Poems About Beauty Seeking Honest Critique
#beauty
Poet__2248
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 7:44pm
12th Oct 2024 7:44pm
Complete
Maybe she will look at me
But i will not know enough to answer with a stare more intense than hers
So I will tear my heart from my ribs and hold it out for her
And she will sit oblivious like a child as i wait for her to take it
I will wait for a moment and then I will stuff it back into my body
before she can reach it
i will act, pretend she is a mere stranger and not the reason for my poorly stitched chest,
my heart a second away from being ripped out once more by my own hand for her
then shoved down my throat and eaten before she can hear the...
But i will not know enough to answer with a stare more intense than hers
So I will tear my heart from my ribs and hold it out for her
And she will sit oblivious like a child as i wait for her to take it
I will wait for a moment and then I will stuff it back into my body
before she can reach it
i will act, pretend she is a mere stranger and not the reason for my poorly stitched chest,
my heart a second away from being ripped out once more by my own hand for her
then shoved down my throat and eaten before she can hear the...
#admiration
#anxiety
#beauty
#love
#romantic
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oldmanG
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 12:58pm
12th Oct 2024 12:58pm
Mr Confidence (little schoolboy)
Mr confidence little schoolboy
Who are you discovering
Your true self or a parade of lies
Sit by the beating heart of my being
Pulse quickens blood restricts
Walking with my princess
But I’m a hollow shell
Fake a laugh
When all I want to say is
Run away with me
On a beach for two
With a fuzzy drink and umbrella
Had my chance
Struck out looking
Didn’t swing the bat
Take my best chance to show her
Kicking up dust
On the way back to the dugout
Spit on...
Who are you discovering
Your true self or a parade of lies
Sit by the beating heart of my being
Pulse quickens blood restricts
Walking with my princess
But I’m a hollow shell
Fake a laugh
When all I want to say is
Run away with me
On a beach for two
With a fuzzy drink and umbrella
Had my chance
Struck out looking
Didn’t swing the bat
Take my best chance to show her
Kicking up dust
On the way back to the dugout
Spit on...
#beauty
#crush
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
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FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 10:15am
12th Oct 2024 10:15am
Twin Suns Shine Brighter
Some folks speak poorly of those Ladies who "proclaim their acclaim" and "toot their own horns"
But why?!?
Are loud, brash, outspoken, and challenging women a bad thing?
Are they trying to run Shit?
Or is this gorgeous "rah-rah girl" simply in search of her equal or slight superior?
Is she a problem?
Or is she Top Shelf?
Is she over the top wit it?
Or just a woman who knows and proclaims her worth while seeking that one who matches her best?
Matches her energy, her freak,...
But why?!?
Are loud, brash, outspoken, and challenging women a bad thing?
Are they trying to run Shit?
Or is this gorgeous "rah-rah girl" simply in search of her equal or slight superior?
Is she a problem?
Or is she Top Shelf?
Is she over the top wit it?
Or just a woman who knows and proclaims her worth while seeking that one who matches her best?
Matches her energy, her freak,...
#admiration
#beauty
#respect #strength
#respect #strength
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oldmanG
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 9:29pm
9th Oct 2024 9:29pm
Do By Me
Do by me without consequences
Do you feel alive in the traffic
Does your heart beat strong and loud
In the quiet moments of silence
Do by me I do by you
Can you look away from all my sins
While you sit in the chapel of the lord
Do by me I’ll do by you
Do you think about what comes next
Or realize just what you’ve done
Do by me I do by you
Under a tree feeling shady
Slice an apple looks just like me
Do you do by me with sanity
Do bye me without consequences
Do by me...
Do you feel alive in the traffic
Does your heart beat strong and loud
In the quiet moments of silence
Do by me I do by you
Can you look away from all my sins
While you sit in the chapel of the lord
Do by me I’ll do by you
Do you think about what comes next
Or realize just what you’ve done
Do by me I do by you
Under a tree feeling shady
Slice an apple looks just like me
Do you do by me with sanity
Do bye me without consequences
Do by me...
#admiration
#beauty
#honesty #love
#honesty #love
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oldmanG
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 12:32pm
8th Oct 2024 12:32pm
Heart So Tender
Heart so tender
Want somebody
Not any body will do
Someone who feels me
And can give some tenderness
Could you be the one
I’m not the judge of you
Warm like a friend on the block
With a toe ring that sings to me
On the sand digging in to you
Pop up umbrella made for two
Sunset on the bay
Romanticized in your eyes so
Nibble back of your neck
Now we’re talking love
Hold you close to my heart
Beating heaven in my chest
Your breath in my ear ...
Want somebody
Not any body will do
Someone who feels me
And can give some tenderness
Could you be the one
I’m not the judge of you
Warm like a friend on the block
With a toe ring that sings to me
On the sand digging in to you
Pop up umbrella made for two
Sunset on the bay
Romanticized in your eyes so
Nibble back of your neck
Now we’re talking love
Hold you close to my heart
Beating heaven in my chest
Your breath in my ear ...
#beauty
#happiness
#love #respect
#love #respect
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InDreamz
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 4:53pm
6th Oct 2024 4:53pm
Peace
When you are at peace
with yourself
You find beauty
in everything else
And that beauty
is a source of joy;
a joy, that emanates from others
But is...
Your very own
with yourself
You find beauty
in everything else
And that beauty
is a source of joy;
a joy, that emanates from others
But is...
