Poems About Emotions by Top Critiquers
#emotions
let the...
wind swirl with me tonight...
and upon the tamarack
let her be covered in white,
crystals reflecting her moon’s light.
deep, well rounded are her roots...
movements, golden are the shoots.
along banks that harbor her sand
now blend the blue water...
form wet, a hardness upon her land.
let the cold come more than twice
she and the tamarack...
she, too, is covered within ice.
skating out on the frozen plain
barren is her world to tame
yet she sees the life
ever growing she withers strife
smile upon smiles ...
and upon the tamarack
let her be covered in white,
crystals reflecting her moon’s light.
deep, well rounded are her roots...
movements, golden are the shoots.
along banks that harbor her sand
now blend the blue water...
form wet, a hardness upon her land.
let the cold come more than twice
she and the tamarack...
she, too, is covered within ice.
skating out on the frozen plain
barren is her world to tame
yet she sees the life
ever growing she withers strife
smile upon smiles ...
#hope
#nature
#emotions
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My Poetry
My poems
are whispers woven by rainbow threads
words stitched with starlight dusts
golden showers from starlit skies
autumn leaves dancing with the breeze
a tapestry of dreams unfolds from pockets
where beauty beholds magic showers
My poems
are silver streams that softly flow
fireflies and flowers in moonlit Eden
melodies sung by angels
on flower petals singing tale magical
petals of roses in colours of rainbows
wonders so vast with so much treasures
My poems
conjure up mountains castles of...
are whispers woven by rainbow threads
words stitched with starlight dusts
golden showers from starlit skies
autumn leaves dancing with the breeze
a tapestry of dreams unfolds from pockets
where beauty beholds magic showers
My poems
are silver streams that softly flow
fireflies and flowers in moonlit Eden
melodies sung by angels
on flower petals singing tale magical
petals of roses in colours of rainbows
wonders so vast with so much treasures
My poems
conjure up mountains castles of...
#emotions
#WritingPoetry
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"Crazy "
You might say I'm crazy because, all the love you give me, woman completely amaze me!!
And at times it drives me absolutely crazy!
If I were to go a minute an hour or even a day away from you my sweet lady!!
Would totally spell crazy with a capital "C" an all out blaze, like fire 🔥 in the forest an oblivious roaring rage!
Maybe you can say that I'm spoiled, it's only because all the warmth and love you gave!
No not even for a second or moment when you're not near me, would have me stalk raven mad insanely going...
And at times it drives me absolutely crazy!
If I were to go a minute an hour or even a day away from you my sweet lady!!
Would totally spell crazy with a capital "C" an all out blaze, like fire 🔥 in the forest an oblivious roaring rage!
Maybe you can say that I'm spoiled, it's only because all the warmth and love you gave!
No not even for a second or moment when you're not near me, would have me stalk raven mad insanely going...
#admiration
#emotions
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
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Loss
We have never met in person
I know you through your poetry
Collaborations
Messages
I am connected
Invested in a friendship
You like my work
Think it is good
Worthy of praise
I believe you
Why lie
when you share so much already?
There is no benefit to deception.
My friend and collaborator
Offline for a week
Unusual
Out of character
I was slow to respond to DMs
Perhaps you were angry.
Not always about me.
DM reply
I am in the hospital ...
I know you through your poetry
Collaborations
Messages
I am connected
Invested in a friendship
You like my work
Think it is good
Worthy of praise
I believe you
Why lie
when you share so much already?
There is no benefit to deception.
My friend and collaborator
Offline for a week
Unusual
Out of character
I was slow to respond to DMs
Perhaps you were angry.
Not always about me.
DM reply
I am in the hospital ...
#grief
#friendship
#emotions
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Roommates
#emotions
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Older
the older I get
the less patience I have
I don't have time
worrying about who likes me
I work and make money
doing it for my family
when I'm off I focus on inner peace
a few hobbies help wash away the day
I don't really care
if the neighbor is being a bitch
or some Karen is mad about my lawn
I like to get in touch with my emotions
and I'm not afraid to say it
after a life of being let down
I like to sit and cry
even if it's only on the inside
but it's not over those that hurt me
it's for those I...
the less patience I have
I don't have time
worrying about who likes me
I work and make money
doing it for my family
when I'm off I focus on inner peace
a few hobbies help wash away the day
I don't really care
if the neighbor is being a bitch
or some Karen is mad about my lawn
I like to get in touch with my emotions
and I'm not afraid to say it
after a life of being let down
I like to sit and cry
even if it's only on the inside
but it's not over those that hurt me
it's for those I...
#aging
#emotions
#myself
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From One Mother To Another
It's a beautiful gift to watch your children tackle life unbroken when something so broken raised them. Hiding the pain was worth it, and in the moments when I couldn't cope, when I would spill over because it was all just too much, well, I regret not being stronger in those moments. Because in those moments they couldn't understand that part of mom, the war of cycle breaking and the toll it takes on mind body and soul, where I would lay in bed for three or four days crying and praying, praying for God to renew my strength, but never once did I lay a hand on them, never once did I withhold my...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#love #strength
#love #strength
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DU Poetry : Poems About Emotions by Top Critiquers