Poems About Anger Seeking Honest Critique
#anger
Poems about anger seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 11:11pm
7th Nov 2024 11:11pm
Diary of an angry Blackman "
Why is it that the black people don't own the land or property on which they live!!
Working hard everyday, in everyway just to give in order to be able to live!
Working the 1st Monday, Tuesday, an Wednesday, for the landlord then Thursday Working for Con-Ed, got me upset 😡 and fed!!
Fed-up with this mess and all this bullshit ass stress, then on Friday my day I'm working for myself just to have a payday!
To try and enjoy myself, an on my off day on a Saturday, soon as I take my first drink and whined up drunk, cops...
Working hard everyday, in everyway just to give in order to be able to live!
Working the 1st Monday, Tuesday, an Wednesday, for the landlord then Thursday Working for Con-Ed, got me upset 😡 and fed!!
Fed-up with this mess and all this bullshit ass stress, then on Friday my day I'm working for myself just to have a payday!
To try and enjoy myself, an on my off day on a Saturday, soon as I take my first drink and whined up drunk, cops...
#anger
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#frustration
#regret
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4 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 11:07pm
7th Nov 2024 11:07pm
Walks in the beach
Yes I love walks in the beach
First thing in the morning
When there is nobody
Else around
Early in the summer
It is very soothing
Hearing the sound of the water
First thing in the morning
When there is nobody
Else around
Early in the summer
It is very soothing
Hearing the sound of the water
#anger
#apathy
#bittersweet
#boredom
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 1:53pm
7th Nov 2024 1:53pm
How can I win your love back?
How can I win your love back?
Because I need all the love
I can get from you
Lots of people tell me I am a hopeless case
That alone makes me angry
I already confronted them
And I told them that I don't
Want to hear that
Never again
Because I need all the love
I can get from you
Lots of people tell me I am a hopeless case
That alone makes me angry
I already confronted them
And I told them that I don't
Want to hear that
Never again
#anger
#anxiety
#disappointment
#jealousy
#loneliness
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 10:56am
7th Nov 2024 10:56am
The Pressure
Follow me into the room of hatred
Don't turn away don't close your eyes
Walk with me hand in hand to the end
Don't hide your face I see through your lies
The pressure
Pushing on me
Mistakes
Never give in never break
The hatred
Burning in me
The pain
Never give in, never break
Drown yourself in the name of a fake god
You think you're free you think you're right
Drown yourself in the name of nothing
You'll save yourself but through self sacrifice
Don't turn away don't close your eyes
Walk with me hand in hand to the end
Don't hide your face I see through your lies
The pressure
Pushing on me
Mistakes
Never give in never break
The hatred
Burning in me
The pain
Never give in, never break
Drown yourself in the name of a fake god
You think you're free you think you're right
Drown yourself in the name of nothing
You'll save yourself but through self sacrifice
#anger
#anxiety
#CallToAction
#frustration
#hate
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6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 10:53am
7th Nov 2024 10:53am
The fight begins, till death
We all dream of peace
Heard the tales of euphoria
We've all seen the land of hate
No tears in our eyes
No pain inside
No fear for us to hide
Two fists I'm ready to throw down
United, break down the walls
Shotgun blasts sound out the call now
The fight begins for us all
We've got to fight back
This burden in our hands
We've got to let them know
Rise up ready to attack
We are the final stand
We've got to let them know
We've got to let them know
This is the end
The fight begins, till death
Heard the tales of euphoria
We've all seen the land of hate
No tears in our eyes
No pain inside
No fear for us to hide
Two fists I'm ready to throw down
United, break down the walls
Shotgun blasts sound out the call now
The fight begins for us all
We've got to fight back
This burden in our hands
We've got to let them know
Rise up ready to attack
We are the final stand
We've got to let them know
We've got to let them know
This is the end
The fight begins, till death
#anger
#CallToAction
#corruption
#rebellion
#violence
50 reads
4 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 4:07am
7th Nov 2024 4:07am
If You Want/ Si Tu Quieres
If you really want to leave me.
Deveras quieres a ir de aqui.
Then go ahead and get the fuck on.
Vete de la chingada de aqui, puta.
Because you had the greatest man.
Por que tu tiene el mejor mexican.
But you had to believe them instead.
Pero querias creer tu pinche gente tambien
I'm not too sure what your friends done said,
No se que su amigos dicen.
But their all are crazy in their fucking heads.
Son locos en los pinche mentes.
Fuck you and...
Deveras quieres a ir de aqui.
Then go ahead and get the fuck on.
Vete de la chingada de aqui, puta.
Because you had the greatest man.
Por que tu tiene el mejor mexican.
But you had to believe them instead.
Pero querias creer tu pinche gente tambien
I'm not too sure what your friends done said,
No se que su amigos dicen.
But their all are crazy in their fucking heads.
Son locos en los pinche mentes.
Fuck you and...
#anger
#breakup
#heartbroken #relationships
#heartbroken #relationships
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1 Comment
oldmanG
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 2:57am
7th Nov 2024 2:57am
Fury of Denial
Fury of Denial
Anger in the bottom of a bottle
Sins that show on my sleeve
Fury of denial that’s within me
My madness hides the tornado in my being
But all I suffer is the hangover in the morning
Ones around me react much differently
Empty in bottle empty in me
Defiance is the crutch of weakness
I defy myself to end this bullshit
Game ended because of drunkness
Boys night is over have to be a Dad
How do I end this insanity i did it before
Again and...
