Poems About My Inspiration Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about my inspiration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 4:21pm
26th Feb 2025 4:21pm
Uniqueness
Each poet unique
No one better than the rest
All voices matter.
No one better than the rest
All voices matter.
#haiku
#identity
#inspirational
#MyInspiration
#senryu
62 reads
14 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 4:26am
25th Feb 2025 4:26am
Upbeat
You want to help?
Stop breathing!
All the things that I hate,
Think their hearts have meaning.
But I'm tired,
And they keep believing.
So let's play a game.
It's called " No More Hearts Beating"
Stop breathing!
All the things that I hate,
Think their hearts have meaning.
But I'm tired,
And they keep believing.
So let's play a game.
It's called " No More Hearts Beating"
#MyInspiration
51 reads
6 Comments
NP_NP
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 4:43pm
17th Feb 2025 4:43pm
Unseen
I sit back, unseen,
in the shadows of your lives,
watching the threads
that pull you—fragile, messy things—
tangle and twist.
I don’t need to speak,
don’t need to be seen,
I’m here to catch the moments
when you think you’re invisible—
that’s when the truth slips through.
Patterns emerge in the chaos,
a heartbeat’s hesitation,
the flicker in the eye
before you hide the secret,
before you lie to yourself.
You move,
like marionettes
dancing on a stage
no one...
in the shadows of your lives,
watching the threads
that pull you—fragile, messy things—
tangle and twist.
I don’t need to speak,
don’t need to be seen,
I’m here to catch the moments
when you think you’re invisible—
that’s when the truth slips through.
Patterns emerge in the chaos,
a heartbeat’s hesitation,
the flicker in the eye
before you hide the secret,
before you lie to yourself.
You move,
like marionettes
dancing on a stage
no one...
#inspirational
#LifeAsAWriter
#MyInspiration
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
60 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 00:29am
4th Feb 2025 00:29am
baroness orczy
a character from way back when
I was young I loved classic
crime fiction, agatha, baroness orczy;
and particularly the latter, since her
‘old man in the corner’ stories gave me the idea
for my old bloke in the pub.
I was young I loved classic
crime fiction, agatha, baroness orczy;
and particularly the latter, since her
‘old man in the corner’ stories gave me the idea
for my old bloke in the pub.
#MyInspiration
56 reads
5 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 1:12am
21st Jan 2025 1:12am
vitae summa brevis ..
he wrote, I think, one
great lyrical poem, before
dying at thirty three;
what more do you want ..
great lyrical poem, before
dying at thirty three;
what more do you want ..
#MyInspiration
76 reads
10 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 7:17pm
19th Jan 2025 7:17pm
Wordsmith
I am the architect of words; a verbal alchemist
Weaving rhymes so seamless; they transcend the mist.
Each syllable I sculpt; a diamond refined
A tapestry of thoughts; the rarest you'll find.
I'm the new age sage; a Shakespeare upgrade
A timeless cascade where brilliance is displayed
A wordsmith supreme; with verses tailor-made
Crafting lines so sharp; they never will fade
I breathe life to letters; make the mundane explode
A master of the metaphor; I decode and reload
Each stanza’s a canvas; each rhyme’s a parade
I'm the...
Weaving rhymes so seamless; they transcend the mist.
Each syllable I sculpt; a diamond refined
A tapestry of thoughts; the rarest you'll find.
I'm the new age sage; a Shakespeare upgrade
A timeless cascade where brilliance is displayed
A wordsmith supreme; with verses tailor-made
Crafting lines so sharp; they never will fade
I breathe life to letters; make the mundane explode
A master of the metaphor; I decode and reload
Each stanza’s a canvas; each rhyme’s a parade
I'm the...
#LifeAsAWriter
#MyInspiration
#PowerOfWords #WritingPoetry
#PowerOfWords #WritingPoetry
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0 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 5:19pm
13th Jan 2025 5:19pm
A Best Seed of Love
My muse is here, seeds in my heart abyss
invokes a soul to wake and open up
a solid earth shall treasure such a bliss
and oceans are spared for me to grow up.
A best seed of Love, a soul, ever to grace
reaching my soil, digging up my gardens
the scent of divine, the mystery of space
enlightens my spirit and my Self heartens.
A flame of Life meant to glow and brighten
the darkest of dark and every sealed whole
the core of awareness, to touch and heighten
lit paths to walk and ascend, one is my dole.
Intense powers...
invokes a soul to wake and open up
a solid earth shall treasure such a bliss
and oceans are spared for me to grow up.
A best seed of Love, a soul, ever to grace
reaching my soil, digging up my gardens
the scent of divine, the mystery of space
enlightens my spirit and my Self heartens.
A flame of Life meant to glow and brighten
the darkest of dark and every sealed whole
the core of awareness, to touch and heighten
lit paths to walk and ascend, one is my dole.
Intense powers...
