Poems About Dance Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about dance seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
5th Jun 2024 2:42pm
5th Jun 2024 2:42pm
Discovering self-love in coffee foam
In the great theater of life a lone man stands,
married to himself, in self-embrace he united.
Oh, joyful life, such a bright masquerade,
however, behind the mask misery escapes.
Ode to the joy of foam:
When the dawn light breaks, laughter in the air,
children play freely without a single care.
The warm pulse of love, a comforting embrace,
in the cradle of simplicity the tender grace of life.
The Agony of Coffee:
But behold! The skies darken, the storms are fierce,
man stumbles and falls as sorrows pierce. ...
married to himself, in self-embrace he united.
Oh, joyful life, such a bright masquerade,
however, behind the mask misery escapes.
Ode to the joy of foam:
When the dawn light breaks, laughter in the air,
children play freely without a single care.
The warm pulse of love, a comforting embrace,
in the cradle of simplicity the tender grace of life.
The Agony of Coffee:
But behold! The skies darken, the storms are fierce,
man stumbles and falls as sorrows pierce. ...
#confessional
#dance
#loneliness
#myself
#tragedy
185 reads
8 Comments
LilDragonFly
Poem Published
3rd Jun 2024 6:33am
3rd Jun 2024 6:33am
Dance of Life
We all come from far away
to have the chance to say
“May I have this dance”
as I again take a chance
to embrace the wide world
take this moment now unfurled
Savor every single smile
making this life so worth while
to have the chance to say
“May I have this dance”
as I again take a chance
to embrace the wide world
take this moment now unfurled
Savor every single smile
making this life so worth while
#confessional
#dance
#travel
#TruthOfLife
#WritingPoetry
8 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th May 2024 7:18pm
25th May 2024 7:18pm
Mark Sneaked Into A Nightclub
Mark sneaked into a nightclub.
He saw Jennifer doing a stripper act.
She tried to explain afterwards.
He saw Jennifer doing a stripper act.
She tried to explain afterwards.
#dance
#deception
#fiction
#friendship
#sensual
224 reads
0 Comments
ms_kitty_lagniappe
Ms K
Ms K
Poem Published
22nd May 2024 5:33pm
22nd May 2024 5:33pm
The Powerful Women of Big Daddy's
In the heart of Bourbon Street, we stood tall,
Not just survivors, but conquerors of all.
Through the haze of neon lights and nights so long,
Our strength was unmatched, unwavering, and strong.
Through the smoke and lights, in that raucous din,
We ruled the nights with unwavering grins.
We stood tall in five-inch heels,
Ruling the night, an unstoppable force,
Strong women, never weak, never yielding,
Surviving the men, surviving the scene,
Management's grip, and the struggles unseen.
Heels like daggers, five inches high,
Sent many a...
Not just survivors, but conquerors of all.
Through the haze of neon lights and nights so long,
Our strength was unmatched, unwavering, and strong.
Through the smoke and lights, in that raucous din,
We ruled the nights with unwavering grins.
We stood tall in five-inch heels,
Ruling the night, an unstoppable force,
Strong women, never weak, never yielding,
Surviving the men, surviving the scene,
Management's grip, and the struggles unseen.
Heels like daggers, five inches high,
Sent many a...
#dance
#freedom
#job
138 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
21st May 2024 11:02pm
21st May 2024 11:02pm
Queen of dance
#dance
#dreams
#sexy
245 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th May 2024 2:41am
11th May 2024 2:41am
Discovered That She Was Hungover, Alone And Naked
She
opened
her eyes and
discovered that
she was hungover,
alone and naked with
no way of knowing how she
got to be that way and why but
that was before she remembered that
she went to a party with some dorm mates.
opened
her eyes and
discovered that
she was hungover,
alone and naked with
no way of knowing how she
got to be that way and why but
that was before she remembered that
she went to a party with some dorm mates.
#alcohol
#dance
#dating
#fiction
#music
262 reads
4 Comments
QuinnARichardson
Poem Published
9th May 2024 7:17pm
9th May 2024 7:17pm
Oh Yeah!
Dancing at the ball, oh yeah!
Blue Girl, she's so fine
She can dance and she can fly.
