Poems About Birth Seeking Honest Critique
#birth
Poems about birth seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 1:42pm
4th Oct 2024 1:42pm
Gravestone Baby
I’m a gravestone baby
My parents named me
On a cold fresh day wind is dancing leaves about their feet
Deep in talk not noticing where they are
As the past surrounds them
In the silhouette there is a rise in the belly
Names go about how about Simon or Julius
Or Edna or Barbara Jean something in between
They walk past some sandstone with a name
Carved into the days that passed
I’m a gravestone baby
That’s the name my mama gave me
Has no connection to any of us
But...
My parents named me
On a cold fresh day wind is dancing leaves about their feet
Deep in talk not noticing where they are
As the past surrounds them
In the silhouette there is a rise in the belly
Names go about how about Simon or Julius
Or Edna or Barbara Jean something in between
They walk past some sandstone with a name
Carved into the days that passed
I’m a gravestone baby
That’s the name my mama gave me
Has no connection to any of us
But...
#birth
#death
#motherhood #pregnancy
#motherhood #pregnancy
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oldmanG
Poem Published
24th Sep 2024 4:11am
24th Sep 2024 4:11am
Still
Still birth in my brain
I am born again
From cradle to grave
I’m the only one I can save
Born into a new world
On the other side of me
Swim through placenta
And I am free
Crawling on all fours
Can’t reach the door
Pick myself up
And I’m a little toddler
Growing into my new being
I can walk and talk and sing
Still trying to figure out
What this world’s all about
Starting to grow again
Now I’m a young adult
Trying to figure this world out ...
I am born again
From cradle to grave
I’m the only one I can save
Born into a new world
On the other side of me
Swim through placenta
And I am free
Crawling on all fours
Can’t reach the door
Pick myself up
And I’m a little toddler
Growing into my new being
I can walk and talk and sing
Still trying to figure out
What this world’s all about
Starting to grow again
Now I’m a young adult
Trying to figure this world out ...
#birth
#death
#fate #LifeCycle
#fate #LifeCycle
127 reads
0 Comments
LunaGreyhawk
Jenn_Leigh
Jenn_Leigh
Poem Published
12th Sep 2024 11:56am
12th Sep 2024 11:56am
Invitational
breathtaking sunrise
Nature’s glory on offer
a new beginning
Nature’s glory on offer
a new beginning
#birth
#inspirational
#LifeCycle
255 reads
18 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
28th Aug 2024 2:42pm
28th Aug 2024 2:42pm
Red Dress
Red dress
#birth
#death
#motherhood
529 reads
5 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
21st Aug 2024 00:12am
21st Aug 2024 00:12am
Delusional is this is your world now
Is this what you want and need in your life? 🤔 FOR example I wonder why you people's, who are still living on the plantation like slaves, with a steel ball in chains. 🤨 Yet still not willing to admit that you keep being gas lighted by those who you believe within😞 THE FEW DEMOCRATS AND some members of the White House, and the governors and the crooked judges with crooked lawyers and people's being paid to say whatever they want you to say 🙊THE POWERS THAT BE are still apart of the UNTRUTH as well as time slowly keeps repeating, that olde style of...
#birth
#death
#epic
#funeral
#StreamOfConsciousness
156 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Aug 2024 1:04am
20th Aug 2024 1:04am
Drugs & babies don't mix
After a late night of partying
This one girl brings another girl and a guy back to her apartment
The girl wants to be kinky & have sex in her baby's crib
The girl forgot to have a babysitter watch the child when she went out
Their all high on meth
The ignorance & stupidity of this entire ordeal was that the 6 month old baby was still in the crib
The next morning the baby was dead
Apparently the baby was smothered to death
They all served time
The mother though was sentenced to life in prison
She had no remorse
She told family...
This one girl brings another girl and a guy back to her apartment
The girl wants to be kinky & have sex in her baby's crib
The girl forgot to have a babysitter watch the child when she went out
Their all high on meth
The ignorance & stupidity of this entire ordeal was that the 6 month old baby was still in the crib
The next morning the baby was dead
Apparently the baby was smothered to death
They all served time
The mother though was sentenced to life in prison
She had no remorse
She told family...