#admiration
#gratitude
#inspirational
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
71 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 3:44am
10th Jan 2025 3:44am
Hand and Eye
My little guy has got the hand and eye
See a shape and put your hands in place
To receive what I’m delivering
As it’s coming in…depth perception kicks in
Two points on a map and intersect where you should be
He sees the ball and anticipates where
And what direction
The passing wind can have an effect
You have to put that into the equation
Split second decisions between hand and eye
When you hawk that ball and hunt it down
It ends up positive with clapping all around
Next thing you know you helped...
See a shape and put your hands in place
To receive what I’m delivering
As it’s coming in…depth perception kicks in
Two points on a map and intersect where you should be
He sees the ball and anticipates where
And what direction
The passing wind can have an effect
You have to put that into the equation
Split second decisions between hand and eye
When you hawk that ball and hunt it down
It ends up positive with clapping all around
Next thing you know you helped...
#determination
#MyInspiration
#son #sports
#son #sports
56 reads
0 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 3:04pm
8th Jan 2025 3:04pm
My Muse of Poetry
Not all the worlds belong to me
Not all the words set me free
What the heart loves
is of will
I just free some words
to confine its spill.
****
A time, my words
on my papers sashaying
the shape to me alluring
the tone of their steps
I hear
as they are dancing
the music they are following
the soul, in a trance, just listens
without interfering.
****
A time, along with my Muse
we keep to each other
our hearts baring
secrets sharing
silently, knowingly connecting.. ...
Not all the words set me free
What the heart loves
is of will
I just free some words
to confine its spill.
****
A time, my words
on my papers sashaying
the shape to me alluring
the tone of their steps
I hear
as they are dancing
the music they are following
the soul, in a trance, just listens
without interfering.
****
A time, along with my Muse
we keep to each other
our hearts baring
secrets sharing
silently, knowingly connecting.. ...
#admiration
#emotions
#LifeAsAWriter
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
101 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 11:27pm
5th Jan 2025 11:27pm
Appreciated kindness
Will I ever know why
making a wish is so hard?
Turning a wish into a truth.
Hold the breath until I'm blue.
Why should I...
Why could I...
Why would I even try?
No year is ever so new.
No bone is easy to chew.
So let me simply just blow you
a kiss... a kiss... a kiss...
Let's wait for the blizzard to end.
I swear to you no one else will know.
No soul was harmed in the making
of this movie slow motion!
No light is clear until meeting
the darkness.
making a wish is so hard?
Turning a wish into a truth.
Hold the breath until I'm blue.
Why should I...
Why could I...
Why would I even try?
No year is ever so new.
No bone is easy to chew.
So let me simply just blow you
a kiss... a kiss... a kiss...
Let's wait for the blizzard to end.
I swear to you no one else will know.
No soul was harmed in the making
of this movie slow motion!
No light is clear until meeting
the darkness.
#healing
#learning
#MyInspiration
#tea
#WritingPoetry
73 reads
8 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 9:18pm
5th Jan 2025 9:18pm
Virgo
Virgo is my sign with which I deeply align
I thrive as I help and serve, driven by passion and verve
Religious in heart mystic in mind, a soul wholly unconfined
Gifted by the healing power of Love and the sensibility of dove
Of a sense of worth, an affinity with mother earth, that’s my sign birth.
I thrive as I help and serve, driven by passion and verve
Religious in heart mystic in mind, a soul wholly unconfined
Gifted by the healing power of Love and the sensibility of dove
Of a sense of worth, an affinity with mother earth, that’s my sign birth.
#acrostic
#FreeVerse
#MyInspiration #WritingPoetry
#MyInspiration #WritingPoetry
77 reads
8 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 5:35pm
1st Jan 2025 5:35pm
Ode to Pessoa's Multiple Poems
Oh Pessoa, master of masks and souls,
who unfolds in multiple verses,
in each heteronym, a universe,
in each poem, a new being.
Alberto Caeiro, shepherd of the fields,
with simplicity and wisdom,
describes nature in its purity
and teaches us to see the world with clarity.
Ricardo Reis, serene epicurean,
with his odes of calm and resignation,
celebrates life with measure and reason
and invites us to live with moderation.
Álvaro de Campos, sensitive engineer,
with his eagerness and modernity, ...
who unfolds in multiple verses,
in each heteronym, a universe,
in each poem, a new being.
Alberto Caeiro, shepherd of the fields,
with simplicity and wisdom,
describes nature in its purity
and teaches us to see the world with clarity.
Ricardo Reis, serene epicurean,
with his odes of calm and resignation,
celebrates life with measure and reason
and invites us to live with moderation.
Álvaro de Campos, sensitive engineer,
with his eagerness and modernity, ...
#confessional
#LifeAsAWriter
#MyInspiration
#WritersBlock
#WritingPoetry
95 reads
4 Comments
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