Poems About Cats Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about cats seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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Poem Published
Today 4:38pm
Today 4:38pm
Two Cats
In the soft glow of evening
two cats lie together.
Their breaths steady
tails gently twitching in dreams.
Their whiskers quiver,
paws knead the air,
murmurs of sleep talk
escape their parted lips.
One purrs deeply,
a sound like distant thunder.
The other replies,
a softer rhythmic hum.
Their bodies rise and fall
with each contented sigh,
In this tranquil moment
all is almost quiet and serene.
You watch over them,
heart swelling with love,
Each sound, each movement, ...
two cats lie together.
Their breaths steady
tails gently twitching in dreams.
Their whiskers quiver,
paws knead the air,
murmurs of sleep talk
escape their parted lips.
One purrs deeply,
a sound like distant thunder.
The other replies,
a softer rhythmic hum.
Their bodies rise and fall
with each contented sigh,
In this tranquil moment
all is almost quiet and serene.
You watch over them,
heart swelling with love,
Each sound, each movement, ...
#beauty
#cats
#dreams
#love
#sleep
10 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 3:01am
8th Jan 2025 3:01am
I Looked In The Trees
I looked in the trees.
The panther gave a cold deadly stare.
It leaped itself towards me.
The panther gave a cold deadly stare.
It leaped itself towards me.
#cats
#dark
#death
#dialogue
#fiction
67 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 9:36am
8th Dec 2024 9:36am
What is it about the moon
What is it about the moon that always appear in the night skies, through the process of the months that has us so hypnotize, by the glow of the aura shape and shine like a bright light, up in the sky. For sure what does it mean 🤔when you lose your own chains of thoughts, and insight into the deepness of the moon, glow of the truth that slowly, begins to draw our energy as well as our attention. For it even goes deeper than deep, into a different perspective on life. Yet for the wolf it's a change of the world 🌎 that comes, with an aura that has a stronger hold on the mind and...
#birds
#cats
#dogs
#fish
#nature
64 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 7:09pm
9th Nov 2024 7:09pm
Splattered Remains
All your guts spill out
Scattered across the ground
A defenseless little animal
I'm a ravenous gore hound
C'mon PETA try & stop me
Go help your little friend
Too pure and innocent
Can this be the end?
Just a cat in the road
With blood in my eyes
Should’ve stayed in a garbage pail
This ally cat trash now has died
On the hunt for some food
Just trying to survive
Car sped, turned to red
I have no remorse for someone's life
Traveling late at night
Lost and distracted by a large bright light ...
Scattered across the ground
A defenseless little animal
I'm a ravenous gore hound
C'mon PETA try & stop me
Go help your little friend
Too pure and innocent
Can this be the end?
Just a cat in the road
With blood in my eyes
Should’ve stayed in a garbage pail
This ally cat trash now has died
On the hunt for some food
Just trying to survive
Car sped, turned to red
I have no remorse for someone's life
Traveling late at night
Lost and distracted by a large bright light ...
#cars
#cats
#fiction
#horror
#violence
81 reads
8 Comments
Rachelleundrgrd
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 3:12pm
8th Nov 2024 3:12pm
Morning Muse
I wake up to a silent house
the alarm cat slumbers still
walking softly on cold wood
feet melt into familial tree.
I step outside into the crisp
inhale deeply the dark sky
fields of star enfolding
follicles bristle the familiar cold.
I return to the shelter of tea
candles and incense alight
settle in to await sun’s arousal
lap abuzz with felial purr.
——
I pick up pen to wax poetic
place it quickly back in trough ...
the alarm cat slumbers still
walking softly on cold wood
feet melt into familial tree.
I step outside into the crisp
inhale deeply the dark sky
fields of star enfolding
follicles bristle the familiar cold.
I return to the shelter of tea
candles and incense alight
settle in to await sun’s arousal
lap abuzz with felial purr.
——
I pick up pen to wax poetic
place it quickly back in trough ...
#beauty
#cats
#meditation
#nature
#SelfReflection
111 reads
6 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 4:01pm
6th Nov 2024 4:01pm
Equal to
My birthday has become
a time of giving and serving
It's an exchange of gratitude
for another year of living
What better way to share
than providing a home
for a rescue kitty
who needed to be loved
Isn't that true for all of us
“And, in the end
The love you take
is equal to the love you make.”
a time of giving and serving
It's an exchange of gratitude
for another year of living
What better way to share
than providing a home
for a rescue kitty
who needed to be loved
Isn't that true for all of us
“And, in the end
The love you take
is equal to the love you make.”
#animals
#birthday
#cats #love
#cats #love
303 reads
26 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Oct 2024 4:24pm
15th Oct 2024 4:24pm
After We Heard A Noise Over Our Heads
A spaceship landed next door.
