Poems for and About Boyfriends Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about boyfriends seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
faithmairee
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2024 6:31pm
22nd Apr 2024 6:31pm
The Lady Blue (The Proposal)
One night at the club, after I finished singing, Gary came up to me from behind me taking me by surprise.
"How is the most beautiful woman in all of New Orleans doing tonight?"i turned around to face him with a big smile on my face.
"You caught me on my way out," I said meeting his eyes.
"Don't go," he said embracing me, "Stay with me awhile!"
"Joe's at home waiting for me."
"Let him wait, Babe." He said then moved his tongue over my right ear. ...
"How is the most beautiful woman in all of New Orleans doing tonight?"i turned around to face him with a big smile on my face.
"You caught me on my way out," I said meeting his eyes.
"Don't go," he said embracing me, "Stay with me awhile!"
"Joe's at home waiting for me."
"Let him wait, Babe." He said then moved his tongue over my right ear. ...
#boyfriend
#love
#lover #marriage
#lover #marriage
234 reads
12 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 2:12pm
21st Apr 2024 2:12pm
The Lady Blue (The Affair)
At last, I was living a dream life. I was having a hot and heavy romance with with Gary. I found I was unquestionably and hopelessly in love with him. I had grown up admiring him and fantasized about us having a close relationship. It did not occur to me to turn away from him even though he wasn't really mine.
Being with Gary would sometimes remind me of something that Pa used to say to ma.
"If you're gonna play you have to pay." Ma liked to flirt with other men but if she ever actually stepped out on pa I never knew it.
I would have to...
Being with Gary would sometimes remind me of something that Pa used to say to ma.
"If you're gonna play you have to pay." Ma liked to flirt with other men but if she ever actually stepped out on pa I never knew it.
I would have to...
#boyfriend
#love
#lover
#men
#sex
235 reads
12 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 1:29pm
21st Apr 2024 1:29pm
The Lady Blue (The Dreams)
Our affair began that night There was already a party planned at my house for after my audition. When I asked Gary if he wanted to come he said he wouldn't miss it for anything. I knew we were going to make love for the very first time in my very own bed. How was I so sure? I saw it happening in a dream one night.
I guess I should explain about the dreams. For as long as I can remember I have special dreams sometimes that present themselves as glimpses of the future. My mother had them, too, though not nearly as often as I did. She had a fancy name for them but over the years...
I guess I should explain about the dreams. For as long as I can remember I have special dreams sometimes that present themselves as glimpses of the future. My mother had them, too, though not nearly as often as I did. She had a fancy name for them but over the years...
#boyfriend
#erotic
#lover #sex
#lover #sex
185 reads
8 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
10th Mar 2024 7:20pm
10th Mar 2024 7:20pm
I Fell
Sleepless nights with the clock ticking by
I’ve been grounded for so long with no access to the sky
It seemed rather destined that I had met you
Seeds planted long ago had finally emerged to bloom.
I fell. I fell so hard
Nothing could have stopped this
You’ve managed to lower my guard
My heart yearns for your touch and your kiss.
You’ve reignited my slumbering passion
In marvelous ways that I could never have imagined
You have a way of speaking directly to my soul
Your love had seeped through to fill in the black hole.
...
I’ve been grounded for so long with no access to the sky
It seemed rather destined that I had met you
Seeds planted long ago had finally emerged to bloom.
I fell. I fell so hard
Nothing could have stopped this
You’ve managed to lower my guard
My heart yearns for your touch and your kiss.
You’ve reignited my slumbering passion
In marvelous ways that I could never have imagined
You have a way of speaking directly to my soul
Your love had seeped through to fill in the black hole.
...
#love
#boyfriend
#fate
#rhyming
#FallingInLove
503 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
9th Mar 2024 3:47pm
9th Mar 2024 3:47pm
Scented by shampoo
I wear you
my sweat shampoo
inside the nose
behind the ears and
at my fingertips
the edges
burning in the tongue
my vinegar shampoo
(with pepper)
I wear you
my sweat shampoo
inside the nose
behind the ears and
at my fingertips
the edges
burning in the tongue
my vinegar shampoo
(with pepper)
I wear you
#love
#lust
#boyfriend
#passion
#Romanticism
179 reads
0 Comments
Angel24
Poem Published
26th Jan 2024 7:37am
26th Jan 2024 7:37am
Seduction
My favourite pass time is
With seduction
His long black hair
I want to dive in
Like it's a black ocean
And his eyes are so
Comforting , I fall in love.
As the seasons change
I wonder if he sees me
Like his sister, lover, wife,
Girlfriend
Or am I just a seductive
Wave of eternity
Waiting to be blessed
By him and his magic
I love the
His magic is so pure
And cures agony
And Rape
And that's where
We left off
Now I have to start
Again I look into his eyes ...
