Poems for and About Daughters Seeking Honest Critique
#daughter
Poems for and about daughters seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Saw A Pic Of Her Twin Girls
A shocked
Katherine
looked in
her husband's wallet,
saw a pic of her
twin girls naked and
which his
favorite
child is.
Katherine
looked in
her husband's wallet,
saw a pic of her
twin girls naked and
which his
favorite
child is.
#daughter
#emotional
#fiction
#husband
#sex
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Lost Love Between
Lost love between
Covers pulled to your side
I get in your tug of war
Pull some covers and you
Back to me
Hold you lightly
Feel every impulse
A rooster calls
Breakfast on my plate
You’re cooking up
A love song
Look at the clock
Can’t wait to see you
Everyday is Eden
Everyday is Garden
Back in the roost
Familiar feeling in the kitchen
On the couch
Binging some Breaking Bad
Fall into your total love
Hear a heartbeat
...
Covers pulled to your side
I get in your tug of war
Pull some covers and you
Back to me
Hold you lightly
Feel every impulse
A rooster calls
Breakfast on my plate
You’re cooking up
A love song
Look at the clock
Can’t wait to see you
Everyday is Eden
Everyday is Garden
Back in the roost
Familiar feeling in the kitchen
On the couch
Binging some Breaking Bad
Fall into your total love
Hear a heartbeat
...
#daughter
#love
#lover
#mother
#music
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In A Portrait Inside An Art School
Dad got
so mad when
he saw
his daughter Debbie
laying naked on
the sofa in a
portrait
inside an
art school.
so mad when
he saw
his daughter Debbie
laying naked on
the sofa in a
portrait
inside an
art school.
#art
#daughter
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
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Before She Had Gone Into The Bathroom
"Keep
it up."
was what Ruth
heard before she
had gone into the
bathroom and saw with shocked
eyes her young daughter Kristy
naked and getting probed by some
guy in front of a porn film crew which
made an angry Ruth yell "Everyone out!"
it up."
was what Ruth
heard before she
had gone into the
bathroom and saw with shocked
eyes her young daughter Kristy
naked and getting probed by some
guy in front of a porn film crew which
made an angry Ruth yell "Everyone out!"
#daughter
#fiction
#home
#porn
#sex
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Necessary Parting
October 4, 2024
Yesterday was harder than I thought it would be. Handing Ava over to David and his wife felt like I was tearing a piece of my heart out and watching it walk away. For five months, she's been my constant companion, my little girl who needed me for everything — especially the comfort and nourishment of breastfeeding. It's been an intimate bond, one that I never thought I'd be able to break, even temporarily.
But after the abortion, everything feels different. The decision to go out of state for the procedure wasn't easy, but it was necessary. I keep telling...
Yesterday was harder than I thought it would be. Handing Ava over to David and his wife felt like I was tearing a piece of my heart out and watching it walk away. For five months, she's been my constant companion, my little girl who needed me for everything — especially the comfort and nourishment of breastfeeding. It's been an intimate bond, one that I never thought I'd be able to break, even temporarily.
But after the abortion, everything feels different. The decision to go out of state for the procedure wasn't easy, but it was necessary. I keep telling...
#daughter
#healing
#MentalHealth #motherhood
#MentalHealth #motherhood
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Eyes of My Daughter - Song Lyrics
(Verse 1)
In the hustle of the city, as we race to find our gold,
We wear our blinders tightly as hearts grow cold.
The laughter of our children is now a distant sound,
Lost in selfish pleasures as the world spins round and round.
(Chorus)
But now I can clearly see, through my daughter's eyes,
The years that I missed, chasing alibis.
My little girl is seventeen, with dreams of her own,
Still looking for all the love I should've shown.
(Verse 2)
I was a man of passions, with so much love misplaced,
Trying to fill my empty...
In the hustle of the city, as we race to find our gold,
We wear our blinders tightly as hearts grow cold.
The laughter of our children is now a distant sound,
Lost in selfish pleasures as the world spins round and round.
(Chorus)
But now I can clearly see, through my daughter's eyes,
The years that I missed, chasing alibis.
My little girl is seventeen, with dreams of her own,
Still looking for all the love I should've shown.
(Verse 2)
I was a man of passions, with so much love misplaced,
Trying to fill my empty...
#betrayal
#daughter
#fatherhood #lust
#fatherhood #lust
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Her Nest
As we kiss, my straying fingers find
A nest first formed in her mother's womb.
Oh, how blessed now to kiss
Its moist and ripened bloom.
A nest first formed in her mother's womb.
Oh, how blessed now to kiss
Its moist and ripened bloom.
#daughter
#mother
#sex
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I’m ashamed to be called your daughter
I’m ashamed to be called your daughter,
a title that feels like a weight I can't shake,
in a world where your love was a distant whisper,
and I was left shattered, my heart forced to break.
I’m ashamed to be called your daughter,
when your smile felt cold, a mask that you wore,
every moment I craved, just a flicker of warmth,
but I found only shadows, and I longed for so much more.
I’m ashamed to be called your daughter,
as I stood in your light, always waiting in vain,
fighting for scraps of affection, like a...
a title that feels like a weight I can't shake,
in a world where your love was a distant whisper,
and I was left shattered, my heart forced to break.
I’m ashamed to be called your daughter,
when your smile felt cold, a mask that you wore,
every moment I craved, just a flicker of warmth,
but I found only shadows, and I longed for so much more.
I’m ashamed to be called your daughter,
as I stood in your light, always waiting in vain,
fighting for scraps of affection, like a...
#daughter
#family
#memories
#mother
#parent
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This Daddy Sees His Sweet Little Angel
Everytime I come here to check
on you, this daddy sees his sweet
little angel naked and
doing the nasty with
some guy on this one
table which still
makes me so
freaking
mad!
on you, this daddy sees his sweet
little angel naked and
doing the nasty with
some guy on this one
table which still
makes me so
freaking
mad!
#daughter
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
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This Is Where Reality Kicks In
Dad
had gone
over to
Judy's place in
order to drive her
back home for her birthday
celebration. But when he
got there, his eyes had grown wide at
the sight of his baby girl naked
and being humped by some guy in bed.
had gone
over to
Judy's place in
order to drive her
back home for her birthday
celebration. But when he
got there, his eyes had grown wide at
the sight of his baby girl naked
and being humped by some guy in bed.
#birthday
#daughter
#fiction
#home
#sex
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My Mom's Not Home... But Would I Do?
John came to massage Rene.
But instead, he found her daughter Heather.
She was naked and waiting.
But instead, he found her daughter Heather.
She was naked and waiting.
#daughter
#fiction
#home
#mother
#sex
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HIS Mercy On Thee....
HIS Mercy On Thee....
Thou steppedst into this world with a purpose,
And it's by HIS Grace for Glory,
Each moment HE hath led thee in HIS Care,
All thro' thy twenty years HE kept thee in HIS Bosom,
Each thought in thy mind is HIS Grace,
Each word thou uttereth is by HIS Power,
Each deed of thine is HIS Will to do,
And thy breath in thee is HIS Gift to seek Eternity.
Thou hast travelled twenty milestones in HIS Care,
And on this day thou hast steppedst into thy 21st milestone on earth,
That thou shall be in HIS Love till reaching...
Thou steppedst into this world with a purpose,
And it's by HIS Grace for Glory,
Each moment HE hath led thee in HIS Care,
All thro' thy twenty years HE kept thee in HIS Bosom,
Each thought in thy mind is HIS Grace,
Each word thou uttereth is by HIS Power,
Each deed of thine is HIS Will to do,
And thy breath in thee is HIS Gift to seek Eternity.
Thou hast travelled twenty milestones in HIS Care,
And on this day thou hast steppedst into thy 21st milestone on earth,
That thou shall be in HIS Love till reaching...
#daughter
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DU Poetry : Poems for and About Daughters Seeking Honest Critique