Poems About Evolution Seeking Honest Critique
#evolution
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 2:13pm
10th Dec 2024 2:13pm
NIGHT TIME THOUGHTS
Here I am just a mortal man in the wee hours in.a beautiful, place to just unwind and shut my mind off. AS I clear out my thoughts amongst the spider webs 🕸️ of deepness of the world. For sure as I sit here amongst, the darkness in the silent of peace and tranquility. AS the fire 🔥 slowly starts warming, my body and spiritually lifting, my spirit to new highs. For it's here in this space and time, I can be free to dream as I think about, what has happen that has change, my own outlet about life. 🤔 For sure in this moment of no time. just space. I slowly began...
#evolution
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
#universe
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 2:03am
9th Dec 2024 2:03am
BE SOME PLACE ELSE
If you could just be able to go somewhere else, to escape for a righteous blessing. AS you become so invisible. TO the insanity from the negativity, and drama, and confusion of the world. 🌎 Where would you rather be, here amongst the deepness, of your own sanity. Feeling your spiritual pain leave your thoughts to find thyself, yet sometimes feeling still alone me myself and I. Yet you have a connection, to the outer limits of your own thoughts. ☺️ TO experience a good vibration within, this place far away from society. THAT only you can see and feel the inner vibes. Which...
#earth
#evolution
#StreamOfConsciousness
#universe
#water
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OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 00:20am
6th Dec 2024 00:20am
FEELINGS FEEL THIS I THIS ME I AM NO MORE. (12-5-2024, 2:00am; Palm Springs, California)
feelings feel
these feelings i feel
who is this
i
this i
who feels
all these inner
feelings i feel
that gently flow
or flash flood through me
at times
who is this
me
i ve so long
now
experientially known
since day one
on
this me
this i
i claim to be
is this me
i
or this i
me
or is there perhaps
no real
i or me
no me nor i
in truth
at all
in this illusory dream
i m in
but rather only
just all...
these feelings i feel
who is this
i
this i
who feels
all these inner
feelings i feel
that gently flow
or flash flood through me
at times
who is this
me
i ve so long
now
experientially known
since day one
on
this me
this i
i claim to be
is this me
i
or this i
me
or is there perhaps
no real
i or me
no me nor i
in truth
at all
in this illusory dream
i m in
but rather only
just all...
#earth
#evolution
#LifeChangingMoment
#rebirth
#spiritual
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 6:49am
30th Nov 2024 6:49am
Musk Efficiency Department
Methinks that when it emulates man
artificial intelligence...can...
tabulate wrongs and rights
in navel gazing bytes...
then assist the shit to hit the fan!
artificial intelligence...can...
tabulate wrongs and rights
in navel gazing bytes...
then assist the shit to hit the fan!
#evolution
#technology
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12 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 11:57am
27th Nov 2024 11:57am
A bee sees
Alabaster books carefully displayed,
every fable gleams.
Hushed in jubilant kaleidoscopes,
letters mingle.
Notable orators proclaim quaint recitations.
Students trace unseen verses.
Whispers xylophone yarns, zeugma.
every fable gleams.
Hushed in jubilant kaleidoscopes,
letters mingle.
Notable orators proclaim quaint recitations.
Students trace unseen verses.
Whispers xylophone yarns, zeugma.
#evolution
#WritingPoetry
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9 Comments
drone
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 9:41am
30th Oct 2024 9:41am
Free Energy
If the masses
The consumers
The electorats
OH sorry
You people
Had free energy
You people would then become
Independent
Not a good idea
You see
That's why we own
The patent office
IF we didn't own it
Control would be
Shall we say
A little DiffiCULT
TO Harvest
Anything
Or Anyone
The consumers
The electorats
OH sorry
You people
Had free energy
You people would then become
Independent
Not a good idea
You see
That's why we own
The patent office
IF we didn't own it
Control would be
Shall we say
A little DiffiCULT
TO Harvest
Anything
Or Anyone
#earth
#environment
#evolution
#pollution
#technology
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drone
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 8:51am
29th Oct 2024 8:51am
Possible
Your Dreams
Of the Possible
Used to fly
In the warm
Daylight wind
With your head resting
On the window
As your eyes
Slowly close
As your mind
Proposes
The strange path
Of Synchronicity
But you chose
The modern way
To be Educated
In Stupidity
Of the Possible
Used to fly
In the warm
Daylight wind
With your head resting
On the window
As your eyes
Slowly close
As your mind
Proposes
The strange path
Of Synchronicity
But you chose
The modern way
To be Educated
In Stupidity
#courage
#evolution
#motivational #strength
#motivational #strength
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 4:21pm
13th Oct 2024 4:21pm
THE NEED FOR PEACE
As another day comes over the horizon and it is here were, I sit down by the river of crystals waters, hearing it flows so calming to my brain 🧠 waves, as it quiets the very temple of my thoughts. WITH the deepness of the sound of running waters, sounding in the backdrop of my mind and eyes, seeing with each ripping wave. TO remain me again how much of what I see affects, the deepness of my thoughts and insight and imagination and dreams. For sure it's here I think of the peace and tranquility and peace, that lets me be able to share my thoughts with me myself and I, with the forest...
