Collaboration by Top Critiquers Poems
#collaboration
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 6:47pm
18th Nov 2024 6:47pm
Our Hearts Beat As One (Whispers of Love) (collab w/ Sappho)
To you, as you light up the sky
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your Ruby lips
Velvety and sweet like cherry wine
Need to be sealed with a kiss
That echoes in divine dimensions of
Future times
Eternally yours as the moon is ever so bright ...
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your Ruby lips
Velvety and sweet like cherry wine
Need to be sealed with a kiss
That echoes in divine dimensions of
Future times
Eternally yours as the moon is ever so bright ...
#collaboration
#FallingInLove
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
177 reads
2 Comments
Her
Poem Published
24th Apr 2024 7:17pm
24th Apr 2024 7:17pm
Stars in Our Eyes - with the talented SamNash
#collaboration
#erotic
#passion
199 reads
21 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
15th Jul 2024 7:05pm
15th Jul 2024 7:05pm
See Thru Me (With LilDragonFly)
I always polish myself
So you might look in my direction
Catch a glimpse of my reflection
When you look in your rear view
I saw what you have done
Creating this connection
Sweet is the reflection
To witness with these blue eyes
Perhaps see the real me
Remember all you forgot
Love me… or love me not
Just unjustly tossed aside
I feel you slipping
It is my fault
I created this vault
Not allowing you inside
Then turn our...
So you might look in my direction
Catch a glimpse of my reflection
When you look in your rear view
I saw what you have done
Creating this connection
Sweet is the reflection
To witness with these blue eyes
Perhaps see the real me
Remember all you forgot
Love me… or love me not
Just unjustly tossed aside
I feel you slipping
It is my fault
I created this vault
Not allowing you inside
Then turn our...
#collaboration
#SelfDiscovery
51 reads
17 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 3:47pm
20th Nov 2024 3:47pm
unperceived in the ominous woods~with the talented Sage_6_paths_light
the darkness beckons
and I come forth willingly, into the unknown
sensing something forbodeing, I draw back to the shadows
the trees are silent it's eerie
forsake the angels
it's a spell their under
I've always been friend to the trees
today they loom large
the forest smells of copper pennies
an unmistakable tang
withdrawing further, a tree warns
a madman is afoot
with wild eyes and smile that chills
my blood runs cold, as I catch sight of him
Bloodlust in the air
Hard to breath my thoughts...
and I come forth willingly, into the unknown
sensing something forbodeing, I draw back to the shadows
the trees are silent it's eerie
forsake the angels
it's a spell their under
I've always been friend to the trees
today they loom large
the forest smells of copper pennies
an unmistakable tang
withdrawing further, a tree warns
a madman is afoot
with wild eyes and smile that chills
my blood runs cold, as I catch sight of him
Bloodlust in the air
Hard to breath my thoughts...
#collaboration
#dark
91 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 1:07am
19th Jan 2025 1:07am
Within the light of hope
There will come a time when you lose your sense of tolerance, and you have become blinded by the negativity that suddenly. Surrounds you that you feel that you have to sacrifice your own thoughts and insight into not believing. THAT you have to be able to separate thyself, in your own spiritual existence reaching far from the negativity. For your own subconsciousness, to be involved in creating, your own best image of yourself. Yet you are told that it's not possible to achieve, that what we see and believe. For sure we will never know what we can't achieve, if you don't believe that we can...
#collaboration
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
28 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
13th May 2021 9:00pm
13th May 2021 9:00pm
Black Swans Night Call with KristinaX
Push me tightly into the walls,
With a jerk, steal my breath
I feel the veins tremble,
With you dominating my mind
I haven't been forceful enough
Let you down
You need CONTROL
Things will be different now
You will tell me: “Baby, cry!
After all, no one hears you ... ”
You are my Lord, the Executioner,
Who writes the script
I let love get in the way
Broke my own damn rules
Push and pull
Heart strings need stretching
Weaving a knot in my braids
You twine like a boa around my neck ...
With a jerk, steal my breath
I feel the veins tremble,
With you dominating my mind
I haven't been forceful enough
Let you down
You need CONTROL
Things will be different now
You will tell me: “Baby, cry!
After all, no one hears you ... ”
You are my Lord, the Executioner,
Who writes the script
I let love get in the way
Broke my own damn rules
Push and pull
Heart strings need stretching
Weaving a knot in my braids
You twine like a boa around my neck ...
