Poems About Apathy Seeking Honest Critique
#apathy
Poems about apathy seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
30th Apr 2025 00:24am
30th Apr 2025 00:24am
a bad time
feel like vera lynn
“we’ll meet again
don’t know where
don’t know when”
don’t know why ..
“we’ll meet again
don’t know where
don’t know when”
don’t know why ..
#apathy
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george4man2box
Poem Published
27th Apr 2025 8:33pm
27th Apr 2025 8:33pm
Alexa down volume!
She, the brainchild of Rohit Prasad -
India-born person who breathed life
into Alexa, and lead technology side
of project almost from its inception.
Amazon Alexa Echo
a marvel of voice activation technology,
(reportedly voiced by Nina Rolle,
a voice actress and singer
based in Boulder, Colorado,
though neither Amazon
nor Rolle officially
confirmed nor denied rumor).
Aforementioned electrical engineer
recognized as being a key figure
leading the technology side of the project
and the AI that powers it, ...
India-born person who breathed life
into Alexa, and lead technology side
of project almost from its inception.
Amazon Alexa Echo
a marvel of voice activation technology,
(reportedly voiced by Nina Rolle,
a voice actress and singer
based in Boulder, Colorado,
though neither Amazon
nor Rolle officially
confirmed nor denied rumor).
Aforementioned electrical engineer
recognized as being a key figure
leading the technology side of the project
and the AI that powers it, ...
#anxiety
#apathy
#fate
#ThrillSeeking
#weakness
50 reads
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Glaxian
Poem Published
20th Apr 2025 2:00pm
20th Apr 2025 2:00pm
Standard Timekeeping
Standard Timekeeping
There's a place of tranquility and pain;
Drenched in the downpour, reading the rain.
Life is darkness to the armor-less knight,
Destined to live with what's on her back
Forever guilty and all is right!
Desire-less to find another track.
Peaceful anguish is not subject to change.
The streets can be justice for the strange!
Meaningless suffering top off the night.
Why even try, there is no way back.
Into the doom, turning left nor right,
Like a freight train rumbling down the track.
Public...
There's a place of tranquility and pain;
Drenched in the downpour, reading the rain.
Life is darkness to the armor-less knight,
Destined to live with what's on her back
Forever guilty and all is right!
Desire-less to find another track.
Peaceful anguish is not subject to change.
The streets can be justice for the strange!
Meaningless suffering top off the night.
Why even try, there is no way back.
Into the doom, turning left nor right,
Like a freight train rumbling down the track.
Public...
#apathy
#despair
#emptiness
#grief
#rejection
86 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 11:22pm
10th Apr 2025 11:22pm
Why are we not willing
You know that it's hard enough to find real love and respect, for the betterment of life. YET why do we constantly have to play the blame game as grown men's and women's, but yet here we are in these days and times. For what happened to when we use to communicate, with each other on a positive level to articulate what we have to say to each other. But instead they gotta get on some podcast to shout and scream their anger talking about the other person like a dog. yet it's two sides to a story telling but yet they forget to mention the truth. What and why you women's and men's chose to...
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#confusion
#frustration
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 8:24am
26th Mar 2025 8:24am
Father, I get so much Joy after I had prayed to you
Father, I get so much
Joy after I had prayed
To you
Before I go to sleep
Every single night
In my bed
Tonight when I had prayed
To you in my prayer
I had asked for you
To remove the anger
That I have
And also I ask my father
To help me with daily
Problems
Because I am not sure
How to work in solving
My daily problems
Also, my father when I sleep
In my bed at night
I never wake up
In the middle of the night
I sleep all through the night
Like a log
Also, I know that you
Father...
Joy after I had prayed
To you
Before I go to sleep
Every single night
In my bed
Tonight when I had prayed
To you in my prayer
I had asked for you
To remove the anger
That I have
And also I ask my father
To help me with daily
Problems
Because I am not sure
How to work in solving
My daily problems
Also, my father when I sleep
In my bed at night
I never wake up
In the middle of the night
I sleep all through the night
Like a log
Also, I know that you
Father...
#apathy
#bittersweet
#regret
#rejection
#sadness
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BlackBox
Black Box
Black Box
Poem Published
10th Mar 2025 8:24pm
10th Mar 2025 8:24pm
Love Evanesce
No eloquent way to express
All the feelings I have for you
A messy assortment of sadness and love
I miss you.
I break down in tears
From the despair
Crying deeply, the insurmountable pain
Causes me to begin laughing in the midst of my grief
How can she have such a profound impact?
Greeting me in the morning,
Waiting for me to awake
From my life with you
You live in my can of beer
Thrive in my flower;
But you’re not there
Not there
There. In my thoughts
Reminding me of my loneliness ...
All the feelings I have for you
A messy assortment of sadness and love
I miss you.
I break down in tears
From the despair
Crying deeply, the insurmountable pain
Causes me to begin laughing in the midst of my grief
How can she have such a profound impact?
