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Poems about my inspiration by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Birthday of but a single pang ( for Emily Dickinson on her birthday )
Birthday of but a single pang
scripted in poetry –
An observational epitaph
your destined legacy –
This illumed anniversary:
one hundred eighty-eight –
Sealed your quill in drying ink
letters in passionate blaze –
I wonder – perchance –
did you [hear] a fly buzz –
or see the window darken in Death
as...
scripted in poetry –
An observational epitaph
your destined legacy –
This illumed anniversary:
one hundred eighty-eight –
Sealed your quill in drying ink
letters in passionate blaze –
I wonder – perchance –
did you [hear] a fly buzz –
or see the window darken in Death
as...
#LifeAsAWriter
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry #EmilyDickinson
#WritingPoetry #EmilyDickinson
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PIECES OF BROKEN GLASS
Here I am as I am just a mortal man, just taking it one day at a time. YET trying so desperately to survive in a place, that has become a vision of my own life passing, before my own eyes. 👁️👁️ For it's necessary for me to understand, what it is I am going through, yet there are those things that I can't really control. 😞 YET I know that it's in GOD'S HANDS BECAUSE OF MY FAITH, IN WHAT I 👁️ SEE AND BELIEVE. 🙏 FOR sure there will be some hard times, as well as good and bad times when I feel like SILENTLY, just crying with the...
#LifeAsAWriter
#MyInspiration
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
#WritingPoetry
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Autumnal High
The autumn touched woods blissfully
bludgeon my eyes with a near death of pleasure
as I silently stood.
Euphoria dipped thoughts.
Like chocolate oozed on my bones.
Burgundy leaves sash the abandoning trees
to eventually blanket stone.
Timber flaunts flawless color
in the delicate seize of my soul.
The fall foliage abundant with stolen breath
gently mesmorizes.
Ivory clouds in their sultry slash across
the cerulean sky.
How lovely to be burdened by the heart's autumnal high.
bludgeon my eyes with a near death of pleasure
as I silently stood.
Euphoria dipped thoughts.
Like chocolate oozed on my bones.
Burgundy leaves sash the abandoning trees
to eventually blanket stone.
Timber flaunts flawless color
in the delicate seize of my soul.
The fall foliage abundant with stolen breath
gently mesmorizes.
Ivory clouds in their sultry slash across
the cerulean sky.
How lovely to be burdened by the heart's autumnal high.
#fall
#nature
#MyInspiration
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SWEET KITTY CAT PICTURE
Your hair, those eyes, and full pout lips
catch me, as if between the hips,
as you look at me, soulfully,
needing no speech to seduce me.
Just one glance is penetrating,
with interest concentrating.
to make me feel I'm important -
I am the man of your moment.
The lustre of your Creole skin
gets under mine, puts mind in spin.
You deport yourself like a queen,
necklace and earrings brighten scene.
My mind and senses are combined
in attention; you have...
catch me, as if between the hips,
as you look at me, soulfully,
needing no speech to seduce me.
Just one glance is penetrating,
with interest concentrating.
to make me feel I'm important -
I am the man of your moment.
The lustre of your Creole skin
gets under mine, puts mind in spin.
You deport yourself like a queen,
necklace and earrings brighten scene.
My mind and senses are combined
in attention; you have...
#erotic
#rhyming
#MyInspiration #sensual
#MyInspiration #sensual
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Confessional 9
My writing is nothing
If I'm not writing about you
I admit it
I'm lost
Muse, object of desire, addiction
Power
Yes, you drive me
To rise above myself
Need to prove something
Everyday, is 24 hours enough ?
I need you
Torrents of flesh, desire and sin
You breathe life into my crying soul ..
Gravitational pull
An earthquake...
If I'm not writing about you
I admit it
I'm lost
Muse, object of desire, addiction
Power
Yes, you drive me
To rise above myself
Need to prove something
Everyday, is 24 hours enough ?
I need you
Torrents of flesh, desire and sin
You breathe life into my crying soul ..
Gravitational pull
An earthquake...
#relationships
#lover
#addiction
#MyInspiration
#PowerOfWords
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The Seduction Of My Muse
#LifeAsAWriter
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
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The Frenchies Seek Him Everywhere!
Modern conversation can be a fright
with all those pistols on rustic hips.
The savages are ready for a fight
If you're reckless with the use of your lips.
Barbarous dolts may think I'm perversed
should I savor some silver-tongued love.
Yet fancy, glad, must be warded and nursed;
I fear poltroonery gave it a shove.
