Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
Whispers of dreams
From the deepness of the heart it will always be the strongest desire for the heart, 💕 for sure even when we are far away the deepness of the mind and heart, will have a connection that runs deeper than deep. For the love can be felt like the beat of the drums, from a far away place that will be embracing your thoughts, and insight and feelings. Beyond your wildest dreams pass your imagination to dream, about the deepness of the love that you two shared as one. For it's like the silent whispers, that only lovers can hear as it relates to echos, from the deepness of your mind and heart...
#emotions
#gratitude
#happiness
#kindness
#love
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My Grandfather
How I remember you
Always happy, never blue
Summer weekends always a blast
Priceless memories from my past
We'd go on the boat, have lunch and talk
Simpler times that slipped away through a clock
As I became older you were always there
You helped me out when I was in despair
When I moved away
We'd call each other every few days
One day I received that dreadful call
You lost consciousness, had a deadly fall
They tried to resuscitate but to no avail
My heart was punctured, I began to wail
Many years have gone...
Always happy, never blue
Summer weekends always a blast
Priceless memories from my past
We'd go on the boat, have lunch and talk
Simpler times that slipped away through a clock
As I became older you were always there
You helped me out when I was in despair
When I moved away
We'd call each other every few days
One day I received that dreadful call
You lost consciousness, had a deadly fall
They tried to resuscitate but to no avail
My heart was punctured, I began to wail
Many years have gone...
#emotions
#love
#memories #sadness
#memories #sadness
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Heart on fire
When the heart is on fire it holds the 🗝️ key of power of desire, in the heat of the sensual moments of sending vibes running, through your body and spiritual subconsciousness of your soul. For sure it's more than emotions and with genuine, feelings that creates a vibrant of colors of a special bond, between two lovers. For when the heart is on fire 🔥 it's because the feelings go deeper than deep into the deepness of the depths of dreams. For it's true that a heart on fire burns, with the closeness of inner senses of raw and uncut emotions. For it's that kind of mental...
#emotions
#hope
#love
#StreamOfConsciousness
#TimeHeals
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Self Reflection

#anxiety
#emotions
#hope #strength
#hope #strength
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Question
Once the DUP closes are there any other poetry site to display your work on
Thanks in advance
Love and light
Ron
Thanks in advance
Love and light
Ron
#emotions
#hope
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Belief the only truth
Belief its strength is unfathomable
A power that creates
Any truth imaginable.
Danny Giesbrecht
A power that creates
Any truth imaginable.
Danny Giesbrecht
#emotions
#gratitude
#strength
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Fantasy or is it really real
When you dream within the very deepness of your sleep, 💤 what do you dream within the whispers of the echos from the past. When you lose all sense of time, as your thoughts stretch far and beyond, into the universe of space yet there is no time. What does your dreams reveal, for sure we can escape but yet why should you want to leave this place. Where your dreams become so real, yet it's only a piece of the truth of the fantasy, with still more to be revealed to the deepness of your mind thoughts. For sure we all have some silent, whispers of dreams hidden away from preying eyes...
#dialogue
#emotions
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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With a hint of sadness
With a hint of sadness.
When favorite moments.
Are shared with deeply.
The lost component.
Don't change the memory.
Remains important.
Won't ever leave you.
Resides in contentment.
As once a truth.
The one and only, you ever trusted.
Forgot your name, long past reckoned.
Now holds forever, time disrupted.
Can't erase, those favorite seconds.
As constant companion.
Your smile still binds.
With just a hint of sadness.
That love left behind.
ARM
When favorite moments.
Are shared with deeply.
The lost component.
Don't change the memory.
Remains important.
Won't ever leave you.
Resides in contentment.
As once a truth.
The one and only, you ever trusted.
Forgot your name, long past reckoned.
Now holds forever, time disrupted.
Can't erase, those favorite seconds.
As constant companion.
Your smile still binds.
With just a hint of sadness.
That love left behind.
ARM
#emotions
#love
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the big day
tomorrow is weird for me; I've always wanted to be celebrated, like hello, its me and MY day. but between spring break and unintentional friends, it was usually only an important day if I made it important. so two years ago, I decided to properly celebrate myself. on my day, I'd only do stuff for me.
that first year I spent three weeks completing a childhood goal of mine, gallivanting around Europe like I saw in the movies growing up.
and last year, I spent three days, the day before and after, bouncing around towns only doing things that made me happy.
...
that first year I spent three weeks completing a childhood goal of mine, gallivanting around Europe like I saw in the movies growing up.
and last year, I spent three days, the day before and after, bouncing around towns only doing things that made me happy.
...
#emotions
#myself
#SelfReflection
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Missing pieces
I miss you..
I miss the way that you lit the fire inside of me..
I miss the excitement that I feel when my eyes are about to look inside of yours..
I miss the way you dance with me in the house..
I miss how I could talk to you about anything for hours..
I miss how I'm a better me with you..
I miss the way that my hand fit inside of yours..
I miss the way your heart danced with mine..
I miss how you intoxicate me by the way that you speak..
I miss the way you would come up behind me when I was washing dishes..
I miss the way your lips felt...
I miss the way that you lit the fire inside of me..
I miss the excitement that I feel when my eyes are about to look inside of yours..
I miss the way you dance with me in the house..
I miss how I could talk to you about anything for hours..
I miss how I'm a better me with you..
I miss the way that my hand fit inside of yours..
I miss the way your heart danced with mine..
I miss how you intoxicate me by the way that you speak..
I miss the way you would come up behind me when I was washing dishes..
I miss the way your lips felt...
#admiration
#courage
#emotions
#forgiveness
#hope
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Just My Imagination

#emotions
#love
#redemption #TimeHeals
#redemption #TimeHeals
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Alpha Male
Otherworldly lucid
envisioned insights mosaic
writing clairvoyant entranced
Quill expansive unapologetic
in complex worlds
to masculine stance
Livid thoroughbred
baptised in fire honored in flowers
of past horror stories
Survived injury carried by One
mirrored in backwoods
as night turn dark to gory
DUICE
in solidarity surveying eyes
are of no consequence its personal
Every cut healed to scar
how the star was born
vitality endured unmerciful
To reject what taps my strength
bound to weakness ...
envisioned insights mosaic
writing clairvoyant entranced
Quill expansive unapologetic
in complex worlds
to masculine stance
Livid thoroughbred
baptised in fire honored in flowers
of past horror stories
Survived injury carried by One
mirrored in backwoods
as night turn dark to gory
DUICE
in solidarity surveying eyes
are of no consequence its personal
Every cut healed to scar
how the star was born
vitality endured unmerciful
To reject what taps my strength
bound to weakness ...
#emotions
#respect
#responsibility
#sacrifice
#strength
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DU Poetry : Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique