Poems for and About Daughters Seeking Honest Critique
#daughter
Poems for and about daughters seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Heirloom
A beautiful and brilliant woman,
With a horrible past,
Tries frantically to get away,
But it suckles at her breast.
A strong and independent woman,
Willingly bears the burden alone,
Taking care of her own mistakes
So a debt is never owed.
A broken and deserving woman,
Searching for the love she never had,
Too desperate to see
That unconditional love
was trying to hold her hand
A determined and resilient woman,
Set on proving them all wrong,
Career-focused, self-obsessed,
No room for the little...
With a horrible past,
Tries frantically to get away,
But it suckles at her breast.
A strong and independent woman,
Willingly bears the burden alone,
Taking care of her own mistakes
So a debt is never owed.
A broken and deserving woman,
Searching for the love she never had,
Too desperate to see
That unconditional love
was trying to hold her hand
A determined and resilient woman,
Set on proving them all wrong,
Career-focused, self-obsessed,
No room for the little...
#childhood
#daughter
#motherhood
#pregnancy
#teens
108 reads
1 Comment
Not His Daughter Anymore

#betrayal
#daughter
#fiction
#home
#sex
87 reads
0 Comments
When The Cops Showed Her A Video
Poor
Mom was
really
heartbroken when
the cops showed her a
video of Carol
naked and letting some guy
hump her before he picked up a
sharp push dagger and shoved that blade deep
into Carol a total of ten times.
Mom was
really
heartbroken when
the cops showed her a
video of Carol
naked and letting some guy
hump her before he picked up a
sharp push dagger and shoved that blade deep
into Carol a total of ten times.
#daughter
#death
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
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Storms of Diamonds and White Snakes (Cauldron Kill Series)

#curse
#daughter
#evil #sex
#evil #sex
108 reads
6 Comments
Cell Phone
cell phone
Walk around think I know it all
If I don’t I’ll look it up
Parents know nothing
Tell me what to do
God forbid say the wrong thing
Child chastising
Knowing in a piece of technology
Know nothing about being real
Pick em up put em in
Phone is out as soon as she’s in
Silence in the chamber
She saw something she wanted
Syllables leave her tongue
Don’t know who she is
Stranger in my life
How is this that
Walk with her pick a flower
Now she runs...
Walk around think I know it all
If I don’t I’ll look it up
Parents know nothing
Tell me what to do
God forbid say the wrong thing
Child chastising
Knowing in a piece of technology
Know nothing about being real
Pick em up put em in
Phone is out as soon as she’s in
Silence in the chamber
She saw something she wanted
Syllables leave her tongue
Don’t know who she is
Stranger in my life
How is this that
Walk with her pick a flower
Now she runs...
#daughter
#emptiness
#father
#love
#memories
106 reads
7 Comments
What Are You Doing?! Giving Me A Heart Attack?!
"Let's
get it
on right here
and right now" was
what Carl heard Judy
say before he peeked in
and saw her naked on the
living room sofa with some guy
standing next to her also in the
nude and ready to hump her on that spot.
get it
on right here
and right now" was
what Carl heard Judy
say before he peeked in
and saw her naked on the
living room sofa with some guy
standing next to her also in the
nude and ready to hump her on that spot.
#daughter
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#home
#sex
178 reads
4 Comments
Come Near My Daughter Again And I'll Kill You!!
Mom and Dad came home.
They caught some naked guy humping Jenna.
Dad chased that guy out.
They caught some naked guy humping Jenna.
Dad chased that guy out.
#corruption
#daughter
#fiction
#home
#sex
146 reads
4 Comments
Lost You When You Moved To California
I
lost you,
my darling
daughter. I lost
you when you moved to
California, got
conned into posing naked
for some magazine and died from
an overdose of drugs at some bash
that was going on at some jerk's beach house!
lost you,
my darling
daughter. I lost
you when you moved to
California, got
conned into posing naked
for some magazine and died from
an overdose of drugs at some bash
that was going on at some jerk's beach house!
#daughter
#death
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
124 reads
0 Comments
I Am Your Father And What I Say Goes
You
are not
going to
do this ever
again! I am your
father and what I say
goes! I mean it! No daughter
of mine is ever going to
flash her goodies in some skin mag no
matter how much money they're paying her!
are not
going to
do this ever
again! I am your
father and what I say
goes! I mean it! No daughter
of mine is ever going to
flash her goodies in some skin mag no
matter how much money they're paying her!
#daughter
#dialogue
#father
#fiction
#sex
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0 Comments
Love, Mom
I see you, my daughter.
Your pain is valid.
I hear you, my child.
Your voice, when ragged.
I support you, my girl.
No matter your plight.
You are my world.
Wrong or right.
When you are shunned.
You are not abandoned.
When you are wronged.
You are defended.
Life can make you feel alone.
On those days try to remember.
You are never on your own.
You belong to me forever.
Love
Mom.
Your pain is valid.
I hear you, my child.
Your voice, when ragged.
I support you, my girl.
No matter your plight.
You are my world.
Wrong or right.
When you are shunned.
You are not abandoned.
When you are wronged.
You are defended.
Life can make you feel alone.
On those days try to remember.
You are never on your own.
You belong to me forever.
Love
Mom.
#children
#daughter
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Oh, God! What Are You Doing To Our Baby?!
Arlene
came home and
found her
husband naked on
their bed and humping
Joyce, the young woman
who's still
a baby
to Mom.
came home and
found her
husband naked on
their bed and humping
Joyce, the young woman
who's still
a baby
to Mom.
#corruption
#daughter
#fiction
#home
#sex
188 reads
2 Comments
Mom! Wait! Give Me A Chance To Explain!
Meredith peeked into Susan's bedroom.
She saw some guy humping her daughter.
Susan's shocked to see Meredith.
She saw some guy humping her daughter.
Susan's shocked to see Meredith.
#daughter
#fiction
#home
#mother
#sex
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0 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems for and About Daughters Seeking Honest Critique