Poems About Evolution Seeking Honest Critique
#evolution
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Sep 2024 00:05am
5th Sep 2024 00:05am
FREQUENCY OF HEALING
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ I want to take a deep break, moment of your time, ⌚ to dig deeper than deep, into the deepness of your own thoughts. Have you ever felt like that the world is fighting against you, and you can't understand for the life of you WHY. When you lose your own chain of thoughts and insight, into this senseless mindless game trap fighting between the walls of steel and stones. Do you know what it is to possess knowledge and wisdom, do you know your power of your own frequency of healing 🤔 For when you are going through some...
#evolution
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#universe
113 reads
14 Comments
Nodrax_tepes
nodrax
nodrax
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2024 1:32am
3rd Sep 2024 1:32am
Still-steel well
One a day in the past I was a well of fresh water
Once a days in the past I was vastness of life flowing gentle sweet strife
My walls ran deep tapping to the bottoms of the earth touching the living WATERS
The WATERS that came from me gave forth life to those who drank and they could live FOREVER
FOREVER did i yearn to birth and nourish life that was my ENDEAVOR
My walls clean to the bottom holding together what made you be,
I quenched the thirst of many yet when they drank they did not put thought or care to my walls
When I killed their thirsts they...
Once a days in the past I was vastness of life flowing gentle sweet strife
My walls ran deep tapping to the bottoms of the earth touching the living WATERS
The WATERS that came from me gave forth life to those who drank and they could live FOREVER
FOREVER did i yearn to birth and nourish life that was my ENDEAVOR
My walls clean to the bottom holding together what made you be,
I quenched the thirst of many yet when they drank they did not put thought or care to my walls
When I killed their thirsts they...
#death
#disappointment
#evolution
#regret
#water
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Aug 2024 3:58am
27th Aug 2024 3:58am
HOW FAR YOU WILLING TO GO
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ FOR I would like to take this time to be able, to share your thoughts on your imagination, and the flow of your deepness of your mind thoughts. For sure there will be more to see if you did really decide to take this chance at manifesting. Your mind own thoughts and insight and just imagine, that you are far away from the negativity and drama and chaos and insanity.
THAT seems to wrap you up with a code of not thinking for thyself. Now just imagine that you are on a planet, that only you were the only one that existed, far away in a...
THAT seems to wrap you up with a code of not thinking for thyself. Now just imagine that you are on a planet, that only you were the only one that existed, far away in a...
#earth
#evolution
#shadows
#StreamOfConsciousness
#universe
112 reads
4 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
17th Aug 2024 3:50am
17th Aug 2024 3:50am
TRAVEL BORN INSIGHTS AND PERCEPTIONS (4-28-1989; San Blas, Nayarit, Mexico.)
through migrained aura lines
some ancient huichol spirit dream
dances for me
throughout this foreign
yet still somehow
familiar land
throughout this vast
pacific s sparkling sea
spread out far and wide
before me here
as far as my eyes can see
across these ever changing
tropic skies above
fluidly unfolding everywhere
both above and beyond me
overlapping this beautiful
coastal jungle garden path
which leads and winds it s way
down to the nearest beach below
where i now stand gazing out
in...
some ancient huichol spirit dream
dances for me
throughout this foreign
yet still somehow
familiar land
throughout this vast
pacific s sparkling sea
spread out far and wide
before me here
as far as my eyes can see
across these ever changing
tropic skies above
fluidly unfolding everywhere
both above and beyond me
overlapping this beautiful
coastal jungle garden path
which leads and winds it s way
down to the nearest beach below
where i now stand gazing out
in...
#apathy
#evolution
#healing
#memories
#SelfReflection
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0 Comments
xthan
Poem Published
16th Aug 2024 11:52am
16th Aug 2024 11:52am
What if wonderland
was the underbelly
of the world alice
thought they knew
the rabbit hole
being the spine
they fell through,
alice watches
a pocketwatch
ticking inside
their ribcage
as tea slowly
pumps around
their blue china
thread veins,
further down
alice greets
a posse of
whispering
flower buds
that bloom slowly
singing golden
afternoon in
their stomach,
spinning around
as their blue and
white clothes
puff inside ...
of the world alice
thought they knew
the rabbit hole
being the spine
they fell through,
alice watches
a pocketwatch
ticking inside
their ribcage
as tea slowly
pumps around
their blue china
thread veins,
further down
alice greets
a posse of
whispering
flower buds
that bloom slowly
singing golden
afternoon in
their stomach,
spinning around
as their blue and
white clothes
puff inside ...
