Easter Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#Easter
gardenlover
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2021 4:22pm
22nd Feb 2021 4:22pm
Easter Bunny
I yearn an Easter bunny
To spice my life in spring
Winter celibacy is over
Time to start to swing
We'll gambol in the clover
Go swimming in the nude
When the party's over
To bed and get screwed.
To spice my life in spring
Winter celibacy is over
Time to start to swing
We'll gambol in the clover
Go swimming in the nude
When the party's over
To bed and get screwed.
#Easter
#freedom
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wallyroo92
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2021 3:14pm
22nd Feb 2021 3:14pm
An Easter Miracle
Jesus and Peter were walking through the woods one day
When they came up on a dead bunny on the forest ground
Peter said “aww, too bad” shedding a single tear feeling sad
Upon seeing the little rabbit, he had a near break down
“Don’t worry” Jesus said (you know he always kept a cool head)
He knelt down next to the rabbit and said a little prayer
Then from under his tunic Jesus took out a small bottle
Rubbed the potion in the palms of his hands and caressed the hare
Suddenly the bunny came back to life and sprang to his feet!
Wiggled...
When they came up on a dead bunny on the forest ground
Peter said “aww, too bad” shedding a single tear feeling sad
Upon seeing the little rabbit, he had a near break down
“Don’t worry” Jesus said (you know he always kept a cool head)
He knelt down next to the rabbit and said a little prayer
Then from under his tunic Jesus took out a small bottle
Rubbed the potion in the palms of his hands and caressed the hare
Suddenly the bunny came back to life and sprang to his feet!
Wiggled...
#Easter
#funny
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cabcool
Poem Published
14th Feb 2021 3:08am
14th Feb 2021 3:08am
Cavalry to Calvary
We sinned for no reason but an incomprehensible lack of love, and He saved us for
no reason but an incomprehensible excess of love.” —Peter Kreeft, Jesus-Shock
the hate mob
meant to rob
the Holy Lord
with spear and sword
the cavalry
to Calvary
did the job
though the sob
of a Righteous King
came to foil the sting
of the evil
of the devil
clothed in shame
Holy Name
by men brought low
to their own woe
the cavalry
to Calvary
knew not why
He should die
but He knew the cause ...
no reason but an incomprehensible excess of love.” —Peter Kreeft, Jesus-Shock
the hate mob
meant to rob
the Holy Lord
with spear and sword
the cavalry
to Calvary
did the job
though the sob
of a Righteous King
came to foil the sting
of the evil
of the devil
clothed in shame
Holy Name
by men brought low
to their own woe
the cavalry
to Calvary
knew not why
He should die
but He knew the cause ...
#death
#Easter
#redemption #sacrifice
#redemption #sacrifice
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joegracegrace
Joe Grace
Joe Grace
Poem Published
18th Jan 2021 1:16am
18th Jan 2021 1:16am
How The Whole World Will Come To LOVE THE RUSSIANS !!
Before the world loves the Russians, it will HATE them!!
Here's why:
First, Russia will bomb America and prevent us from launching our retaliatory strike !!
(For our military computers have been HACKED by Russia !!
And our software has been ruined !!).
Second, Russia will overrun Western Europe in a single week.
Bombing 3 nations will be enuff to intimidate all of Europe into immediately surrendering (Daniel 7.8).
So at that point, the world will totally HATE Russia !!
Next, Russia invades Israel to "liberate Palestine"...
Here's why:
First, Russia will bomb America and prevent us from launching our retaliatory strike !!
(For our military computers have been HACKED by Russia !!
And our software has been ruined !!).
Second, Russia will overrun Western Europe in a single week.
Bombing 3 nations will be enuff to intimidate all of Europe into immediately surrendering (Daniel 7.8).
So at that point, the world will totally HATE Russia !!
Next, Russia invades Israel to "liberate Palestine"...
