Erotic Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#erotic
erotic seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Kiss Me Hard Before You Go
our foreheads press together
like flamingoes
all pretty in pink
the eye contact is primal and speaks
to the holes we try to fill with dirt
and sex and lovers we left in
car accidents and goodbye notes
screaming it’s not you it’s me
we tried that with each other
tried to burn it all down and rise
from the ashes some mangled
phoenix that was all human and not designed
to survive that kind of heat
with you here now
the scent of you breaking
the doom clock
ticking away our last breaths
all I want...
like flamingoes
all pretty in pink
the eye contact is primal and speaks
to the holes we try to fill with dirt
and sex and lovers we left in
car accidents and goodbye notes
screaming it’s not you it’s me
we tried that with each other
tried to burn it all down and rise
from the ashes some mangled
phoenix that was all human and not designed
to survive that kind of heat
with you here now
the scent of you breaking
the doom clock
ticking away our last breaths
all I want...
#erotic
#lover
#obsession #regret
#obsession #regret
49 reads
3 Comments
Farewell

#dirty
#erotic
#FreeVerse
#sadness
#sex
69 reads
5 Comments
Unmade bed (A farewell to DUP)
You left,
but the sheets are still tangled -
not from sleep,
but from the way I arched
when you whispered
things that made me bite my lip
just to stay quiet.
This bed remembers.
The slick press of skin,
the gasp I tried to hide,
the way I stayed there after -
thighs still parted,
pillow still wet.
You thought you got away clean.
But come closer,
breathe in -
my scent’s still clinging
to your thoughts.
Still sweet.
Still soaked.
Still waiting
for your...
but the sheets are still tangled -
not from sleep,
but from the way I arched
when you whispered
things that made me bite my lip
just to stay quiet.
This bed remembers.
The slick press of skin,
the gasp I tried to hide,
the way I stayed there after -
thighs still parted,
pillow still wet.
You thought you got away clean.
But come closer,
breathe in -
my scent’s still clinging
to your thoughts.
Still sweet.
Still soaked.
Still waiting
for your...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#erotic
#love
#lust
#sensual
125 reads
32 Comments
After(Care)

#BDSM
#erotic
#obsession #passion
#obsession #passion
146 reads
12 Comments
IN FRONT OF THE CAMP FIRE

#erotic
#seductive
#sex
107 reads
0 Comments
Happiest place

#erotic
#lover
#lust #seductive
#lust #seductive
200 reads
0 Comments
… Ooo such erotic trips!

#BDSM
#erotic
#sex
#surreal
#travel
209 reads
2 Comments
6 person freakfest

#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic #sex
#erotic #sex
109 reads
0 Comments
Tale of the portrait
I wander around
this wicked frame
where you laid
beggin' my mouth
to carve tracks in
your flesh lands,
my piano fingers
turn your side
slowly into
a portrait
because you
didn't know
how it felt
to be gazed,
to be held, to
have an eye
lock down
on you
like Klimt's
kiss hanging
high on walls
around the
world.
this wicked frame
where you laid
beggin' my mouth
to carve tracks in
your flesh lands,
my piano fingers
turn your side
slowly into
a portrait
because you
didn't know
how it felt
to be gazed,
to be held, to
have an eye
lock down
on you
like Klimt's
kiss hanging
high on walls
around the
world.
#erotic
230 reads
3 Comments
Slitten

#dark
#dirty
#erotic
14 reads
3 Comments
UP COMES YOUR YES

#erotic
#love
#seductive #countryside
#seductive #countryside
275 reads
3 Comments
Juices flow

#erotic
#lover
#passion
#seductive
#sensual
307 reads
0 Comments
DU Poetry : Erotic Seeking Honest Critique Poems