Poems About Anger Seeking Honest Critique
#anger
Poems about anger seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 2:37pm
2nd Mar 2025 2:37pm
Let's stop pretending
From then to now what changed before our eyes 👁️👁️ As we are facing the truth of the deepness of the nonsense, that seems to take over what we see and hear 😞 YET it seems that there is no escaping from the negativity, and drama and confusion of some people's, mindset, as well as we see their heart has become bitter and cold as ice. For sure we use to be able to connect, on a positive level of common sense with intelligent, and knowledge with deep inner conversations 😞 YET that seems not to exist anymore, for now it's has become a thing of the...
#anger
#confusion
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#regret
61 reads
2 Comments
Thesilverymoon
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 9:17am
2nd Mar 2025 9:17am
Dys Funk
When you are neuro-diversely dysegulated as fuck
Sometimes
that means
(furiously.. )
scribbling down notes on google keep
in a mid island north bound intra-atmospheric
channeling of emotions
into a poem
after clocking a live wake
then watching the projected death
of your friend and fellow player
reach its conclusion
six days later
Then another two more
and who could predict
overcoming fear paralysis
but not before fucking up
a performance puppet or audience
or...
Sometimes
that means
(furiously.. )
scribbling down notes on google keep
in a mid island north bound intra-atmospheric
channeling of emotions
into a poem
after clocking a live wake
then watching the projected death
of your friend and fellow player
reach its conclusion
six days later
Then another two more
and who could predict
overcoming fear paralysis
but not before fucking up
a performance puppet or audience
or...
#anger
#confessional
#SelfReflection
51 reads
0 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 8:59am
28th Feb 2025 8:59am
Hate You
My mind screams that I hate you
Even as we make plans for a future
That is nothing more than a facade
Because you will never be the man you promised to me.
Even as we make plans for a future
That is nothing more than a facade
Because you will never be the man you promised to me.
#anger
#apathy
#emptiness
#hate
#love
89 reads
1 Comment
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 10:53pm
25th Feb 2025 10:53pm
The Rattlesnake Parable
He called me high tension.
As though the random violent outbursts.
Off my meds.
Weren't normal for me.
They say, get off em, you don't need them.
You're not crazy.
Then when I do the depression takes over.
And the delusions.
And the paranoia.
And the rage.
I impulsively lash out at everyone.
A danger to myself and other people.
A sheafed knife.
Tight water surface.
Chaotic and impulsive.
Reading the worst into what you're saying.
Any excuse for my euphoria.
When the hate takes over.
...
As though the random violent outbursts.
Off my meds.
Weren't normal for me.
They say, get off em, you don't need them.
You're not crazy.
Then when I do the depression takes over.
And the delusions.
And the paranoia.
And the rage.
I impulsively lash out at everyone.
A danger to myself and other people.
A sheafed knife.
Tight water surface.
Chaotic and impulsive.
Reading the worst into what you're saying.
Any excuse for my euphoria.
When the hate takes over.
...
#anger
#despair
#frustration
42 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 7:15pm
24th Feb 2025 7:15pm
Your Poker Face
Why say one thing then mean another?
A master of the sleight of word
If you're too close, you shut down
If you're too far, you draw nearer
Or
Am I damaged?
Who will rescue me -
Should I rescue you
Or
Save my soul?
AM--I--Dam(n)--Aged?
A master of the sleight of word
If you're too close, you shut down
If you're too far, you draw nearer
Or
Am I damaged?
Who will rescue me -
Should I rescue you
Or
Save my soul?
AM--I--Dam(n)--Aged?
