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You must be in love...
Your eyes shimmer
like stars so dewy
Your face blossoms
with smile of a beauty
You must be in love…
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Re. You must be in love...
1st Oct 2024 6:10pm
Those few words that comes with the depths of your own thoughts are invoke memories of what it feels like to be loved 😍💪👍🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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1st Oct 2024 6:52pm
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1st Oct 2024 9:39pm
Re. You must be in love...
1st Oct 2024 7:08pm
Very sweet, felt like a friend teasing another to get information out of them. Like this
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1st Oct 2024 7:09pm
Re. You must be in love...
1st Oct 2024 9:08pm
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2nd Oct 2024 11:15am
Re. You must be in love...
1st Oct 2024 11:40pm
Dear I,
I enjoyed how you captured that ethereal beauty when everything feels right in the universe of love. Very pretty write. H🌷
I enjoyed how you captured that ethereal beauty when everything feels right in the universe of love. Very pretty write. H🌷
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Re: Re. You must be in love...
2nd Oct 2024 2:42pm
Re. You must be in love...
1st Oct 2024 11:49pm
I really like the power and simplicity of this poem.
It's very true.
Regards James
It's very true.
Regards James
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2nd Oct 2024 11:15am
Re. You must be in love...
2nd Oct 2024 1:09am
Or I’m having a heat stroke… OMG I’m having both a heat stroke and I’m in love … oh Wow
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