#dark
#erotic
#BDSM
#TruthOfLife
#collaboration
790 reads
10 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2024 2:58am
2nd Jul 2024 2:58am
All night last night. - With EveAteRedApples
#bisexual
#collaboration
#erotic
#lesbian
#lust
459 reads
11 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
4th Jan 2024 10:19am
4th Jan 2024 10:19am
We are creation\Verse two\cowrite PAR`\Paulo and Anne-Ri999
VERSE TWO
Bone bird
rattles abundant feathers
we writhe
through red crested trail
of belonging
The singing of night birds...
Precious stones
glacier glow
forming musing music
caskets crescent
in the lap of dawn!
Dusky magenta glows
of beauty, beheld
chestnut chest
rare, innocent and vain.
oracular branches
bleeding entwined
What to love about birds
is not the ability to
fly, but...
the capacity they have
to land.
...
Bone bird
rattles abundant feathers
we writhe
through red crested trail
of belonging
The singing of night birds...
Precious stones
glacier glow
forming musing music
caskets crescent
in the lap of dawn!
Dusky magenta glows
of beauty, beheld
chestnut chest
rare, innocent and vain.
oracular branches
bleeding entwined
What to love about birds
is not the ability to
fly, but...
the capacity they have
to land.
...
#collaboration
#beauty
#birds #LifeCycle
#birds #LifeCycle
125 reads
0 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
7th Jul 2022 1:59am
7th Jul 2022 1:59am
His Beckoning Whispers From The Calling Of Infinity
#lust
#lover
#collaboration #passion
#collaboration #passion
454 reads
13 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
28th Nov 2020 4:58pm
28th Nov 2020 4:58pm
the epitome of nothings (a robuma collab)
Death do as you wish.
Paint the skies morphine black
Let a blinded artist collect
Falling stars on an evergreen palette.
in an existential cesspool
lay askew fractured black lotuses
(unheard of solid pastures
from jarring open mirage bubble)
of crushed widow~ necks
in latencies of chronic hemorrhagic
silently culling deaths- a boggy
pulldown burial betrayal... right
below their distorted thready feeble
reeds of tangled grounds- that for
once dangles free... to severed ...
Paint the skies morphine black
Let a blinded artist collect
Falling stars on an evergreen palette.
in an existential cesspool
lay askew fractured black lotuses
(unheard of solid pastures
from jarring open mirage bubble)
of crushed widow~ necks
in latencies of chronic hemorrhagic
silently culling deaths- a boggy
pulldown burial betrayal... right
below their distorted thready feeble
reeds of tangled grounds- that for
once dangles free... to severed ...
#love
#hope
#death
#faith
#collaboration
478 reads
3 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 10:13pm
19th Jan 2025 10:13pm
A Throbbing Scent - with adagio
Pale lips of blue perishable breath
Silence without cliches, listening,
Stuck upon a memory that you are
Blossoming in death’s trite without
Critique in my slumber as I sleep
***
Stirred is the mind by a throbbing scent
Soul refilled straying off an end
A warm love unearthed now blooming
So soft the sound of a seed life sipping
Silence just retreated while smiling..
Silence without cliches, listening,
Stuck upon a memory that you are
Blossoming in death’s trite without
Critique in my slumber as I sleep
***
Stirred is the mind by a throbbing scent
Soul refilled straying off an end
A warm love unearthed now blooming
So soft the sound of a seed life sipping
Silence just retreated while smiling..
#collaboration
#rebirth
#spiritual
55 reads
6 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
Today 1:21am
Today 1:21am
2 Parts Vodka - with deliabear
Haunting episodes on the Lenovo, two parts
vodka, one part paranoia listening to the hard
drive stirring memories defragging the mind
with a clean slate and stepping away from
Lenovo's siblings on eBook screaming insanity
as the fiend hungers with the absence of a name
plunging its teeth into the globally crazed insane
converging heart in Lenovo's grip, sanity shreds
apart
vodka, one part paranoia listening to the hard
drive stirring memories defragging the mind
with a clean slate and stepping away from
Lenovo's siblings on eBook screaming insanity
as the fiend hungers with the absence of a name
plunging its teeth into the globally crazed insane
converging heart in Lenovo's grip, sanity shreds
apart
#anxiety
#collaboration
#dark
32 reads
2 Comments
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