Poems About Apathy by Top Critiquers
#apathy
Poems about apathy by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
After Her Burial
When I reach into your pocket
That's when I lose control
I can feel your crotch and how wet you are
Nobody knows freedom until you orgasm
My place or yours?
My place has a better view of the old oak tree that you worship
C'mon let's go
That's ok that your one with the trees, I get it
After we fuck and experience freedom, we can climb that tree to the top
Reality will creep back into our lives again
We hate it!
We need to experience euphoria in our own utopia... forever
If you reach the top before me, make a wish and then jump ...
That's when I lose control
I can feel your crotch and how wet you are
Nobody knows freedom until you orgasm
My place or yours?
My place has a better view of the old oak tree that you worship
C'mon let's go
That's ok that your one with the trees, I get it
After we fuck and experience freedom, we can climb that tree to the top
Reality will creep back into our lives again
We hate it!
We need to experience euphoria in our own utopia... forever
If you reach the top before me, make a wish and then jump ...
#apathy
#freedom
#sex #suicide
#sex #suicide
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mine to keep
sadness looms inside my soul
I know not what causes it
lingering in the shade of my sacredness
covered with fragmented memories
sorrow keeps company with me
my love's depth cannot be measured
I ache with it
melancholy feelings tell me all I need to know
keening for the moments lost
I weep in dread
it is my fate
to carry this pain
I give it suckle
feed it my life's essence
emptiness carries me lonely, down the road
alone in the scorn
I am a misfit of the universes
I was sent here to...
I know not what causes it
lingering in the shade of my sacredness
covered with fragmented memories
sorrow keeps company with me
my love's depth cannot be measured
I ache with it
melancholy feelings tell me all I need to know
keening for the moments lost
I weep in dread
it is my fate
to carry this pain
I give it suckle
feed it my life's essence
emptiness carries me lonely, down the road
alone in the scorn
I am a misfit of the universes
I was sent here to...
#sadness
#depression
#apathy
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A TRIP TO A SILENT CITY
I had visited
them in numerous
placed around
the world, however
today's visit to
a silent city
was different.
I spent time
walking through the
various tenants, some
were housed in
elaborate houses,
some in low-cost housing,
some in the
poorest houses;
all, in one way or another,
were identified with
unique words chosen
by none residents.
This trip to a silent
city once again
reminded me of
how vulnerable and
short my life is.
It was a wakeup call,
which from the...
them in numerous
placed around
the world, however
today's visit to
a silent city
was different.
I spent time
walking through the
various tenants, some
were housed in
elaborate houses,
some in low-cost housing,
some in the
poorest houses;
all, in one way or another,
were identified with
unique words chosen
by none residents.
This trip to a silent
city once again
reminded me of
how vulnerable and
short my life is.
It was a wakeup call,
which from the...
#sadness
#denial
#apathy
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The 'day before yesterday'
Wed, Jul 21
I normally hate decision making days.. When bad things are destined to happen..
On this date..
This death..
I'll remember till my last breathe..
It'll cost me 60 days to eat the dates by sunset..
Here I got subject with so many predicates
When did I write this?..
We only have 'today', 'tomorrow', and 'yesterday'..
But I have another day
So disturbed..
Consciously defaulted..
His name? I asked..
Who? They asked me in return..
The boy. He had a name..
I replied
...
I normally hate decision making days.. When bad things are destined to happen..
On this date..
This death..
I'll remember till my last breathe..
It'll cost me 60 days to eat the dates by sunset..
Here I got subject with so many predicates
When did I write this?..
We only have 'today', 'tomorrow', and 'yesterday'..
But I have another day
So disturbed..
Consciously defaulted..
His name? I asked..
Who? They asked me in return..
The boy. He had a name..
I replied
...
#anxiety
#regret
#loneliness
#heartbroken
#apathy
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Not for Nothing but this Site is Pretty Boring Lately
Listen up fuck bags
Do I have to do everything?
I was so bored that I even wore pants today
Which is weird because I work remotely
Bunker on the corner of 4th and Long
Personal Foul for roughing the kicker
Do you get my drift ?
I didn't think so
Listen a lot of good poets left
But you remain and I remain
It's our job to keep rocking it
Write about Ring Dings, just write
I'm taking a Vaginal vacation
Two scoops of Trans Fat
Gluten holiday in Transylvania
Dark Stout, blow jobs and rodeo
She's sizzle...
Do I have to do everything?
I was so bored that I even wore pants today
Which is weird because I work remotely
Bunker on the corner of 4th and Long
Personal Foul for roughing the kicker
Do you get my drift ?
I didn't think so
Listen a lot of good poets left
But you remain and I remain
It's our job to keep rocking it
Write about Ring Dings, just write
I'm taking a Vaginal vacation
Two scoops of Trans Fat
Gluten holiday in Transylvania
Dark Stout, blow jobs and rodeo
She's sizzle...