Blue Girl, she's so fine
She can dance and she can fly.
#dance
#funny
147 reads
2 Comments
QuinnARichardson
Poem Published
7th May 2024 9:05am
7th May 2024 9:05am
Dancing
A blue sand girl? How absurd
Can she dance well, sir?
Let us clap to the music!
Can she dance well, sir?
Let us clap to the music!
#dance
#love
140 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd May 2024 7:47pm
3rd May 2024 7:47pm
What Are You Doing Here? Are You Spying On Me?
Iris
gets on stage
at this
strip club and starts to
dance before she sees
in the audience
her first
dorm roommate
Chloe.
gets on stage
at this
strip club and starts to
dance before she sees
in the audience
her first
dorm roommate
Chloe.
#dance
#fiction
#friendship
#secrets
#sensual
202 reads
0 Comments
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 8:48am
19th Apr 2024 8:48am
Homage to Modern Minstrel Philosophers - Contemporary Sage
My first encounter
with Natalie
was watching her
appearance
on a late night talk show
She sang so beautifully
in her sonorous,
silky alto.
Lithely dancing
to the rhythm,
arms extended, undulating,
hands moving
in Hula or
Flamenco-like
motions.
A one sided romance
began to bud.
Dare I say?
I fell in love
with this free-spirited
songstress
and her captivating performance.
Her music teaches me
to pay more attention
to the human condition.
To do what I can to lighten...
with Natalie
was watching her
appearance
on a late night talk show
She sang so beautifully
in her sonorous,
silky alto.
Lithely dancing
to the rhythm,
arms extended, undulating,
hands moving
in Hula or
Flamenco-like
motions.
A one sided romance
began to bud.
Dare I say?
I fell in love
with this free-spirited
songstress
and her captivating performance.
Her music teaches me
to pay more attention
to the human condition.
To do what I can to lighten...
#dance
#gratitude
#kindness
#music
#women
147 reads
0 Comments
Kinkwizard_95
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 4:33pm
1st Apr 2024 4:33pm
Party season has officially begun
Last night was intense
Bright lights and much suspense
Smiles and laughter
Dancing forever after
Old friends and many new
Dreams awaiting to pursue
I was back among my youth
Cousin smashin’ it in the dj booth
Girls bringing that feminine mystique
Boys grinning from cheek to cheek
What a night, what a ride
My glee I truly can’t hide
I had everyone bopping
Grooving and rocking
The beats were the best
Put my moves to the test
I feel ecstatic, revived
Goddamn it, I feel alive!
...
Bright lights and much suspense
Smiles and laughter
Dancing forever after
Old friends and many new
Dreams awaiting to pursue
I was back among my youth
Cousin smashin’ it in the dj booth
Girls bringing that feminine mystique
Boys grinning from cheek to cheek
What a night, what a ride
My glee I truly can’t hide
I had everyone bopping
Grooving and rocking
The beats were the best
Put my moves to the test
I feel ecstatic, revived
Goddamn it, I feel alive!
...
#happiness
#myself
#dance #NaPoWriMo2024
#dance #NaPoWriMo2024
194 reads
5 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
12th Mar 2024 2:10am
12th Mar 2024 2:10am
Esalen
I remember a big room
some central lodge perhaps
empty
a song playing loudly
and not just any song
a song of exquisite joy
Tom Petty's
American Girl
Barely thinking
I step into the song
and I dance
I dance with my long blonde hair flying
l dance like a dervish from a veiled lifetime
I dance with abandon because I'm 22 and want to kill myself
and who cares if I'm foolish
if I don't have to remember it
I dance because I worship music
I dance because I'm a prayer in motion
I dance because...
some central lodge perhaps
empty
a song playing loudly
and not just any song
a song of exquisite joy
Tom Petty's
American Girl
Barely thinking
I step into the song
and I dance
I dance with my long blonde hair flying
l dance like a dervish from a veiled lifetime
I dance with abandon because I'm 22 and want to kill myself
and who cares if I'm foolish
if I don't have to remember it
I dance because I worship music
I dance because I'm a prayer in motion
I dance because...
#music
#magic
#dance
272 reads
14 Comments
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