Poems About Denial Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about denial seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
poptartchan
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:24pm
Yesterday 11:24pm
A long forgotten place
Beyond the forest
A library long forgotten
Legends once told
Now each spine rotten
I walked the empty place
The dust settled on shelves
Candle in hand against the dark
Into the scrolls I delve
The light flickered against the wall
Up above the ceiling marked with paint
I had to climb the up high to see it clearly
Golden leaf along the trim to mark a saint
Hidden in a place long sealed away
A supposed hero sleeps
Death and decay can only be seen
Angels and the world weeps
In those pages they...
A library long forgotten
Legends once told
Now each spine rotten
I walked the empty place
The dust settled on shelves
Candle in hand against the dark
Into the scrolls I delve
The light flickered against the wall
Up above the ceiling marked with paint
I had to climb the up high to see it clearly
Golden leaf along the trim to mark a saint
Hidden in a place long sealed away
A supposed hero sleeps
Death and decay can only be seen
Angels and the world weeps
In those pages they...
#denial
#hope
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 00:10am
25th Jan 2025 00:10am
I wanna live
I wanna live
My life to the fullest
Father
I want to try to make
Some more new friends
Because Father I have
Very little friends in
My life
Also I have to look
After myself
Father I have no problem
Looking after myself
I do it every single day
I look also after my health
Every single day
And I go to bed early
Every single night
So that I get
A proper night sleep
My life to the fullest
Father
I want to try to make
Some more new friends
Because Father I have
Very little friends in
My life
Also I have to look
After myself
Father I have no problem
Looking after myself
I do it every single day
I look also after my health
Every single day
And I go to bed early
Every single night
So that I get
A proper night sleep
#confusion
#denial
#despair
#heartbroken
#jealousy
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 9:41pm
19th Jan 2025 9:41pm
One word and concisely miserable.
The.
Sun.
Has.
Burnt.
My.
Hangover.
Into.
My.
Soul
I'm.
Gasping.
For.
Air.
With.
Leather.
Backed.
Lungs.
And.
Baby.
Maybe.
You.
Got.
Me.
All.
Wrong.
As.
I.
Lurch.
Forward.
Or.
Lay.
Down.
And.
Fade.
Into.
The.
Bleeding.
Days.
Where.
Yesterday.
Became.
Today.
In.
The.
Sunset.
With. ...
Sun.
Has.
Burnt.
My.
Hangover.
Into.
My.
Soul
I'm.
Gasping.
For.
Air.
With.
Leather.
Backed.
Lungs.
And.
Baby.
Maybe.
You.
Got.
Me.
All.
Wrong.
As.
I.
Lurch.
Forward.
Or.
Lay.
Down.
And.
Fade.
Into.
The.
Bleeding.
Days.
Where.
Yesterday.
Became.
Today.
In.
The.
Sunset.
With. ...
#boredom
#denial
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Hellarchy
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 5:30am
15th Jan 2025 5:30am
The Source
Life's been cruel to me so far
If I could catch a falling star
I wouldn't wash away my scars
I'd piece together all the shards
Of broken glass
Shattered years past
Filthy memories left unbathed
But no one walks away unscathed
Long ago I got the point
Aching bones and creaking joints
Any comfort is a privilege
Afforded only by indifference
I see the light
Can't close the distance
Sprinting toward sweet deliverance
Long after my feet are blistered
Where most would yield,...
If I could catch a falling star
I wouldn't wash away my scars
I'd piece together all the shards
Of broken glass
Shattered years past
Filthy memories left unbathed
But no one walks away unscathed
Long ago I got the point
Aching bones and creaking joints
Any comfort is a privilege
Afforded only by indifference
I see the light
Can't close the distance
Sprinting toward sweet deliverance
Long after my feet are blistered
Where most would yield,...
#dark
#denial
#loneliness
#regret
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 5:35pm
14th Jan 2025 5:35pm
Foi Deus
Foi Deus
That made us
With his holy hands
Many years ago
Foi Deus
That placed us here
On earth to live
For a long time
We just love to live
On earth
Meu Deus
Also you have the power
In your hands to heal the sick
Yes the sick people
Have been calling for you
Please go and heal them
Because you have the power to heal
I am sure
Meu Deus
The sick is always praying for you
Every single night
Before they go to sleep
Yes they sleep all through the night
Without waking up
And they...
That made us
With his holy hands
Many years ago
Foi Deus
That placed us here
On earth to live
For a long time
We just love to live
On earth
Meu Deus
Also you have the power
In your hands to heal the sick
Yes the sick people
Have been calling for you
Please go and heal them
Because you have the power to heal
I am sure
Meu Deus
The sick is always praying for you
Every single night
Before they go to sleep
Yes they sleep all through the night
Without waking up
And they...
#bittersweet
#denial
#despair
#emptiness
#fear
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 11:51pm
12th Jan 2025 11:51pm
Koan 10
Sing.
Me.
A melody.
And make it.
Out of tune.
Off.
Key.
Me.
A melody.
