Poems About Abuse Seeking Honest Critique
#abuse
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Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
29th Apr 2025 9:17pm
29th Apr 2025 9:17pm
the dying in us all
i realise too late
(for youth and childhood)
the hardest emotion to feel
the thing i always fought against
and that which kept out all
was love, forgiveness.
how i imagined killing you
so many times
of making you afraid
as you made me
when round your own son’s neck
you placed your hands
and held him fast across the bath
the tap running, running.
i thought of stabbing you to death
of breaking your skull with a chair
and feeling pleasure on
the consummation of that act
approaching sensuality. ...
(for youth and childhood)
the hardest emotion to feel
the thing i always fought against
and that which kept out all
was love, forgiveness.
how i imagined killing you
so many times
of making you afraid
as you made me
when round your own son’s neck
you placed your hands
and held him fast across the bath
the tap running, running.
i thought of stabbing you to death
of breaking your skull with a chair
and feeling pleasure on
the consummation of that act
approaching sensuality. ...
#abuse
#childhood
#forgiveness #love
#forgiveness #love
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2025 00:59am
23rd Apr 2025 00:59am
Hey man, hop in my caravan
I'm solied
Your soiled
We're all soiled
I have arrived
10 million miles from home
Earth is where I'll stay
My god isn't your god
A fiery beast is all I have to say
Flies, Maggots, Earthworms and roaches
They spill out of the earth's core
You should fuck the pretty leper girl over there
Let's travel the universe, the 2025 galaxy tour
Oh mommy, mommy we need help
My mind is cracked in half
All hope is lost, you're bleeding out
Forever plagued, just sit back and laugh
What do you know about...
Your soiled
We're all soiled
I have arrived
10 million miles from home
Earth is where I'll stay
My god isn't your god
A fiery beast is all I have to say
Flies, Maggots, Earthworms and roaches
They spill out of the earth's core
You should fuck the pretty leper girl over there
Let's travel the universe, the 2025 galaxy tour
Oh mommy, mommy we need help
My mind is cracked in half
All hope is lost, you're bleeding out
Forever plagued, just sit back and laugh
What do you know about...
#abuse
#happiness
#sex
#travel
#universe
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6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2025 2:12am
22nd Apr 2025 2:12am
When it's over
When it gets that way sometimes, we have to decide, not to deny the truth that keeps, slapping you in the face. 😯
WHEN it gets to that way how much more will you. Keep on believing the lies, that they won't abuse you, emotionally and mentally and physically. 😯 How much more do you think, you gonna keep taking, for truly can you really denying yourself and be honest when ask thyself. 🤔 WHAT do you want and need, in your life and love dreams. For sure when in those kinds of situations, you only have one mission, Then it's time to leave for a more righteous,...
WHEN it gets to that way how much more will you. Keep on believing the lies, that they won't abuse you, emotionally and mentally and physically. 😯 How much more do you think, you gonna keep taking, for truly can you really denying yourself and be honest when ask thyself. 🤔 WHAT do you want and need, in your life and love dreams. For sure when in those kinds of situations, you only have one mission, Then it's time to leave for a more righteous,...
#abuse
#dialogue
#fear
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
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ShaleeSue
Shalee
Shalee
Poem Published
20th Apr 2025 8:39am
20th Apr 2025 8:39am
No Answer In The Room
#abuse
#hurt
#MeToo
#secrets
#shame
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KristinaX
Poem Published
17th Apr 2025 8:00pm
17th Apr 2025 8:00pm
I Waited With the Match
I never begged to be loved.
I only ever learned
how to be wanted.
How to breathe pretty
and smile soft,
how to keep my pain
polished and palatable
so no one would ask
why I never flinched
when hands reached for me
like I was already theirs.
I was the match
they lit themselves on,
then cursed for burning.
And still-
I stayed close.
Because deep down,
I believed if someone
just stood still long enough,
they might see me.
Not the show.
Not the skin. ...
I only ever learned
how to be wanted.
How to breathe pretty
and smile soft,
how to keep my pain
polished and palatable
so no one would ask
why I never flinched
when hands reached for me
like I was already theirs.
I was the match
they lit themselves on,
then cursed for burning.
And still-
I stayed close.
Because deep down,
I believed if someone
just stood still long enough,
they might see me.
Not the show.
Not the skin. ...
#abuse
#lust
#manipulation
#passion
#relationships
299 reads
37 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 00:06am
15th Apr 2025 00:06am
Walls And Doors
Behind close doors 🚪 who really knows what goes on behind those close doors🚪in the dark 🌑 mist of darkness 🕳️ LIKE a hole in the floor. 🤔 It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️. What I wrote may create visions of memories, to someone who has or have been face to face, within this kind of a mental stimulation of the mind, and thoughts in situations during the course of there life. Which becomes in embedded in the deepest, part of the mind and heart ❤️ THAT goes...
#abuse
#LifeStruggles
#secrets
#StreamOfConsciousness
#suffering
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Apr 2025 10:17am
8th Apr 2025 10:17am
Abused
She was on her way home from a friend's house
A man raped her in the parking lot of her apartment building
30 feet from the entrance
At first she begged to let her go
He punched her, broke the left half of her jaw
She stopped resisting
It was better to just get it over with and hope that he didn't kill her
All the time he was raping her she could feel it
She didn't black out
She could feel her tearing her up inside
She tried to relax so it wouldn't hurt as much
Her jaw made bright blue sparks flash in front of her eyes every time he...