#birth
#drugs
#ignorance
#risk
#sex
169 reads
4 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
15th Jun 2024 4:11pm
15th Jun 2024 4:11pm
Such is Life
Alina’s life journey began in the love of her parents who married in 2004. Alina was wonderfully formed in her mother’s womb before taking her first breath in 2006.
By 2009, Alina was giving her parents great joy as she developed the use of language. Her mother cried when she first called to her mamma. As she began to walk and dance, her mother was happy because she too was a dancer.
The year 2017 marked the transition of her body from girlhood to womanhood as she experienced the changes of puberty. Her shape and features seemed to change by the day. She placed...
By 2009, Alina was giving her parents great joy as she developed the use of language. Her mother cried when she first called to her mamma. As she began to walk and dance, her mother was happy because she too was a dancer.
The year 2017 marked the transition of her body from girlhood to womanhood as she experienced the changes of puberty. Her shape and features seemed to change by the day. She placed...
#birth
#death
245 reads
5 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
29th May 2024 1:26pm
29th May 2024 1:26pm
What Loves Will You Know?
#beauty
#birth
#love
232 reads
8 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
19th May 2024 4:56pm
19th May 2024 4:56pm
Breast Feeding
My milk flows softly now out of sight
Bringing you life in the mists of night.
Tiny fingers grasp and hold tight,
Your presence for me, a shining light.
Within these moments our worlds collide,
Lead me on my little guide.
Where men have touched me filled with lust
May spirits fill your heart with trust.
Bringing you life in the mists of night.
Tiny fingers grasp and hold tight,
Your presence for me, a shining light.
Within these moments our worlds collide,
Lead me on my little guide.
Where men have touched me filled with lust
May spirits fill your heart with trust.
#birth
#love
#memories
362 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th May 2024 11:01am
17th May 2024 11:01am
Circle of Life
He would show his kid a video of him and the kid's mother fucking on the night the kid was conceived
He would then show him a video of the child's mother giving birth to him
Years later, the kid will show his kid a video of himself shooting his father in the head with a pistol
He would then show him a video of the child's mother giving birth to him
Years later, the kid will show his kid a video of himself shooting his father in the head with a pistol
#birth
#children
#father
#memories
#sex
199 reads
10 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2024 7:07pm
23rd Apr 2024 7:07pm
The Lady Blue (Another Chance)
Gary and I were heartbroken over losing the baby.But as luck would have it, I got pregnant again not too long afterwards. Everything was going great that is until the dreams returned. I ended up very depressed over them.
Please don't judge me. I think I have suffered enough for my past transgressions. I pray I am forgiven for I never meant to hurt anyone. I only wanted love like all of the rest. Perhaps, I shouldn't be forgiven as my happiness was bought at the expense of another women's pain.
I began singing at The Lady Blue...
Please don't judge me. I think I have suffered enough for my past transgressions. I pray I am forgiven for I never meant to hurt anyone. I only wanted love like all of the rest. Perhaps, I shouldn't be forgiven as my happiness was bought at the expense of another women's pain.
I began singing at The Lady Blue...
#birth
#daughter
#dreams
#nightmares
#risk
179 reads
4 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 2:58am
19th Apr 2024 2:58am
april songs: journey of life 6
april song 06—concupiscent
could the seed of every woman
save the seed of every man,
fate would fashion an in lieu plan
that the cosmos could not span.
for the seed of but one woman
could the serpent’s head make squash,
though the heel of this One True Man
felt a bruise—a mere wish-wash.
antecedent concupiscence
lusts the fountains of the mind,
as does consequent imprudence
leave all innocence behind.
but the vantage of the nations,
clothed with lowly righteousness,
is unmoved by mock oblations,...
could the seed of every woman
save the seed of every man,
fate would fashion an in lieu plan
that the cosmos could not span.
for the seed of but one woman
could the serpent’s head make squash,
though the heel of this One True Man
felt a bruise—a mere wish-wash.
antecedent concupiscence
lusts the fountains of the mind,
as does consequent imprudence
leave all innocence behind.
but the vantage of the nations,
clothed with lowly righteousness,
is unmoved by mock oblations,...
#birth
#motherhood
#NaPoWriMo2024
#redemption
#sacrifice
148 reads
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