And make it.
Out of tune.
Off.
Key.
#boredom
#denial
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TheVORTEXRETURNS
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 1:12am
7th Jan 2025 1:12am
"Don't need to mention the names....."
But ever notice those famous singers that been around forever.
They have been there since you were young and were maybe
forced to listen to them by an older sibling.
You have listened to them so long they seep into your head
and take root. So now when they are played on the old time
radio.. You enjoy the old tunes. Though you faintly seem
to remember when you were younger and not that big into it.
Like I told a friend once...."You know you're getting old
when you start understanding and appreciating Mellon camp." ...
They have been there since you were young and were maybe
forced to listen to them by an older sibling.
You have listened to them so long they seep into your head
and take root. So now when they are played on the old time
radio.. You enjoy the old tunes. Though you faintly seem
to remember when you were younger and not that big into it.
Like I told a friend once...."You know you're getting old
when you start understanding and appreciating Mellon camp." ...
#anger
#dark
#denial
#emptiness
#heartbroken
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 11:28pm
3rd Jan 2025 11:28pm
Ā tout suite
tout suite
The rain stop today finally
I see the beautiful rainbow
That come out in the sky
After the rain
The sun came out
And it is now cooler
I am feeling cold
I need to wear my spring jacket
It should be fine
Finally it turned to be
A wonderful day
The rain cooled the earth
I hope it will stay that way
For couple days
I can't cope with the heat
The heat kills me
Because I sweat like a
Pig
That is true
I am not making up a history
Just to say something
I am not like that
I am...
The rain stop today finally
I see the beautiful rainbow
That come out in the sky
After the rain
The sun came out
And it is now cooler
I am feeling cold
I need to wear my spring jacket
It should be fine
Finally it turned to be
A wonderful day
The rain cooled the earth
I hope it will stay that way
For couple days
I can't cope with the heat
The heat kills me
Because I sweat like a
Pig
That is true
I am not making up a history
Just to say something
I am not like that
I am...
#dark
#denial
#disappointment
#hate
#loneliness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 10:45am
2nd Jan 2025 10:45am
I will not make promises
I will not make promises
For you that I can't keep
I will not be jealous of you
Because you have more
Then me
I don't need the things you have
You worked hard to get
The things you have
Also, you collect some stones
From the sea
I know that you are a sea lover
Also, you spend most of you days
At the sea
I will also treat you
With respect
I am not telling you lies
My dearest friend
I will not disturb you
When you are sleeping
Because you need your sleep
Also, I am an honest person
That you...
For you that I can't keep
I will not be jealous of you
Because you have more
Then me
I don't need the things you have
You worked hard to get
The things you have
Also, you collect some stones
From the sea
I know that you are a sea lover
Also, you spend most of you days
At the sea
I will also treat you
With respect
I am not telling you lies
My dearest friend
I will not disturb you
When you are sleeping
Because you need your sleep
Also, I am an honest person
That you...
#anxiety
#denial
#despair
#disappointment
#jealousy
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
30th Dec 2024 11:58pm
30th Dec 2024 11:58pm
Koan 8
Love was.
Something.
I used to.
Long.
For.
Now.
It's just.
A sentimental.
Performative.
Poorly done.
Art.
Piece.
Something.
I used to.
Long.
For.
Now.
It's just.
A sentimental.
Performative.
Poorly done.
Art.
Piece.
#denial
#grief
#regret #rejection
#regret #rejection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 6:51pm
29th Dec 2024 6:51pm
Pretty eyes
She has
Pretty eyes
The color of the sea
Her eyes are green
Also her eyes shines in the sun
She is lucky to have green eyes
It was given to her by my father
AIso she has blond her
She is a gorgeous woman
That was made by my God
Also I am very happy for her
At night she is always sleeping like a log
Pretty eyes
The color of the sea
Her eyes are green
Also her eyes shines in the sun
She is lucky to have green eyes
It was given to her by my father
AIso she has blond her
She is a gorgeous woman
That was made by my God
Also I am very happy for her
At night she is always sleeping like a log
#dark
#denial
#despair
#grief
#shame
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Pinkdreams
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 1:34am
27th Dec 2024 1:34am
Cruel World
We were thrown together
Working a temp job we were both overqualified for.
He, a recent college grad soon to begin a master's
And me, who had gotten my bachelor's
somewhere around the time his parents were in kindergarten.
We talked about everything
Movies
Music
Politics
What the future of the world might hold
What America would be like in fifty years
Even ten.
It turned depressing from there.
Cruel World, young guy said, shaking his head
How long have you known that? I ask
...
Working a temp job we were both overqualified for.
He, a recent college grad soon to begin a master's
And me, who had gotten my bachelor's
somewhere around the time his parents were in kindergarten.
We talked about everything
Movies
Music
Politics
What the future of the world might hold
What America would be like in fifty years
Even ten.
It turned depressing from there.
Cruel World, young guy said, shaking his head
How long have you known that? I ask
...
#denial
#fear
#TruthOfLife
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