Poems About Alcohol Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about alcohol seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 11:56am
17th Nov 2024 11:56am
G Says
G says
G says I’m done with that lady
She only tries to control me
He hides from himself
Says he’s right but he knows that he’s not
G says he’s sorry for being angry
Wants to change but needs some help
Look for a couch big enough to hold my thoughts
G says have you seen my Port around
I feel thirsty and naked without it
I go to the gazebo
To smoke my dreams and listen for the crickets
Says I don’t owe the world nothing
G says I’m tired of being the clown
Don’t want to...
G says I’m done with that lady
She only tries to control me
He hides from himself
Says he’s right but he knows that he’s not
G says he’s sorry for being angry
Wants to change but needs some help
Look for a couch big enough to hold my thoughts
G says have you seen my Port around
I feel thirsty and naked without it
I go to the gazebo
To smoke my dreams and listen for the crickets
Says I don’t owe the world nothing
G says I’m tired of being the clown
Don’t want to...
#alcohol
#happiness
#hate
#love
#marijuana
56 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 3:35pm
16th Nov 2024 3:35pm
As A Result Of Having Gone To Dylan's New Years Eve Rave
Brooklyn opened her eyes and saw that
she had been sleeping naked next
to her sister Ruby's soon
to be husband Peter
as a result of
having gone to
Dylan's New
Years Eve
rave.
she had been sleeping naked next
to her sister Ruby's soon
to be husband Peter
as a result of
having gone to
Dylan's New
Years Eve
rave.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#NewYear
#sex
131 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 6:42pm
15th Nov 2024 6:42pm
We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
That lasted about 2 drinks
Then innocence took a back seat
City Life is a meat grinder
You can tenderize and flame
Some like her well done
I took her medium with luscious pink
Bukowski was at the table in the corner
Hunter S. Thompson too
Wasted in the smokey dark heat
Comparing poetry and fright
I was at home with Sha Sha
Lou Reed stopped by to say hello
She didn't say much
Her English was a vacancy
We communicated in shy glances
Touched each other in places...
Then innocence took a back seat
City Life is a meat grinder
You can tenderize and flame
Some like her well done
I took her medium with luscious pink
Bukowski was at the table in the corner
Hunter S. Thompson too
Wasted in the smokey dark heat
Comparing poetry and fright
I was at home with Sha Sha
Lou Reed stopped by to say hello
She didn't say much
Her English was a vacancy
We communicated in shy glances
Touched each other in places...
#alcohol
#PopCulture
#risk
#temptation
#ThrillSeeking
165 reads
26 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 2:21pm
15th Nov 2024 2:21pm
Woke Up On Christmas Morning
Alex woke up on Christmas morning
and discovered that she had slept
naked in front of the tree
and has a hangover
which was possibly
due to the bash
that was thrown
there last
night.
and discovered that she had slept
naked in front of the tree
and has a hangover
which was possibly
due to the bash
that was thrown
there last
night.
#alcohol
#Christmas
#fiction
#sex
#suffering
125 reads
2 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 5:39am
14th Nov 2024 5:39am
Future Ben
Oh, I’m gonna pay for it tomorrow
No question
No doubt
It’s here, my pain
I’m gonna pay for it
Tomorrow
No question
No doubt
It’s here, my pain
I’m gonna pay for it
Tomorrow
#addiction
#alcohol
#emptiness
#LifeAsAWriter
#ThrillSeeking
86 reads
1 Comment
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 00:05am
14th Nov 2024 00:05am
his last night down the pub ..
the old bloke was last seen
in the kings arms
imploringly held out in front of
him there was nothing
in the kings arms
imploringly held out in front of
him there was nothing
#alcohol
#despair
#emptiness
58 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 11:19am
13th Nov 2024 11:19am
Wet, Drunk & Miserable
He went to the bar
got into a fight
drank lots of Yeg
was up half the night
He was so wasted
he could hardly talk
barely made it to the bed
kept stumbling, couldn't walk
Fell right asleep
out like a light
along came the dream
of mountains and streams
It was so peaceful or so it seemed
the sound of dripping awakened him
he could smell the stench of human pee
He could feel the warmth between his legs
he pissed his pants and it seeped all over the bed
he jumped and ran...