#anger
#confusion
158 reads
15 Comments
inechoingsilence
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 7:02pm
24th Feb 2025 7:02pm
The Beginning of the End
A rave, expression of unity
people dancing under the stars
greeting the sunrise
songs on their lips, dancing feet
Hell flew down from the heavens
singing, screaming, silence
dancing, running, hiding
Slaughter a party
party a massacre
gala of inhuman torture
Lives balanced on single breaths
Souls captured, hidden away
Forever in tunnels to stay
Should the monsters had their way
Surely this was the edge of humanity
no, it was only beginning of insanity
The world turns...
people dancing under the stars
greeting the sunrise
songs on their lips, dancing feet
Hell flew down from the heavens
singing, screaming, silence
dancing, running, hiding
Slaughter a party
party a massacre
gala of inhuman torture
Lives balanced on single breaths
Souls captured, hidden away
Forever in tunnels to stay
Should the monsters had their way
Surely this was the edge of humanity
no, it was only beginning of insanity
The world turns...
#anger
#dark
#fear
64 reads
3 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 6:55pm
23rd Feb 2025 6:55pm
Opportunism.
#anger
#hate
30 reads
0 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 1:47am
23rd Feb 2025 1:47am
In my Mind I've Killed you Already.
#anger
#dark
#passion
39 reads
0 Comments
13
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2025 3:22pm
22nd Feb 2025 3:22pm
Shadowborn
and out from the dead
reanimated anew
unsightly and unabated
surreal visage
inviting annihilation
bound by servitude
now embodying
nurtured hate
swallowing all pain
a final respite
from suffering
kill and grow
indestructible
eternal soul
accursed to slavery
stolen from the grave
darkest depths
distance between damnation
unable to feel
murderous intent
purveyor of death
towering trials
impossible reality
break the rift
dungeon of despair
slaughter everything ...
reanimated anew
unsightly and unabated
surreal visage
inviting annihilation
bound by servitude
now embodying
nurtured hate
swallowing all pain
a final respite
from suffering
kill and grow
indestructible
eternal soul
accursed to slavery
stolen from the grave
darkest depths
distance between damnation
unable to feel
murderous intent
purveyor of death
towering trials
impossible reality
break the rift
dungeon of despair
slaughter everything ...
#anger
#curse
#dark
#hate
#shadows
79 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2025 4:33am
22nd Feb 2025 4:33am
When we cry alone
There's those things that we just can't explain what it means, to have a peaceful life. YET how and why and what we find ourselves, involved in trying in creating that kind of a mental atmosphere, of peace and tranquility. Yet we find out what it will affect in trying to attempt, to learn how can we find that someone, who wants the same things for their own life. But yet in today's society some love, is not what it's suppose to be, if they are not willing to create a vision to see the true beauty of the dreams. THAT could be with someone who believes, in the beauty of their own personal...
#anger
#confusion
#dark
#despair
#heartbroken
54 reads
0 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 7:19pm
19th Feb 2025 7:19pm
The Draft
Am I there with you in the trenches.
No.
I'm out here in the street getting beaten to a pulp.
So.
Maybe.
You should offer a prayer to the drunks in the alley.
Instead.
Of.
All these pantomime heros cum body bags that glory in death.
At.
Least.
The violence I engage in isn't taken out on the onlookers, in fact, they cheer.
So much.
Less.
Collateral damage when I'm eating the curb and not a bullet.
So.
Potentially.
Don't come to me when you want some sort of violence you...
No.
I'm out here in the street getting beaten to a pulp.
So.
Maybe.
You should offer a prayer to the drunks in the alley.
Instead.
Of.
All these pantomime heros cum body bags that glory in death.
At.
Least.
The violence I engage in isn't taken out on the onlookers, in fact, they cheer.
So much.
Less.
Collateral damage when I'm eating the curb and not a bullet.
So.
Potentially.
Don't come to me when you want some sort of violence you...
#anger
#denial
#despair
62 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 6:38pm
19th Feb 2025 6:38pm
I don't talk about weather or politics
No weather speak
No politico speak
Everyone gets pissed
If I shut them down mid-complaining
I'm a pompous grouchy fuck
Pass the snakes
No politico speak
Everyone gets pissed
If I shut them down mid-complaining
I'm a pompous grouchy fuck
Pass the snakes
#anger
#environment
#politics
135 reads
16 Comments
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