#funny
#WritingPoetry
#PowerOfWords
#apathy
#boredom
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WHEN THE THOUGHTS CHANGE
When the thoughts slowly start to change, the
way you feel differently about some situations. It's like a slap across the face. It makes you start to think, about what you want and need in your life. But yet you are more afraid of the nights then the days, that you are alone. That you have dreams, in the silence of the nights. You think about this moment with many days and night. Feeling the deepness as it was deeply influence, by your own attitude and the deepness of not feeling. No longer feeling well yet more like a uncomfortable feelings. But yet you can manifest from your mind,...
way you feel differently about some situations. It's like a slap across the face. It makes you start to think, about what you want and need in your life. But yet you are more afraid of the nights then the days, that you are alone. That you have dreams, in the silence of the nights. You think about this moment with many days and night. Feeling the deepness as it was deeply influence, by your own attitude and the deepness of not feeling. No longer feeling well yet more like a uncomfortable feelings. But yet you can manifest from your mind,...
#loneliness
#disappointment
#emptiness
#apathy
#fear
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Emotional Wreck
Today
I am
an
ARROGANT
SELFISH
BITCH!
Cunts Lives Matter!
It is what it is!
What would Voltaire say?
What would Jesus do?
In a dream...
Dr. Suess says
Thing 1 and
Thing 2 were
ACID TABS!!!
Do I recollect...
or do I ramble?
Next year I
want a talking
Christmas tree!
Invent one.
Tears for fears.
I am
an
ARROGANT
SELFISH
BITCH!
Cunts Lives Matter!
It is what it is!
What would Voltaire say?
What would Jesus do?
In a dream...
Dr. Suess says
Thing 1 and
Thing 2 were
ACID TABS!!!
Do I recollect...
or do I ramble?
Next year I
want a talking
Christmas tree!
Invent one.
Tears for fears.
#apathy
#emptiness
#frustration
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Tame
The whipping wind
is a clamorous opposition
of the soft seducing breeze.
We are just trying to contain peace
in our hearts
in a brutal world.
Amongst humans hideous actions,
there are beautiful motiveless gestures.
Like thorns on a rose,
The ignorant
polish their own lives.
Along the path of apathy,
can be found great empathy.
Can the gentle tame the harsh?
and then -
I feel it.
The delightful breeze prevails.
The vehemence of the wind fled.
I walk forth......
...
is a clamorous opposition
of the soft seducing breeze.
We are just trying to contain peace
in our hearts
in a brutal world.
Amongst humans hideous actions,
there are beautiful motiveless gestures.
Like thorns on a rose,
The ignorant
polish their own lives.
Along the path of apathy,
can be found great empathy.
Can the gentle tame the harsh?
and then -
I feel it.
The delightful breeze prevails.
The vehemence of the wind fled.
I walk forth......
...
#kindness
#nature
#apathy
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Seekers Of Destruction
What I say I don't do with scorn
But the Egyptians used trigonometry thousands of years before Pythagoras was born
The seekers of the way saw that knowledge was needed
So they traveled the face of the planet trying to feed it
Man, hahaha is indeed a strange creature
Being wasteful is but one of his many features
Food, resource, ability, and even precious human life
Hahaha Man has a blatant disregard for human life
Let me hit you in the mouth with a little bit of the truth
Who else would pay there farmers not to produce
Babies and...
But the Egyptians used trigonometry thousands of years before Pythagoras was born
The seekers of the way saw that knowledge was needed
So they traveled the face of the planet trying to feed it
Man, hahaha is indeed a strange creature
Being wasteful is but one of his many features
Food, resource, ability, and even precious human life
Hahaha Man has a blatant disregard for human life
Let me hit you in the mouth with a little bit of the truth
Who else would pay there farmers not to produce
Babies and...
#humankind
#rhyming
#anger #apathy
#anger #apathy
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Recycled
Regurgitated drivel not so cleverly disguised in rearranged formats, different words-
same meaning.
Love, Loss, Loneliness, Repeat.
Establishment has its drawbacks. There is nothing new to lament, or rejoice. It’s all been done.
admiration, adoration, atonement. redemption.
I’m
bored.
same meaning.
Love, Loss, Loneliness, Repeat.
Establishment has its drawbacks. There is nothing new to lament, or rejoice. It’s all been done.
admiration, adoration, atonement. redemption.
I’m
bored.
#WritingPoetry
#apathy
#boredom
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Knuckle-dragger Rampage
One chess game teaches ramifications
and yet we continue to pollute
with every counterproductive commute
in our ecologic relations
since we are the apes who refuse to learn
beyond our personal advantage
and all of the progress we mismanage
into a declining maelstrom churn
of an ever baneful Charybdis mash
no doubt to be soon set aglow someday
by waves of radioactive decay
long smoking like a global calabash
because the anger of Earth's apex ape
preempted sapience from taking shape.
and yet we continue to pollute
with every counterproductive commute
in our ecologic relations
since we are the apes who refuse to learn
beyond our personal advantage
and all of the progress we mismanage
into a declining maelstrom churn
of an ever baneful Charybdis mash
no doubt to be soon set aglow someday
by waves of radioactive decay
long smoking like a global calabash
because the anger of Earth's apex ape
preempted sapience from taking shape.
#apathy
#disappointment
#frustration #ignorance
#frustration #ignorance
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Other overrated bullshit
#lust
#sex
#minimalist
#apathy
#orgasm
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DU Poetry : Poems About Apathy by Top Critiquers