Poems About Faith Seeking Honest Critique
#faith
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:28am
Yesterday 3:28am
And So Hell Trembled With His Step
Semper Sanctus
Head bowed in contemplation
The weight of eternity pressing against my brow
Upon the parchment of the world
The liturgy of man is writ in sigil and blood
A scripture of ascent, a hymn of fire
His Glory—
A gesture of silence
A truth beyond breath, beyond name
The Alpha and Omega inscribed in unseen ink
A covenant sealed in the marrow of existence
Salvation is found in flame
In the tongues of fire that danced above the apostles
In the incense rising like the prayers of the saint ...
Head bowed in contemplation
The weight of eternity pressing against my brow
Upon the parchment of the world
The liturgy of man is writ in sigil and blood
A scripture of ascent, a hymn of fire
His Glory—
A gesture of silence
A truth beyond breath, beyond name
The Alpha and Omega inscribed in unseen ink
A covenant sealed in the marrow of existence
Salvation is found in flame
In the tongues of fire that danced above the apostles
In the incense rising like the prayers of the saint ...
#Christian
#death
#faith #God
#faith #God
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Duice
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 7:56am
5th Feb 2025 7:56am
Redemption (Part 5)
Excruciating pain is obsession to a valiant soldier
that’ll arm wrestle the epitome of Death to that
Fighting for infinity wraith on the other dark side
of time and space in stone grip to get back
Black Panther speaking open heart surgery
to parade of Ancestors razor claws drawn
I do it for Wakanda across the chest
til life RIPs respawn or blood gone
Silver fox too cunning to be meat
in afterlife a simp or devoured
When I die it’ll be sacrificial in stance extinguished
Glorious Lamb to awaken bright side empowered
A crashing snap...
that’ll arm wrestle the epitome of Death to that
Fighting for infinity wraith on the other dark side
of time and space in stone grip to get back
Black Panther speaking open heart surgery
to parade of Ancestors razor claws drawn
I do it for Wakanda across the chest
til life RIPs respawn or blood gone
Silver fox too cunning to be meat
in afterlife a simp or devoured
When I die it’ll be sacrificial in stance extinguished
Glorious Lamb to awaken bright side empowered
A crashing snap...
#faith
#fate
#redemption
#sacrifice
#spiritual
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 00:38am
5th Feb 2025 00:38am
Gate of serenity
Come and become relaxed in vibes that will affect the very, foundation of your true spiritual existence. For let's take a silent walk through, the forest of the trees of life. For don't be afraid of learning what is necessary to learn, about thyself as we go deeper than deep into the deepness of your own mind and heart. Yet as you go through the process of just eliminate what we don't want and need, you replaced it with positivity as that is what you want and need to feel, the deepness of the affect that this place has upon you. For just stop and look and listen, not to your heart but listen...
#emotional
#faith
#spiritual
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 4:02am
4th Feb 2025 4:02am
Speaking my mind for the first time
I’m beginning to be so over it
That is the truth
This is how I feel after all you do
Being left on read is comical
Now you’ve just left my heart sore
So I must be a bore
Because you refuse to talk to me anymore
That is the truth
This is how I feel after all you do
Being left on read is comical
Now you’ve just left my heart sore
So I must be a bore
Because you refuse to talk to me anymore
#faith
#heartbroken
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 3:51pm
2nd Feb 2025 3:51pm
What your going through
I am here for you no matter what you are going through in your life, for I give to my most strongest soldiers no more than they can stand. FOR sure no matter how dark it gets, I am there to shine the heavenly Halo's, above your head just reaching into your heart and spiritual, subconsciousness of your own mind. For sure life wasn't meant to be easy, for there will be hard times and good times in the cross roads of what is life. THAT we all will have to journey and travel and walk, through this vortex of life. 🙏 Yet have no fear because I will always be there, for you to guide you and...
#faith
#spiritual
#StreamOfConsciousness
#strength
#TruthOfLife
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Chere-Rene13
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 6:39am
31st Jan 2025 6:39am
Entitlement Egos
A young child cries before he can even open his eyes. Before his teens demanding his entitlement allowance. Curds of way, to foul to say. A shouting tense, prince making demands to young to understand what it is to be "The King". For like sour, spoiled milk...The crowds felted the somersault roll of a stomach that a mouth of watering will upchuck & boar on to the royal floors. For a spoiled child is a rotten apple for sure. Entitlement of adulthood leads his way...Without lifting a finger or dirtying a nail. To expecting the bail of money to hail...While the poor are knowing to...
