Poems About Fear Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about fear seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
buddhakitty
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:13am
Yesterday 9:13am
the needle and the arrow
once I asked,
"WHAT'S THE POINT?
there was no
response...
point taken.
"WHAT'S THE POINT?
there was no
response...
point taken.
#fear
56 reads
1 Comment
Hashman
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 1:38am
6th Mar 2025 1:38am
3 wishes
broken door
busted lip
screams fill the empty spaces
hate fills love
love spills on the floor
i tell you i love you
do you hear me
do you know me
punches thrown
darkness covers light
is it hate or is it love
which one is it
i don't know...
i only wish
it would stop
i only wish
i was dead
i only wish
i wasn't me
busted lip
screams fill the empty spaces
hate fills love
love spills on the floor
i tell you i love you
do you hear me
do you know me
punches thrown
darkness covers light
is it hate or is it love
which one is it
i don't know...
i only wish
it would stop
i only wish
i was dead
i only wish
i wasn't me
#confusion
#dark
#fear
54 reads
2 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 9:44pm
5th Mar 2025 9:44pm
Pop.
Jealously coils like snakes around my head,
whispering and flicking tongues in my ear.
My knees feel weak,
the brittleness of my bones shake with regret.
Fear covers my skin like a cold shower,
the walls feel so close and so far.
my stomach feels full with so much anger,
I sense bitter bile rising.
Saddness is in my throat
I cough it up from the bottom of my lungs.
I push my fingers into my skull,
hoping to pressure it into happiness.
Or to squeeze till I pop,
like an ugly old pimple.
One that's just ready...
whispering and flicking tongues in my ear.
My knees feel weak,
the brittleness of my bones shake with regret.
Fear covers my skin like a cold shower,
the walls feel so close and so far.
my stomach feels full with so much anger,
I sense bitter bile rising.
Saddness is in my throat
I cough it up from the bottom of my lungs.
I push my fingers into my skull,
hoping to pressure it into happiness.
Or to squeeze till I pop,
like an ugly old pimple.
One that's just ready...
#anger
#anxiety
#depression #fear
#depression #fear
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Chere-Rene13
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 11:31am
1st Mar 2025 11:31am
EVENTIDE
Sky intro the STORM not willing to hide...Incoming tide, always pulls the unwanted in...EVENTIDE hues of dusk, not to trust. ENDING day, last of ENDING light of sight. Crawling on the otherside beanth of earth's belly of another kind of hell your shoes fill & fell upon. Paint strokes a crepuscular sky...Twilight maelstrom image...Darken visual depths...Dark holds such a abyss of discovery. Succumbing is the dimension of a sunset, well knowing it's place & time the universe has given the light of warmth. Fangs that punch the piercing swallowed taste of metallic red of blood, reign...
#bittersweet
#dark
#despair
#fear
#regret
49 reads
0 Comments
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 4:40am
27th Feb 2025 4:40am
Even Shadows Are Afraid
It's a Heavenly sunny day
To embark on a forest fray
A path awaits, a hidden trail
The woods aroma I inhale
A chance to set my mind at ease
While searching for inner peace
A rock upon the flowing creek
Feeling nature I hear her speak
Babbling water, calm and serene
Refreshing moments in this dream
Tranquil echoes, the chilling breeze
Softly whistling through fallen leaves ...
To embark on a forest fray
A path awaits, a hidden trail
The woods aroma I inhale
A chance to set my mind at ease
While searching for inner peace
A rock upon the flowing creek
Feeling nature I hear her speak
Babbling water, calm and serene
Refreshing moments in this dream
Tranquil echoes, the chilling breeze
Softly whistling through fallen leaves ...
#anxiety
#confusion
#fear
102 reads
0 Comments
michaelslove2
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 8:20am
25th Feb 2025 8:20am
Impossibility
Impossibility
I have always felt that I were strong.
My heart would be able to dismiss
the warmth once found within your arms.
The deliciousness of your sweet kiss.
I have always felt I do not need this.
I could turn my heart to stone
and that I would always make it
living a life all alone.
But every time you somehow sneak in
and I am with you if in dreams
and being with you life is better
than the way my life now seems.
Still I want to go back where I was
and re-build my wall,
it does not stay,...
I have always felt that I were strong.
My heart would be able to dismiss
the warmth once found within your arms.
The deliciousness of your sweet kiss.
I have always felt I do not need this.
I could turn my heart to stone
and that I would always make it
living a life all alone.
But every time you somehow sneak in
and I am with you if in dreams
and being with you life is better
than the way my life now seems.
Still I want to go back where I was
and re-build my wall,
it does not stay,...
#anxiety
#despair
#fear #love
#fear #love
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inechoingsilence
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 7:02pm
24th Feb 2025 7:02pm
The Beginning of the End
A rave, expression of unity
people dancing under the stars
greeting the sunrise
songs on their lips, dancing feet
Hell flew down from the heavens
singing, screaming, silence
dancing, running, hiding
Slaughter a party
party a massacre
gala of inhuman torture
Lives balanced on single breaths
Souls captured, hidden away
Forever in tunnels to stay
Should the monsters had their way
Surely this was the edge of humanity
no, it was only beginning of insanity
The world turns...
people dancing under the stars
greeting the sunrise
songs on their lips, dancing feet
Hell flew down from the heavens
singing, screaming, silence
dancing, running, hiding
Slaughter a party
party a massacre
gala of inhuman torture
Lives balanced on single breaths
Souls captured, hidden away
Forever in tunnels to stay
Should the monsters had their way
Surely this was the edge of humanity
no, it was only beginning of insanity
The world turns...