Anger in the bottom of a bottle
Sins that show on my sleeve
Fury of denial that’s within me
My madness hides the tornado in my being
But all I suffer is the hangover in the morning
Ones around me react much differently
Empty in bottle empty in me
Defiance is the crutch of weakness
I defy myself to end this bullshit
Game ended because of drunkness
Boys night is over have to be a Dad
How do I end this insanity i did it before
Again and...
#alcohol
#anger
#denial
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 1:07am
7th Nov 2024 1:07am
Threnodial Sapphic for Liberty
Now the sore winners seek more necks to stretch
because MAGA cancer has metastasized
out from an especially monstrous letch...
so foolishly prized.
The people abandoned good sense and sweet hope
to vote for a mob armed with threatening guns
as more educations on a downward slope...
have cost overruns.
And Democrats are the ones they will all blame
when the bombs keep falling on children and moms
as they burn away in the phosphorus flame...
of endless pogroms.
There's more pain ahead, so get used to it...
because MAGA cancer has metastasized
out from an especially monstrous letch...
so foolishly prized.
The people abandoned good sense and sweet hope
to vote for a mob armed with threatening guns
as more educations on a downward slope...
have cost overruns.
And Democrats are the ones they will all blame
when the bombs keep falling on children and moms
as they burn away in the phosphorus flame...
of endless pogroms.
There's more pain ahead, so get used to it...
#anger
#disappointment
103 reads
2 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 12:25pm
6th Nov 2024 12:25pm
NOT ALL VAMPIRES SUCK BLOOD
Your gaze wanders through corridors of dead and living poets, devouring, slipping in like thieves at midnight—not for communion with the spirit’s insight, but to feast, to draw stolen breath and reshape it as your own, a mimicry born without debt to the muse, a hollow construct grasping for self acclaim, void of responsibility to its sources.
Poetic Vampires, the charlatans of thought, these pale shadows drift through other minds, cloaked in filched passion and counterfeit phrases—a theater of echoes lacking the marrow of originality. They linger, barren of fresh vision, bereft of...
Poetic Vampires, the charlatans of thought, these pale shadows drift through other minds, cloaked in filched passion and counterfeit phrases—a theater of echoes lacking the marrow of originality. They linger, barren of fresh vision, bereft of...
#anger
#art
#disappointment
#frustration
#morality
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oldmanG
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 11:52am
6th Nov 2024 11:52am
Raging
Raging
Will you laugh before you cry
Will your emotions take over
I’m gonna laugh until I’m sleeping in
A sarcophagus dreaming dirt naps
Happiness Anger everything in between
Wear an emotion on my sleeve
I show you what I’m all about I’m scary real
My temper rules my world and I want to escape
Sometimes I scare even myself when I see
The Rage that lives within me
5’7” I scare Mountains of men
I go back and replay what happened
And I’m amazed that my Rage is a Bull in a...
Will you laugh before you cry
Will your emotions take over
I’m gonna laugh until I’m sleeping in
A sarcophagus dreaming dirt naps
Happiness Anger everything in between
Wear an emotion on my sleeve
I show you what I’m all about I’m scary real
My temper rules my world and I want to escape
Sometimes I scare even myself when I see
The Rage that lives within me
5’7” I scare Mountains of men
I go back and replay what happened
And I’m amazed that my Rage is a Bull in a...
#anger
#confessional
#identity #myself
#identity #myself
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CarrionCrow44
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 11:54pm
5th Nov 2024 11:54pm
The Pit
Tied up just below
You know I think you know
Lacerated those who came before
Silence the majority again
Leaves you breathless
The burden of knowing why
When machines dictate response
They tell you not to feel
I’ve seen it grow
I really thought we could
Be a little more then just a census
Numbers on a blank page
There is no pride
Only illusions to consider
Undone by greedy little people
As it’s always done
Who is the cause
Who tells you what to be
Who told you to share the wealth...
You know I think you know
Lacerated those who came before
Silence the majority again
Leaves you breathless
The burden of knowing why
When machines dictate response
They tell you not to feel
I’ve seen it grow
I really thought we could
Be a little more then just a census
Numbers on a blank page
There is no pride
Only illusions to consider
Undone by greedy little people
As it’s always done
Who is the cause
Who tells you what to be
Who told you to share the wealth...
#anger
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Academic
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 5:38pm
5th Nov 2024 5:38pm
Iranian Jew legally executed in Iran for murder is predictably, selectively eulogized!
By Stanley Collymore
It's quite interesting to me that
an Iranian citizen who was
Jewish by religion, in a
court of law in his own country and through
the due processes therein was found guilty
of murder, sentenced to death and actually
duly executed by the state through literally
being hanged. An execution however, only
of one man, but which really nevertheless
has several white Britons, and literally too
their vilely reliably Useful Idiots simply up
in arms; but the callous, and undoubtedly
significantly,...
It's quite interesting to me that
an Iranian citizen who was
Jewish by religion, in a
court of law in his own country and through
the due processes therein was found guilty
of murder, sentenced to death and actually
duly executed by the state through literally
being hanged. An execution however, only
of one man, but which really nevertheless
has several white Britons, and literally too
their vilely reliably Useful Idiots simply up
in arms; but the callous, and undoubtedly
significantly,...
#anger
#denial
#hate
#rejection
#sadness
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