Collaboration Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#collaboration
Thirst
Lusting pastels
melting pink.
Flowing
down the contours of flesh.
The smell of sweet, ripened fruit.
Decanter the scent.
Delicious inside my palate.
Rushing floods
wet my taste,
quenching my stout.
Put your nose
against the blossom of desire
and inhale the essence
as the aphrodisiac
that ravishes your brain.
Place your lips
on the blooming succulence
and nourish your thirst
with its delicacy.
melting pink.
Flowing
down the contours of flesh.
The smell of sweet, ripened fruit.
Decanter the scent.
Delicious inside my palate.
Rushing floods
wet my taste,
quenching my stout.
Put your nose
against the blossom of desire
and inhale the essence
as the aphrodisiac
that ravishes your brain.
Place your lips
on the blooming succulence
and nourish your thirst
with its delicacy.
#collaboration
#passion
#seductive
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Lucifer~with the talented Thor_azine
oh ye demon of blood's own lust
the gatekeeper queries
what manner of beast are you?
my glory awaits me in hell's domain
speak of damnation and say my name
my gown torn, a shrouded creature laments
in the shadows dawning a nightmare
acidic dawn touches the dark
and I shiver
with a wicked glean in the eye
you terrorize
speak smoke and tell me
who you are
I am he that creepeth to and fro
born of the alchemy unto death,
a usurper in shadows.
Your damnation rests sweetly upon ...
the gatekeeper queries
what manner of beast are you?
my glory awaits me in hell's domain
speak of damnation and say my name
my gown torn, a shrouded creature laments
in the shadows dawning a nightmare
acidic dawn touches the dark
and I shiver
with a wicked glean in the eye
you terrorize
speak smoke and tell me
who you are
I am he that creepeth to and fro
born of the alchemy unto death,
a usurper in shadows.
Your damnation rests sweetly upon ...
#lust
#dark
#collaboration
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We are creation\Verse two\cowrite PAR`\Paulo and Anne-Ri999
VERSE TWO
Bone bird
rattles abundant feathers
we writhe
through red crested trail
of belonging
The singing of night birds...
Precious stones
glacier glow
forming musing music
caskets crescent
in the lap of dawn!
Dusky magenta glows
of beauty, beheld
chestnut chest
rare, innocent and vain.
oracular branches
bleeding entwined
What to love about birds
is not the ability to
fly, but...
the capacity they have
to land.
...
Bone bird
rattles abundant feathers
we writhe
through red crested trail
of belonging
The singing of night birds...
Precious stones
glacier glow
forming musing music
caskets crescent
in the lap of dawn!
Dusky magenta glows
of beauty, beheld
chestnut chest
rare, innocent and vain.
oracular branches
bleeding entwined
What to love about birds
is not the ability to
fly, but...
the capacity they have
to land.
...
#collaboration
#beauty
#birds #LifeCycle
#birds #LifeCycle
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We are creation, verse one by Paulo\PAR and Anne-Ri999
Sleep awakens
from glassy shards
that once were my eyes
ponds of Aphrodite
where humans
may once yet awaken
o necromantic shade
night my knight
the sound and scents
speak
my name
then a body
that falls slowly
psychotic vertigo
bird body
that trembles
in a rare strange frenzy
unexpected weight
of empty days
and dry eyes
copyrights © owned by Ri and Par
from glassy shards
that once were my eyes
ponds of Aphrodite
where humans
may once yet awaken
o necromantic shade
night my knight
the sound and scents
speak
my name
then a body
that falls slowly
psychotic vertigo
bird body
that trembles
in a rare strange frenzy
unexpected weight
of empty days
and dry eyes
copyrights © owned by Ri and Par
#collaboration
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soul bond with the sexy DeathKitty_134
your soul spoke to me of wishes
and a dark bleeding of feeling
I seek to touch you in the maddening time
images, painted in monochromatic flow
souls meeting in the void
you pulled away walking down the dark corridor of the bleak
I could not see where I ended, and you began
we began and ended in our vulnerabilities
there is an us and a we I could never compute, until, eyes, sound, heart pulled me through
sanctuary in the abyss
holding each other tightly
until we were pulled apart
screaming no I saw you smile ...
and a dark bleeding of feeling
I seek to touch you in the maddening time
images, painted in monochromatic flow
souls meeting in the void
you pulled away walking down the dark corridor of the bleak
I could not see where I ended, and you began
we began and ended in our vulnerabilities
there is an us and a we I could never compute, until, eyes, sound, heart pulled me through
sanctuary in the abyss
holding each other tightly
until we were pulled apart
screaming no I saw you smile ...
#love
#friendship
#stars #collaboration
#stars #collaboration
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beckons the dark temptation~with the talented buddhakitty
my madness spoke in numbers
the ones leading to you
the odds of us finding each other are one in a million
your hunger whispered to my dark
and from there urgency conspired
I lust your danger and I felt your need,
it matched my own so intensely
I hide it well that you should call it to the surface is unnerving
victim of fate
you roll the dice with me
coming up all sixes
the numbers don't lie, babe
hunting shadows I devour your emptiness with my own
stars play the blues,
the moon sings songs
of dirt ...
the ones leading to you
the odds of us finding each other are one in a million
your hunger whispered to my dark
and from there urgency conspired
I lust your danger and I felt your need,
it matched my own so intensely
I hide it well that you should call it to the surface is unnerving
victim of fate
you roll the dice with me
coming up all sixes
the numbers don't lie, babe
hunting shadows I devour your emptiness with my own
stars play the blues,
the moon sings songs
of dirt ...
