Poems About Anxiety Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about anxiety seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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PAR
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 11:44am
18th Dec 2024 11:44am
empty night
That's how I did it to you
very slowly
without rambling
That's how I did it
calmly
with an open hand for you
That everything, like this, without end
no return
no sleep, no sleep, no sleep
all night without sleep
without the blessing of silence
in the palms of my hands
What everything, like this, like this, like this
like the spinning of a top
that comes to an end
sleepless, like this, sleepless, like this
without rambling
very slowly
That's always how I did it
without knowing what I was doing ...
very slowly
without rambling
That's how I did it
calmly
with an open hand for you
That everything, like this, without end
no return
no sleep, no sleep, no sleep
all night without sleep
without the blessing of silence
in the palms of my hands
What everything, like this, like this, like this
like the spinning of a top
that comes to an end
sleepless, like this, sleepless, like this
without rambling
very slowly
That's always how I did it
without knowing what I was doing ...
#anxiety
#dreams
#night
#nightmares
#sleep
78 reads
8 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 1:37am
18th Dec 2024 1:37am
Watching Me!
#anxiety
#confusion
#fear
43 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 00:46am
18th Dec 2024 00:46am
careless
continually struggle to avoid
those who stare at their phones
as they stroll down the street
devoid of all spatial awareness
those who stare at their phones
as they stroll down the street
devoid of all spatial awareness
#anxiety
40 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 7:15pm
17th Dec 2024 7:15pm
Mother...
Mother...
Don't put pictures of me on your wall
I don't want to be there with you
Don't work your magic on me
Sharing your blood is bad enough
Don't put pictures of me on your wall
I don't want to be there with you
Don't work your magic on me
Sharing your blood is bad enough
#anger
#anxiety
#mother #relationships
#mother #relationships
78 reads
7 Comments
HadesRising
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 11:33pm
16th Dec 2024 11:33pm
THINE OWN UNAVAILING ENDEAVORS
I have walked this earth
On broken and bleeding feet
Pushed to pull you from the dirt
But with thy eyes you can't see
I speak to deaf ears
I reach to dead flesh
Placating with wasted breath
I taste poisoned air
I smell meat that's dead
Expelling my wasted breath
I bleed for you
But you won't weep for me
Alas, it lasts forever
Thine own unavailing endeavors
I have worked this earth
With broken and bleeding hands
Kicked to lead you from the dirt
But thyself is fucked and damned
I...
On broken and bleeding feet
Pushed to pull you from the dirt
But with thy eyes you can't see
I speak to deaf ears
I reach to dead flesh
Placating with wasted breath
I taste poisoned air
I smell meat that's dead
Expelling my wasted breath
I bleed for you
But you won't weep for me
Alas, it lasts forever
Thine own unavailing endeavors
I have worked this earth
With broken and bleeding hands
Kicked to lead you from the dirt
But thyself is fucked and damned
I...
#anger
#anxiety
48 reads
0 Comments
Onyxceila
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 6:54pm
15th Dec 2024 6:54pm
Captured
Sometimes I close my eyes so I can't see
Sometimes I feel so close
So trapped I can't breathe
I just want to be by myself
Just set me free
Just let me be
Release me
You've got me in this cocoon
that I can't pry open
So I scratch and I punch and I pull at it
till my fingers bleed
You've trapped me in this box
where I can't breathe
So I yell and I fight
till the box fills with my screams
Just let me be
Just set me free
Release me
You've got me in this world
Where my head is spinning ...
Sometimes I feel so close
So trapped I can't breathe
I just want to be by myself
Just set me free
Just let me be
Release me
You've got me in this cocoon
that I can't pry open
So I scratch and I punch and I pull at it
till my fingers bleed
You've trapped me in this box
where I can't breathe
So I yell and I fight
till the box fills with my screams
Just let me be
Just set me free
Release me
You've got me in this world
Where my head is spinning ...
#anger
#anxiety
#frustration #loneliness
#frustration #loneliness
72 reads
2 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 2:55pm
15th Dec 2024 2:55pm
It doesn't matter to me
It doesn't matter to me
What the rich people thinks
About the poor
I know that the rich people hate the
Poor
Also the poor people are always
Suffering
Some have a drink problem
And they drink like a fish
The rich people won't give a meal for the
Poor people
And the poor people are always starving every
Single day
Also they are dehydrated because they have
Nothing to drink
Also the poor people sleeps in the street
During the Summer
They also refuse to go to a shelter
Because of bed bugs
God is always...
