leapt beneath the morrows.
To not let memories of my fading quest.
Feed my nightmarish sorrows.
To be young again. Oh how this thought makes me cower. For I know of its price and grandiose deals undoubtedly. The tragedies of this feeble wielding deal. A canker upon morality. As the truth would seem so forgotten with finality becoming so unreal.
undo my feeble amorist and verse.
To not let the seething weariness of
time and test. Undo the span
of an unending curse.
To not see the cryptic patterns that leapt beneath the morrows.
To not let memories of my fading quest.
Feed my nightmarish sorrows.
To be young again. Oh how this thought makes me cower. For I know of its price and grandiose deals undoubtedly. The tragedies of this feeble wielding deal. A canker upon morality. As the truth would seem so forgotten with finality becoming so unreal.
#emptiness
#fear
#frustration
#loneliness
#regret
46 reads
0 Comments
brazzoli
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 2:27am
17th Jan 2025 2:27am
Skeletons
A clattering from the closet, as the skeletons rise,
Old wounds now dancing before my eyes.
No more hiding, no more escape,
The past clings closely in sorrow’s drape.
The skeletons once silent now start to speak,
Revealing the secrets they longed to keep.
Whispering truths I dare not speak,
A vow unsaid, a silent prayer—
This endless load is my cross to bear.
With every step, they draw ever so clear,
The truth, like a storm, looms ever so near.
No longer a shadow I can flee,
But a mirror reflecting what I used to be. ...
Old wounds now dancing before my eyes.
No more hiding, no more escape,
The past clings closely in sorrow’s drape.
The skeletons once silent now start to speak,
Revealing the secrets they longed to keep.
Whispering truths I dare not speak,
A vow unsaid, a silent prayer—
This endless load is my cross to bear.
With every step, they draw ever so clear,
The truth, like a storm, looms ever so near.
No longer a shadow I can flee,
But a mirror reflecting what I used to be. ...
#fear
#SelfReflection
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0 Comments
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