#lust
#dark
#collaboration
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love in G minor~with the beautiful buddhakitty
I ache in G minor, as Melancholy rises inside my soft heart
I slept so long in the eternities without you
perhaps a concerto, to soothe my love?
no, a Grosso?
I sip the wine of our music
playing quiet notes of need deep inside me
and weep bitter tears
a sonata?
I can't bear the solitude of greed
my pneuma carries your name
whittling away at my resolve
to be foolish once again for you
strumming my love strings
a tug, a pull and I fall
the enigma of
passion
in...
I slept so long in the eternities without you
perhaps a concerto, to soothe my love?
no, a Grosso?
I sip the wine of our music
playing quiet notes of need deep inside me
and weep bitter tears
a sonata?
I can't bear the solitude of greed
my pneuma carries your name
whittling away at my resolve
to be foolish once again for you
strumming my love strings
a tug, a pull and I fall
the enigma of
passion
in...
#love
#music
#collaboration
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The Compass Points
Suddenly you find yourself
Wide open to your absence,
As the empty barrels in a half-loaded revolver
They dressed you in a hippie shawl
(Jesus fuck) even flowers in your hair,
Turned on, tuned in, dropped out
Into dream of desolate streets Millennium
Whored myself to your eulogy
‘memories will remain in the grass and rain,'
Just wanted to shake you awake and slap you
Sing you the latest Morrissey song
Was the rope your final joke
As you just hated hanging around
Cavernous low
Come speak to me in the...
Wide open to your absence,
As the empty barrels in a half-loaded revolver
They dressed you in a hippie shawl
(Jesus fuck) even flowers in your hair,
Turned on, tuned in, dropped out
Into dream of desolate streets Millennium
Whored myself to your eulogy
‘memories will remain in the grass and rain,'
Just wanted to shake you awake and slap you
Sing you the latest Morrissey song
Was the rope your final joke
As you just hated hanging around
Cavernous low
Come speak to me in the...
#love
#relationships
#death
#LifeAsAWriter
#collaboration
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froth~with the talented Buzco
In the silence of the smiling froth
with a nicotine fetish
the moon is full like an open jar
riding the centipede
piercing the flesh
spitting out the remains
with beads of blood dripping
on cricket knees
in the silence of the smiling froth
as shadows lurk on a picket fence
with rotting narcissism
a whore is my revelation
planting seed in unconsecrated flesh
I have visions of filth
I break free then succumb
down on my knees I plead with the succubus of desire
"set me free"
with daffodil...
with a nicotine fetish
the moon is full like an open jar
riding the centipede
piercing the flesh
spitting out the remains
with beads of blood dripping
on cricket knees
in the silence of the smiling froth
as shadows lurk on a picket fence
with rotting narcissism
a whore is my revelation
planting seed in unconsecrated flesh
I have visions of filth
I break free then succumb
down on my knees I plead with the succubus of desire
"set me free"
with daffodil...
#dark
#collaboration
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church~ a collaboration with the talented Naajir
#lust
#collaboration
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elegance~with the timelessly talented HamBone42
I see you true my immortal desire
in perpetual flux
singing through the centuries
beckoning me to the need inside you
clouds weep in eternal imagery
ivory elegance dances on the fringe of imagination
perpetual similitude in angelic pirouettes
painted on your blank vellum
parables scribed on my skin
say I belong to you
parchment for the gods
you dip your quill in my well
drawing honesty from me
I shy at your knowing
bountiful eden of blushing roses
I listen for the sound of your dangling chains ...
in perpetual flux
singing through the centuries
beckoning me to the need inside you
clouds weep in eternal imagery
ivory elegance dances on the fringe of imagination
perpetual similitude in angelic pirouettes
painted on your blank vellum
parables scribed on my skin
say I belong to you
parchment for the gods
you dip your quill in my well
drawing honesty from me
I shy at your knowing
bountiful eden of blushing roses
I listen for the sound of your dangling chains ...
#love
#lust
#lover #collaboration
#lover #collaboration
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desire~with the sexy~HamBone42
serpentine shivers from the start to end
to its slithering ways you always tend
warmth and breadth of your smooth flesh
even the slightest graze can take my breath
sweet surrender when I caress
teasing your ardor, impressing your desire
touching your greed I understand
your masculinity commands me
my fiery fingers grip your very soul
a pallid shrunken semblance of who you were
my silhouette creeps across your winter drifts
spurred on by icy slivers of moonlight
I shiver when I look in your eyes
you connect with...
to its slithering ways you always tend
warmth and breadth of your smooth flesh
even the slightest graze can take my breath
sweet surrender when I caress
teasing your ardor, impressing your desire
touching your greed I understand
your masculinity commands me
my fiery fingers grip your very soul
a pallid shrunken semblance of who you were
my silhouette creeps across your winter drifts
spurred on by icy slivers of moonlight
I shiver when I look in your eyes
you connect with...
#lust
#collaboration
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