Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 9:37pm
11th Dec 2024 9:37pm
Mental Health
The tossing and turning at every sound
The rolling emotions the dream would bring
Every fiber of your being
Had picked up the broken pieces
All the spaces you were afraid to dwell
In your mind
All the lines you’ve heard over and over
Your thoughts that led you to dread
Right before bed
The closet you was afraid to open
Now a light is shown
You are not alone
Your inner demons,
made peace
It’s the least
You can do, for it is all brand new
You knew yourself little
And was not as...
The rolling emotions the dream would bring
Every fiber of your being
Had picked up the broken pieces
All the spaces you were afraid to dwell
In your mind
All the lines you’ve heard over and over
Your thoughts that led you to dread
Right before bed
The closet you was afraid to open
Now a light is shown
You are not alone
Your inner demons,
made peace
It’s the least
You can do, for it is all brand new
You knew yourself little
And was not as...
#emotions
#TimeHeals
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1 Comment
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Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 12:11pm
9th Dec 2024 12:11pm
Poetry, An Emotion
I like poetry, and i like its secrets
Creations and twists, that impress
And the manifest of the thoughts
Bared like the sun, easily expressed
I read the finest quills, the nobler
The thinker, and the mystical worder
And the true lover, who sheds his blood
With every word spilled, romanticized
I read the wordsmith and the weaker
And the mediocre and the "show-offs"
Like i eat every thing, in my plate
Like i don't spare; flesh and bone
Poetry, the music sieved into words
Lyrically voiced...
Creations and twists, that impress
And the manifest of the thoughts
Bared like the sun, easily expressed
I read the finest quills, the nobler
The thinker, and the mystical worder
And the true lover, who sheds his blood
With every word spilled, romanticized
I read the wordsmith and the weaker
And the mediocre and the "show-offs"
Like i eat every thing, in my plate
Like i don't spare; flesh and bone
Poetry, the music sieved into words
Lyrically voiced...
#admiration
#emotions
#kindness
#motivational
#respect
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14 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 8:42am
9th Dec 2024 8:42am
Gold
My love resides
Across the skies
In fields of green
Deep ocean eyes
You've touched
My soul
Took a hold
Your beautiful smile
Drips liquid gold
Across the skies
In fields of green
Deep ocean eyes
You've touched
My soul
Took a hold
Your beautiful smile
Drips liquid gold
#emotions
#love
196 reads
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Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 11:34am
8th Dec 2024 11:34am
Wise Moments In The Wild
Around The Future
i spent the morning on the mountain, roaming like a drifter searching a new way
to chase away my stress, and spill out the bitter spleen in my heart, striding along,
passing every stone, climbing each rock, hearing every bird sending his complains, filling the dead void with a thousand sighs..
The pine forest lies quite on the steep rocky plain, anchored firmly to a childhood earth,
as some joyous robins and goldfinch broke my thoughts with a twitter and a gentle birdie scream,
Seemingly, Spring has sped some happy harbingers...
i spent the morning on the mountain, roaming like a drifter searching a new way
to chase away my stress, and spill out the bitter spleen in my heart, striding along,
passing every stone, climbing each rock, hearing every bird sending his complains, filling the dead void with a thousand sighs..
The pine forest lies quite on the steep rocky plain, anchored firmly to a childhood earth,
as some joyous robins and goldfinch broke my thoughts with a twitter and a gentle birdie scream,
Seemingly, Spring has sped some happy harbingers...
#admiration
#emotions
#inspirational
#summer
#TimeHeals
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2 Comments
KendalM
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 12:05pm
7th Dec 2024 12:05pm
No Boys Allowed
She drapes white sheets over kitchen chairs, and just inside, lines the hard wood floor with fluffy pillows and downy blankets.
As she grabs her flashlight, your hand, and the journal with the heart shaped lock.
Sweetheart, let's just go be little girls again, everything you need to unload is safe with me, and when you leave this memory of our friendship, only take the little girl lost back with you upon your return to the world.
As she grabs her flashlight, your hand, and the journal with the heart shaped lock.
Sweetheart, let's just go be little girls again, everything you need to unload is safe with me, and when you leave this memory of our friendship, only take the little girl lost back with you upon your return to the world.
#emotions
#hope
#strength #TimeHeals
#strength #TimeHeals
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MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 7:47pm
6th Dec 2024 7:47pm
Selfness
Selfness
Emotional
Home for pleasure and pain
Dominant and shaping the brain
A journey of fathomless feels unleashed
An abiding pounding of life
Roaring whenever stirred
Irrational
Selfness
Selfness
Spiritual
A high yielding to God
A mysterious ascendant Self
A home for a radiating compassion
Inner power of healing Faith
Wrapping peace of silence
Mystic allure
Selfness
Emotional
Home for pleasure and pain
Dominant and shaping the brain
A journey of fathomless feels unleashed
An abiding pounding of life
Roaring whenever stirred
Irrational
Selfness
Selfness
Spiritual
A high yielding to God
A mysterious ascendant Self
A home for a radiating compassion
Inner power of healing Faith
Wrapping peace of silence
Mystic allure
Selfness
#emotions
#LifeStruggles
#meditation
#spiritual
#WritingPoetry
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2 Comments
KendalM
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 11:21am
6th Dec 2024 11:21am
Decisions Need To Be Made
There's a tumor on her spleen, nodules in her lungs, and an even bigger mass than the one they removed two years ago along with her ovaries now pressing on her lower organs and prohibiting proper functions of her bladder and bowel. She called me yesterday asking me to intercede for her and talk to her Dr.
You gotta understand, my mom is such a control freak, nobody takes charge over her life, especially decisions over her health.
