Poems About Deep Underground Poetry by Top Critiquers
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
21st Apr 2023 5:48am
21st Apr 2023 5:48am
Here's My Comment As Requested
self
opinionated
cunt
trying
to tell me
how to interact
dont start
shitting
in my back garden
expecting me
to like
the smell
this ASS WIPE
has a
bite
i will comment
my way
not yours
the fact i'm in a group
that riles the fuck
out of you
gives this
nasty autistic
some satisfaction
this is where my
CAGE IS RATTLED
which is no good
cause now
i...
opinionated
cunt
trying
to tell me
how to interact
dont start
shitting
in my back garden
expecting me
to like
the smell
this ASS WIPE
has a
bite
i will comment
my way
not yours
the fact i'm in a group
that riles the fuck
out of you
gives this
nasty autistic
some satisfaction
this is where my
CAGE IS RATTLED
which is no good
cause now
i...
#anger
#dialogue
#frustration
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#Autism
487 reads
14 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
11th Sep 2024 1:30pm
11th Sep 2024 1:30pm
Regarding
Silence of the mind's rhythm attending
to prophet's nature of leaves falling
In vinyl dress recording poetic oxygen
dreaming in memories portmanteau
Regarding the metronome's pendulum
and the glue that binds the clues
to prophet's nature of leaves falling
In vinyl dress recording poetic oxygen
dreaming in memories portmanteau
Regarding the metronome's pendulum
and the glue that binds the clues
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
112 reads
5 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
7th Nov 2022 9:04pm
7th Nov 2022 9:04pm
Hanging Out
There are those with a problem with our eratic behavoir
Of our time on site with no specific behavior
Why are you on site so late into the night
They just don't realize that I roll solo, I do what I like
If for whatever reason I decide not to sleep
It's not about relationships or secrets to keep
I refer to all women as Ladies because that is what a man should do
Women that I message with or agree with, I seem to call Boo
In most conversations this only means friends
Except for certain plagarizing bitches that everyone knows isn't my...
Of our time on site with no specific behavior
Why are you on site so late into the night
They just don't realize that I roll solo, I do what I like
If for whatever reason I decide not to sleep
It's not about relationships or secrets to keep
I refer to all women as Ladies because that is what a man should do
Women that I message with or agree with, I seem to call Boo
In most conversations this only means friends
Except for certain plagarizing bitches that everyone knows isn't my...
#friendship
#technology
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
342 reads
2 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
9th Feb 2023 2:16am
9th Feb 2023 2:16am
Paradise in the Sky
When I leave the Earth
My words and my
Heart will go out to
all the ladies at the
DUP for they are wild and
crazy in their own
unique way
To all the men at the
DUP I leave these
words always
Treat the ladies with
Kindness and Respect
My words and my
Heart will go out to
all the ladies at the
DUP for they are wild and
crazy in their own
unique way
To all the men at the
DUP I leave these
words always
Treat the ladies with
Kindness and Respect
#kindness
#women
#men
#respect
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
337 reads
10 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 11:05pm
30th Nov 2024 11:05pm
stream of one
I left my body
Before my body left me
Another simple token
Of my complacency
No jokes written
No lines rehearsed
Just another simpleton
Playing with a curse
Filled up my pockets
With utter disdain
Writing about how
Y’all drive me insane
No practice given
No time to rehearse
Just another simpleton
Playing with a curse
Before my body left me
Another simple token
Of my complacency
No jokes written
No lines rehearsed
Just another simpleton
Playing with a curse
Filled up my pockets
With utter disdain
Writing about how
Y’all drive me insane
No practice given
No time to rehearse
Just another simpleton
Playing with a curse
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#escape
#LifeAsAWriter
#StreamOfConsciousness
#WritingPoetry
55 reads
0 Comments
Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
19th Nov 2022 12:32pm
19th Nov 2022 12:32pm
Shot By His Own Plagiarist Gun
vizmoz
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
203 reads
12 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
26th Aug 2024 2:20am
26th Aug 2024 2:20am
poetry
erase the confounded artistry
with my mad genius and I'd be nothing
because all creative beings are genius
to take the crazy away you lose your edge
relax the anxiety and something goes missing
to be driven by a force you don't understand
it's an artist fire breathing down your back
even when you lie down to sleep you keep thinking
how to invent the passages to clear your head
verses of deliverance a ticket to destinations unexplored
dreaming in starlight kissing the cosmos
open the soul and find your meaning ...