#curse
#faith
#karma
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Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 1:46am
29th Jan 2025 1:46am
Watch and see
I'll end the war in Ukraine
within the first 24 hours
if elected president
Trump said
Day 21:
Russian troops push
toward Pokrovsk
as we speak
Trump remains silent
far too busy raging war
on our democracy
to maintain control:
commuting his militia
—J6 insurrectionists—
who'll beat police officers
and the national guard,
replacing qualified personnel
with predators and drunks
he deems loyalists,
cancelling health research
education...
within the first 24 hours
if elected president
Trump said
Day 21:
Russian troops push
toward Pokrovsk
as we speak
Trump remains silent
far too busy raging war
on our democracy
to maintain control:
commuting his militia
—J6 insurrectionists—
who'll beat police officers
and the national guard,
replacing qualified personnel
with predators and drunks
he deems loyalists,
cancelling health research
education...
#CallToAction
#faith
#politics #rebellion
#politics #rebellion
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29 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 3:13am
28th Jan 2025 3:13am
Precious Stone
Have you ever had a sacred moment in your life, that changes even your thoughts of your own personal thoughts. THAT are involved in creating your most important moment of your own life. For sure have you ever had someone, who came into your life and world. 🌎 THAT seems to become more than what you never thought, that you would be involved with someone who has the ability, to understand what they want and need not what they don't need or want, in there life and love and happiness and dreams. For sure we've had bad yet we had good as well, with some relationships, for sure they say that...
#angels
#faith
#fate
#StreamOfConsciousness
#TruthOfLife
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 2:47am
24th Jan 2025 2:47am
The awakening of the soul
What is your spiritual awakening of the truth of your own thoughts, and insight and spiritually subconsciousness of your, own soul vibes of your energy. For sure through this cycle of life there will be a moment in your life, that you will have to step back and reflect upon the trails and tribulations, you had to face in yourself in body and spiritual soul. For even now as you are going through a situation, that isn't for you nor is it made for you, as they say that no one is sent to you by chance or accident. But yet there is someone who was sent to you. For it's in you to be able to do that...
#faith
#philosophical
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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King_Seraphiel
Joshua Jamal
Joshua Jamal
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 4:31pm
23rd Jan 2025 4:31pm
I'm an African American
I'm an African American/
I'm an African American that had a dream/ that I can/ overcome/ the war that has begun from the outside and from within/ being oppressed, ridiculed and rejected/ due to the color of skin/ the only thing that has changed/ is that I'm no longer in visable chains/ and people smile and call me "friend"/however the notion of never being equal will never end/
I'm an African American
I am different in body shape and stature/ even though I'm a victim of being bullied and put on a podium for laughter/ its my culture and body shape that those same...
I'm an African American that had a dream/ that I can/ overcome/ the war that has begun from the outside and from within/ being oppressed, ridiculed and rejected/ due to the color of skin/ the only thing that has changed/ is that I'm no longer in visable chains/ and people smile and call me "friend"/however the notion of never being equal will never end/
I'm an African American
I am different in body shape and stature/ even though I'm a victim of being bullied and put on a podium for laughter/ its my culture and body shape that those same...
#faith
#morality
#spiritual
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 12:49pm
23rd Jan 2025 12:49pm
When we are shifting energy
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ what do you believe within your own thoughts and insight and imagination. For do you wish to make your life better than it's ever been, for do you have the ability and power to eliminate the negativity, and replace it with positivity. For sure we all have the ability to manifest that which we pray for in our lives and dreams. For do you believe in your dreams with a want and need, to sustain your own wishes for do you have the perseverance, to meet the challenges that will elevate you to your true spiritual potential. For do you...
#faith
#fate
#rebirth
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
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ChaosScripted
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 3:02am
21st Jan 2025 3:02am
Prophetic Vision: 2:20 am, January 21, 2024
This is the vision that came to me from the Lord, my Father Above:
Eyes like nebulas, bright and aflame looking back at me amid a mist of darkness and white bright light beyond. All at once I’m taken up high. Looking down upon what appeared as a misshapen and segmented boulder. I look closer and it’s two swollen sections resembling two basins. At the top separating the two basins is a bright burning eye resembling the nebulae that was looking at me just a moment ago. Directly above the fiery eye is what appears to be a broken stick dotted with a stone or jewel of bright yellow. The left...
Eyes like nebulas, bright and aflame looking back at me amid a mist of darkness and white bright light beyond. All at once I’m taken up high. Looking down upon what appeared as a misshapen and segmented boulder. I look closer and it’s two swollen sections resembling two basins. At the top separating the two basins is a bright burning eye resembling the nebulae that was looking at me just a moment ago. Directly above the fiery eye is what appears to be a broken stick dotted with a stone or jewel of bright yellow. The left...
#faith
#rebirth
#sacrifice
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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