Yet here I was, the one who was always incompetent and stupid, now making executive decisions over her care.
It's all so...
You gotta understand, my mom is such a control freak, nobody takes charge over her life, especially decisions over her health.
Yet here I was, the one who was always incompetent and stupid, now making executive decisions over her care.
It's all so...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#hope
#love
#strength
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Nachiyobe
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 9:09am
6th Dec 2024 9:09am
A Writers Vows
With this paper and pen, I vow..
To voice out the volumes of words left unsaid.
To spell out the silence of the secrets left unspoken.
I vow,
That my sonnets will speak the language our spirits haven't figured out yet,
That the lines of my limericks will lyric the songs our souls haven't sung yet,
That my haikus will hold and heal our haggard hearts,
That...
My words, wether in prose of verse, written, spoken, raw or rehearsed will silence the voices in our heads, listen..
I vow that the ink of my pen will be the flavor of sweat driven by my...
To voice out the volumes of words left unsaid.
To spell out the silence of the secrets left unspoken.
I vow,
That my sonnets will speak the language our spirits haven't figured out yet,
That the lines of my limericks will lyric the songs our souls haven't sung yet,
That my haikus will hold and heal our haggard hearts,
That...
My words, wether in prose of verse, written, spoken, raw or rehearsed will silence the voices in our heads, listen..
I vow that the ink of my pen will be the flavor of sweat driven by my...
#emotions
#inspirational
#redemption
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Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 8:27pm
4th Dec 2024 8:27pm
like a fool in the rain
Inside Roare
like a fool in the rain
The local sounds, the roar of saxophones.
Your body is straining and your mouth is wide open. aaaaa
Who hasn't eaten, doesn't eat.
Who waited, doesn't know.
Who hasn't watched, doesn't eat, who's left alone, doesn't know.
You walk through the raindrops,
only I still don't believe.
You walk through the wall, I don't know yet,
whether love will defeat your strength.
Du du du dum.
Du du du dum.
I'm running.... aaaaaa
I'm running like a madman in the rain, ...
like a fool in the rain
The local sounds, the roar of saxophones.
Your body is straining and your mouth is wide open. aaaaa
Who hasn't eaten, doesn't eat.
Who waited, doesn't know.
Who hasn't watched, doesn't eat, who's left alone, doesn't know.
You walk through the raindrops,
only I still don't believe.
You walk through the wall, I don't know yet,
whether love will defeat your strength.
Du du du dum.
Du du du dum.
I'm running.... aaaaaa
I'm running like a madman in the rain, ...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
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KendalM
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 6:10pm
4th Dec 2024 6:10pm
Hurt
The weather was cold and brisk, streams of sun bursting through grey clouds, a contrast my soul could relate to.
A place I always go to when I need to feel close to you. I know Lord you are not there in the physical, but visiting this spot gives me comfort in my spirit when I feel like dying, when the broken is just too much. How do we even know what you look like really, as your statue stands there, arms stretched out, the steps to you cascading. Its harder to go up than down, yet as I was sitting there, praying to your concrete memorial, because it's something tangible when I feel so...
A place I always go to when I need to feel close to you. I know Lord you are not there in the physical, but visiting this spot gives me comfort in my spirit when I feel like dying, when the broken is just too much. How do we even know what you look like really, as your statue stands there, arms stretched out, the steps to you cascading. Its harder to go up than down, yet as I was sitting there, praying to your concrete memorial, because it's something tangible when I feel so...
#courage
#emotions
#hope #strength
#hope #strength
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VeronikaB
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 6:01pm
4th Dec 2024 6:01pm
The Wild Courage of Despair
WHEN VULTURES OF HOPE
close in on my field of vision
in a man-made desert
parched by the gods
of money tech and power
inner wisdom beckons
the afore-bidden Fruit
of Knowledge to pick
out forlorn esperance
as an obsolete mirage
to forsake futile
hope and expectation
and dowse a hidden well
WHEN SNAKES OF DESPAIR
slither around my heels
sink me to my knees
tempt me to drink the divine
will to live my life
every drop of clarity
quenches the thirst
of my soul to summon ...
close in on my field of vision
in a man-made desert
parched by the gods
of money tech and power
inner wisdom beckons
the afore-bidden Fruit
of Knowledge to pick
out forlorn esperance
as an obsolete mirage
to forsake futile
hope and expectation
and dowse a hidden well
WHEN SNAKES OF DESPAIR
slither around my heels
sink me to my knees
tempt me to drink the divine
will to live my life
every drop of clarity
quenches the thirst
of my soul to summon ...
#courage
#desert
#despair
#emotions
#hope
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oldmanG
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 10:19pm
2nd Dec 2024 10:19pm
Autumn of My Years
Autumn of My Years
Gold leaf tumbles down
In late November
Falls into to the home
Of Family Dinner
Turkey Bird of a Day
And Football mixed in
16 to 18 strong
Tucked into a Rowhouse
With eatin tables
For the children
Even when I grew up
Wanted to sit with them
Watching a Dolphin
Sitting in the Snow
Leon please don’t Lett
The Ball Go
Halftime Approaches
Now comes the best part
First one out the door
With a Pigskin on Palm
...
Gold leaf tumbles down
In late November
Falls into to the home
Of Family Dinner
Turkey Bird of a Day
And Football mixed in
16 to 18 strong
Tucked into a Rowhouse
With eatin tables
For the children
Even when I grew up
Wanted to sit with them
Watching a Dolphin
Sitting in the Snow
Leon please don’t Lett
The Ball Go
Halftime Approaches
Now comes the best part
First one out the door
With a Pigskin on Palm
...
#children
#emotions
#family
#love
#memories
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