Poems About Faith Seeking Honest Critique
#faith
Sapphirewolf
Poem Published
3rd May 2023 4:11am
3rd May 2023 4:11am
Prayer Is My Weapon
Demons of the future....
Demons of the past....
With my God's help....
You'll never last....
My mind a cage....
My mind corrupt....
My mind a home....
My mind erupt....
A child of God....
With a soul from Heaven....
A soldiers mind....
I've been forged a weapon....
No sword of fire....
No stone in a sling....
But from my lips....
One thing I sing....
PRAYER....
A mighty weapon....
A Gift from God....
Sent down from Heaven....
Submit to him....
All who still...
Demons of the past....
With my God's help....
You'll never last....
My mind a cage....
My mind corrupt....
My mind a home....
My mind erupt....
A child of God....
With a soul from Heaven....
A soldiers mind....
I've been forged a weapon....
No sword of fire....
No stone in a sling....
But from my lips....
One thing I sing....
PRAYER....
A mighty weapon....
A Gift from God....
Sent down from Heaven....
Submit to him....
All who still...
#religion
#faith
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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schizostalker
Poem Published
2nd May 2023 9:58pm
2nd May 2023 9:58pm
Competition
In life competition teaches people you win or lose.
Sometimes even in life you don't get to choose.
However, in a relationship that shouldn't be the case.
If they make you feel second choice you need more then space.
If your always feeling like last place in their life.
Maybe what you need to rethink your husband or wife.
You should always fell like their first option.
Other then your children might be the only exception.
No point in giving your life totally.
For a person to reciprocate hopefully.
No point in living for someone at all. ...
Sometimes even in life you don't get to choose.
However, in a relationship that shouldn't be the case.
If they make you feel second choice you need more then space.
If your always feeling like last place in their life.
Maybe what you need to rethink your husband or wife.
You should always fell like their first option.
Other then your children might be the only exception.
No point in giving your life totally.
For a person to reciprocate hopefully.
No point in living for someone at all. ...
#secrets
#faith
#misunderstood
#emptiness
#FeelingTrapped
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Bonbonshaiser
Poem Published
28th Apr 2023 3:01am
28th Apr 2023 3:01am
Praise Him
Everyday's a new confrontation
A pandemic of this crazy generation
Sensitive souls in red and black
Dancing with devils
Where there's no take backs
Yeah no refunds
That diamond is really a demon
Listen to the wind
When it says he is risen
Lamentation leads to transformation
A glorious sensation
Sunshine and rain
Praise the one
Whose perfection remains
A pandemic of this crazy generation
Sensitive souls in red and black
Dancing with devils
Where there's no take backs
Yeah no refunds
That diamond is really a demon
Listen to the wind
When it says he is risen
Lamentation leads to transformation
A glorious sensation
Sunshine and rain
Praise the one
Whose perfection remains
#Christian
#faith
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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Skelly
Poem Published
24th Apr 2023 12:38pm
24th Apr 2023 12:38pm
Spirits Surround
spirits surround
resonating
kindreds found
permeating
all around
gravitating
into my own
invigorating
warm unknown
serenading
never alone
spirits surround
all around
unbound
resonating
kindreds found
permeating
all around
gravitating
into my own
invigorating
warm unknown
serenading
never alone
spirits surround
all around
unbound
#love
#angels
#faith
#spiritual
#ghosts
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cabcool
Poem Published
16th Apr 2023 4:10am
16th Apr 2023 4:10am
inks on fire: cosmos 00
the amazing universe in which we live
glorious, amazing God
unmeasured by time
by nature sublime
in Your splendour men have trod
Your unfathomable love
rules over the light
and deep in the night
spreads beneath, within, above
piteously and frail as dust
before You we bow
yet knowing not how
to adore You as we must
perfect is Your Holy Law
converting the soul
where evil control
would from us all life withdraw
© Copyright 2023 April 09
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
glorious, amazing God
unmeasured by time
by nature sublime
in Your splendour men have trod
Your unfathomable love
rules over the light
and deep in the night
spreads beneath, within, above
piteously and frail as dust
before You we bow
yet knowing not how
to adore You as we must
perfect is Your Holy Law
converting the soul
where evil control
would from us all life withdraw
© Copyright 2023 April 09
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
#universe
#God
#faith #NaPoWriMo2023
#faith #NaPoWriMo2023
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Joseph-Zenieh
Poem Published
10th Apr 2023 10:11pm
10th Apr 2023 10:11pm
WHAT'S THE SECRET OF THE CHANGE?
WHAT'S THE SECRET OF THE CHANGE?
The apostles were afraid
and escaped from place to place.
After resurrection, they
did not care about their death.
What could make them bold and willed
to defy abuse and pain,
with no wish to shun an end
passed through boiling oil or worse?
They beheld in Christ the might
that could make their world so cheap
when compared with what He'd done
that submerged their hearts with bliss.
Kinds of bliss equal to joy,
seen in heaven,...
The apostles were afraid
and escaped from place to place.
After resurrection, they
did not care about their death.
What could make them bold and willed
to defy abuse and pain,
with no wish to shun an end
passed through boiling oil or worse?
They beheld in Christ the might
that could make their world so cheap
when compared with what He'd done
that submerged their hearts with bliss.
Kinds of bliss equal to joy,
seen in heaven,...