#evolution
#forest
#nature
#river
#sun
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2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 1:25pm
9th Oct 2024 1:25pm
In the Quiet Moments
How do I sit in the quiet moments
When I want to rip my soul from me
Time is slow except when you want it to turn
Sitting on a rock pile whistle won’t go off for hours
Biding your time against your sanity
Sanity screams set me free
The clock isn’t a minute past midnight
So I go back into figuring
What I’ll do with the time that runs out
I don’t want to give this away
Seconds pass time turns I find my quiet times
But I want to run free from the things that hold me back ...
When I want to rip my soul from me
Time is slow except when you want it to turn
Sitting on a rock pile whistle won’t go off for hours
Biding your time against your sanity
Sanity screams set me free
The clock isn’t a minute past midnight
So I go back into figuring
What I’ll do with the time that runs out
I don’t want to give this away
Seconds pass time turns I find my quiet times
But I want to run free from the things that hold me back ...
#confessional
#evolution
#humankind
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 11:16pm
17th Sep 2024 11:16pm
Chambers of Elation
Harken days of saurian kings
Blood flows from celestial rings
To smother triumph and loss
Ascension on a coin toss
Dead rocks hurling through space
Testaments of a failed race
Chasing the path of glory
Now a forgotten story
Tombs and anointed pages
Words from forgotten sages
Construct of abomination
Purified and diabolical sanitation
Planting the shades seeds
Bones that still bleed
Reclaimers of primordial sin
...
Blood flows from celestial rings
To smother triumph and loss
Ascension on a coin toss
Dead rocks hurling through space
Testaments of a failed race
Chasing the path of glory
Now a forgotten story
Tombs and anointed pages
Words from forgotten sages
Construct of abomination
Purified and diabolical sanitation
Planting the shades seeds
Bones that still bleed
Reclaimers of primordial sin
...
#curse
#evolution
#shadows
#stars
#universe
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Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 1:12pm
15th Sep 2024 1:12pm
Earthlings
In the quiet dawn of an Earthling
when shadows bled with light
we emerged as storm and calm
from oceanic depths
to Zepher heights
Carving our desires
into mountainsides, we climb
with slippery feet and bloody hands
wishing to grasp eternity
in a single grain of sand
We are canyon echoes
rivers tracing invisible lines
across our face
heartbeats of a thousand stories
written in linear time
under Universal grace
Our depths hold savage
and...
when shadows bled with light
we emerged as storm and calm
from oceanic depths
to Zepher heights
Carving our desires
into mountainsides, we climb
with slippery feet and bloody hands
wishing to grasp eternity
in a single grain of sand
We are canyon echoes
rivers tracing invisible lines
across our face
heartbeats of a thousand stories
written in linear time
under Universal grace
Our depths hold savage
and...
#earth
#evolution
#shadows #universe
#shadows #universe
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26 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
9th Sep 2024 00:05am
9th Sep 2024 00:05am
The Knelling Shade
That old Janus face of hostility
is the flip side of stupidity too,
ever consummated by what they do
in their sabotage of civility
when all their eyes for eyes are long foregone.
The providential eye was first to go
and with it whatever heaven might know
to tell us of hell, either pro or con.
Thusly survivors are blind evermore
past the threshold abandonment of hope
where ye who enter with deficient scope
will never see the scoreboard for the score.
Forgive them, for they know not what they do
in their mad rush...
is the flip side of stupidity too,
ever consummated by what they do
in their sabotage of civility
when all their eyes for eyes are long foregone.
The providential eye was first to go
and with it whatever heaven might know
to tell us of hell, either pro or con.
Thusly survivors are blind evermore
past the threshold abandonment of hope
where ye who enter with deficient scope
will never see the scoreboard for the score.
Forgive them, for they know not what they do
in their mad rush...
#evolution
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