Greeting me in the morning,
Waiting for me to awake
From my life with you
You live in my can of beer
Thrive in my flower;
But you’re not there
Not there
There. In my thoughts
Reminding me of my loneliness ...
#apathy
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
#sadness
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doriann_barrere
Dorian
Dorian
Poem Published
8th Mar 2025 9:53pm
8th Mar 2025 9:53pm
What Happened Was Morbid
what happened was morbid ...
Lo, they did unmake his visage, not with blade alone,
but with the cruel mirth of fate’s fell hand.
A rictus, wide as grief, as hollow as the jest
that in dark halls is whispered ‘twixt wretched men.
Was it his own trembling grasp that traced the fault?
Or some wraith of malice, unseen but keen of touch?
The steel sang not as warriors’ swords do sing,
but in hush’d susurrus, a lull’d and mocking dirge.
The lips that spake of mercy found none,
but were rather parted in twain, a wound unsealing ...
Lo, they did unmake his visage, not with blade alone,
but with the cruel mirth of fate’s fell hand.
A rictus, wide as grief, as hollow as the jest
that in dark halls is whispered ‘twixt wretched men.
Was it his own trembling grasp that traced the fault?
Or some wraith of malice, unseen but keen of touch?
The steel sang not as warriors’ swords do sing,
but in hush’d susurrus, a lull’d and mocking dirge.
The lips that spake of mercy found none,
but were rather parted in twain, a wound unsealing ...
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#despair
#frustration
118 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 11:35am
6th Mar 2025 11:35am
Heaven paved with my pains
.. this shitty life is nothing
but a waiting room
of a hellish asylum
overflowing with paperwork
and suffocated in its own
degenerate bureaucracy
this shitty life is nothing
but a scare in a dead-end alley
from the darkest part of a place
where no one wants to go
life, life, life
knife, knife, knife
the sound of traveling knife sharpeners
is like the creaking of hinges
of a nonexistent paradise
where an arrogant and irrational being rules...
but a waiting room
of a hellish asylum
overflowing with paperwork
and suffocated in its own
degenerate bureaucracy
this shitty life is nothing
but a scare in a dead-end alley
from the darkest part of a place
where no one wants to go
life, life, life
knife, knife, knife
the sound of traveling knife sharpeners
is like the creaking of hinges
of a nonexistent paradise
where an arrogant and irrational being rules...
#anxiety
#apathy
#depression
#mirror
#silence
118 reads
8 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 5:07am
5th Mar 2025 5:07am
dreamland
when, if ever,
will this nation
understand that
poverty is trauma
will this nation
understand that
poverty is trauma
#apathy
#disappointment
120 reads
6 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 00:05am
3rd Mar 2025 00:05am
I can't feel it
I can't feel it
That I am going on
To my manic state
I know that I am
Starting to be angry at people
I know that people starting to
Avoid me
Because they also feel hurt
They also are afraid that I
Can do something bad to them
I am trying very hard to control
My anger
That is something that I must do
Urgent
Also, I am not getting a proper
Sleep
The truth is that I need my full
Sleep every day
Now I know that my mind is foggy
I am also afraid that I could lose
My friends
And become alone...
That I am going on
To my manic state
I know that I am
Starting to be angry at people
I know that people starting to
Avoid me
Because they also feel hurt
They also are afraid that I
Can do something bad to them
I am trying very hard to control
My anger
That is something that I must do
Urgent
Also, I am not getting a proper
Sleep
The truth is that I need my full
Sleep every day
Now I know that my mind is foggy
I am also afraid that I could lose
My friends
And become alone...
#anger
#apathy
#disappointment
#emptiness
#jealousy
77 reads
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BatPowers
Bat Powers
Bat Powers
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 3:07pm
28th Feb 2025 3:07pm
Pedo's guns god and bulldozers
Where pedophiles are the good guys throwing pizza parties at the school
and to be a part of the clan you better follow their rules
there is no right there is no wrong just memorize the chant
that we will keep it quiet till the bitter end
chastising our neighbors our family and friends
till they come back to the fold and to never sway again
black mold growing inside our souls carrying the burdens of shame
in the end we became so concerned
that we had only each other to blame
now i'm sitting in the Tuscola county jail
waiting for...
and to be a part of the clan you better follow their rules
there is no right there is no wrong just memorize the chant
that we will keep it quiet till the bitter end
chastising our neighbors our family and friends
till they come back to the fold and to never sway again
black mold growing inside our souls carrying the burdens of shame
in the end we became so concerned
that we had only each other to blame
now i'm sitting in the Tuscola county jail
waiting for...
#apathy
#grief
#ignorance #racism
#ignorance #racism
76 reads
2 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 8:59am
28th Feb 2025 8:59am
Hate You
My mind screams that I hate you
Even as we make plans for a future
That is nothing more than a facade
Because you will never be the man you promised to me.
Even as we make plans for a future
That is nothing more than a facade
Because you will never be the man you promised to me.
#anger
#apathy
#emptiness
#hate
#love
172 reads
2 Comments
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