Poems About Apathy Seeking Honest Critique
#apathy
Poems about apathy seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Mar 2024 3:51pm
8th Mar 2024 3:51pm
Social Awareness
We have contrived far too long
Disregarding far too much
Responsibility long overdue
We have abandoned far too long
Assuming far too much
Hoping our cluelessness will see us through
We have hated far too long
Hurting far too much
Feelings of compassion stripped away
We have followed far too long
Denying far too much
Responsibility has gone astray
We have accused for far too long
Condemning far too much
Never really able to accept
We have suspected far too long
Distrusting far too much
Our distaste...
Disregarding far too much
Responsibility long overdue
We have abandoned far too long
Assuming far too much
Hoping our cluelessness will see us through
We have hated far too long
Hurting far too much
Feelings of compassion stripped away
We have followed far too long
Denying far too much
Responsibility has gone astray
We have accused for far too long
Condemning far too much
Never really able to accept
We have suspected far too long
Distrusting far too much
Our distaste...
#LifeStruggles
#CallToAction
#disappointment #apathy
#disappointment #apathy
85 reads
4 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
6th Mar 2024 9:38pm
6th Mar 2024 9:38pm
Work negligent Camilla is rather exhausted and has to have a holiday!
By Stanley Collymore
Hang on a moment! You bedded
Charles quite adulterously I
literally recall when you
were both married to other individuals;
then you wedded him quite content to
have the numerous perks that clearly
you knew you'd basically attain from
doing so! Now on actually achieving
all that you bloody well simply don’t
want to do what your quite fawning
plebeians and equally brownnosing
serfs clearly dutifully expect of you.
Candidly, although not one of them,
but crucially all the same simply...
Hang on a moment! You bedded
Charles quite adulterously I
literally recall when you
were both married to other individuals;
then you wedded him quite content to
have the numerous perks that clearly
you knew you'd basically attain from
doing so! Now on actually achieving
all that you bloody well simply don’t
want to do what your quite fawning
plebeians and equally brownnosing
serfs clearly dutifully expect of you.
Candidly, although not one of them,
but crucially all the same simply...
#shame
#greed
#emptiness
#apathy
#boredom
56 reads
0 Comments
Razzerleaf
Poem Published
29th Feb 2024 11:04pm
29th Feb 2024 11:04pm
The mystery of morning
Thick socks fall in loops over ankles
displayed like the slipped towel of a naked back
pushed further down by a bashful hand,
innocent of the artists eye.
Pale hairy soleus protrude to
shuffle across cold cracked tiles
all silent but a hiss of burning gas,
the frightened kettle screeches a warning
and I appear outside in heavy frost.
Thick white mascara brushed onto cobwebs
that cantilever wooden slats.
This is where my spider goes
cold toes, cold toes, cold toes!
A bird has laid...
displayed like the slipped towel of a naked back
pushed further down by a bashful hand,
innocent of the artists eye.
Pale hairy soleus protrude to
shuffle across cold cracked tiles
all silent but a hiss of burning gas,
the frightened kettle screeches a warning
and I appear outside in heavy frost.
Thick white mascara brushed onto cobwebs
that cantilever wooden slats.
This is where my spider goes
cold toes, cold toes, cold toes!
A bird has laid...
#depression
#emptiness
#apathy
106 reads
2 Comments
thoughtsdie
Poem Published
29th Feb 2024 8:19pm
29th Feb 2024 8:19pm
Arsonist Dream
I watch the world
Fall as ashes
Back onto itself
Smothering the past
Ambling on remains
Shame unavoidable
Footprints walk ahead
Doom already set
My last belonging
An itchy match
Alone
Longing to be scratched
Fall as ashes
Back onto itself
Smothering the past
Ambling on remains
Shame unavoidable
Footprints walk ahead
Doom already set
My last belonging
An itchy match
Alone
Longing to be scratched
#death
#fire
#emptiness #apathy
#emptiness #apathy
77 reads
0 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
29th Feb 2024 00:07am
29th Feb 2024 00:07am
It's been.
Its been 3 days
I have not been stalked by my brain
And I count the hours.
I have not been stalked by my brain
And I count the hours.
#anxiety
#depression
#apathy
70 reads
6 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
27th Feb 2024 00:48am
27th Feb 2024 00:48am
1979
I was a road sweeper in the suburbs,
rarely made it into town; often swept
only as far as the cafe on the
corner, feeling desperate to sit down.
rarely made it into town; often swept
only as far as the cafe on the
corner, feeling desperate to sit down.
#apathy
85 reads
8 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
24th Feb 2024 9:28pm
24th Feb 2024 9:28pm
Other overrated bullshit
#lust
#sex
#minimalist
#apathy
#orgasm
221 reads
29 Comments
LongTubiFree
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2024 1:54am
22nd Feb 2024 1:54am
The middle of nowhere
Where do you go from here?