got into a fight
drank lots of Yeg
was up half the night
He was so wasted
he could hardly talk
barely made it to the bed
kept stumbling, couldn't walk
Fell right asleep
out like a light
along came the dream
of mountains and streams
It was so peaceful or so it seemed
the sound of dripping awakened him
he could smell the stench of human pee
He could feel the warmth between his legs
he pissed his pants and it seeped all over the bed
he jumped and ran...
#addiction
#alcohol
#funny #rhyming
#funny #rhyming
71 reads
2 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 6:25am
8th Nov 2024 6:25am
The Monks Honey Mead
Golden nectar flows,
sacred honey, vats of sun,
blessed in barrels deep.
Echoed praise dance halls
in quietness, we wait for grace,
mead poured like pure sunshine.
Brewed like prayer in cup,
ancient hands the humble craft,
joy steeped in amber rain.
sacred honey, vats of sun,
blessed in barrels deep.
Echoed praise dance halls
in quietness, we wait for grace,
mead poured like pure sunshine.
Brewed like prayer in cup,
ancient hands the humble craft,
joy steeped in amber rain.
#alcohol
#faith
#prayer
#religion
#spiritual
63 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 2:29pm
7th Nov 2024 2:29pm
When One Gets Drunk At A Bar
Josh gulped a few beers.
He saw Kate's dress sliding off.
Josh woke up naked.
He saw Kate's dress sliding off.
Josh woke up naked.
#addiction
#alcohol
#fiction
#senryu
#sex
131 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 2:57am
7th Nov 2024 2:57am
Fury of Denial
Fury of Denial
Anger in the bottom of a bottle
Sins that show on my sleeve
Fury of denial that’s within me
My madness hides the tornado in my being
But all I suffer is the hangover in the morning
Ones around me react much differently
Empty in bottle empty in me
Defiance is the crutch of weakness
I defy myself to end this bullshit
Game ended because of drunkness
Boys night is over have to be a Dad
How do I end this insanity i did it before
Again and...
Anger in the bottom of a bottle
Sins that show on my sleeve
Fury of denial that’s within me
My madness hides the tornado in my being
But all I suffer is the hangover in the morning
Ones around me react much differently
Empty in bottle empty in me
Defiance is the crutch of weakness
I defy myself to end this bullshit
Game ended because of drunkness
Boys night is over have to be a Dad
How do I end this insanity i did it before
Again and...
#alcohol
#anger
#denial
60 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 11:50pm
4th Nov 2024 11:50pm
Clear Haiku
Crystal clarity
In glass, a pure reflection
Warmth in cold embrace.
In glass, a pure reflection
Warmth in cold embrace.
#alcohol
#haiku
#MovingOn #sea
#MovingOn #sea
68 reads
4 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 6:56am
4th Nov 2024 6:56am
Swimming in my Nightmares
Swimming in my nightmares
Hammock of dirt naps
Gazebo of my dreams
Singing with a cardinal
Chirping in the tall tree of Feasterville
Picking up a morsel
Hoping it sets me free
Hunt for the next idol
Billy is not asleep in my dreams
Grooving on a great riff
Shouting from rooftops
Falling asleep at the wheel
Picking up broken pieces
Trying to put me back together
Learning from nature
Not trying to be above
The birds and the bees
Fire pit of imagination ...
Hammock of dirt naps
Gazebo of my dreams
Singing with a cardinal
Chirping in the tall tree of Feasterville
Picking up a morsel
Hoping it sets me free
Hunt for the next idol
Billy is not asleep in my dreams
Grooving on a great riff
Shouting from rooftops
Falling asleep at the wheel
Picking up broken pieces
Trying to put me back together
Learning from nature
Not trying to be above
The birds and the bees
Fire pit of imagination ...
#alcohol
#nature
#stars
51 reads
0 Comments
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