Your very own
#beauty
#happiness
#hope #peace
#hope #peace
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oldmanG
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 1:52pm
4th Oct 2024 1:52pm
Silent Dancer
Silent dancer
Dances for no one but me
Words not heard but she’s beautiful
I talk to her in a whisper
If she doesn’t see me she can’t hear me
But she’s a silent dancer
She dances on cold tile
But her toes make no sound to her
There is lights in her eyes
She mesmerized my soul
She is a silent dancer she dances
Only for me she prances
She is a silent dancer
But the dance she does makes the crowd roar
Back at home not a whisper
...
Dances for no one but me
Words not heard but she’s beautiful
I talk to her in a whisper
If she doesn’t see me she can’t hear me
But she’s a silent dancer
She dances on cold tile
But her toes make no sound to her
There is lights in her eyes
She mesmerized my soul
She is a silent dancer she dances
Only for me she prances
She is a silent dancer
But the dance she does makes the crowd roar
Back at home not a whisper
...
#admiration
#beauty
#honesty #romantic
#honesty #romantic
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Poet__2248
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 12:54pm
29th Sep 2024 12:54pm
Forgetting me
I didnt want you to forget me, please don’t forget me.
I want to stay in your memory. I want to be there forever.
Let me burrow deeper and deeper. Into your thoughts, into your mind so that I am free to torment you, comfort you just as you do me in mine.
Let me conquer your dreams as well, let the face you see always be mine.
Keep me with you.
Please.
I want to stay in your memory. I want to be there forever.
Let me burrow deeper and deeper. Into your thoughts, into your mind so that I am free to torment you, comfort you just as you do me in mine.
Let me conquer your dreams as well, let the face you see always be mine.
Keep me with you.
Please.
#admiration
#beauty
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#love
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oldmanG
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 5:21pm
28th Sep 2024 5:21pm
Fire Red Hair
Fire red hair
You can tell an elegant lady not
By the fine silky strands of fire
But by something as simple as her nails
Or her demeanor as she waits in line
Fine woman ages much better than wine
Especially if you can say she loves you hard
After all this time she can still love hard and
Deep in your soul you feel the truth
Nothing like a fine lady and a sip of red wine
Sippin her love like grapes off the vine
If this was Christie’s or Sotheby’s I’d lift my paddle and raise
The score…for my baby has no price ...
You can tell an elegant lady not
By the fine silky strands of fire
But by something as simple as her nails
Or her demeanor as she waits in line
Fine woman ages much better than wine
Especially if you can say she loves you hard
After all this time she can still love hard and
Deep in your soul you feel the truth
Nothing like a fine lady and a sip of red wine
Sippin her love like grapes off the vine
If this was Christie’s or Sotheby’s I’d lift my paddle and raise
The score…for my baby has no price ...
#beauty
#bittersweet
#love #regret
#love #regret
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oldmanG
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 9:16am
28th Sep 2024 9:16am
Caramel Kitten of My Dreams
Caramel kitten of my dreams
Persian rugs silk sheets
Preys on me like a tiger
Electric light in her eyes
I’m hypnotized by beauty
Purrs like a mustang
Wonder what’s under her hood
I prowl on the perimeter of her
Want to dip into her love
Toss and turn try to forget
Caramel kitten of my dreams
I am in your reach
Want to put kisses on your pillow
You know I’m here you want me too
I’ll be your tried and true
I’ll keep you coming back for more
And my love keeps giving...
Persian rugs silk sheets
Preys on me like a tiger
Electric light in her eyes
I’m hypnotized by beauty
Purrs like a mustang
Wonder what’s under her hood
I prowl on the perimeter of her
Want to dip into her love
Toss and turn try to forget
Caramel kitten of my dreams
I am in your reach
Want to put kisses on your pillow
You know I’m here you want me too
I’ll be your tried and true
I’ll keep you coming back for more
And my love keeps giving...
#beauty
#crush
#gratitude
#relationships
#romantic
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
20th Sep 2024 7:38pm
20th Sep 2024 7:38pm
My Snowflake Lover
This is something that was not planned
The moment you stood there and took my hand
I recall it well...
T'was the day the first snow fell
I was trembling inside, you see
I wasn't sure you were willing to be
With me on these cold winter nights
As I made love to you in the firelight
We both have a few years on us yet
Romance will never die with us, pet
You're so cute in the spring, such full of heart
Does your flavor then shift from sweet to tart?
You laugh and play as you allow me in
When it shows, you come out,...
The moment you stood there and took my hand
I recall it well...
T'was the day the first snow fell
I was trembling inside, you see
I wasn't sure you were willing to be
With me on these cold winter nights
As I made love to you in the firelight
We both have a few years on us yet
Romance will never die with us, pet
You're so cute in the spring, such full of heart
Does your flavor then shift from sweet to tart?
You laugh and play as you allow me in
When it shows, you come out,...
#beauty
#ILoveYou
#love
154 reads
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Jammyjoe
Poem Published
19th Sep 2024 2:03pm
19th Sep 2024 2:03pm
Hazel eyes
Those mesmerizing eyes, every hue of every tree in the forest
From the early light till night fall is met
Even made richer by the eclips in which they set
Those exquisite hazel eyes
Made of colorful tides
Where a kelidascope of natural beauty collides
So clear and blue
Like the first drop of morning dew
A river that flows non-stop
Or a beautiful rain drop
Grey as the clouds in storm
And in the light they transform
Into a cascading fog
One you might see on a morning jog
Green like moss by a flowing stream ...
From the early light till night fall is met
Even made richer by the eclips in which they set
Those exquisite hazel eyes
Made of colorful tides
Where a kelidascope of natural beauty collides
So clear and blue
Like the first drop of morning dew
A river that flows non-stop
Or a beautiful rain drop
Grey as the clouds in storm
And in the light they transform
Into a cascading fog
One you might see on a morning jog
Green like moss by a flowing stream ...
#beauty
#emotional
#lover
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