MeToo Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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metoo seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
LunaDahlia
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 12:30pm
26th Dec 2024 12:30pm
Black Widow’s Bluff
#MeToo
#murder
#revenge
44 reads
2 Comments
ArnoMalan1
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 10:30am
24th Nov 2024 10:30am
No matter what
That moment when I struggle
It's not supposed to be
I try to hold on to the
words once said to me
I promised that I'll thank Him
every single day
for if it was His blessing
I'll guard it come what may
In words once said to me
embedded in my heart
assured to always be
there no matter what
It's not supposed to be
I try to hold on to the
words once said to me
I promised that I'll thank Him
every single day
for if it was His blessing
I'll guard it come what may
In words once said to me
embedded in my heart
assured to always be
there no matter what
#bittersweet
#MeToo
#support
52 reads
0 Comments
LunaDahlia
Poem Published
24th Aug 2024 9:16am
24th Aug 2024 9:16am
Bloodletter
Bathing with a sponge in the blood of your brothers
Taking comfort in the pillow with the bones of your mother
Can the darkness or the madness of my wishes disappear?
Yes, I was seen, but I was a child to hear.
I had a soul, before he ripped it through my eyes
CPS saw all the marks, yet I'm the one who lies.
It's funny though, isn't it?
I'm not permitted to die
It's literally illegal for me to peacefully subside
I'm a time bomb, holding back for as long as i possibly can.
Woe betide the assholes: You should join the ones who ran.
Taking comfort in the pillow with the bones of your mother
Can the darkness or the madness of my wishes disappear?
Yes, I was seen, but I was a child to hear.
I had a soul, before he ripped it through my eyes
CPS saw all the marks, yet I'm the one who lies.
It's funny though, isn't it?
I'm not permitted to die
It's literally illegal for me to peacefully subside
I'm a time bomb, holding back for as long as i possibly can.
Woe betide the assholes: You should join the ones who ran.
#childhood
#MeToo
#morality #revenge
#morality #revenge
172 reads
0 Comments
LunaDahlia
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 10:34am
18th Aug 2024 10:34am
Insignia: The Light's Lament
#abuse
#death
#MeToo #revenge
#MeToo #revenge
123 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 5:10pm
18th Apr 2024 5:10pm
Fear
looking through time I shutter
for things done in the dark, I can't utter
whispers, secrets, and lies
flawed I'm told by design
madness followed I made a world of illusion
to protect an innocent mind from confusion
Beauty was our creation
tenderly we made all things lovely
each day a new exploration
we made heaven from hell in our confinement
it was not enough to put me away from Himself
time passed and he came to claim my son
creating a ball of fire
a light meant to warm some
and threaten...
for things done in the dark, I can't utter
whispers, secrets, and lies
flawed I'm told by design
madness followed I made a world of illusion
to protect an innocent mind from confusion
Beauty was our creation
tenderly we made all things lovely
each day a new exploration
we made heaven from hell in our confinement
it was not enough to put me away from Himself
time passed and he came to claim my son
creating a ball of fire
a light meant to warm some
and threaten...
#angels
#God
#love #MeToo
#love #MeToo
166 reads
2 Comments
Isgyppie_
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2024 12:56pm
2nd Apr 2024 12:56pm
Amiss
I opened up to you like
A barn door in the first
Of Spring
Exposed my fresh timber
To the cold gusts of your speech
You promised light
When all you ever brought
Was damp and heavy
You told me that I should
Believe in things unseen,
Like god and your truth.
I warped my brain to
Disarray to be approved
Did that make you feel powerful?
Or do you feel as rotten
As what you always produced?
I am still trying to freeze dry
The black mold you spread within me
While trying to convince...
A barn door in the first
Of Spring
Exposed my fresh timber
To the cold gusts of your speech
You promised light
When all you ever brought
Was damp and heavy
You told me that I should
Believe in things unseen,
Like god and your truth.
I warped my brain to
Disarray to be approved
Did that make you feel powerful?
Or do you feel as rotten
As what you always produced?
I am still trying to freeze dry
The black mold you spread within me
While trying to convince...
#abuse
#MeToo
#metaphor
#manipulation
#NaPoWriMo2024
210 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Mar 2024 3:16am
26th Mar 2024 3:16am
Faded Rose
tender emotions well inside me
honesty in presentation my heart swells
tears form, I hide them inside, you never see them
you only see the glare of pain
it touches the hurt spots, that make me afraid of losing
a family of generations
attached to me, each in a unique way
my understanding shaken I stood alone
I didn't see the tears in your eyes
my eyes shone too brightly
then diminished in the light that glittered more than me
my Delta Dawn was a faded rose
divinely flavored with sorrow
you sup at God's breast
and...
honesty in presentation my heart swells
tears form, I hide them inside, you never see them
you only see the glare of pain
it touches the hurt spots, that make me afraid of losing
a family of generations
attached to me, each in a unique way
my understanding shaken I stood alone
I didn't see the tears in your eyes
my eyes shone too brightly
then diminished in the light that glittered more than me
my Delta Dawn was a faded rose
divinely flavored with sorrow
you sup at God's breast
and...