Then the internet beat it down more
and told it to get a haircut and job.
But some seek fancy as never before...
terse chafed by snob or rude slob;
They seek it there; they seek it...
with all those pistols on rustic hips.
The savages are ready for a fight
If you're reckless with the use of your lips.
Barbarous dolts may think I'm perversed
should I savor some silver-tongued love.
Yet fancy, glad, must be warded and nursed;
I fear poltroonery gave it a shove.
Then the internet beat it down more
and told it to get a haircut and job.
But some seek fancy as never before...
terse chafed by snob or rude slob;
They seek it there; they seek it...
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
#PowerOfWords #passion
#PowerOfWords #passion
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Quiet and Pensive
I can almost see him there sitting at the airport
That must have been circa nineteen-seventy
Waiting for a late-night transatlantic flight
A lyrical poet in the making on his way to destiny
A world of opportunities awaited the young man
Mild achievements as well as disappointments
But we must always pay the price before we rise
Until considerable success comes with enjoyment
I can picture him sitting there quiet and pensive
Looking out the window with articulate speech
Writing as his reflection stares back at him
The millions...
That must have been circa nineteen-seventy
Waiting for a late-night transatlantic flight
A lyrical poet in the making on his way to destiny
A world of opportunities awaited the young man
Mild achievements as well as disappointments
But we must always pay the price before we rise
Until considerable success comes with enjoyment
I can picture him sitting there quiet and pensive
Looking out the window with articulate speech
Writing as his reflection stares back at him
The millions...
#music
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry #NaPoWriMo2021
#WritingPoetry #NaPoWriMo2021
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my immortal poem
when I closed my eyes
...& the world went quiet
he whispered my secret name
I felt his breath breeze across my neck
a sensuous zephyr caressing
seeking my pulse point & its rhythm
a vibration deeply affected by his own
skipping staccato racing apace
his fingers spread across my throat
exhaling sultry sentiment upon my blushing face
gentle in their divine arrogance
every thump pumping poetry through me
as heat rose within my hungry hollows
arching my thoughts into his open palms
where he held them carefully ...
...& the world went quiet
he whispered my secret name
I felt his breath breeze across my neck
a sensuous zephyr caressing
seeking my pulse point & its rhythm
a vibration deeply affected by his own
skipping staccato racing apace
his fingers spread across my throat
exhaling sultry sentiment upon my blushing face
gentle in their divine arrogance
every thump pumping poetry through me
as heat rose within my hungry hollows
arching my thoughts into his open palms
where he held them carefully ...
#lover
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry #gratitude
#WritingPoetry #gratitude
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Poetry Queen
Poetry Queen is my muse
Unique with words
She's challenging me
With poetry of love
My heart is beating rapidly
For her unique words
Bring custom wisdom
To wander lust mind
Unique with words
She's challenging me
With poetry of love
My heart is beating rapidly
For her unique words
Bring custom wisdom
To wander lust mind
#love
#lust
#MyInspiration
#sexy
#emotions
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inspiration
The journey
from the womb
to the grave,
and the heart
and mind
involved in this
journey,
inspires me
to pick up the pen
and write...
The dry and wet garden
of life, and the plants
of laughter and sorrow
growing in it,
inspire me to
write something...
The time
growing between
craving and satisfaction,
the people walking
holding the hands
of coincidence
and separation,
which inspires me
to carve words on paper...
The young couple ...
from the womb
to the grave,
and the heart
and mind
involved in this
journey,
inspires me
to pick up the pen
and write...
The dry and wet garden
of life, and the plants
of laughter and sorrow
growing in it,
inspire me to
write something...
The time
growing between
craving and satisfaction,
the people walking
holding the hands
of coincidence
and separation,
which inspires me
to carve words on paper...
The young couple ...
#courage
#MyInspiration
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Shame
the day haunted me
& the night offered no shade
the moon laughed
while i run from demons
the sun witnessed
& turned away
my pain to bare alone
i harbor it
travail as a woman in labor
i give birth to it
& name it
i call him shame
hide him from the world
covet his nature
& feed him my loneliness
he grows
in the empty places ...
& the night offered no shade
the moon laughed
while i run from demons
the sun witnessed
& turned away
my pain to bare alone
i harbor it
travail as a woman in labor
i give birth to it
& name it
i call him shame
hide him from the world
covet his nature
& feed him my loneliness
he grows
in the empty places ...
#MeToo
#spiritual
#MyInspiration
#SelfReflection
#emotional
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