Poems on William Shakespeare Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems on William Shakespeare seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2021 2:02am
22nd Dec 2021 2:02am
the same page
I dare say will was right,
the whole world’s a
stage, but
it’s closed down for
tonight due
to plague which,
even in his own time was
all the rage
the whole world’s a
stage, but
it’s closed down for
tonight due
to plague which,
even in his own time was
all the rage
#WilliamShakespeare
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2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2020 11:50pm
23rd Dec 2020 11:50pm
despite or because
he wrote some of his
greatest plays during the plague years ago that was
greatest plays during the plague years ago that was
#WilliamShakespeare
476 reads
2 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
24th May 2020 3:25am
24th May 2020 3:25am
Daily visitor
Every morning, sometimes afternoon too,
taps on the glass
Tap-tap-tap, tap-tap
Drives the dogs crazy
Sits on the clothesline or a branch,
sings a beautiful little song
How can I resist...
I don't have birdseed
but he enjoys a little pinch of oats
I'm starting to look forward to his visits
I know it won't go on forever
but he's mine for now
so he needs a name
Was going to call him Romeo,
but he died from poison
-- My Shakespeare's not great,
I had to google --
With that dripping blood on his chest
I...
taps on the glass
Tap-tap-tap, tap-tap
Drives the dogs crazy
Sits on the clothesline or a branch,
sings a beautiful little song
How can I resist...
I don't have birdseed
but he enjoys a little pinch of oats
I'm starting to look forward to his visits
I know it won't go on forever
but he's mine for now
so he needs a name
Was going to call him Romeo,
but he died from poison
-- My Shakespeare's not great,
I had to google --
With that dripping blood on his chest
I...
#happiness
#birds
#WilliamShakespeare
412 reads
13 Comments
Brokenpoet2020
Poem Published
21st Apr 2020 9:13pm
21st Apr 2020 9:13pm
Bars of the Bard
Nothing is either good or bad
But it is thinking that makes it so”
Bars of the Bard, resonate,
Kinetic energy flow.
The ripple is only a fleeting reaction
To the cycle underneath.
How you feel is just a perception,
Projection, to daily reality.
The problem is not a problem;
It’s a situation and response.
How you feel about it is the problem;
Your, emotional intelligence.
Feelin ‘bout thinkin
An thinkin ‘bout feelin..
Responding from places lacking in healing.
The bard hit me hard, with a lesson for life, ...
But it is thinking that makes it so”
Bars of the Bard, resonate,
Kinetic energy flow.
The ripple is only a fleeting reaction
To the cycle underneath.
How you feel is just a perception,
Projection, to daily reality.
The problem is not a problem;
It’s a situation and response.
How you feel about it is the problem;
Your, emotional intelligence.
Feelin ‘bout thinkin
An thinkin ‘bout feelin..
Responding from places lacking in healing.
The bard hit me hard, with a lesson for life, ...
#learning
#SelfDiscovery
#WilliamShakespeare
#healing
#NaPoWriMo2020
523 reads
0 Comments
russell_snow
Poem Published
30th Jan 2020 5:50pm
30th Jan 2020 5:50pm
Special Moments
I see her smiling by a willow branch
Where shadows long and twist
and touch her skin
Where words can sink in ways
in which I can't
Those sweeter thoughts; yet warn me
dreams will end
So forth my eyes of tortured
purple dress
Belong the days among the leaves
of spring
To bloom the flowers wild and soft caress
The hands that tear apart
my paper wings
I picture all the times we couldn't see
The dark behind the pillars
lust and greed
So taking every day by day to free
The long lost lover deep inside of...
Where shadows long and twist
and touch her skin
Where words can sink in ways
in which I can't
Those sweeter thoughts; yet warn me
dreams will end
So forth my eyes of tortured
purple dress
Belong the days among the leaves
of spring
To bloom the flowers wild and soft caress
The hands that tear apart
my paper wings
I picture all the times we couldn't see
The dark behind the pillars
lust and greed
So taking every day by day to free
The long lost lover deep inside of...
#regret
#relationships
#forgiveness
#separation
#WilliamShakespeare
322 reads
2 Comments
De420
Poem Published
7th Dec 2019 6:31pm
7th Dec 2019 6:31pm
Imagine that!
If every one in the world can contribute what a world this would be indeed, right!? you just need to believe, even changing yourself, just that is something not to be feared! SO start with that, with this small world of yours cuz what did michael jackson say but to look at the man in the mirror and if you wanna change the world start with your self first and it should be done with thirst
like a vampire ready to bust with blood that you imbursed.
this opportunity to change the world by changing yourself first
Start at a minute micro cosmic level and you will see a change! we...
like a vampire ready to bust with blood that you imbursed.
this opportunity to change the world by changing yourself first
Start at a minute micro cosmic level and you will see a change! we...
#freedom
#art
#WilliamShakespeare
#responsibility
#passion
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dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
5th Oct 2019 6:47pm
5th Oct 2019 6:47pm
Bring Some Thing to Sustain The Ghost of a King ! / A Taste of Yorick puddin'
Did I didn't ?
or,
did he do? ( it? )
Ah, a slapiddy face will do for right now,
as publicOpiniion moves to
jellify the corporate nose pickin' into
a ticklin'n;multiColoured
tasty newconfeXion
toward the slip'slobberin slide on Helsinger highway.
