Poems About Faith Seeking Honest Critique
#faith
King_Seraphiel
Joshua Jamal
Joshua Jamal
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 4:31pm
23rd Jan 2025 4:31pm
I'm an African American
I'm an African American/
I'm an African American that had a dream/ that I can/ overcome/ the war that has begun from the outside and from within/ being oppressed, ridiculed and rejected/ due to the color of skin/ the only thing that has changed/ is that I'm no longer in visable chains/ and people smile and call me "friend"/however the notion of never being equal will never end/
I'm an African American
I am different in body shape and stature/ even though I'm a victim of being bullied and put on a podium for laughter/ its my culture and body shape that those same...
I'm an African American that had a dream/ that I can/ overcome/ the war that has begun from the outside and from within/ being oppressed, ridiculed and rejected/ due to the color of skin/ the only thing that has changed/ is that I'm no longer in visable chains/ and people smile and call me "friend"/however the notion of never being equal will never end/
I'm an African American
I am different in body shape and stature/ even though I'm a victim of being bullied and put on a podium for laughter/ its my culture and body shape that those same...
#faith
#morality
#spiritual
78 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 12:49pm
23rd Jan 2025 12:49pm
When we are shifting energy
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ what do you believe within your own thoughts and insight and imagination. For do you wish to make your life better than it's ever been, for do you have the ability and power to eliminate the negativity, and replace it with positivity. For sure we all have the ability to manifest that which we pray for in our lives and dreams. For do you believe in your dreams with a want and need, to sustain your own wishes for do you have the perseverance, to meet the challenges that will elevate you to your true spiritual potential. For do you...
#faith
#fate
#rebirth
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
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ChaosScripted
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 3:02am
21st Jan 2025 3:02am
Prophetic Vision: 2:20 am, January 21, 2024
This is the vision that came to me from the Lord, my Father Above:
Eyes like nebulas, bright and aflame looking back at me amid a mist of darkness and white bright light beyond. All at once I’m taken up high. Looking down upon what appeared as a misshapen and segmented boulder. I look closer and it’s two swollen sections resembling two basins. At the top separating the two basins is a bright burning eye resembling the nebulae that was looking at me just a moment ago. Directly above the fiery eye is what appears to be a broken stick dotted with a stone or jewel of bright yellow. The left...
Eyes like nebulas, bright and aflame looking back at me amid a mist of darkness and white bright light beyond. All at once I’m taken up high. Looking down upon what appeared as a misshapen and segmented boulder. I look closer and it’s two swollen sections resembling two basins. At the top separating the two basins is a bright burning eye resembling the nebulae that was looking at me just a moment ago. Directly above the fiery eye is what appears to be a broken stick dotted with a stone or jewel of bright yellow. The left...
#faith
#rebirth
#sacrifice
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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OccultCatalyst
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 1:13am
21st Jan 2025 1:13am
Even Fire Is In Jest
From the depths of shadow,
I rise, unchained,
A tempest burning in veins,
An echo of stars undone.
Lust and longing,
Ashes and flame,
A symphony of chaos,
Screaming my name.
I am the void,
I am the spark,
In the stillness of the abyss,
I ignite the dark.
But here I’m still burning, alive, on the inside,
So I bathe myself in the murk, in the rot,
The plague come forth like a wave recessing the tide,
Infecting my mind like a virus invoking this blasphemous blood clot.
A shadow of a memory; a fading...
I rise, unchained,
A tempest burning in veins,
An echo of stars undone.
Lust and longing,
Ashes and flame,
A symphony of chaos,
Screaming my name.
I am the void,
I am the spark,
In the stillness of the abyss,
I ignite the dark.
But here I’m still burning, alive, on the inside,
So I bathe myself in the murk, in the rot,
The plague come forth like a wave recessing the tide,
Infecting my mind like a virus invoking this blasphemous blood clot.
A shadow of a memory; a fading...
#faith
#lies
#sacrifice
#silence
#suffering
80 reads
4 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 3:35pm
19th Jan 2025 3:35pm
Indelible Lines
Oh, how much i long
For the vintage sound of the olden music
The plaintive violin, under the gentle caress
A stroke of a piano-keys, by slender fingers
Of which the joy is not the less..
Oh, what a craving i do have !!!
Golden fields sway like sea-waves
The waltzing dance of the Summer wheat
Ripened under May's heat
The cheerful grasshoppers' sizzling shriek..
With hot chirping, skipping
Wheezing, such a cosy bossom
Where throbbing sentiments live
...
For the vintage sound of the olden music
The plaintive violin, under the gentle caress
A stroke of a piano-keys, by slender fingers
Of which the joy is not the less..
Oh, what a craving i do have !!!
Golden fields sway like sea-waves
The waltzing dance of the Summer wheat
Ripened under May's heat
The cheerful grasshoppers' sizzling shriek..
With hot chirping, skipping
Wheezing, such a cosy bossom
Where throbbing sentiments live
...
#faith
#morality
#philosophical
#rebirth
#spiritual
88 reads
6 Comments
Cyndi_Moone
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 8:09pm
15th Jan 2025 8:09pm
FOREVER WITH YOU
CHORUS:
Wherever you be, I’ll be
Wherever you go, I’ll go
Wherever you stay, I’ll stay
I’m forever with You
Wherever you move, I’ll move
Wherever you stop, I’ll stop
Wherever you yield, I’ll yield
// I’m forever with You //
Inside of my heart
Inside of my mind
Inside of my soul
// I’m forever with You //
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When You hide Yourself into the night
And I’ve lost all sight
All sight of You
I lift my praise
And there – again – I see Your face
Dwelling there – in my praise
Inside of my...
