Poems About a Crush by Top Critiquers
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Poems about a crush by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Wanchorage
Like the city with a similar name
Wanchorage is a beautiful place,
with mountains greeting the ocean,
big bouncy whales
breaching their asses off,
and eagles riding air currents
like magic carpets
through endless azure skies.
Everyone in Wanchorage
has a mate,
a virtually perfect one
with whom they are virtually certain
they'd share a lifetime of sexual ecstasy
and day to day biss.
No one
is to say they are wrong.
No one is to say
there is someplace else they should be.
No one is to say ...
Wanchorage is a beautiful place,
with mountains greeting the ocean,
big bouncy whales
breaching their asses off,
and eagles riding air currents
like magic carpets
through endless azure skies.
Everyone in Wanchorage
has a mate,
a virtually perfect one
with whom they are virtually certain
they'd share a lifetime of sexual ecstasy
and day to day biss.
No one
is to say they are wrong.
No one is to say
there is someplace else they should be.
No one is to say ...
#happiness
#love
#magic
#escape
#crush
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4 Comments
Woman of Power
Live and let die, Oh! Scent of a Woman (haa!)..
Live and let die, Oh! Scent of a Flower (haa! )..
Live and let me die, Oh! You Woman of Power (haa!)..
The love recipe you fed me curved up my brain shaping up Parabola..
Your body figure's like that of the bottle of Coca-Cola..
Gonna keep this in mind when life turns you into a sexy mama..
Every breed of mine will live to address you as their mama..
They all face me and despair every dead eater.
For me your love spell compelled me...
Live and let die, Oh! Scent of a Flower (haa! )..
Live and let me die, Oh! You Woman of Power (haa!)..
The love recipe you fed me curved up my brain shaping up Parabola..
Your body figure's like that of the bottle of Coca-Cola..
Gonna keep this in mind when life turns you into a sexy mama..
Every breed of mine will live to address you as their mama..
They all face me and despair every dead eater.
For me your love spell compelled me...
#crush
#obsession
592 reads
2 Comments
Just Sometimes...
I'd love to run my hands over you
Fingers through your hair
Hold your face in my hands
Body pressed
Kissed, savage your lips
Searching for deep
That moment of lost
The sharing of breath
In hungry devour
Swim the ocean of you
Wrapped up with me
In soul aching need
Quench the burn
Turn me on
Every curve
Soft to my hard
The need that I want
Is this how love starts
Fingers through your hair
Hold your face in my hands
Body pressed
Kissed, savage your lips
Searching for deep
That moment of lost
The sharing of breath
In hungry devour
Swim the ocean of you
Wrapped up with me
In soul aching need
Quench the burn
Turn me on
Every curve
Soft to my hard
The need that I want
Is this how love starts
#love
#lust
#lover
#crush
#passion
472 reads
7 Comments
step inside my skin
Step inside my skin
run your fingers over
my loneliness
and turn it into something new
I'll pretend I'm not drowning in it
when the empty side of the bed
grows cold
We laugh so hard
we turn to puddles on the floor
and I breathe in every
gasping breath of you
between the happy tears
that remind me I'm human
that you're human
that we get to be human together
Step inside my skin
pretend you're the answer
to a question no one's asking
to a...
run your fingers over
my loneliness
and turn it into something new
I'll pretend I'm not drowning in it
when the empty side of the bed
grows cold
We laugh so hard
we turn to puddles on the floor
and I breathe in every
gasping breath of you
between the happy tears
that remind me I'm human
that you're human
that we get to be human together
Step inside my skin
pretend you're the answer
to a question no one's asking
to a...
#crush
#friendship
#love
#lust
#unicorns
198 reads
4 Comments
steal away (one hour)
if i
could
steal away
one hour
of her,
this
collection
of us
somehow
together,
our course
continues,
now with
each moment
realized,
i can
remember
back then.
could
steal away
one hour
of her,
this
collection
of us
somehow
together,
our course
continues,
now with
each moment
realized,
i can
remember
back then.