Here, dear Hamlet's ham-handed handling of his host,
the ghosty KingBigDaddy,
couldn't be as similar to a slipknot, as mule meat is to
chewing gum.
So...
or,
did he do? ( it? )
Ah, a slapiddy face will do for right now,
as publicOpiniion moves to
jellify the corporate nose pickin' into
a ticklin'n;multiColoured
tasty newconfeXion
toward the slip'slobberin slide on Helsinger highway.
Here, dear Hamlet's ham-handed handling of his host,
the ghosty KingBigDaddy,
couldn't be as similar to a slipknot, as mule meat is to
chewing gum.
So...
#depression
#conflict
#death
#spiritual
#WilliamShakespeare
388 reads
3 Comments
shannonJane
Poem Published
6th Aug 2019 1:08am
6th Aug 2019 1:08am
The war isn't over
I'm so scared.
Alot to learn.
Body frozen.
Learning.
Nostolgic.
Releasing an old me.
Nostalgia..
As it burns in to history.
I'm scared.
Battle ready.
Alot to learn.
Body frozen.
Learning.
Nostolgic.
Releasing an old me.
Nostalgia..
As it burns in to history.
I'm scared.
Battle ready.
#WilliamShakespeare
351 reads
0 Comments
mingomingus
SamTheSlam
SamTheSlam
Poem Published
6th Jul 2019 6:03am
6th Jul 2019 6:03am
The Gay Adventures of Billy Shakespeare & Wally Whitman - Act 1
#WilliamShakespeare
#RalphWaldoEmerson
523 reads
5 Comments
joegracegrace
Joe Grace
Joe Grace
Poem Published
30th Aug 2018 11:07am
30th Aug 2018 11:07am
The Cherubs in the Holy of Holies Reveal the Truth of Evolution!!!
This poem is practice for the video i want to make.
about the meaning of the 2 cherubs on top of the Ark of the Covenant
in the Holy of Holies -
In the Temple that used to be in Jerusalem.
Anyway, the 2 cherubs are COMPOSITE FIGURES: part eagle, part ox, part lion. And with the head of a man.
Since i am into (theistic) EVOLUTION, i am always on the alert for any
passage in the Bible that i come across that supports evolution.
Evolution boils down to the idea that all life forms are connected
(the first species produces the...
about the meaning of the 2 cherubs on top of the Ark of the Covenant
in the Holy of Holies -
In the Temple that used to be in Jerusalem.
Anyway, the 2 cherubs are COMPOSITE FIGURES: part eagle, part ox, part lion. And with the head of a man.
Since i am into (theistic) EVOLUTION, i am always on the alert for any
passage in the Bible that i come across that supports evolution.
Evolution boils down to the idea that all life forms are connected
(the first species produces the...
#WilliamShakespeare
469 reads
0 Comments
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
31st May 2018 1:37pm
31st May 2018 1:37pm
Unfaithful
Cometh hither I plead
As I expound on thy beauty
Thy quim a wondrous fruit
Thine ass an apple of orchards blossom
Thy lips, plump, supple,
Exquisitely divine
Lift up thy petticoat
As I vouchsafe upon thy will
My will
Betwixt us
Sins elixir
Lust
As we did lie in the throes of passion
I breathe thy scent of paradisiac remorse
I remember
‘Hell hath no fury
Like a woman scorned’
Thus evening falls
And I return to the melancholy ...
As I expound on thy beauty
Thy quim a wondrous fruit
Thine ass an apple of orchards blossom
Thy lips, plump, supple,
Exquisitely divine
Lift up thy petticoat
As I vouchsafe upon thy will
My will
Betwixt us
Sins elixir
Lust
As we did lie in the throes of passion
I breathe thy scent of paradisiac remorse
I remember
‘Hell hath no fury
Like a woman scorned’
Thus evening falls
And I return to the melancholy ...
#lust
#erotic
#betrayal
#beauty
#WilliamShakespeare
843 reads
16 Comments
David_Macleod
14397816
14397816
Poem Published
26th Apr 2018 00:01am
26th Apr 2018 00:01am
Much Ado About Nothing
Luvs, Darlings, Sweeties,
thespians, lesbians, and has-beens,
Tarts, Farts, and Passionate Hearts,
Dinner Suits, Boots, Old Coots,
Frumps, Humps, Those down in the dumps,
Seers, Queers, Sweet Old Dears,
Purists, Jurists, American Tourists,
Lords, Ladies, Gentlemen, Children,
all other members of the human race and Drama critics,
"What the Hell do you think you are doing?"
Sitting there night after night, paying inflated prices
to watch busty middle aged women and brainless
young men prance around in tights performing. ...
thespians, lesbians, and has-beens,
Tarts, Farts, and Passionate Hearts,
Dinner Suits, Boots, Old Coots,
Frumps, Humps, Those down in the dumps,
Seers, Queers, Sweet Old Dears,
Purists, Jurists, American Tourists,
Lords, Ladies, Gentlemen, Children,
all other members of the human race and Drama critics,
"What the Hell do you think you are doing?"
Sitting there night after night, paying inflated prices
to watch busty middle aged women and brainless
young men prance around in tights performing. ...
#LifeAsAWriter
#WilliamShakespeare
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