Wherever you be, I’ll be
Wherever you go, I’ll go
Wherever you stay, I’ll stay
I’m forever with You
Wherever you move, I’ll move
Wherever you stop, I’ll stop
Wherever you yield, I’ll yield
// I’m forever with You //
Inside of my heart
Inside of my mind
Inside of my soul
// I’m forever with You //
1
When You hide Yourself into the night
And I’ve lost all sight
All sight of You
I lift my praise
And there – again – I see Your face
Dwelling there – in my praise
Inside of my...
#faith
#religion
5 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 11:50am
14th Jan 2025 11:50am
Fellah, a Man of Earth, a Man or Worth
Je t'admire, toi le Fellah dans les vastes champs
Dans le brouillard et le matin, dans le cruel froid
Je t'admire, car tu es le seul unique survivant
Et,quand périssons nous , la terre te reviendra
Je t'admire amplement quand tu dors peu de temps
Sachant que le sommeil est un esprit fainéant
Croyant que si tu laisses les beaux rêves t'emporter
La graine dans le sol ne donnera jamais ses fruits..
Tu as les champs, les jardins, tu as toute la terre
Et moi j'ai le paysage, les saisons et les fleurs ...
Dans le brouillard et le matin, dans le cruel froid
Je t'admire, car tu es le seul unique survivant
Et,quand périssons nous , la terre te reviendra
Je t'admire amplement quand tu dors peu de temps
Sachant que le sommeil est un esprit fainéant
Croyant que si tu laisses les beaux rêves t'emporter
La graine dans le sol ne donnera jamais ses fruits..
Tu as les champs, les jardins, tu as toute la terre
Et moi j'ai le paysage, les saisons et les fleurs ...
#faith
#morality
#philosophical
#sacrifice
#spiritual
73 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 12:51pm
10th Jan 2025 12:51pm
Echos from the past
Through this life, we all will meet someone who seems to have a good heart and spiritual aura, about themselves that will draw them into your life and world. 🌎 THAT will affect you in ways that we may never truly understand. 🤔 YET that is what makes you feel that you know them, 🤨 but do you really know them as you think you do. BUT yet you have a connection that touches your thoughts and insight and heart, ❤️ to let your guard down and to see where it takes you whether near or far away from the negativity, that makes no sense at all till we begin to...
#faith
#fate
#philosophical
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
60 reads
0 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 7:33pm
8th Jan 2025 7:33pm
Praises
I wandered wastes of ash and stone
Where winds would gnaw and sing its tone
No mortal tongue could still my plight
Only whispers of deceit in the night
Yet in the black of heavens torn
I found wisdom carved in relics worn
Bones of saints, their silent cries
Echoed truths where hope yet dies
The lamb’s triumph was blood-etched lore
A feast where shadows weep and adore
Salvation writ in iron chains
In hymns of fire and eternal pains
Within the cloisters of the dead
Where incense cloaks what once was dread ...
Where winds would gnaw and sing its tone
No mortal tongue could still my plight
Only whispers of deceit in the night
Yet in the black of heavens torn
I found wisdom carved in relics worn
Bones of saints, their silent cries
Echoed truths where hope yet dies
The lamb’s triumph was blood-etched lore
A feast where shadows weep and adore
Salvation writ in iron chains
In hymns of fire and eternal pains
Within the cloisters of the dead
Where incense cloaks what once was dread ...
#dark
#faith
#prayer
#religion
#spiritual
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PAR
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 11:51am
8th Jan 2025 11:51am
Bears
In the dense forests, bears roam curiously,
their heavy paws tread softly.
Ancient survival rituals.
Marked trees, scratched bark, sustenance.
They move with grace despite their size.
Instincts honed over millennia.
Mothers protecting their young, teaching them to fish,
climbing, seeking shelter.
But the world is changing,
the forests are becoming thinner,
the ice is melting,
the seasons are changing,
their habitats are shrinking,
food sources are dwindling,
invisible borders are approaching, ...
their heavy paws tread softly.
Ancient survival rituals.
Marked trees, scratched bark, sustenance.
They move with grace despite their size.
Instincts honed over millennia.
Mothers protecting their young, teaching them to fish,
climbing, seeking shelter.
But the world is changing,
the forests are becoming thinner,
the ice is melting,
the seasons are changing,
their habitats are shrinking,
food sources are dwindling,
invisible borders are approaching, ...
#animals
#culture
#faith
#nature
#spiritual
65 reads
9 Comments
dnzmemn66
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 2:20pm
7th Jan 2025 2:20pm
Tears
My tears are cleansing
My tears are true
I cry these tears with thoughts of you
You save my soul
You keep me whole
For the battles I face take their toll
But I won’t waiver
And I won’t fall
For I have you
So I stand tall
My strength is building
My resolve is firm
I read the book
So I can learn
The day will come
When my time is done
But I shall not worry
For the war is won
My tears are true
I cry these tears with thoughts of you
You save my soul
You keep me whole
For the battles I face take their toll
But I won’t waiver
And I won’t fall
For I have you
So I stand tall
My strength is building
My resolve is firm
I read the book
So I can learn
The day will come
When my time is done
But I shall not worry
For the war is won
#Christian
#faith
#religion
73 reads
0 Comments
oraclesight
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 5:00am
7th Jan 2025 5:00am
Jon's Prayer (edited)
#faith
#prayer
36 reads
1 Comment
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