with my mad genius and I'd be nothing
because all creative beings are genius
to take the crazy away you lose your edge
relax the anxiety and something goes missing
to be driven by a force you don't understand
it's an artist fire breathing down your back
even when you lie down to sleep you keep thinking
how to invent the passages to clear your head
verses of deliverance a ticket to destinations unexplored
dreaming in starlight kissing the cosmos
open the soul and find your meaning ...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
85 reads
3 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
1st Aug 2022 3:30pm
1st Aug 2022 3:30pm
Empathy
the ability to
understand and share the feelings
of others
This was too long for the Author's note so I am just putting it here.
When someone paints you as a monster or other things it's not nice. If someone feels like they need to kick me more because I said that then do what you need to I guess. I had to send someone a message due to an issue and it was hard because in this case I didn't think they meant anything bad by it and I continued to stress about how to address it because I didn't want them to feel bad. Turns out it was just...
understand and share the feelings
of others
This was too long for the Author's note so I am just putting it here.
When someone paints you as a monster or other things it's not nice. If someone feels like they need to kick me more because I said that then do what you need to I guess. I had to send someone a message due to an issue and it was hard because in this case I didn't think they meant anything bad by it and I continued to stress about how to address it because I didn't want them to feel bad. Turns out it was just...
#bullying
#confessional
#disappointment #DeepUndergroundPoetry
#disappointment #DeepUndergroundPoetry
967 reads
ExercisingDemons
Poem Published
14th Jul 2024 1:01am
14th Jul 2024 1:01am
Ten Years of Posting to The Day
Ten years of words
Ten years of rain
Ten years spent absurd
Ten venting in vain
Ten minutes of joy reigning
Then ruled by another
Ten years of pens smothered
Ten years of keys covered in
Grease and tears
From my veins weeping
Ten years with very few brothers,
friendless
Years flew by,
at times seemingly endless
and still my word relentless
Picked up the passion to pen while cutting grass
where a mind does wander
I imagine some of the greatest lines
come from fishers and...
Ten years of rain
Ten years spent absurd
Ten venting in vain
Ten minutes of joy reigning
Then ruled by another
Ten years of pens smothered
Ten years of keys covered in
Grease and tears
From my veins weeping
Ten years with very few brothers,
friendless
Years flew by,
at times seemingly endless
and still my word relentless
Picked up the passion to pen while cutting grass
where a mind does wander
I imagine some of the greatest lines
come from fishers and...
#birthday
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
#anniversary
284 reads
6 Comments
Josh
Joshua Bond
Joshua Bond
Poem Published
5th May 2019 10:08am
5th May 2019 10:08am
They Speak
On DUP there are many strangers …
they speak with stretched tears over a keyboard
and leave messages of pain on my screen.
Of course I reciprocate. Our waters
mix and mingle, carry information
to and fro accumulating until
one day a tidal-wave will burst the web-
site’s limitations, shifting ancient rocks
of displeasure, levelling mountains and
toppling dictators, drowning fake news and
eventually calming down to a slow
swish … swish, swish … swish, an ebb and flow of tides
in tune with a clear...
they speak with stretched tears over a keyboard
and leave messages of pain on my screen.
Of course I reciprocate. Our waters
mix and mingle, carry information
to and fro accumulating until
one day a tidal-wave will burst the web-
site’s limitations, shifting ancient rocks
of displeasure, levelling mountains and
toppling dictators, drowning fake news and
eventually calming down to a slow
swish … swish, swish … swish, an ebb and flow of tides
in tune with a clear...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
705 reads
22 Comments
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