Poems About a Crush by Top Critiquers
#crush
Poems about a crush by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
PAR
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 5:19pm
29th Oct 2024 5:19pm
Cinnamon' Pumpkin Sardonic Smile
I don't want to carve a pumpkin,
I want to shape it with tender hands,
crafting contours that capture your smile,
the warmth that lights up the room.
Orange flesh beneath my touch,
transforms with each careful movement,
until the lines mirror your joy,
etched in the ephemeral surface.
No sharp edges or hollow eyes,
only the gentle curve of laughter
and the softness of a thousand shared moments,
whispered secrets held in the glow.
In this creation, fleeting and fragile,
I find a piece of you,
a...
I want to shape it with tender hands,
crafting contours that capture your smile,
the warmth that lights up the room.
Orange flesh beneath my touch,
transforms with each careful movement,
until the lines mirror your joy,
etched in the ephemeral surface.
No sharp edges or hollow eyes,
only the gentle curve of laughter
and the softness of a thousand shared moments,
whispered secrets held in the glow.
In this creation, fleeting and fragile,
I find a piece of you,
a...
#crush
#dark
#despair
#evil
#ghosts
83 reads
7 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
15th May 2021 9:20am
15th May 2021 9:20am
Relax
Open your mind
Not your legs
Look me in the eyes
Im safe
I can be a home
This is your place
Dont be a stranger
Let me see your face
Give me a number
Or let me stay
We could be forever
Or dissipate
Dont forget your things
Thats too much weight
I could be a crane
But i still break
Dont close your eyes
Stay awake
Come into the light
Drop the shade
Im your free ride
Not a maze
Give me your mind
Ill give you faith
You could be a god
Ill be your saint
Not your legs
Look me in the eyes
Im safe
I can be a home
This is your place
Dont be a stranger
Let me see your face
Give me a number
Or let me stay
We could be forever
Or dissipate
Dont forget your things
Thats too much weight
I could be a crane
But i still break
Dont close your eyes
Stay awake
Come into the light
Drop the shade
Im your free ride
Not a maze
Give me your mind
Ill give you faith
You could be a god
Ill be your saint
#FallingInLove
#crush
632 reads
5 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 3:10am
21st Nov 2024 3:10am
I'm happy just to know you're there
On occasion, our paths cross:
fragments of interaction
encouragement
kindness
laughter
Even more infrequently, a conversation:
immediately comfortable
close and vulnerable
deep support
understanding
more laughter
I won't tell you
how these connections light up my heart
To say it aloud
would bring a weight of expectation
I don't care
if it's mutual or not
I'm happy just to know you're there
When we are nothing but starlight
I'm...
fragments of interaction
encouragement
kindness
laughter
Even more infrequently, a conversation:
immediately comfortable
close and vulnerable
deep support
understanding
more laughter
I won't tell you
how these connections light up my heart
To say it aloud
would bring a weight of expectation
I don't care
if it's mutual or not
I'm happy just to know you're there
When we are nothing but starlight
I'm...
#crush
#friendship
#respect #support
#respect #support
153 reads
20 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
11th Oct 2019 8:27pm
11th Oct 2019 8:27pm
Taming A Wolf
#lust
#sex
#crush #passion
#crush #passion
1385 reads
16 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
20th Oct 2024 5:19am
20th Oct 2024 5:19am
A Love Across Eternity
have lived
more than a
million lifetimes
searching
longly
for you
a million more
loving you
from afar
achimgly
waiting
to be noticed
then there's the
lifetimes we've
been together
where were
the most passionate
of lovers
now this
lifetime i
await the sign
of which
true connection
we are once
again
more than a
million lifetimes
searching
longly
for you
a million more
loving you
from afar
achimgly
waiting
to be noticed
then there's the
lifetimes we've
been together
where were
the most passionate
of lovers
now this
lifetime i
await the sign
of which
true connection
we are once
again
#crush
#FallingInLove
#love
#lover
#UnrequitedLove
187 reads
9 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
29th Sep 2022 11:07pm
29th Sep 2022 11:07pm
IT WAS WILD chapter 1 part 2 of 5
#anxiety
#crush
#passion
239 reads
2 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
9th Apr 2022 8:02am
9th Apr 2022 8:02am
Verbal Foreplay
I am
Home alone but never lonely
Vibin metaphysically on
My one and only
I condense time into a poetic capsule
Emotions become emulsified
Densified
Blood rushed
Thickened with hunger
Strickened with a 15 year hangover
As this lingering becomes a longing
Stretched by distance
In need of immediate nursing
But hear me tho
This patient is patient
Indeed
Waiting to touch and be felt
To see and be recognized
To smell and be be remembered in reciprocity
To...