#love
#MeToo
#metaphor
213 reads
4 Comments
Jermainesplain
Poem Published
9th Mar 2024 1:50am
9th Mar 2024 1:50am
Riding the Camelid of Distress on International Women’s Day
Chillin’ in a state of constant fear and trauma
And all I gots to say is thanks Obama
I be twitching and shaking on my way back home
I have a hard time remembering David the Gnome
The theme song specifically, and how that junks went
Door Dash is how my whole paycheck got spent
And even tho I be craving that KFC
I know it ain’t the healthiest meal for me
But imma YOLO this shit till the walls come down
I’m livin’ it up and painting the town
A dark shade of puce
Imma let it hang loose
I suspect Lizzo been having more mayo...
And all I gots to say is thanks Obama
I be twitching and shaking on my way back home
I have a hard time remembering David the Gnome
The theme song specifically, and how that junks went
Door Dash is how my whole paycheck got spent
And even tho I be craving that KFC
I know it ain’t the healthiest meal for me
But imma YOLO this shit till the walls come down
I’m livin’ it up and painting the town
A dark shade of puce
Imma let it hang loose
I suspect Lizzo been having more mayo...
#women
#MeToo
#feminism
174 reads
0 Comments
Maeve_Edmonson
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2023 5:56pm
3rd Nov 2023 5:56pm
The Ice Pick Queen
My hair was matted from sweat,
bleach and broken glass.
He drug me through the kitchen,
I grabbed everything in my path.
Then he threw me down the steps,
he held my hair in his hands,
gave me a little laugh
and told me to try and stand.
I'm frightened in the bushes,
he's searching with his flashlight.
In five minute's timing,
my life was changed tonight.
Blood running between my thighs,
my ankles ached from rope burns.
He said I brought it on myself.
Pretty girls must be scorned.
My...
bleach and broken glass.
He drug me through the kitchen,
I grabbed everything in my path.
Then he threw me down the steps,
he held my hair in his hands,
gave me a little laugh
and told me to try and stand.
I'm frightened in the bushes,
he's searching with his flashlight.
In five minute's timing,
my life was changed tonight.
Blood running between my thighs,
my ankles ached from rope burns.
He said I brought it on myself.
Pretty girls must be scorned.
My...
#lust
#violence
#abuse
#MeToo
#fiction
366 reads
8 Comments
wiseowl
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2023 5:11pm
22nd Sep 2023 5:11pm
Never Forget You - 08/04/2021
You left a hole inside of me in which I do not understand how to repair
Filling these holes with meaningless substance is not what fulfills me.
So, I am left with a slight grasp and tight memory of what was done
Faint- but, easily reconciled by everyday occurrences and and events..
A refreshment of the mind, that is not so new and fresh-
This is a memory that is engraved permanently inside with a poisonous recoil of emotion and photomemory.
Details, completely vile, hard to view, and impossible to forget
I...
Filling these holes with meaningless substance is not what fulfills me.
So, I am left with a slight grasp and tight memory of what was done
Faint- but, easily reconciled by everyday occurrences and and events..
A refreshment of the mind, that is not so new and fresh-
This is a memory that is engraved permanently inside with a poisonous recoil of emotion and photomemory.
Details, completely vile, hard to view, and impossible to forget
I...
#MeToo
#LifeStruggles
#emotional #bittersweet
#emotional #bittersweet
335 reads
1 Comment
Just_a_ghost
Riyah
Riyah
Poem Published
22nd May 2023 12:14pm
22nd May 2023 12:14pm
Psychiatrists wet dream
Seroquel
like tangerine skies
provides me with an alternate reality
whilst I cradle myself
rocking back and forth
counting sheep
I imagine a world without gravity
Where the memories of you
no longer weigh me down
and where perpetual self defence
doesn’t violently awaken me
from sleep
The war zone I endured still plays in my head
It all happened right here
In this room, in my bed
You muffled my pleas with your forearm
whilst I gasped for air
and...
like tangerine skies
provides me with an alternate reality
whilst I cradle myself
rocking back and forth
counting sheep
I imagine a world without gravity
Where the memories of you
no longer weigh me down
and where perpetual self defence
doesn’t violently awaken me
from sleep
The war zone I endured still plays in my head
It all happened right here
In this room, in my bed
You muffled my pleas with your forearm
whilst I gasped for air
and...
#MeToo
277 reads
2 Comments
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