With seduction
His long black hair
I want to dive in
Like it's a black ocean
And his eyes are so
Comforting , I fall in love.
As the seasons change
I wonder if he sees me
Like his sister, lover, wife,
Girlfriend
Or am I just a seductive
Wave of eternity
Waiting to be blessed
By him and his magic
I love the
His magic is so pure
And cures agony
And Rape
And that's where
We left off
Now I have to start
Again I look into his eyes ...
#boyfriend
#admiration
#ForbiddenLove
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a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
10th Oct 2023 9:03am
10th Oct 2023 9:03am
Shiny fur
I like you
I like those black eyes as a child
With a will
And thirst for life
That beautiful
Elegant
Silhouette
As you wander
Around the house
Like a full blossomed crow
With beautiful luxurious
And shining cloth
Hopping here and there
As you leave glamour tissue behind.
I like those black eyes as a child
With a will
And thirst for life
That beautiful
Elegant
Silhouette
As you wander
Around the house
Like a full blossomed crow
With beautiful luxurious
And shining cloth
Hopping here and there
As you leave glamour tissue behind.
#boyfriend
276 reads
10 Comments
Fallen_Angel_194
Angel.
Angel.
Poem Published
12th Jul 2023 8:43am
12th Jul 2023 8:43am
Limelight
You could ravish me behind closed doors, windows and curtains; but would not do so in the daylight.
You could dip your fingers into me, and make me sing such beautiful melodies, but you did not have the courage to be with me in the daylight, in front of the sky and the trees, and others;
and that feeling cuts like knives in the pit of my stomach,
the feeling of shame that had no business living on the inside of my bones in the first place.
Shame that you placed between my ribs.
And fuck you, for ever making me believe that It ever belonged...
You could dip your fingers into me, and make me sing such beautiful melodies, but you did not have the courage to be with me in the daylight, in front of the sky and the trees, and others;
and that feeling cuts like knives in the pit of my stomach,
the feeling of shame that had no business living on the inside of my bones in the first place.
Shame that you placed between my ribs.
And fuck you, for ever making me believe that It ever belonged...
#boyfriend
#breakup
#lover
401 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2023 7:59pm
23rd Apr 2023 7:59pm
My Sister's Not Ready For Her Date Yet
She looked at me with
a smile and said "My
sister's not ready for
her date yet. But
would I go instead?"
a smile and said "My
sister's not ready for
her date yet. But
would I go instead?"
#sister
#boyfriend
#fiction
#dialogue
#dating
251 reads
0 Comments
Thetravelingfairy
Poem Published
14th Apr 2023 1:16am
14th Apr 2023 1:16am
skyline
let me in
why don’t you?
i want to show you how to
play those chords on your guitar
so we may make music together
let’s let go, for a little while
what do you say?
the world is our playground
and i chase fireflies still
so chase me
and push me on that swing that views the city skyline
so we can count the lights
and laugh at our inside jokes
there’s a million lovers down there
but i am yours
and our time is now
do you understand?
why don’t you?
i want to show you how to
play those chords on your guitar
so we may make music together
let’s let go, for a little while
what do you say?
the world is our playground
and i chase fireflies still
so chase me
and push me on that swing that views the city skyline
so we can count the lights
and laugh at our inside jokes
there’s a million lovers down there
but i am yours
and our time is now
do you understand?
#love
#boyfriend
#lover
#FallingInLove
#NaPoWriMo2023
473 reads
3 Comments
joegracegrace
Joe Grace
Joe Grace
Poem Published
6th Apr 2023 9:11pm
6th Apr 2023 9:11pm
HOW THE PENIS IS LIKE A PORPOISE
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#romantic #obsession
#romantic #obsession
289 reads
6 Comments
Eren
Poem Published
26th Feb 2023 7:25pm
26th Feb 2023 7:25pm
Me and Rose, the Sixteenth of July, 2022.
The news today reports on the anomalies of couples
capturing the exact sensation of daybreak
using only their mouths;
the weather report; that the nearest alternative
to rain down window
is un-ironed T-shirt, creased to hell -
Still. I remain bed-bound,
dreaming of open-roofed bars for dutch-courage;
since It’s too early for cold beer.
Maybe i’ll find Rose on the way there -
makeup blushing,
deep within morning glow
and Invite her for a walk wherever flowers explode;
to...
capturing the exact sensation of daybreak
using only their mouths;
the weather report; that the nearest alternative
to rain down window
is un-ironed T-shirt, creased to hell -
Still. I remain bed-bound,
dreaming of open-roofed bars for dutch-courage;
since It’s too early for cold beer.
Maybe i’ll find Rose on the way there -
makeup blushing,
deep within morning glow
and Invite her for a walk wherever flowers explode;
to...
#love
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#summer
#lover
250 reads
6 Comments
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