#admiration
#crush
#romantic
200 reads
4 Comments
My Mind's Eye - with Her
I yearn for you
My longing
An uncontrolled ascension
With bittersweet glimpses
Into the feat of us
Though death cannot part
The yearning for my passion
I see you in my mind's eye
A lusting passion
A rage of my will
Not to be contained
To worship your perfect form
To explore the various parts
Of who we were
Before touching the contours
Of your face
Would ensue
A rapture of no equivalent
My longing
An uncontrolled ascension
With bittersweet glimpses
Into the feat of us
Though death cannot part
The yearning for my passion
I see you in my mind's eye
A lusting passion
A rage of my will
Not to be contained
To worship your perfect form
To explore the various parts
Of who we were
Before touching the contours
Of your face
Would ensue
A rapture of no equivalent
#erotic
#sensual
#crush #collaboration
#crush #collaboration
591 reads
2 Comments
Fairy Love
Although I've been known to jest
To put an individual's intellect to test
When it comes to you, I find myself stressed
Because on every level you've surpassed the rest
I love you for the mind that you display
Your quick wit and the things that you say
Nothing intentionally abusive, but enough for me to pay
Attention to more than just your physical display
Was I lucky did I get a smile
Please don't under estimate the power of your smile
It has the power to transform my destiny
Interlocking two beings, you and me ...
To put an individual's intellect to test
When it comes to you, I find myself stressed
Because on every level you've surpassed the rest
I love you for the mind that you display
Your quick wit and the things that you say
Nothing intentionally abusive, but enough for me to pay
Attention to more than just your physical display
Was I lucky did I get a smile
Please don't under estimate the power of your smile
It has the power to transform my destiny
Interlocking two beings, you and me ...
#love
#FallingInLove
#crush
807 reads
9 Comments
i'm thinking...
i am thinking
about kissing you,
standing among
scented candles
i am thinking
of kissing you,
i am thinking
of kissing you
in that wonderful
moment when
the sun is
about to set
and
the moon is
about to rise,
i am thinking
of kissing the cracks
in your lips
that always
drip honey,
i always loved
hairy chest,
i go crazy
when I see it,
before i unzip
your pants,
i am thinking of
designing your chest
with blue kisses,
i am...
about kissing you,
standing among
scented candles
i am thinking
of kissing you,
i am thinking
of kissing you
in that wonderful
moment when
the sun is
about to set
and
the moon is
about to rise,
i am thinking
of kissing the cracks
in your lips
that always
drip honey,
i always loved
hairy chest,
i go crazy
when I see it,
before i unzip
your pants,
i am thinking of
designing your chest
with blue kisses,
i am...
#crush
#love
#romantic
510 reads
16 Comments
Taming A Wolf

#lust
#sex
#crush #passion
#crush #passion
1419 reads
16 Comments
Deep Down Underground
He tried to bury it deep down underground
But this thing, it still came up for air
He sought to cover it in his soul trying to get a hold
Of the emotion that grows within in despair
And yet the sensation leaves him in a state of pure elation
A conundrum of willpower, frailty, and control
The fixation rocks him to the very core of his foundations
Wondering why the sweet affliction is taking its toll
But this thing, it still came up for air
He sought to cover it in his soul trying to get a hold
Of the emotion that grows within in despair
And yet the sensation leaves him in a state of pure elation
A conundrum of willpower, frailty, and control
The fixation rocks him to the very core of his foundations
Wondering why the sweet affliction is taking its toll
#love
#crush
235 reads
6 Comments
Metamorphosis of an Angel
Metamorphosis of an Angel
Auburn fire that burns deep down
With ions dancing in her blue eyes
Like angels on a needle head
But her panoramic irises a field for winged seraphs
Where poppies blossom under a midnight moon
Whose ellipse is a baroque design on ruby crescent
Of lips born to light the pilgrim’s path
While traveling the scimitar of glossy flame
With azure amulet suspended on ivory neck
Emblem of a feminine coat of arms
And feline earring hanging like the meow of her smile
When blue glass orbs rise over wine dark...
Auburn fire that burns deep down
With ions dancing in her blue eyes
Like angels on a needle head
But her panoramic irises a field for winged seraphs
Where poppies blossom under a midnight moon
Whose ellipse is a baroque design on ruby crescent
Of lips born to light the pilgrim’s path
While traveling the scimitar of glossy flame
With azure amulet suspended on ivory neck
Emblem of a feminine coat of arms
And feline earring hanging like the meow of her smile
When blue glass orbs rise over wine dark...
#beauty
#crush
#seductive
#sensual
#women
197 reads
4 Comments
You must be in love...
Your eyes shimmer
like stars so dewy
Your face blossoms
with smile of a beauty
You must be in love…
like stars so dewy
Your face blossoms
with smile of a beauty
You must be in love…
#crush
#FallingInLove
#love
#minimalist
#stars
321 reads
17 Comments
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