A cat got out with its gear.
It's ready to explore Earth.
A cat got out with its gear.
It's ready to explore Earth.
#aliens
#cats
#dialogue
#fiction
#scifi
122 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Sep 2024 7:44pm
9th Sep 2024 7:44pm
A girl, two birds, some candy & a very large cat
Once upon a time a little girl was going to take her doll for a walk when there she was, meeting two nice little birds
She dropped them a pretty little bow and said to them,
"Good afternoon, little birds, will you play with me?"
"I have some lovely candy in my little bag"
"I'll give you some"
One of the birds said, "I have no objection"
and the other said, "Neither do I"
They enjoyed themselves very much until it was nearly evening
Then the little birds said, "We want to go away now" ...
She dropped them a pretty little bow and said to them,
"Good afternoon, little birds, will you play with me?"
"I have some lovely candy in my little bag"
"I'll give you some"
One of the birds said, "I have no objection"
and the other said, "Neither do I"
They enjoyed themselves very much until it was nearly evening
Then the little birds said, "We want to go away now" ...
#birds
#cats
#children
#fiction
#ShortStory
148 reads
4 Comments
TimWombles
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 8:47am
8th Sep 2024 8:47am
Purr
Rub my belly
That'll make me purr
Turn me into jelly
Make my feline mind a blur
But don't kid yourself
You won't get anything more
I'm independent
You'll make me go to war
~Chorus ~
When the claws come out
You better run for your life
Don't try to cage me
Don't try to make me your wife
All I want is to be on my own
Meow
This crazy world
of which I've been thrown
Food in my belly
Yeah, that makes me purr
Something tasty
That'll do it for sure
Never try...
That'll make me purr
Turn me into jelly
Make my feline mind a blur
But don't kid yourself
You won't get anything more
I'm independent
You'll make me go to war
~Chorus ~
When the claws come out
You better run for your life
Don't try to cage me
Don't try to make me your wife
All I want is to be on my own
Meow
This crazy world
of which I've been thrown
Food in my belly
Yeah, that makes me purr
Something tasty
That'll do it for sure
Never try...
#cats
#determination
#strength
105 reads
0 Comments
IanakaOlTexas
Poem Published
31st Aug 2024 1:35pm
31st Aug 2024 1:35pm
The monster
Hello, There is a monster under your bed
But I know you don't
And when you least suspect it
I shall sink my claws into you
I've sat at wait for so long
Hidden plotting my next move
The air down here
So cool and tempting
And at last there you go
Naively you've let your foot stray
Stray way to far beyond the edge
And I can see your ankle
I shall take my prey
And once I have the foot
I shall not stop
Not till I eat the rest
Who is "ouch, you damn cat?"
That's not me
I'm...
But I know you don't
And when you least suspect it
I shall sink my claws into you
I've sat at wait for so long
Hidden plotting my next move
The air down here
So cool and tempting
And at last there you go
Naively you've let your foot stray
Stray way to far beyond the edge
And I can see your ankle
I shall take my prey
And once I have the foot
I shall not stop
Not till I eat the rest
Who is "ouch, you damn cat?"
That's not me
I'm...
#cats
102 reads
1 Comment
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 1:44pm
18th Aug 2024 1:44pm
They Called It Murder (Cozy Mystery)
This story starts quite odd, since I did not get involved until they called it murder.
My name is Kate Wells. I am the top investigative reporter of the Inwood Feline Gazette. You may not have heard of us since we are not nationally known, but the news must be reported, even if it’s mundane.
The incident became known at six-fifteen in the evening on October 23. I must print that since that is what they agreed to have on record. Off the record, it was a slightly different story that I would prefer you to know.
The chief of the gazette, Elwood Rimm, sent me to...
My name is Kate Wells. I am the top investigative reporter of the Inwood Feline Gazette. You may not have heard of us since we are not nationally known, but the news must be reported, even if it’s mundane.
The incident became known at six-fifteen in the evening on October 23. I must print that since that is what they agreed to have on record. Off the record, it was a slightly different story that I would prefer you to know.
The chief of the gazette, Elwood Rimm, sent me to...
#cats
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#funny #mystery
#funny #mystery
61 reads
4 Comments
AmyMMosier
Poem Published
30th Jul 2024 12:54pm
30th Jul 2024 12:54pm
Like the Sphinx
Like the Sphinx
Igor lies regally
With eyes closed off
To the world.
He finds his zen
And feels the breeze
But knows not how much
He is revered.
Igor lies regally
With eyes closed off
To the world.
He finds his zen
And feels the breeze
But knows not how much
He is revered.
#cats
110 reads
1 Comment
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