Home alone but never lonely
Vibin metaphysically on
My one and only
I condense time into a poetic capsule
Emotions become emulsified
Densified
Blood rushed
Thickened with hunger
Strickened with a 15 year hangover
As this lingering becomes a longing
Stretched by distance
In need of immediate nursing
But hear me tho
This patient is patient
Indeed
Waiting to touch and be felt
To see and be recognized
To smell and be be remembered in reciprocity
To...
#lust
#forgiveness
#lover #crush
#lover #crush
449 reads
0 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
30th Nov 2022 6:09pm
30th Nov 2022 6:09pm
Fairy Love
Although I've been known to jest
To put an individual's intellect to test
When it comes to you, I find myself stressed
Because on every level you've surpassed the rest
I love you for the mind that you display
Your quick wit and the things that you say
Nothing intentionally abusive, but enough for me to pay
Attention to more than just your physical display
Was I lucky did I get a smile
Please don't under estimate the power of your smile
It has the power to transform my destiny
Interlocking two beings, you and me ...
To put an individual's intellect to test
When it comes to you, I find myself stressed
Because on every level you've surpassed the rest
I love you for the mind that you display
Your quick wit and the things that you say
Nothing intentionally abusive, but enough for me to pay
Attention to more than just your physical display
Was I lucky did I get a smile
Please don't under estimate the power of your smile
It has the power to transform my destiny
Interlocking two beings, you and me ...
#love
#FallingInLove
#crush
734 reads
9 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
14th Apr 2022 4:51pm
14th Apr 2022 4:51pm
My Mind's Eye - with Her
I yearn for you
My longing
An uncontrolled ascension
With bittersweet glimpses
Into the feat of us
Though death cannot part
The yearning for my passion
I see you in my mind's eye
A lusting passion
A rage of my will
Not to be contained
To worship your perfect form
To explore the various parts
Of who we were
Before touching the contours
Of your face
Would ensue
A rapture of no equivalent
My longing
An uncontrolled ascension
With bittersweet glimpses
Into the feat of us
Though death cannot part
The yearning for my passion
I see you in my mind's eye
A lusting passion
A rage of my will
Not to be contained
To worship your perfect form
To explore the various parts
Of who we were
Before touching the contours
Of your face
Would ensue
A rapture of no equivalent
#erotic
#sensual
#crush #collaboration
#crush #collaboration
550 reads
2 Comments
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 2:37pm
9th Nov 2024 2:37pm
What Could’ve Been
Time has passed
We’ve both changed
From what, where, why and when
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We’re two different people
From those kids we knew
Even though we resemble them
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
It was a missed opportunity of yesteryear
When we labeled each other as,
Just a friend
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We both have different lives
Other lovers...
We’ve both changed
From what, where, why and when
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We’re two different people
From those kids we knew
Even though we resemble them
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
It was a missed opportunity of yesteryear
When we labeled each other as,
Just a friend
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We both have different lives
Other lovers...
#crush
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#obsession
#respect
205 reads
8 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 6:41pm
16th Dec 2024 6:41pm
Celebrity Fantasy Crushes...
#crush
#PopCulture
#sex
74 reads
6 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
28th May 2020 00:32am
28th May 2020 00:32am
Freyja
songs of longing
caresses of cold air
closed eyes savouring
scents of rhododendrons
blushes to warm cheeks
hear voices words smiles
echoes in cathedrals
of a dictionary of senses
pins stuck on skin pores
pain of recollections
ecstasy of waking dreams
grasping fading voices.
caresses of cold air
closed eyes savouring
scents of rhododendrons
blushes to warm cheeks
hear voices words smiles
echoes in cathedrals
of a dictionary of senses
pins stuck on skin pores
pain of recollections
ecstasy of waking dreams
grasping fading voices.
#crush
#emotions
570 reads
4 Comments
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