#Easter
#MothersDay
#apocalypse
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joegracegrace
Joe Grace
Joe Grace
Poem Published
11th Dec 2020 1:12pm
11th Dec 2020 1:12pm
SALVATION Re-examined
There are 3 parts or phases to salvation:
(1)Justification,(2)sanctification,(3)glorification.
Justification comes first, then
sanctification, then finally, glorification.
Now, justification is that PART of salvation which a free gift, "the gift of God."
But sanctification, surprisingly, is NOT a free gift.
It's a matter of WORKS !!
As Ephesians says, "we are made for good works, to walk in them."
These good works don't come AFTER salvation - they are PART of it.
How can I justify my claim that JUSTIFICATION is a free gift,
while...
(1)Justification,(2)sanctification,(3)glorification.
Justification comes first, then
sanctification, then finally, glorification.
Now, justification is that PART of salvation which a free gift, "the gift of God."
But sanctification, surprisingly, is NOT a free gift.
It's a matter of WORKS !!
As Ephesians says, "we are made for good works, to walk in them."
These good works don't come AFTER salvation - they are PART of it.
How can I justify my claim that JUSTIFICATION is a free gift,
while...
#Easter
#Christmas
#MothersDay #apocalypse
#MothersDay #apocalypse
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
12th Apr 2020 9:22pm
12th Apr 2020 9:22pm
Easter Lily
the confetti dawn wept for happiness
the joy of the day remembered
palms pierced...open in welcome
we are invited into his love
on that day he bow his head
and heavens said it is finished
the third day he rose
they wept tears of love for the man
feet shod with the preparation of peace
loins gird with truth
the shield of faith
he is the light and the way
he that believeth on him shall not perish
but have everlasting life
I pray I will be a handmaiden in his garden
a flower of hope
today I am...
the joy of the day remembered
palms pierced...open in welcome
we are invited into his love
on that day he bow his head
and heavens said it is finished
the third day he rose
they wept tears of love for the man
feet shod with the preparation of peace
loins gird with truth
the shield of faith
he is the light and the way
he that believeth on him shall not perish
but have everlasting life
I pray I will be a handmaiden in his garden
a flower of hope
today I am...
#love
#Easter
#spiritual
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calamitygin
Poem Published
12th Apr 2020 7:26pm
12th Apr 2020 7:26pm
The Passion: I love to tell the story
Throughout he walked nearer to me
With the weight of my flesh
Pressing with agony
Across his willing shoulders
He carried my cross
And was hung by my transgressions
To feel the great heartache of my God
By his blood
By his piercing crown
By nails of Pontial reckoning
And by the Lance of proof
And his Holy Mother wept
Her sorrow still felt in this world
But from womb to death
And by resurrection
She suffered bravely
In the eyes of Romans filled with hate
Their malice shadowed by an angels ...
With the weight of my flesh
Pressing with agony
Across his willing shoulders
He carried my cross
And was hung by my transgressions
To feel the great heartache of my God
By his blood
By his piercing crown
By nails of Pontial reckoning
And by the Lance of proof
And his Holy Mother wept
Her sorrow still felt in this world
But from womb to death
And by resurrection
She suffered bravely
In the eyes of Romans filled with hate
Their malice shadowed by an angels ...
#Easter
#God
#NaPoWriMo2020
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joegracegrace
Joe Grace
Joe Grace
Poem Published
6th Apr 2020 9:56am
6th Apr 2020 9:56am
Its EASTER WEEK Already !!
Its Easter Week already !!
So let me deal with a Bible passage that relates to Easter.
Christ was arrested Thursday night.
He was taken to the house of the high priest (Luke 22.54).
He was put into a holding cell in the basement of that house.
It has been preserved to this day.
(The house is gone but the basement is still there.)
And because it is below the surface of the ground it qualifies as "the heart of the earth."
That is important because Christ said "the Son of Man will spend ..3 nights in the heart of the. earth" (Matthew. 12.40). ...
So let me deal with a Bible passage that relates to Easter.
Christ was arrested Thursday night.
He was taken to the house of the high priest (Luke 22.54).
He was put into a holding cell in the basement of that house.