What the rich people thinks
About the poor
I know that the rich people hate the
Poor
Also the poor people are always
Suffering
Some have a drink problem
And they drink like a fish
The rich people won't give a meal for the
Poor people
And the poor people are always starving every
Single day
Also they are dehydrated because they have
Nothing to drink
Also the poor people sleeps in the street
During the Summer
They also refuse to go to a shelter
Because of bed bugs
God is always...
#anxiety
#apathy
#emptiness
#loneliness
#shame
32 reads
0 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 8:54am
15th Dec 2024 8:54am
Today
#anxiety
#dark
#fear
#memories
#PTSD
40 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 8:16pm
13th Dec 2024 8:16pm
Such a great blow for a day job
The dude at the counter said that he had gotten the job
He was to go downstairs and meet the boss, get his apron and get briefed on the rules and regulations of the restaurant
He went downstairs to meet his boss
He walked to the threshold of the door and knocked gently
The boss looked up from the desk and told him to come in and sit down
He asked him how bad he wanted the job
He told him that he really likes the place and he thought that he could really...
The boss cut him off and asked him what he can do to get the job
He didn't know what he...
He was to go downstairs and meet the boss, get his apron and get briefed on the rules and regulations of the restaurant
He went downstairs to meet his boss
He walked to the threshold of the door and knocked gently
The boss looked up from the desk and told him to come in and sit down
He asked him how bad he wanted the job
He told him that he really likes the place and he thought that he could really...
The boss cut him off and asked him what he can do to get the job
He didn't know what he...
#anxiety
#family
#fiction
#job
#manipulation
63 reads
10 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 7:28am
11th Dec 2024 7:28am
I am glad you want me
I am glad you want me
Ally
To be your friend
Maybe forever
I will be fine with it
I don't want you to think
That I am a hopeless case
I am trying my best
Taking care of me
Because there is nobody
Else who will take care of me
And I am quite able to do it
Also I am now in my senior years
And I just love to live in my
Senior years
I had lost some of my hearing
That is why
I need to use my hearing aid
I already got used to it
I already have some cataract
On my left eye
Also I need glasses for...
Ally
To be your friend
Maybe forever
I will be fine with it
I don't want you to think
That I am a hopeless case
I am trying my best
Taking care of me
Because there is nobody
Else who will take care of me
And I am quite able to do it
Also I am now in my senior years
And I just love to live in my
Senior years
I had lost some of my hearing
That is why
I need to use my hearing aid
I already got used to it
I already have some cataract
On my left eye
Also I need glasses for...
#anxiety
#disappointment
#fear
#jealousy
#regret
47 reads
0 Comments
poetic_gawdess
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 5:50pm
10th Dec 2024 5:50pm
Undercurrent.
It feels like I’m swimming for my life,
around me, a large body of water,
and there are absolutely no signs of land in sight.
My arms and legs grow heavier
from exhaustion.
Fire is burning in my lungs, as I breathe
And while I think I’m breathing in fresh air
it doesn’t feel like oxygen, quite the opposite.
Something hot and unrelenting coils in my chest
even as I exhale.
suddenly feeling as though
I’m wading in the fiery lakes of hell.
“Keep swimming.” I think to myself.
The end has got to be near, ...
around me, a large body of water,
and there are absolutely no signs of land in sight.
My arms and legs grow heavier
from exhaustion.
Fire is burning in my lungs, as I breathe
And while I think I’m breathing in fresh air
it doesn’t feel like oxygen, quite the opposite.
Something hot and unrelenting coils in my chest
even as I exhale.
suddenly feeling as though
I’m wading in the fiery lakes of hell.
“Keep swimming.” I think to myself.
The end has got to be near, ...
#anxiety
#depression
#LifeStruggles #water
#LifeStruggles #water
156 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 1:47pm
9th Dec 2024 1:47pm
Horses of the Night
In vast meadows
horses gallop free
under the wide, deep blue sky.
In the solitude of the field
the whistles resound
echoing memories of a fruitful time.
Big eyes filled with longing.
That only the lonely soul knows
they feel the absence intensely.
On cold nights the pain doesn't go away.
The wind carries ancient whispers
of days spent next to your loved one.
Now distant how long the paths are
leaving the heart torn apart.
Horses run, shadows in the twilight.
Witnesses of the sadness that...
horses gallop free
under the wide, deep blue sky.
In the solitude of the field
the whistles resound
echoing memories of a fruitful time.
Big eyes filled with longing.
That only the lonely soul knows
they feel the absence intensely.
On cold nights the pain doesn't go away.
The wind carries ancient whispers
of days spent next to your loved one.
Now distant how long the paths are
leaving the heart torn apart.
Horses run, shadows in the twilight.
Witnesses of the sadness that...
#anxiety
#apathy
#depression
#emptiness
#nightmares
61 reads
8 Comments
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