#faith
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ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
10th Apr 2023 7:31am
10th Apr 2023 7:31am
Rumors of War
Ease into the latest scare that trends
Until routine outlives imagination
When conspiracy turns to whisper and prophecies of wolves get lost in the cries
I guess nothing turns out to be true when there is no threat of truth for lies
Can anything prepare us for it when the world as we know it dies?
Discredited for the foolish things
What if the source that you dismiss is what will confound the wise?
When unofficial platforms become the megaphones we utilize
Many false amid the true will arise
As reality becomes artificial for the...
Until routine outlives imagination
When conspiracy turns to whisper and prophecies of wolves get lost in the cries
I guess nothing turns out to be true when there is no threat of truth for lies
Can anything prepare us for it when the world as we know it dies?
Discredited for the foolish things
What if the source that you dismiss is what will confound the wise?
When unofficial platforms become the megaphones we utilize
Many false amid the true will arise
As reality becomes artificial for the...
#corruption
#politics
#faith
#fear
#NaPoWriMo2023
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Joseph-Zenieh
Poem Published
9th Apr 2023 8:44pm
9th Apr 2023 8:44pm
RESURRECTION, THE UNIQUE ACT
RESURRECTION, THE UNIQUE ACT
I'm so glad You stayed so short
in the grave, then came back soon,
filled our hearts with greatest mirth
with a deed just you can do.
None could think you would return
to reveal rebirth above,
giving man the greatest hope
that could prove You are the Son.
Man was thrilled when you arrived
and so pleased for his own life.
Then, we live on earth to start
happy life with God once more.
Cheer up, man, you come to earth
not to grieve and live in fear.
Death has no...
I'm so glad You stayed so short
in the grave, then came back soon,
filled our hearts with greatest mirth
with a deed just you can do.
None could think you would return
to reveal rebirth above,
giving man the greatest hope
that could prove You are the Son.
Man was thrilled when you arrived
and so pleased for his own life.
Then, we live on earth to start
happy life with God once more.
Cheer up, man, you come to earth
not to grieve and live in fear.
Death has no...
#faith
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ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
9th Apr 2023 4:45pm
9th Apr 2023 4:45pm
Nerve Damage
Heavy hearted I wake up
Facing the reality of who I’ve been
Resigning the hopes of future promise on the premise of a past tense sin
What is honesty and what is truth
When habits haunt me with tendencies of prone relapse
Running well in moments before I digress to the point that I collapse
Heart attacks of confidence cannibalized by the weight of an underlying shame
I’m not sure I know myself today but just for some semblance of name
Turn the page and speak grace once more
Tell me I can still anticipate all heaven has in store ...
Facing the reality of who I’ve been
Resigning the hopes of future promise on the premise of a past tense sin
What is honesty and what is truth
When habits haunt me with tendencies of prone relapse
Running well in moments before I digress to the point that I collapse
Heart attacks of confidence cannibalized by the weight of an underlying shame
I’m not sure I know myself today but just for some semblance of name
Turn the page and speak grace once more
Tell me I can still anticipate all heaven has in store ...
#Easter
#God
#Christian
#faith
#NaPoWriMo2023
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ZINZIN
FARTING
FARTING
Poem Published
5th Apr 2023 2:18pm
5th Apr 2023 2:18pm
From Mouth To Ear
-Poetry is the most healthy human Art, so do not affect it with Erotic Cancer..
-There are parts of speech, as there are parts of body,
put your body parts in their right place.
-If you do not face your fears, your foes, you will never be healthy,
besides, you will be haunted by morbid illusions..
-Try be good and perfect, others' mistakes spare you the attempts you will endure
.-Do not put yoursel in the mouth of the gun, and don't be the target,
nor be the shooter, either, you'd better...
-There are parts of speech, as there are parts of body,
put your body parts in their right place.
-If you do not face your fears, your foes, you will never be healthy,
besides, you will be haunted by morbid illusions..
-Try be good and perfect, others' mistakes spare you the attempts you will endure
.-Do not put yoursel in the mouth of the gun, and don't be the target,
nor be the shooter, either, you'd better...
#astrology
#faith
#fate
#redemption
#karma
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silent_lotus
Poem Published
5th Apr 2023 1:57pm
5th Apr 2023 1:57pm
whatever
#happiness
#faith
#TruthOfLife
#LifeChangingMoment
#SelfDiscovery
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ZINZIN
FARTING
FARTING
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2023 11:33pm
2nd Apr 2023 11:33pm
Today's Tears,Tomorow's Flowers
Aprils showers bring May flowers
Looking forward to brighter hours
🦋🌻🌻🌻🦋
Morning rise, i woke up on sparrow cheers
The gloomy sky , and the winds howling
But the cheerful chirping of the nimble bird
Has chased away the future fears
That i know despite April showers
Flowers will surely come after tears
And today's doubtful hours
Spring joys shall be growing near
I always have faith in Nature
As she knows no betrayal, nor cheats
If she cries today...
Looking forward to brighter hours
🦋🌻🌻🌻🦋
Morning rise, i woke up on sparrow cheers
The gloomy sky , and the winds howling
But the cheerful chirping of the nimble bird
Has chased away the future fears
That i know despite April showers
Flowers will surely come after tears
And today's doubtful hours
Spring joys shall be growing near
I always have faith in Nature
As she knows no betrayal, nor cheats
If she cries today...
#faith
#rebirth
#spiritual
#philosophical
#karma
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