#anger
#dark
#fear
61 reads
3 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 1:26pm
24th Feb 2025 1:26pm
Topical Pain Forest
The forest breathes with a sinister sigh.
Branches grasp like hands from the sky.
Lost souls wander, forever to vie,
for fragments of truths in shadows that lie.
In hell's embrace where hopes slowly die.
Through the underbrush a path of pain,
tears of the damned fall like bitter rain,
visions of pasts that darkened remain.
Lost meanings echo in a mournful refrain,
a symphony of sorrow, eternal disdain.
In the heart of darkness an abyss profound
where lost meanings whisper without a sound.
Sins and regrets in...
Branches grasp like hands from the sky.
Lost souls wander, forever to vie,
for fragments of truths in shadows that lie.
In hell's embrace where hopes slowly die.
Through the underbrush a path of pain,
tears of the damned fall like bitter rain,
visions of pasts that darkened remain.
Lost meanings echo in a mournful refrain,
a symphony of sorrow, eternal disdain.
In the heart of darkness an abyss profound
where lost meanings whisper without a sound.
Sins and regrets in...
#anxiety
#apathy
#boredom
#depression
#fear
85 reads
4 Comments
Artavious25
Taypen99
Taypen99
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 4:42pm
18th Feb 2025 4:42pm
Between These Lines
Let my tears fall between these lines
Because I feel too empty to let them fall down my face
Confidence I had to front cause I never had it
Writing is therapeutic so I used that to cope
I contemplate if happiness can save my soul
Trying to wiggle through this maze to find my worth as a man
My mind backpedaling to the demons I can’t seem to exercise
Middle of the night I wake up to my own cries
I keep running away from my insecurities but they keep catching up to me.
Because I feel too empty to let them fall down my face
Confidence I had to front cause I never had it
Writing is therapeutic so I used that to cope
I contemplate if happiness can save my soul
Trying to wiggle through this maze to find my worth as a man
My mind backpedaling to the demons I can’t seem to exercise
Middle of the night I wake up to my own cries
I keep running away from my insecurities but they keep catching up to me.
#dark
#emptiness
#fear
#sadness
#shame
55 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 1:26pm
18th Feb 2025 1:26pm
I'm not you
I'm not you and you are not me 😞 to tell me that what, I got going on in my own body and mind and spiritual soul, is not what I have been dealing with for awhile now ain't cancer. FOR sure you don't have to take my words of what I say is the truth. For sure who are you to judge someone who's whole life, has been turned up side down having to deal with cancer. For like I've said I'm not you and you are not me, fighting for my life s second time in my own life time. 🙏 Yet you insist that you know me when you really don't bother to do your own research, for sure I don't have no...
#anger
#fear
#frustration
#grief
#sadness
63 reads
6 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 1:56pm
16th Feb 2025 1:56pm
Father will be there
Father will be there
To heal me from my sickness
Any time today
Father will be there
And put me to sleep
This night
I need that badly
Father will be there
To pray together with me
Before I go to sleep
We will pray for the countries that
Are in war
Also, we are going to pray
For us both
Father, you know me well
You can always trust me
I will never let you down
Because you hate
To be let down
Father, I will treat you respect
Also, I don't make promises
To you that I can't keep
I am...
To heal me from my sickness
Any time today
Father will be there
And put me to sleep
This night
I need that badly
Father will be there
To pray together with me
Before I go to sleep
We will pray for the countries that
Are in war
Also, we are going to pray
For us both
Father, you know me well
You can always trust me
I will never let you down
Because you hate
To be let down
Father, I will treat you respect
Also, I don't make promises
To you that I can't keep
I am...
#bittersweet
#fear
#jealousy
#sadness
#shame
49 reads
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 6:08am
14th Feb 2025 6:08am
The Flayed Hand Cometh
Winds sigh low
Whispers slither in the dust
Fires wane, embers choke
The flayed hand cometh
Sky turns grey
Sun bleeds thin behind the veil
Roots twist, drinking deep
The flayed hand cometh
Ash coats the tongue
Water blackens in the wells
Statues weep from hollow eyes
The flayed hand cometh
Walls split wide
Stone and bone collapse alike
Screams dissolve into the void
The flayed hand cometh
Veins run dry
Flesh peels back in offering
A name unspoken stirs awake
The flayed hand...
Whispers slither in the dust
Fires wane, embers choke
The flayed hand cometh
Sky turns grey
Sun bleeds thin behind the veil
Roots twist, drinking deep
The flayed hand cometh
Ash coats the tongue
Water blackens in the wells
Statues weep from hollow eyes
The flayed hand cometh
Walls split wide
Stone and bone collapse alike
Screams dissolve into the void
The flayed hand cometh
Veins run dry
Flesh peels back in offering
A name unspoken stirs awake
The flayed hand...
#dark
#despair
#fear
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