#LGBT
#LifeCycle
#transgender
#symbolism
#evolution
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2 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
6th Aug 2024 2:07am
6th Aug 2024 2:07am
WAITING GAME (6-17-2001; Galveston Island, Texas)
such complexity
stuck in density
we call this world
beneath it s spell
we re only pupae
in these temporal shells
chrysalistic vehicles
of our eternal souls
despite free will
we wait in these cells
until silent metamorphosis occurs
then after one final moment
of suspended brief darkness
along our journey s way
in which complete transformation
of physical being s form
shape shiftingly transpires ...
stuck in density
we call this world
beneath it s spell
we re only pupae
in these temporal shells
chrysalistic vehicles
of our eternal souls
despite free will
we wait in these cells
until silent metamorphosis occurs
then after one final moment
of suspended brief darkness
along our journey s way
in which complete transformation
of physical being s form
shape shiftingly transpires ...
#evolution
#philosophical
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
4th Aug 2024 3:15am
4th Aug 2024 3:15am
WE ARE ONE ELEMENT
Here we are as one for we are still elements of the world, yet there are still challenges that we will question, sometimes of the very foundation of WHY ARE WE HERE. 🤨 FOR within own mind and our spiritual, soul connection, to our subconsciousness of our own thoughts. 🤨 For even as we gather, in this space of no time ⌚ standing side by side, as fragments of flesh that is our vessel of our soul as it is a spiritual mental connection done by subconsciousness of our journey and travel and walk through the process of the invisible space between space and time ⌚ ...
#evolution
#philosophical
#shadows
#StreamOfConsciousness
#universe
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0 Comments
MrE
C. R. Powers
C. R. Powers
Poem Published
24th Jul 2024 2:10am
24th Jul 2024 2:10am
Atom To Adam
Would they the tidings of the grand call.
The sea does not settle for you or I.
What great memories locked beyond the brain's electric.
Remember, the servers too are electric.
I fashion for you all a dress of skin and bone.
Chemicals are but symptoms of the dreaming here.
Bubble and collide until the atom is born.
Atom, but Adam, a building block for Christians, but older still.
What need do I have for this knowledge.
An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind.
A mouth to a mouth...
The sea does not settle for you or I.
What great memories locked beyond the brain's electric.
Remember, the servers too are electric.
I fashion for you all a dress of skin and bone.
Chemicals are but symptoms of the dreaming here.
Bubble and collide until the atom is born.
Atom, but Adam, a building block for Christians, but older still.
What need do I have for this knowledge.
An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind.
A mouth to a mouth...
#evolution
#faith
#spiritual
#universe
#wisdom
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0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 6:17pm
9th Jul 2024 6:17pm
French Haiku
French Elections 2024
the stone in the hand
just another big window
the glass on the floor
the stone in the hand
just another big window
the glass on the floor
#corruption
#evolution
#greed
#politics
#poverty
79 reads
5 Comments
REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
6th Jul 2024 12:06pm
6th Jul 2024 12:06pm
"Secret Invasion " A24×8!!
In the Age, of true light which dissipates all illusions brought forth with the help of the moon's light!
Manipulated and created within, A.I.'s!
Meaning angel's intelligence fused and used by liquid crystal technology working in tandem, fuel for all vices!
Facilitated and coordinated throughout all and every device's, strategically making it easy to attach and latch on to those with low vibrational energy!!
Taking control of your mind while erasing your memory!
Because at the end of every century the earth 🌎 resets and the wave...
Manipulated and created within, A.I.'s!
Meaning angel's intelligence fused and used by liquid crystal technology working in tandem, fuel for all vices!
Facilitated and coordinated throughout all and every device's, strategically making it easy to attach and latch on to those with low vibrational energy!!
Taking control of your mind while erasing your memory!
Because at the end of every century the earth 🌎 resets and the wave...
#aliens
#earth
#evolution
#moon
#universe
177 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
17th Jun 2024 1:26pm
17th Jun 2024 1:26pm
Rogue In Vogue '' Sonnet ''
You take all thick and thin, you never sieve
Like a pierced evil-proof shield, out of use
And yet, you either refuse, or believe
You are bound by trends in vogue thru' abuse
Between thin and thick stand the blurred limits
You lost the vision, you're driven by whims
All the bad wrapped in silky honey sweets
They know you flee truth, sink in beastly dreams
They massage the nerves of a raging rogue
Easy gained fame, by sweat-less efforts made
You see pink, psychedelic...
Like a pierced evil-proof shield, out of use
And yet, you either refuse, or believe
You are bound by trends in vogue thru' abuse
Between thin and thick stand the blurred limits
You lost the vision, you're driven by whims
All the bad wrapped in silky honey sweets
They know you flee truth, sink in beastly dreams
They massage the nerves of a raging rogue
Easy gained fame, by sweat-less efforts made
You see pink, psychedelic...
#corruption
#evolution
#ignorance
#LifeCycle
#technology
126 reads
2 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
17th Jun 2024 1:13am
17th Jun 2024 1:13am
unjust
the universe creates
far too few Mozarts...
and way too many
dammed Hitlers
far too few Mozarts...
and way too many
dammed Hitlers
#evolution
#shadows
116 reads
10 Comments
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