It has been preserved to this day.
(The house is gone but the basement is still there.)
And because it is below the surface of the ground it qualifies as "the heart of the earth."
That is important because Christ said "the Son of Man will spend ..3 nights in the heart of the. earth" (Matthew. 12.40). ...
#Easter
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buddydog
Poem Published
31st Mar 2020 4:53pm
31st Mar 2020 4:53pm
The Lamb
The dogwood blooms
With strength and resilience
It’s purity is spiritual for all to behold
A twig covered in an ever-changing silk
The butterfly spreads its wings
As a resurrection to unfold
White lilies against a canvas of green
Like tears falling from a broken heart
In a garden between the olive trees
Stands a young sheep like an image of God
A sacrifice for the world, if only you believe
The lamb is a gentle as a springtime breeze
I would see the lamb from time to time
Eventually we became more than friends ...
With strength and resilience
It’s purity is spiritual for all to behold
A twig covered in an ever-changing silk
The butterfly spreads its wings
As a resurrection to unfold
White lilies against a canvas of green
Like tears falling from a broken heart
In a garden between the olive trees
Stands a young sheep like an image of God
A sacrifice for the world, if only you believe
The lamb is a gentle as a springtime breeze
I would see the lamb from time to time
Eventually we became more than friends ...
#Easter
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midevil
Poem Published
30th Mar 2020 9:16pm
30th Mar 2020 9:16pm
Hoppy Easter
While spring breezes rocked the flowers that drank in morning dew.
A frantic bunny ran about not knowing what to do.
“Oh what an awful mess!” He said loud enough to hear.
Just as a passing fairy flew by so very near.
“How may I help?” The fairy said as she stroked the rabbit’s hair.
For this was in her nature to show how much she cared.
“The bunny trail would sometimes zig then sharply turn to zag.”
“This is why so much got spilled out my bunny bag.”
“I’ve no time to collect it all, it’s much later now than late.”
“With so many children’s gifts, a...
A frantic bunny ran about not knowing what to do.
“Oh what an awful mess!” He said loud enough to hear.
Just as a passing fairy flew by so very near.
“How may I help?” The fairy said as she stroked the rabbit’s hair.
For this was in her nature to show how much she cared.
“The bunny trail would sometimes zig then sharply turn to zag.”
“This is why so much got spilled out my bunny bag.”
“I’ve no time to collect it all, it’s much later now than late.”
“With so many children’s gifts, a...
#Easter
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dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
13th Dec 2019 8:26am
13th Dec 2019 8:26am
f**k Capitalist Consumer Xmas / f**k Your Death Profits, amerika!
#Easter
#Christmas
#ValentinesDay
#MothersDay
#FathersDay
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Hepcat61
geoff cat
geoff cat
Poem Published
9th May 2019 3:08pm
9th May 2019 3:08pm
Pursuing Deepest Thrills of Love’s Conclude – Sonnet Nine
Pursuing deepest thrills of love’s conclude,
Like satyrs in their princely forest Spring,
Or unicorn in virgin’s lap intrude,
Or Beltane course the Maypole dancers bring.
Here, hard and soft in equal measure met,
A bower’s rill where lovers seek reside.
A peak enjoyed in gentle rain’s beset,
A creviced hill that proves a pilgrim’s hide.
For soon enough will worldly troubles shake
The sweet foundations sought in love’s entwine,
And worries of the day will passions take,
That once were whole devout of love’s recline.
...
Like satyrs in their princely forest Spring,
Or unicorn in virgin’s lap intrude,
Or Beltane course the Maypole dancers bring.
Here, hard and soft in equal measure met,
A bower’s rill where lovers seek reside.
A peak enjoyed in gentle rain’s beset,
A creviced hill that proves a pilgrim’s hide.
For soon enough will worldly troubles shake
The sweet foundations sought in love’s entwine,
And worries of the day will passions take,
That once were whole devout of love’s recline.
...
#sex
#spring
#Easter #sonnet
#Easter #sonnet
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