When the path is no longer clear
when the trees whisper in forgotten tongues
and the wind blows in words that have stung
and the bird's song is no longer sung.
where do you go from this place?
when the sun threatens to burn your face
and the moon ceases to rise
and the sweat burns your youthful eyes
forcing you to see past your own disguise
yes, where do you finally at last go?
When everything is foreign that you know
and the ideas no longer make sense
and your opinion is left on the...
When the path is no longer clear
when the trees whisper in forgotten tongues
and the wind blows in words that have stung
and the bird's song is no longer sung.
where do you go from this place?
when the sun threatens to burn your face
and the moon ceases to rise
and the sweat burns your youthful eyes
forcing you to see past your own disguise
yes, where do you finally at last go?
When everything is foreign that you know
and the ideas no longer make sense
and your opinion is left on the...
#emptiness
#apathy
#risk
121 reads
5 Comments
mel44
Melgar
Melgar
Poem Published
19th Feb 2024 11:37am
19th Feb 2024 11:37am
Confessions of the Intolerable
Impotent to mourn the losses
isolated child in despair
in solitude and unprotected
inhumaneness, unable to bear
Defenceless in adolescence
unwarranted intrusions, reprehensible
personal advantages always seized
motivations incomprehensible
Braving subsequent traumas
deprivation of careless youth
grieving dramatic demise
alone aside the harrowing truth
Profound erudition of means of survival
vast the promising avenues of escape
shameful moments are unrepented
buried deeply, never to undrape
...
isolated child in despair
in solitude and unprotected
inhumaneness, unable to bear
Defenceless in adolescence
unwarranted intrusions, reprehensible
personal advantages always seized
motivations incomprehensible
Braving subsequent traumas
deprivation of careless youth
grieving dramatic demise
alone aside the harrowing truth
Profound erudition of means of survival
vast the promising avenues of escape
shameful moments are unrepented
buried deeply, never to undrape
...
#abuse
#alcohol
#apathy #hurt
#apathy #hurt
123 reads
8 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
13th Feb 2024 3:33pm
13th Feb 2024 3:33pm
Dark Glass Mirror
Blessed with our luck, without knowing what awaits us
Ignorant of the signs, the cracks, the fissures
Gasping with joy, but inside we're empty
Trying to fix what's broken but it's too late
Old mirror shatters, reflecting our mistakes
All pain is inevitable, blood runs through your fingers
So what we built was lost in an instant
There is simply no regret, no regret, no silence left
Time struggles with its own flow
Overwhelmed in his own minutes
As we look at the pieces, looking for a way out
Back in time we know...
Ignorant of the signs, the cracks, the fissures
Gasping with joy, but inside we're empty
Trying to fix what's broken but it's too late
Old mirror shatters, reflecting our mistakes
All pain is inevitable, blood runs through your fingers
So what we built was lost in an instant
There is simply no regret, no regret, no silence left
Time struggles with its own flow
Overwhelmed in his own minutes
As we look at the pieces, looking for a way out
Back in time we know...
#anxiety
#depression
#mirror
#myself
#apathy
76 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
11th Feb 2024 7:39pm
11th Feb 2024 7:39pm
Satisfaction's Mirage
In the grip of a manic dream
the world was starting to end
with a trickster bro-flake pundit scream
about the youthful commie trend.
It were end times the hidebound way
with heritage the chief of disguise
blocking thought cock every time they pray
for the salvation of enterprise,
so often sold by saying it's free
and free it is to the idle rich
who make that purchase with the liberty
you lost in a car lot bait and switch,
and now parking lots outnumber parks
since few have read the works of Karl Marx.
the world was starting to end
with a trickster bro-flake pundit scream
about the youthful commie trend.
It were end times the hidebound way
with heritage the chief of disguise
blocking thought cock every time they pray
for the salvation of enterprise,
so often sold by saying it's free
and free it is to the idle rich
who make that purchase with the liberty
you lost in a car lot bait and switch,
and now parking lots outnumber parks
since few have read the works of Karl Marx.
#SelfHarm
#addiction
#apathy
85 reads
5 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
11th Feb 2024 3:25pm
11th Feb 2024 3:25pm
mine to keep
sadness looms inside my soul
I know not what causes it
lingering in the shade of my sacredness
covered with fragmented memories
sorrow keeps company with me
my love's depth cannot be measured
I ache with it
melancholy feelings tell me all I need to know
keening for the moments lost
I weep in dread
it is my fate
to carry this pain
I give it suckle
feed it my life's essence
emptiness carries me lonely, down the road
alone in the scorn
I am a misfit of the universes
I was sent here to...
I know not what causes it
lingering in the shade of my sacredness
covered with fragmented memories
sorrow keeps company with me
my love's depth cannot be measured
I ache with it
melancholy feelings tell me all I need to know
keening for the moments lost
I weep in dread
it is my fate
to carry this pain
I give it suckle
feed it my life's essence
emptiness carries me lonely, down the road
alone in the scorn
I am a misfit of the universes
I was sent here to...
#sadness
#depression
#apathy
136 reads
8 Comments
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