A man raped her in the parking lot of her apartment building
30 feet from the entrance
At first she begged to let her go
He punched her, broke the left half of her jaw
She stopped resisting
It was better to just get it over with and hope that he didn't kill her
All the time he was raping her she could feel it
She didn't black out
She could feel her tearing her up inside
She tried to relax so it wouldn't hurt as much
Her jaw made bright blue sparks flash in front of her eyes every time he...
#abuse
#depression
#LifeStruggles #MentalHealth
#LifeStruggles #MentalHealth
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4 Comments
BeautifulNothing2
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 7:54am
5th Apr 2025 7:54am
Light
Lift me up,
Just to break me down,
Wipe my tears,
Only to push me to the ground
Soulless eyes,
Bleeding into my life,
Web of words,
Spun into a beautiful lie,
You don't love me,
You said you wished I would die,
You lift me up,
Only to slam me down,
Back to reality,
You've taken my crown,
How can I get over this?
Your love is like a bottomless lake,
And I can't swim,
You laugh at me while I drown,
Broken promises,
Empty words,
Constantly questioning my self worth,
You mock...
Just to break me down,
Wipe my tears,
Only to push me to the ground
Soulless eyes,
Bleeding into my life,
Web of words,
Spun into a beautiful lie,
You don't love me,
You said you wished I would die,
You lift me up,
Only to slam me down,
Back to reality,
You've taken my crown,
How can I get over this?
Your love is like a bottomless lake,
And I can't swim,
You laugh at me while I drown,
Broken promises,
Empty words,
Constantly questioning my self worth,
You mock...
#abuse
#forgiveness
#love #suffering
#love #suffering
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BeautifulNothing2
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 7:17pm
2nd Apr 2025 7:17pm
Freedom from Abuse
He was my demon,
My savior,
My darkness,
My love,
My Evil.
He was my smile
My heart,
My tears,
My laughter,
My pain.
He was the one who,
Broke me,
Inspired me,
Beat me,
Destroyed me.
He gave me,
Life,
Lessons,
Love,
Duties.
He lied to me,
Cheated me,
Hit me,
Hugged me,
Despised me.
He was full of,
Broken promises,
Darkness,
Booz,
Suffering.
He was my,
Lover,
Friend, ...
My savior,
My darkness,
My love,
My Evil.
He was my smile
My heart,
My tears,
My laughter,
My pain.
He was the one who,
Broke me,
Inspired me,
Beat me,
Destroyed me.
He gave me,
Life,
Lessons,
Love,
Duties.
He lied to me,
Cheated me,
Hit me,
Hugged me,
Despised me.
He was full of,
Broken promises,
Darkness,
Booz,
Suffering.
He was my,
Lover,
Friend, ...
#abuse
#dark
#freedom
#hate
#love
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BeautifulNothing2
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 7:33am
2nd Apr 2025 7:33am
Heart Of The Devil
I drank with his darkness,
I consumed his evil desires,
Now I dance with his demons,
Who smile at my demise,
I can't escape his eternal hell,
I'm trapped by the heart of the Devil.
I consumed his evil desires,
Now I dance with his demons,
Who smile at my demise,
I can't escape his eternal hell,
I'm trapped by the heart of the Devil.
#abuse
#dark
#devil
#FeelingTrapped
#hell
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NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 10:14pm
1st Apr 2025 10:14pm
"The Winter Warsaw Wladyslaw"
Władysław Szpilman’s world, a vibrant tapestry of music and camaraderie, was shattered in September 1939 with the Nazi invasion of Poland.
His beloved Warsaw, a city pulsating with life and art, became a prison, its streets echoing with the boots of oppression. The loss was immediate and devastating: his radio station, his livelihood, his sense of normalcy, all stripped away.
The gradual erosion of their humanity, the forced relocation to the Warsaw Ghetto, the constant fear, the daily horrors—these were the losses that chipped away at his soul. He witnessed...
His beloved Warsaw, a city pulsating with life and art, became a prison, its streets echoing with the boots of oppression. The loss was immediate and devastating: his radio station, his livelihood, his sense of normalcy, all stripped away.
The gradual erosion of their humanity, the forced relocation to the Warsaw Ghetto, the constant fear, the daily horrors—these were the losses that chipped away at his soul. He witnessed...
#abuse
#despair
#fear
#loneliness
#suffering
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Mar 2025 11:59pm
24th Mar 2025 11:59pm
I trust it, you hate it
I abused you when I had the time
Never saw it on your face
Reconstruction in your own words
I didn't mind, no I'm not a head case
Such good times looking into your eyes
Your beauty screams pain, I know that your mine
Becoming sober was your mistake
There's nothing left for you here
I trust it, you hate it
Nightmares heal, reality is fear
I long to hear you kill your lies
Now I feel so haunted as I search for
Any excuse that will ease my mind
Love till death, unusable whore
Never saw it on your face
Reconstruction in your own words
I didn't mind, no I'm not a head case
Such good times looking into your eyes
Your beauty screams pain, I know that your mine
Becoming sober was your mistake
There's nothing left for you here
I trust it, you hate it
Nightmares heal, reality is fear
I long to hear you kill your lies
Now I feel so haunted as I search for
Any excuse that will ease my mind
Love till death, unusable whore
#abuse
#identity
#MentalHealth
#SelfReflection
#suffering
113 reads
6 Comments
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